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Posted: 09 November 2008 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mahak Sinha

Hello Priya too good updateClap n full of commedy of Alekh....Thanx a lot dear.

Apun ko nahi pata tha ki Alekh ji itne sharati hain vow kya baat haiWink?Ab vo Neelu se milne jaa raha hai that's g8.Smilehaan...neelu prob. main jo hai!!!!!

Ye Ali bhi na humesha ek dum tuff bana rehta hai baap re thoda hassi mazak bhi nahi kar sakta hai.Ouchab kya kare...yaar use aisa hi charcter main rahna pasand hai...

Amar kitna kameena tha apni bacchi ko maar daalna chahta tha accha hi hua ki mar gaya vo.Angryhaan...woh us bachhi se nafrat to karta tha...kyoun??? yeh tumhe agle part main pata chal jayega.

Naina ne apni flower shop khol li good.Tongueactually hua...yun..k naina ne mujh se pucha tha k woh apne flower shop ka kya naam degi??? to maine use apne ek dear friend ka screen name bata diya.LOL

Hope Raj jaldi hi Naina se mile.Smile...bhagwan kare teri dua jaldi se kabul ho jaye.

update soon.

Thanx a lot....vertika....Smile
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Posted: 10 November 2008 at 12:20am | IP Logged

Hey i am a new member here.

just loved the concept of ur fic.

update soon.

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Posted: 11 November 2008 at 9:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prerna1

thst was good but bit confusing
 ....confuse mat ho yaar....dhire dhire sab main se parda uthega...trust...meSmile
u skipped a year....kyoun ki main kahani k present aur past  ko ek sath likhne wali hoon .
i hate Amar when he said He will kill Palak ...haan....is k piche bhi ek chota sa reason hai.
hope Raj aur Naina ki mulaakat jaldi ho......me too.
plz continue soon
Thanx a lot......prerna...for the comment.
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Posted: 11 November 2008 at 9:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by varshita

I liked this update so much.Smile....thanx varshita

accha hua Amar ki maut ho gayiAngry, varna zinda hota to Naina ko abhi tak jeene na deta nahi palak ko.Ouchhaan...woh to hai.

Alekh is really funnyLOL.....haan...akhir bhai kis ka hai.LOL 

us ko us ki Neelu mil gayi nice.....haan...ab neelu se to us ko milna hi tha na...WinkWink

update soon.

Thank u so much dear ...for ur sweet comment.
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Posted: 11 November 2008 at 9:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vvdn

Hey Hii dear,...hiiii Namita

 Amazing update.......Clapthanx...dear.
poor Naina she bear sooo much.Amar is really a disgusting guyAngryAngryAngry
apni khud ki beti ke jaan ke piche pada hai..ya i said thaOuchhaan..is k piche ek chota sa reason hai
what decision Naina madeConfused now Amar is dead much relife to Naina but it's murder n no one findout about it's happeningDeadDeadDead
it's all mysterious...........waqt k sath sath sare mysteries main se parda uthega.
waise m now looking forward when Raj is going to meet her first time,so update dear........yeah..... i m also eager to know what happen in that time & im really try to ud soon.
Thank u so much dear.
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Posted: 11 November 2008 at 10:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by watch rajeev

ud plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz aur iss baar raj aur naina ko milaao yaar
Are....yaar!!! un dono ko milwane k liye sahi platform to bana loon, phir milwa bhi dungi. waise bhi RN kab tak ek dushre se dur rahenge.
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Posted: 11 November 2008 at 10:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by riyaa_1985

Hello!! Priya!!.....Hiiii Riya!!
Thanks a lot for the pm dear!! u r most welcome dear.
Aaj kal kuch zyada hi busy rehti hoon to IF visit karne ka
mauka hi nahi milta...koi baat nahin....tumhe jab bhi waqt mile tab comment kar dena.
waise the story seems to be very different.....
 Very nice....specially loved the way you have described the
relationship between a mother and her daughter...
well....Raj's part was definitely very hilarious....actually main Raj ko hamesha ek comic role main dekhna chahti thi. to isliye use maine use is character main rakha hua hai.
Finally.....loved both the updates...thanx.....dear.
and I am very sorry for the delay.....kya...yaar!!! bas karo kitna sorry bologi.
I hope u understand dear.....of course....dear !!!!
Very well written....Thanx dear.....




Take care.
Continue soon...

love
Riya.


Thanx a lot....Riya.
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Posted: 11 November 2008 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Thanx....shaina!

Amar ko ab Naina ka diamond set chahiye!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Naina jab kehti hai usne woh Pallo ke liye rakha hai toh kehta hai uski apahij beti se shaadi kaun karega!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchHe is so rude!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angryhaan...woh nafrat jo karta hai naina aur paloo se.

Amar Palak ko marne ki dhamki deta hai toh woh darr ke set de deti hai!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryAmar is a beast!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Naina Palak ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai aur usne decide kar li hai ke usse kya karna hai!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile SmileWoh karegi kya??Confused Confused Confused Confused

Ek saal ho gaya aur Pooja aur Aalekh police mein hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile

Pooja hamesha pareshan rehti hai!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueNo wonder Aalekh calls her Miss.Pareshan aur kitna tease kar raha hai usse!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLactually real Alekh to hamesha se serious hi rahta tha. isiliye main use yahaan jara comic character main dal rahi hoon.

Pooja ki har baat pe mazak kar raha hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueHe is too funny!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Aalekh Pooja ko bolne ki nahi deta!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile SmileUsne Neelu ka naam liya toh Aalekh directly shaadi pe pahuch gaya!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFLhaan...use achha jo lagta hai pooja ko pareshan karna.

Pooja ne flat mein milne ko kaha toh Aalekh ne baat ko kaha pahucha di!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueHe is just impossible!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Aalekh is teasing Pooja!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink

Amar ke role mein Vikas bilkul fit baithta hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile

Amar ka murder ek saal pehle ho gaya tha!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueThats great!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveUska yehi anjaam hona chahiye!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smilehaan...woh to hai. lekin us ka murder mystry abhi baki hai...dear!!! kaise hua...aur kyoun hua????

Kahi Naina ne hi toh Palak ko bachane ke liye Amar ka khoon nahi kiya hai??Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappyab yeh to kahane k agle parts hi batayenge.

Raj sone ka natak kar raha tha aur Amitji ko bola ke woh sapne mein barmaala dalne hi waala tha!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLHe is too much!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFLhaan..Raj ko  comic character main  maine kabhi nahin dekha ....isiliye main yahan par us ka character thoda aisa banaya hua hai.

 
 
 
 
 

 
Thanx a lot......Shaina.

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