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Posted: 29 October 2008 at 9:37am | IP Logged

hello frnds...mujhe pata hai ki is fic ka first part padhne k baad aap ko lagega ki yeh fic ek 'domestic violence ya phir sexual harasssment'  se related hai...bt let me clear u one thing k is main aisa kuch nahin hai...!!! yeh ek baht hi simple sa fic hai jis main... {thoda emotion(15%)+ thoda suspence(15%)+ aur thoda comedy aur romance(60%)= ZTMK} hai...!!! aur first part main jo likha gaya hai (abt amar & naina&palak)...vo is fic ka suspence hai ...!!! jo ki dhire dhire clear ho jayega...!!!                      

                * INTRO...........*
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Naina chup chap dining table par breakfast k liye saman rakh rahi thi. Kal raat Amar ne sharab k nashe main us par phir se hath uthaya.......Lekin Naina ab is baat se dukhi nahin hoti...Kyoun k ab toh yeh roz ki baat ban chuki hai.
 
Pichle 4 saal se Amar use roz torture karta aa raha hai....kabhi mentally to kabhi physically( not sexual harassment) . Lekin Naina ne kabhi bhi kuch nahin kaha kisi se. Hamesha chup chap rahti thi. Use yaad nahin hai k woh last time kab khus hui thi.....sayad tab jab 'PALAK' paida hui thi.
 
Tab se Naina k sari khusiyaan 'Palak' k aas pas simat kar rah gayi hai. Palak k mushkurahat k sath woh apne sare gaam bhul jati hai....Uski totli awaz main 'Mamma' sun leti thi......to us ka dil khusiyon se bhar jata hai...Ab to Palak hi us k zindagi ban chuki hai.
 
Aasha ji dining table par aa kar baithi...aur Naina ko gaur se dekha. Naina k kandhe aur hath par chot k nishan the. Unhone kaha:-"Amar ne tujh par phir se hath uthya na.....???"
 
Naina:- "Nahin to.....!!!"
 
Aasha ji:- "To phir tere hathon par yeh nishan kaisa....???"
 
Naina :- "Woh main bathroom main gir gayi thi... sayad wohin par lag gaya hoga!!!"
 
Aasha ji:- "To phir tere kandhe par yeh nishan kaise aaya...???"
 
Naina chup rahi kyoun k woh kabhi bhi Aasha ji se jhuth nahin bolti thi. Naina bahat choti thi jab us k maa expaire kar gayi. Tab se Naina Aasha ji ko hi apni maa samjhti hai.
 
Aasha ji ne kaha:- "Main abhi ja kar Amar se baat karti hoon...tu us ki biwi hai ..... koi maid servant nahin....jo woh hamesha apni manmani karta rahega. Ab toh hadh ho gayi....woh ab roz tujh par hath uthane laga hai.....!!!"
 
Naina:- "Jane dijiye na...maa! Bahat pareshan rahte hain aaj kaal woh...business ko lekar. Jald sab kuch thik ho jayega."
 
Itna kah kar Naina kitchen k ander chali gayi.Aasha ji wahan se uthi...aur Amar k bedroom main gayi. Amar taiyar ho raha tha. Aaj use Mr.Malhotra se milne jana hai. Agar woh Amar k company ko finance kar ne k liye taiyar ho gaye ...to sab thik ho jayega. Amar ne dekha k Aasha ji us k room main aayi.
 
Aasha ji:- "Amar mujhe tujh se kuch baat karni hai.....!!!!"
 
Amar :-"Sorry....maa! Main abhi bahat busy hoon...baad main baat karte hain."
 
Aasha ji:-" Nahin......!!! Mujhe tujh se abhi baat karni hai."
 
Aasha ji Amar ka hath jor se khinch kar ...pas main pade ek chair par baitha deti hain....!!!
 
Amar apne maa k is bartab ko dekh kar hairan ho jata hai. Amar:- "Maa........!!!!"
 
