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Posted: 11 November 2008 at 10:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by desaiprachi07

Hey i am a new member here....Hiiii dear...& welcome into Rn world.

just loved the concept of ur fic.Thanx....dear.

update soon.

Thanx a lot for reading my fic & leaving ur comments here.


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wen wil u ud dear???????

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wen wil u ud dear???????
Updating......dear!!!!!!

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Plz c 1st pg for main-starcast

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           PART:-2
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Aaj se kareeb ek saal pahle...................................
 
Us raat bahat barshaat ho rahi thi.....!!!! Hawa bhi bahat tez chal rahi thi..... bijli k awaz bhi bahat tez thi.... kudrat ka qahar jari tha.....!!!! Aisa lag raha tha k duniya jaise aaj hi khatam ho jayegi.....!!!!
 
Lekin is toofani raat main bhi us sahar ke rashte main ek car bahat tezi se ja rahi thi. Woh car sahar k bahar ja kar ek bridge par ruki. Aur us k ander se do aadmi bahar aaye. Dono ne black colour k rainy suit pahne hue the. Charon taraf andhera bahat tha.....sirf bijli k lite se kuch second k liye charon taraf ujala ho raha tha.
 
Un do logon ne car k pichli seat se kuch nikala. Jise un logon ne ek bade se kapde main bandh rakha hua tha.Us kapde par khoon k kuch boondain dikhai de rahe the. Sayad us kapde k ander kisi k body thi. Un do logon ne us kapde main lapeta hua us chiz ko bridge k upar se niche nadi main phenk diya aur car main bath kar chale gaye.
 
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                              Present
 
Aastha Mansion...........................................................
 
Raj lounge room k sofe par hi so raha tha...yeh behetar hoga kahne k liye k sone k acting kara raha tha.....!!!!
 
Amit ji bahat gusse se ghar k ander aaye.........to dekha k raj befiqar ho kar so raha hai. Unhe us par gussa aa gaya. He slapped Raj's forehead. Raj chaunk kar utha aur samne Amit ji ko dekh kar phir se let gaya.
 
Aur kahne laga:- "Kya...dad!!! Hamesha galat entry lete hain aap.....!!!! Abhi apne mera sunder sapna tod diya na.....!!!! 15 min. baad jaga nahin sakte the kya.....!!!! Main bas us k gale main 'baarmala' dalne hi wala tha k aapne mujhe jaga diya.....!!!!"
 
Amit ji gusse se bole:- "Tu bas yahaan sote sote sapna dekha kar.....!!!! Asal zindagi main tujh se to kuch hoga nahin.....!!!! Ek baat bata tu mujhe maine tujh se kaha tha k tu aaj sham ko mujh se aakar office main milega..... to tu wahan par aaya kyoun nahin.....!!!!"
 
Raj:- "Dad.........actually meri meeting thi commissioner sir k sath. Aur woh khatam hote hote 8 baj gaye......... to main ghar wapas aaya gaya.........socha k aap se yahin par baat kar lunga."
 
Amit ji:- " To phir tujhe phone kar k batana chahiye tha k nahin.....!!!!"
 
Raj uth kar baith gaya aur bola:- "Sorry dad.....!!!! Dimag main se nikal gayi yeh baat. Lekin aisa kya kaam tha k mera aap se milna itna jaruri tha.....????"
 
Amit ji:- "Kyoun k mujhe tujh ko Sonali se milwana tha. Agar tum dono ne ek dushre ko pasand kar laiya to isi ek saal k ander tum dono k shadi jald se jald karwa dunga."
 
Raj:- " Lekin..... dad!!!! Sonali k shadi to ho chuki hai kareeb 5/6 saal pahle.....!!!!  In fact us ka to 2/3 saal ka ek beta bhi hai.....!!!! Aur jahan tak main janta hoon woh apne hubby k sath bahat khush hai.....!!!! To phir us ka divorce kab hua aur kyoun.....!!!!"
 
Amit ji chaunke k yeh raaj kya kah raha hai.....!!!! aur bole:-" Kya bak raha hai.....???? Woh to abhi abhi U.S.A se modern art ka course khatam kar k aayi hai.....!!!! Aur tu kahta hai us k shadi ho chuki hai 4/5 saal pahle....!!!!"
 
Raj:- " Trust me.....dad!!!! Us k shadi ho chuki hai.....!!!!"
 
Amit ji pareshan ho gaye. Kyoun k aaj kaal to aise fraud case bhi ho rahe hai. Kahin sach main woh ladki shadi suda to nahin.....!!!!! Woh pareshan ho kar puchne lage:-"Ek min.....tu Sonali ki hi baat kar raha hai na.....!!!!"
 
