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fanatic 21

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Posted: 28 October 2008 at 1:02pm | IP Logged

a very very wonderful n cute short fic.........

u r absolutely amazing Clap

wish u a very happy diwali

Edited by fanatic 21 - 28 October 2008 at 1:05pm

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sea_nyx

Goldie

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Posted: 28 October 2008 at 2:53pm | IP Logged

wow i loved the story especially the first person narration and the best part i think was the views at the end

Shaina_b

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Posted: 28 October 2008 at 7:27pm | IP Logged

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj ne sahi kaha ke unke saamne toh acchi ban kar hi aayegi!!!! Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile

Raj's this dialogue reminds me of the movie Aur Pyaar Ho gaya!!!!! Smile Smile Smile

Usne accha tareeka nikala hai!!!!! Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink And good thing he protested!!!!!! Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up

Sahi toh kaha ke unke bacchon ne apni marzi se shaadi ki aur ab sab milke uske peeche pade hai!!!!! Disapprove

Raj ki mom ne bhi saath diya aur Raj ke dad ko manna hi pada!!!! Smile Smile Smile Smile

Just as I thought that Naina was the girl who was on the train!!!!! Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Yeh sab kuch Naina ka plan tha!!! Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Yeh sab kuch usne Raj se shaadi naa karne ke liye ki thi!!!!! Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Wink Wink Wink Wink

She really is something!!!! Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Raj ko toh aur pasand aa gayi!!!!! Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed

Raj ko usne wakai ullu banaya!!!!! LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL But she is right ke kapdo se aise judge jo kare he is pathetic!!!!! Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Raj toh shaadi ke liye bilkul ready hai!!! Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Aur kehta hai shaadi karega toh issi se karega!!!!! Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile Wow!!!! Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed

Naina toh phas gayi!!!! Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Bahut confident thi!!! Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL Magar Raj ne toh haa kar diya!!!! Smile Smile Smile Smile

The way you described Naina's face this time is too funny!!!!! LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Sagai bhi ho gayi aur saat din baad shaadi bhi!!!! Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Raj ko bahut hasi aa rahi thi!!! LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL Naina toh muh latka ke baithi thi aur Raj ne usse sab kuch bol diya!!!!! Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj ne kaha ke bahut saalon pehle uske jaisi hi kisi ki kalpana ki thi jo uski life partner!!!! Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Haaaiiii!!!!! Blushing

Waise sahi hai jo huya woh kisi comedy se kam toh nahi tha!!!! Smile Smile Smile Smile LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Narrator ne pakad hi liya ke wohi Raj aur Naina thhe!!!!! Wink Wink Wink Wink Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Wow!!!!! Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap

Narrator ke peeche jo ladka pada tha uski shaadi ho gayi kisi aur se!!!!! LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Sach kaha ke sapne hote hi hai logo ko jeena sikhane ke liye!!!!! Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile

I think that was very well said that kuch kahaniyan hote hi hai itni khubsoorat ke unpar sachai ki talwer nahi chalani chahiye balki unke saath kuch haseen pal bitane chahiye!!!!!! Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

The story was very good and had a great ending!!!!!! Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

yakkudimag

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Posted: 05 November 2008 at 11:40am | IP Logged

Originally posted by saridena

reserved

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thks for the pm dear==welcome

wow superb yaar==thanks a lot..

the person guessed that it was raj and naina Clap

this ff had very expect crying that no poblem

enjoyed reading this amazing ff

keep writing more like this and do pm me

wish u a happy diwali

luv soumya

Well..thanks for reading and loving my short fiction..I will post you the link in future of my another short fiction..

Originally posted by watch rajeev

Clap

THAT'S ALL I CAN DO....SUPERB FIC YAAR.....ANYWAYS HAPPY DIWALI

THANKS A LOT Big smile

Originally posted by sania_58

fafafati fic Di

eii narrative style ta darun kintu

Happy Diwali

Thanks a lot ..yaar tor reply onno fic a paina...anyways..take care..

yakkudimag

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Posts: 4131

Posted: 05 November 2008 at 11:46am | IP Logged

Originally posted by vvdn

Hey Anu......,

       wonderful dear...... the Gr8 indian marriages always have that charm isn't it!!!
RN rocks dear......Naina's character is sooooo different here aur ek baar fir sabit ho gaya arranged ho ya love jinhe milna hota hai woh mil hi jate hai chahe milne ka tarika kitna bhi ajib ho....

              thanku so much for this wonderful Diwali Gift....

                          ~*~ Happy Diwali ~*~

yaa..that's true...jinko milna hota hai..mil jaate hain..is baat se koi fark nahi padta..k aap kis Country se ho..yaa..aapki caste yaa religion kyaa hai..yaa fir social status..nothing makes any difference.. Wink

Originally posted by prerna1

great

amazing

beautiful

superb

fantastic

mindblowing

bas ab aur adjectives nahi likh sakti is fic ke liye

its really too good

I love the last bit vey much

Thanks for loving my fic..thank you..

Originally posted by digimon_pokemon

Smile

so cute story

woonnderful anu

thankyou so much for this beautiful Diwali gift Smile

It's my pleasure..thanks for loving my fiction.. Smile

yakkudimag

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Posted: 05 November 2008 at 11:51am | IP Logged

Originally posted by fanatic 21

a very very wonderful n cute short fic.........==thanks a lot..

u r absolutely amazing Clap

==My pleasure..

wish u a very happy diwali==Same to you..

Originally posted by sea_nyx

wow i loved the story especially the first person narration and the best part i think was the views at the end

THANKS A LOT..

yyyy

IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4514

Posted: 05 November 2008 at 12:10pm | IP Logged

A very interesting story..how can u come up with such brilliant ideas yaar...and i wish u would continue from where u stopped..that would be fun anyway please continue your other fics yaar

yakkudimag

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Posts: 4131

Posted: 05 November 2008 at 12:14pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Shaina_b