Aasha ji:- "Chup....bilkul chup! Tu samjhta kya hai apne aap ko??? Ek baat ka dhyan rakh k agar Naina nahin hoti to teri koi aukat nahin hoti.....!!! Tu aaj yah jo shan-o-shaukat bhari zindagi gujar raha hai na...yeh bhi usi ka diya hua hai. Bewakuf thi woh ladki jo usne apni sari property tere naam kar diya. Aur bewakuf thi main.... jo us jaise nek ladki ko tujh jase nalayak ladke k sath shadi karwadi !!!"
 
Amar gusse main kahta hai:- "Tum meri maa ho ya uski...????"
 
Aasha ji:- "Kash.....bhagwan karte mujhe Naina jaisi beti milti...kam se kam tere jaise nalayak ladke ki maa to nahin banti.....!!! Naina ne sab kuch tere naam par kar diya...aur tune ...tune  sab kuch bech diya......yahan tak ki us k khandani haveli bhi. Phir bhi us ne tujh se kuch nahin kaha. Aur ab... ab to tu us par roz hath uthne laga hai.....!!!!!Mr. Amardeep Singh....dhyan rakhna...!!! Agar yah harkat mujhe dubara dikhi to main bhul jaungi k main teri maa hoon.....aur police main complain kar dungi..... samjha.......!!!!!!!"
 
Itna kah kar Aasha ji wahan se chali gayi. Amar ne dekha k Naina room main aa rahi thi.
 
 
Amar gusse se use dekh kar kahta hai:- "To...yeh aag tumhari lagayi hui hai.....meri hi maa ko mere khilaf kar rahi ho. Mera hi dimag kharab ho gaya tha k maine tum se shadi kar li......!!!! Mila kya...?? Zindagi bhar ktane k main apne sasural walon ki paise se ji raha hoon...!! are...agar main nahin hota to kab se tumhare  baap ka business dub gaya hota. Us budhhe ne meri mehnat ka fal tumhe mere gale se badh kar de diya, aur tumne mujhe kya diya..... yeh.... yeh handicap bachhi......!!!!!!!!"
 
Ek 4 saal k bachhi k aur ishara karte hue Amar kahta hai. Aur bina breakfast kiye wahan se chala jata hai.
 
Woh bachhi niche zameen par bath kar khel rahi thi. Naina apne bed par baith gayi, aur us k ankhon main do boond anshoo chalak aaye.
 
Tabhi woh bachhi Naina k pass aayi aur boli:- "Mamma....papa aaj aap pal phil se gussa hue na...!!!!! Aap lona mat......main loti hoon kya...??? Papa to mujh pal loz gussa hote hain.....!!!" Itna kah kar woh Naina k aanshu poch leti hai.
 
Naina ne use gale se laga liya aur is baar us k anshoon bahar bhi aaye par phir bhi us ne apne aap ko sambhal liya.
 
Yahi to hai us ki zindagi......'Palak'. Janam se hi us ka ek pair kamzor hai isiliye thoda langda k chalti hai. Lekin Palak jaan hai....Naina ki aur Aasha ji ki.
 
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Aastha mansion.......
 
Amit ji baichain ho kar apne launge room main tahal rahe the. Abhi tak un k bete wapas nahin aaye the. Woh hath jod kar bhagwan se dua mangte hain k:-"Plz bhagwan ji...itni daya karna k aaj use ek ladki pasand aa hi jaye."
 
Tabhi bahar car k rukne k awaz aati hai. Amit ji bahat sare umeed k sath main door k taraf dekhte hain. Raj aur Alekh ander aate hain aur sofe par baith jate hain.
 
Amit ji:-" Party kaisi thi...????"
 
Alekh:- "Fabulous....dad!!! Just mindblowing...!!"
 
Amit ji:- "Are...hogi kyoun nahi.....!!! Mrs. Thapar k party jo thi.....!!!! Waise Raj ko wahan par koi ladki pasand aaya kya....???"
 
Raj:- "Dad....mujhe to sabhi ladkiyan pasand thi...... lekin sab k sab mujh se shadi to nahin kar sakte na.....isiliye maine apna idea drop kar diya."
 
Amit ji ka chehra utar gaya.....is ka matlab 'Ise aaj bhi koi ladki pasand nahin aayi........'
 
