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Shaina_b

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Posted: 05 November 2008 at 4:21pm | IP Logged

Too good!!!!!

Naina ka pati Amar usse pichle 4 saalon se roz torture karta hai!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryHe is just inhuman!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Palak Naina ki khushi aur uski zindagi hai!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueThats nice!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Naina Aashaji ko hi apni maa manti hai aur woh sab samaj gayi!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Naina wakai bewakoof hai jo usne Amar ke naam saari jaidad kardi!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Aashaji ne accha daanta usse!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile

Amar ne Naina se paiso ke liye shaadi ki thi aur ab usse hi tana de raha hai aur kehta hai usse shaadi karke usse mila kya!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Amar toh Palak se bhi nafrat karta hai!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryPalak apahij hai!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchThats so sad!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

Amitji bhagwaan se dua kar rahe hai ke aaj unke bete ko ek ladki pasand aa jaye!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Raj kehta hai usse sabhi ladkiyan pasand hai magar woh sabse shaadi toh nahi kar sakta isilye usne idea hi drop kar diya!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLToo funny!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Raj ko har ladki ka kuch naa kuch pasand aaya aur usne bahut ladkiyon ke saath dance kiya!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Amitji toh gusse se dekh rahe hai aur Aalekh has raha hai!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Raj ko Kashish pasand aayi magar woh santoor sopa ki add nikli!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFLI loved this comparison!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Kashish ke do bacche hai aur woh Aftab ki wife hai jo gunda hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

I loved this joke on Kashish and Aftab and Aloo Chat!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLIts hilarious!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Bechara Amitji ish pareshani mein hai ke kab Raj ko koi ladki pasand aayegi bhi yaa nahi!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

 
 
 
 
 
 

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riyaa_1985

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Posted: 06 November 2008 at 12:01am | IP Logged
Hello!! Priya!!
Thanks a lot for the pm dear!!
Aaj kal kuch zyada hi busy rehti hoon to IF visit karne ka
mauka hi nahi milta...
waise the story seems to be very different.....
 Very nice....specially loved the way you have described the
relationship between a mother and her daughter...
well....Raj's part was definitely very hilarious....
Finally.....loved both the updates...
and I am very sorry for the delay.....
I hope u understand dear.....
Very well written....




Take care.
Continue soon...

love
Riya.


Shaina_b

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Posted: 07 November 2008 at 3:38pm | IP Logged

Too good!!!!

Amar ko ab Naina ka diamond set chahiye!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Naina jab kehti hai usne woh Pallo ke liye rakha hai toh kehta hai uski apahij beti se shaadi kaun karega!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchHe is so rude!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Amar Palak ko marne ki dhamki deta hai toh woh darr ke set de deti hai!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryAmar is a beast!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Naina Palak ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai aur usne decide kar li hai ke usse kya karna hai!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile SmileWoh karegi kya??Confused Confused Confused Confused

Ek saal ho gaya aur Pooja aur Aalekh police mein hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile

Pooja hamesha pareshan rehti hai!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueNo wonder Aalekh calls her Miss.Pareshan aur kitna tease kar raha hai usse!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Pooja ki har baat pe mazak kar raha hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueHe is too funny!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Aalekh Pooja ko bolne ki nahi deta!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile SmileUsne Neelu ka naam liya toh Aalekh directly shaadi pe pahuch gaya!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Pooja ne flat mein milne ko kaha toh Aalekh ne baat ko kaha pahucha di!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueHe is just impossible!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Aalekh is teasing Pooja!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink

Amar ke role mein Vikas bilkul fit baithta hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile

Amar ka murder ek saal pehle ho gaya tha!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueThats great!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveUska yehi anjaam hona chahiye!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Kahi Naina ne hi toh Palak ko bachane ke liye Amar ka khoon nahi kiya hai??Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Raj sone ka natak kar raha tha aur Amitji ko bola ke woh sapne mein barmaala dalne hi waala tha!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLHe is too much!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

 
 
 
 
 

 

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Posted: 09 November 2008 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!

Naina ka pati Amar usse pichle 4 saalon se roz torture karta hai!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryHe is just inhuman!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryHaan...aise kuch log to hote hi hain duniya main.