Raj:-"Of course.....dad!!!! Main Sonali ki hi baat kar raha hoon.....!!!! 'Sonali Bendre' ki aur kis ki....!!!!!"
 
Amit ji Raj ka jawab sun kar aur bhi jyada gussa ho jate hain. Hamesha mazak karta rahta hai...koi bhi baat seriously leta hi nahin......!!! Unhone Raj ka kaan pakad liya joron se.
 
Raj chillane laga:- "Aaaaahhhh.......dad!!!!!!! Plz chodiye mera kaan dard ho raha hai....!!!!"
 
Amit ji:- "Achha to ab tujhe dard ho raha hai.....!!!! Aur tu jo roz mujhe dard de raha hai.........us ka kya?????"
 
Raj:-" Us ka kuch nahin.....!!!!"
 
Amit ji aur jor se us ka kaan dabate hue kahte hain:- "Kya bola.....????"
 
Raj:- " Kuch nahin.....dad!!!! Sorry..... ab mazak nahin karunga.....!!!! Ab to mera kaan chod dijiye.....plz!!!!"
 
Amit ji:- "Jab tak tu meri baat dhyan se nahin sun leta tab tak nahin choduga..... samjha!!!! "
 
Raj:-" Ji dad...samajh gaya.....!!!! Jaldi se boliye aur mera kaan chodiye plz.....!!!!"
 
Amit ji:- "Thik hai sun.....!!!! Tu aur Alekh kal shaam ko thik 7:30 baje 'town hall' jayoge.Wahan par Sonali k painting ki exihibition chal raha hai. Tum dono us se wohin par miloge.....!!!! Aur haan.....Raj wahan par tum dono koi sharat nahin karoge.......samjhe!!!!! Agar mujhe kal kaam nahin hota to main tum dono k sath jarur jata."
 
Raj:-" Ji dad.....samajh gaya.....!!!! Ab to mera kaan chod dijiye plz.....!!!!!"
 
Amit ji Raj ka kaan chod dete hain aur kahte hain:- "Aur haan.....jate hue thode se flowers le jana us k liye.... samjha!!!! Waise Alekh kahan hai.....????"
 
Raj:- "Woh abhi tak aaya nahin hai.....!!!! Achha dad...ek baat bataiye k kya aap ne kabhi Sonali ko dekha hai...??"
 
Amit ji:- " Haan...dekha tha. Kareeb 12 saal pahle. Woh mere dost hain na Mr. Sunil Mehra.....unhi k bhatiji (niece) hai.....Sonali. Aur haan.....Alekh ko yaad se bata dena.....samjhe!!!!"
 
Raj:-" Ji dad! Bata dunga use. Waise bhi main akele us mordern art exihibition main jane k himmat nahin kar sakta.....!!!! Yeh mordern art mere samajh main aata hi nahin.....!!!!"
 
Tabhi Alekh aa jata hai. Raj kahta hai:-"Lijiye aap ka ladla aa gaya."
 
Alekh aa kar Raj k pas baith jata hai. Aur kahta hai:-"Kya hua dad.....???? Aap itne gusse main kyoun lag rahe hain......????"
 
Amit ji use puri baat batate hain. Sab sun ne k baad Alekh ko raj k harkat par hanshi aa jati hai. Aur woh kahta hai:- "Don't worry dad.....!!!! Raj ko main lekar jayunga. Aap fiqar mat kijiye.....!!!!"
 
Amit ji wahan se chale jate hain. Alekh Raj se kahta hai:- "Kyoun tung karta rahta hain unhe.....???? Jo bhi kar rahe hain teri bhalai k liye hi kar rahe hain na.....!!!!"
 
Raj:- "Kya.....yaar!!!! Shadi kar k kisi ka bhala hua hai jo mera hoga.....!!!!"
 
Alekh:- "Jyada bak bak mat kar.....kal jana hai to jana hai.....samjha!!!! Jyada nakhre dikhya na to teri sari girl-friends k address ek dushre ko de dunga.....samjha!!!! "
 
Raj:- " Achha.....baba chale jayenge!!!!"
 
Alekh:- " Thik hai.....!!!! Main thoda fresh up ho kar aata hoon.........phir mujhe bahar bhi jana hai.........!!!!!"
 
Raj:- "Is waqt phir se kahan jayega.....????"
 