Raj ne notice kiya amit ji ka chehra.....Phir bola:- "Lekin.....dad.....Ek ladki thi wahan par....jis k ankhen.....kya bataon dad...! Ufff....itni khubsurat thi...itni khubsurat thi.....k main use bas dekhta hi rah gaya....."
 
Amit ji ko thodi si ummeed dikhai di aur khus ho kar bole:-" Achha....phir kya hua...???"
 
Raj:- "Phir.....!!! Phir main us ladki k kareeb gaya aur use dance k liye pucha woh raji hogayi aur main us k sath pure 10 min. tak dance karta raha.Phir maine apni nazar ghumai to dekha ek aur ladki khadi thi....kya honth the us k dad....!!!! Just mindblowing. Phir main us k paas gaya aur use dance k liye pucha....aur us k sath bhi maine kareeb15 min.tak dance kiya....!!! Phir dad ...ek aur ladki dikhi...kya figure thi us k dad....!!! Main to fida ho gaya...just...36-24-36.....aur us k sath maine sab se jyada der tak dance kiya....pata hai aap ko... pure 30min. tak."
 
Amit ji gusse se Raj ko dekh rahe the aur Alekh hansh raha tha.
 
Raj phir bola:-" Lekin.....dad!!! Finally...finally woh mujhe dikhi.....!!!!! jise main dekhta hi raha gaya....!!!!! Ek dam perfect. Mujhe laga.....chalo itne dinon k baad hi sahi .... Finally woh mujhe mili to sahi.....!!!"
 
is baar Amit ji k chehre par thodi khusi dikhi. unhone excited ho kar pucha :- "Achha...koun thi woh....???"
 
Raj:- " Actually...dad! Hua yun k main to dance kar raha tha. Tabhi piche se kisi ne kisi ko kaha 'hiiiii Kashish' aur main chaunka................. k naam itna khubsurat hai to ladki kaisi hogi...??? Main piche mud kar dekha to ek ladki black sarii main khadi thi...jis ka naam kashish tha. Aur woh 'aloo chat' kha rahi thi. Maine socha ja kar baat karta hoon...!!! Koun hai.....??? Kahan rahti hai...??? etc....etc....Lekin main us k pas bas jane hi wala tha k........" Itna kah kar Raj ruk gaya.
 
Amit ji:-" K..............................................................."
 
Raj:- "Dad.....woh 'Santoor soap k add' nikli."
 
Amit ji:- "Matlab......................................................."
 
Alekh:- " Main bata ta hun....dad!!! Raj us se baat karne hi wala tha k tabhi do bachhe bhagte hue aaye aur 'mummy...mummy...'kahte hue us se lipat gaye."
 
Amit ji:- "Whattttt...................................................."
 
Alekh:- "Haan...dad!!! Yeh to achha hua k us ladki se baat karne se pahle hi pata chal gaya k woh married thi.....warna Raj abhi hospital main hota....!!!!
 
Amit ji :- "Kyoun....????"
 
Alekh:-" Kyoun k...dad!!! Woh Aftab k wife thi..........Aftab...u remember!!!! Woh corporater......"
 
Amit ji:- "Woh gunda......!!!!"
 
Alekh:- "Yeah....dad...wohi!!!!!"
 
Raj:- "Kuch bhi ho ...dad! Woh ladki thi kamal ki. Kya figure maintain kiya tha usne.....!!!! Pata hi nahin chal raha tha k woh do bachhon ki maa hai....!!!! Dad.... aap bhi use dekhte na...to aap bhi fida ho jate."
 
Raj kuch der ruka aur phir bola:-" Ok....main ab sone ja raha hun......Good Night.....sweet dreams!"
 
amit ji apne sar par hath rakh kar bath jate hain aur dhire dhire se kahte hain k:- "Tu kabhi sweet dreams dekhne bhi dega kya...??? pata nahin ise kabhi koi ladki pasand bhi ayegi ya nahin....!!!!!!!!!"
 