Palak Naina ki khushi aur uski zindagi hai!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueThats nice!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smilehaan..woh us se bahat pyar karti hai.

Naina Aashaji ko hi apni maa manti hai aur woh sab samaj gayi!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileAasha ji bhi use apni beti manti hai na..isi liye woh naina k dard ko bhi samjhti hain.

Naina wakai bewakoof hai jo usne Amar ke naam saari jaidad kardi!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveNahin...naina bewakuf nahin thi...yeh baat tumhe age pata chalegi.

Aashaji ne accha daanta usse!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smilehaan..lekin use is se farq bhi to nahin pada na..!!!

Amar ne Naina se paiso ke liye shaadi ki thi aur ab usse hi tana de raha hai aur kehta hai usse shaadi karke usse mila kya!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Amar toh Palak se bhi nafrat karta hai!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryPalak apahij hai!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchThats so sad!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

Amitji bhagwaan se dua kar rahe hai ke aaj unke bete ko ek ladki pasand aa jaye!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLAb apna raj hai hi aisa...hamesha apne dad ko pareshan karta hai....

Raj kehta hai usse sabhi ladkiyan pasand hai magar woh sabse shaadi toh nahi kar sakta isilye usne idea hi drop kar diya!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLToo funny!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Raj ko har ladki ka kuch naa kuch pasand aaya aur usne bahut ladkiyon ke saath dance kiya!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLhaan...raj achha dancer bhi to hai.

Amitji toh gusse se dekh rahe hai aur Aalekh has raha hai!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Raj ko Kashish pasand aayi magar woh santoor sopa ki add nikli!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFLI loved this comparison!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Kashish ke do bacche hai aur woh Aftab ki wife hai jo gunda hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

I loved this joke on Kashish and Aftab and Aloo Chat!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLIts hilarious!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFLthanx....shaina.

Bechara Amitji ish pareshani mein hai ke kab Raj ko koi ladki pasand aayegi bhi yaa nahi!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

 
 
 
 
 
 
Thanx....a lot shaina....for the comment.

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Posted: 09 November 2008 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by suhana_dixit

Hi Priya ....Hiiii Suhana....
Update was really very interesting..How can a father b so cruel to his own daughter..Deadu'll find out that very soon.
Its gud dat he is no more..May b he was killed bcoz of his bad habbits..If he wud have been alive den he wud have made Naina's life hell.AngryAngryAngry...haan..woh to hai....
Alekh was really funny..WinkWinkWink..Woh kabhi nahin sudhrega....Neelu is in trouble ofcourse Alekh is coming in her life...haan...heroine prob. main hoti hai to use sirf hero hi to bacha sakta hai na....WinkWink
Pooja n Ali r also dere..Tongue  Where is Yudi???????LOLLOLLOL??...yudi ko is fic main laungi ya nahin yeh abhi tak socha nahin hai....yahan par bas utne hi charchter hain jitno ki jarurat hai.
Raj is still dat same carefree person..yahh......
 
Do update soon..n Pls update Ehsaas too
Thanx a lot....suhana.Smile

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Posted: 09 November 2008 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fanatic 21

fabulous1......too good........Thanx....dear.

just loved it.......good dat amar died.....but i think der will much mystry unfolded as it progresses....yeah....ofcourse dear.

updt soon
Thanx a lot...lipi.Smile

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Posted: 09 November 2008 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by saridena

hi priya....... hiiii soumya
thks for the pm dear.....no need...dear...ur always welcome.
nice part yaar....thanx
but it was little bit confusing
when did amar die??
u skiped one year
update soooooooooooooooooon
and plzzzzzz clear my confusion....ab sare mystery ko itni jaldi to khatam nahin kar sakti hoon na...dear!!!! thoda wait to kar hi sakti ho....!!!!
luv soumya
Thanx a lot ....soumya.Smile

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Posted: 09 November 2008 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hinal60

update was amazing ......Thanx Hinal...!!
but yeh amar ka kya suspense ho gaya. matlab ke death he kar di. haan....ab is suspence ko clear hone main thoda waqt to lagega.
well its good ab RN ki line clear hai.......haan...woh to haiWink
Thank u so much dear.Smile

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