Alekh Pooja ki kahi hui puri baat batata hai. Yeh sab sun kar Raj kahata hai:- "Hummm.......Un-official duty par 'beauty' se milne ja raha hai. Chalo.....achha hai!!!! Case k silsile main hi sahi lekin kisi ladki se to milne ja raha hai.....!!!! Ek kaam karna mauka dekh k 'jhappi maar k pappi le lena'."
 
Alekh:- "Haan.....!!!! Taki woh meri chapplon se dhulai kar de.....kyoun????"
 
Raj:- "Kya.....yaar!!!! Itna daring to banna hi padta hai.....!!!! Dekh.....aaj tak mujhe kisi ladki ne nahin pita. Apna to ek hi rule hain 'patti to patti warna rakhi ready'.
full confident ho kar ja.....kuch nahin hoga."
 
Alekh:- "Tu apna yeh pitnewala updesh dena band karega.....kya!!!!"
 
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Aastha Mansion...........................................................
 
Is Mansion k malik hain Mr. Amit Malhotra. Un k teen shpopping malls hain sahar main. Aur do bete hain- bada bete Raj aur chota Alekh. jab Alekh sirf 3 mahine ka tha un dono ki maa ki death ho gayi thi.
 
Isiliye Amit ji ne kafi lad-pyar se pala hai apne dono bachhon ko. Un teenon k bich baap-bete ka nahin...balki ek dosti ka rishta bana hua hai. Ghar main bahat naukar the. Phir bhi Amit ji apne beton k liye khana khud bana na pasand karte the.
 
Raj aur Alekh bhi Amit ji se bahat pyar karte the. Unhe bahat tung karte the magar Amit ji ko chota sa chot bhi lagta tha to dard Raj aur Alekh ko hota tha.
 
Alekh Raj se 3 saal chota hai. Lekin dono bhai bachpan se hi ek dushre k kafi kareeb rahe hain. Isiliye un dono k bich ek dosti ka rishta hai.....aur isiliye Alekh Raj ko kabhi bhai naihn kahta tha. Balki us k naam le kar bulata tha.
 
Apni studies khatam karne k baad Alekh ne family business chod kar Police Force join kar liya. Tab Raj apne I.P.S ki training main tha.
 
Aur abhi Raj aur Alekh apne hi sahar main posted hain. Raj c.b.i main hai as 'A.C.P Raj Malhotra'.
 
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Palak kahani sunte hue so gayi thi. aur Naina apne gujre hue kal k bare main soch rahi thi. In 5 salon ne zindagi ne use bahat kuch dikha diya.
 
Usne kabhi Amar se pyar nahin kiya nahi Amar kabhi us se pyar karta tha. Yeh to sirf ek majburi ka rishta tha. Jise naina sirf apne father ko zinda rakhne k liye nibha rahi thi.
 
Ek hi ghar main rahte the. Phir bhi un dono ki zindagi ek dushre se alag thi. Amar bahat nafrat karta tha Naina se aur Palak se. Kyoun k Naina aur Palak related the un do insano se jinhe Amar sab se jyada nafrat karta tha.....!!!!
 
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Meri ankhen band ho rahi hain...saar bhari ho raha hai.
Temp. badh raha hai. Are...yaar! yeh main Naina ya phir Raj k liye nahin balki apne liye likh rahi hoon. Mujhe 'Viral-Fever' hai. Isiliye age aur nahin likh payungi. Plz Isi main se kaam chala lena. Waise maine yeh socha tha k chahe kuch bhi ho jaye main Raj aur Naina ko milwa k hi rahungi.....by hook or by crook. Par i m sorry main yeh nahin kar pa rahi hoon....bt promise u k agle part main aap sab ko shikayat karne ka mauka nahin dungi. Plz tab tak k liye isi main kaam chala lena aur plz comment karna mat bhulna.....................LUV   PRIYASmile 


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Posted: 12 November 2008 at 9:34am | IP Logged
Hi Dear
Yeh kiska past tha??????????
Nyways Raj is still d same ...Sonali Bendre wala joke accha tha..
Storyline seems to b quite interesting..Raj n Alekh both r in police..Gud1..
 
Take care of yourself n get well soon

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Posted: 12 November 2008 at 10:02am | IP Logged
update was cool
update soon

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Posted: 12 November 2008 at 10:39am | IP Logged
ye past kiska tha
i mean kahi ye Huda se related kuch to nahi
Raj is still so funny and he is in Police Force
thats cool
waiting for Raj Naina meeting
plz continue soon
 

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Posted: 12 November 2008 at 10:55am | IP Logged
totally loved it...also liked d charachter skecth u gave ......

hamesha ki tarah dialouges wer simply mindblowing..........

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