*******~~~~~*******~~~~~*******~~~~~*******~~~~~*****
 
Yeh kahani hain do aise logon ki jo zindagi ko do alag alag rup main dekhte hain. Ek k paas zindagi khushiyon aur adventures se bhari hui hai. Jo har ek pal ko pure dil se jeeta hai..... to dushre k paas zindagi ka matlab sirf apne zimmedari ko pura karna hai...chahe us k liye use koi bhi keemat chukana kyoun na pad jaye.......!!!! Aur jab yeh dono zindagiyaan ek dushre se milte hain to........suru hoti hai......
 
          ***Zindagi.......teri meri kahani***
 
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         **MAIN STAR-CAST**
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Amit Malhotra:- Sanjeev Mehra (suri ji)
Raj Malhotra:- Rajeev
Alekh Malhotra:- Arjun
 
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Aasha Singh:- Nishigandha wad
Amardeep Singh:-??????????
Naina Singh:- Priyanka
Palak Singh:- 'union bank add girl'.....Riya
 
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Pooja Ghai:- Gazal Rai
Ali Beg:- Harshad Chopra
Neelima Kapur /Neelu:- Vaibhavi  
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Ok...friends...!!!!! I m starting a new fanfic on our beloved RN. so plz do comment....how's that??????
                                                   thanx.
                                                         luv.......PriyaSmile
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  INTRO:- PG 1
 1st :- PG 2
 2nd :- PG 6
 3rd :- PG 9
 4th :- PG 12
 5th :- PG 15
 6th :- PG 18
 7th :- PG 23
 8th :- PG 28
 9th :- PG 32
 10th :- PG 38
 11th :-PG 43 
 12th :-PG 48
 13th :-PG 55
 14th :-PG 60
 15th :-PG 66
 16th :-PG 72
 17th :PG 78
 18th :PG 85
 19th :PG 91
 20th:PG 98
 21th:-PG 107
 22nd:-PG 113


Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 29 October 2010 at 12:42am

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Posted: 29 October 2008 at 9:50am | IP Logged
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!! i m wid u yaaar......i m already in luv wid dis fic............cont soooooooooooooooooooon....naina already married.....????gr8 and that tooo in amiserable condition but who's amar...i mean uska character kaun play kar raha hai...not huda i guess vo bilkul suite nhn karega iss character mein......plzzzzzzzzzz post d character sketch sooooon and wow raj was tooooooooooooo funny and aalekh and raj r brothers......toooo gooood......ud sooooooooooon

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Posted: 29 October 2008 at 10:55am | IP Logged
that was so nice but Naian wife hain vo bhi kisi aur ki too bad aur vo use pitata  hain uski ek beti hain vo bhi handicapped
so terrible
and on the other side Raj is so funny
his dad wants him to get married and he is just avoiding
gr8 start and interesting story line
plz continue soon

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Posted: 29 October 2008 at 11:17am | IP Logged
hi priya
superb concept
totally different
update soooooooooooooooon
do m me
luv soumya

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Posted: 29 October 2008 at 11:27am | IP Logged
Hi dear
This new fiction is really gud..Thumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs Up n pls do continue it..So Naina is already married to Amar...He is such a .....................Angry..how can womaen tolerate such non sense men..????ShockedShockedShocked
its gud to see that her mother-in-law is with her n she supports her..Palak is such a cute name..SmileSmileSmile
Alekh n Raj r brothers n Raj is a casanova..Wink.....way Raj was describing various girls to his father it seems dat he is really open to him..Dats cute..Kashish's scene was really funny..Santoor ad Ha haLOL...Aftab the goon(His looks resemble to cobbler)..
I am eager to read RN meeting n how will they end up together...Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
 
Happy diwali...
Do update soon

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Posted: 29 October 2008 at 11:44am | IP Logged
hey priya i found your fic
really nice naina ke liye bahut bura lag raha hai
hope raj comes to her rescue soon

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Posted: 29 October 2008 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
oh!!!!!!reall amazing start.....

two very different situationd 1 wid happiness n other sad1....

but fabulous start....asusal dialouges wer mindblowing

HAPPY DIWALI TO YOU

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Kya baat hai yaar nice plot i really loved that.ClapClapClap

update soon.



Edited by varshita - 31 October 2008 at 5:43am

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