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fanatic 21

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Posted: 28 October 2008 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
a very very wonderful n cute short fic.........

u r absolutely amazingClap

wish u a very happy diwali


Edited by fanatic 21 - 28 October 2008 at 1:05pm

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Posted: 28 October 2008 at 2:53pm | IP Logged

wow i loved the story especially the first person narration and the best part i think was the views at the end

Shaina_b

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Posted: 28 October 2008 at 7:27pm | IP Logged

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj ne sahi kaha ke unke saamne toh acchi ban kar hi aayegi!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile

Raj's this dialogue reminds me of the movie Aur Pyaar Ho gaya!!!!!Smile Smile Smile

Usne accha tareeka nikala hai!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink WinkAnd good thing he protested!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

Sahi toh kaha ke unke bacchon ne apni marzi se shaadi ki aur ab sab milke uske peeche pade hai!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Raj ki mom ne bhi saath diya aur Raj ke dad ko manna hi pada!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Just as I thought that Naina was the girl who was on the train!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Yeh sab kuch Naina ka plan tha!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueYeh sab kuch usne Raj se shaadi naa karne ke liye ki thi!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Wink Wink Wink Wink

She really is something!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap ClapRaj ko toh aur pasand aa gayi!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Raj ko usne wakai ullu banaya!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFLBut she is right ke kapdo se aise judge jo kare he is pathetic!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Raj toh shaadi ke liye bilkul ready hai!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileAur kehta hai shaadi karega toh issi se karega!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile SmileWow!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Naina toh phas gayi!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueBahut confident thi!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLMagar Raj ne toh haa kar diya!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

The way you described Naina's face this time is too funny!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Sagai bhi ho gayi aur saat din baad shaadi bhi!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Raj ko bahut hasi aa rahi thi!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLNaina toh muh latka ke baithi thi aur Raj ne usse sab kuch bol diya!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj ne kaha ke bahut saalon pehle uske jaisi hi kisi ki kalpana ki thi jo uski life partner!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed EmbarrassedHaaaiiii!!!!!Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

Waise sahi hai jo huya woh kisi comedy se kam toh nahi tha!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Narrator ne pakad hi liya ke wohi Raj aur Naina thhe!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueWow!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap 

Narrator ke peeche jo ladka pada tha uski shaadi ho gayi kisi aur se!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Sach kaha ke sapne hote hi hai logo ko jeena sikhane ke liye!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile

I think that was very well said that kuch kahaniyan hote hi hai itni khubsoorat ke unpar sachai ki talwer nahi chalani chahiye balki unke saath kuch haseen pal bitane chahiye!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

The story was very good and had a great ending!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

 
 
 
 
 

yakkudimag

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Posted: 05 November 2008 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saridena

reserved

***edited***

hi

thks for the pm dear==welcome

wow superb yaar==thanks a lot..

the person guessed that it was raj and naina Clap

this ff had very expect crying that no poblem
enjoyed reading this amazing ff
keep writing more like this and do pm me
wish u a happy diwali
luv soumya


Well..thanks for reading and loving my short fiction..I will post you the link in future of my another short fiction..


Originally posted by watch rajeev

ClapTHAT'S ALL I CAN DO....SUPERB FIC YAAR.....ANYWAYS HAPPY DIWALI


THANKS A LOTBig smile
Big smile

Originally posted by sania_58

fafafati fic Di
eii narrative style ta darun kintu
Happy Diwali


Thanks a lot ..yaar tor reply onno fic a paina...anyways..take care..


yakkudimag

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yakkudimag

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Posted: 05 November 2008 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vvdn

Hey Anu......,


       wonderful dear......Clap the Gr8 indian marriages always have that charm isn't it!!!Wink
RN rocks dear......Naina's character is sooooo different here aur ek baar fir sabit ho gaya arranged ho ya love jinhe milna hota hai woh mil hi jate hai chahe milne ka tarika kitna bhi ajib ho....Embarrassed

              thanku so much for this wonderful Diwali Gift....Tongue


                         
~*~  Happy Diwali ~*~


              


yaa..that's true...jinko milna hota hai..mil jaate hain..is baat se koi fark nahi padta..k aap kis Country se ho..yaa..aapki caste yaa religion kyaa hai..yaa fir social status..nothing makes any difference..
Wink


Originally posted by prerna1

great
amazing
beautiful
superb
fantastic
mindblowing
bas ab aur adjectives nahi likh sakti is fic ke liye
its really too good
I love the last bit vey much
 


Thanks for loving my fic..thank you..


Originally posted by digimon_pokemon


Smile

so cute story

woonnderful anu

thankyou so much for this beautiful Diwali giftSmile

Clap


It's my pleasure..thanks for loving my fiction..
Smile


yakkudimag

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Posted: 05 November 2008 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fanatic 21

a very very wonderful n cute short fic.........==thanks a lot..

u r absolutely amazingClap==My pleasure..

wish u a very happy diwali==Same to you..



Originally posted by sea_nyx

wow i loved the story especially the first person narration and the best part i think was the views at the end



Embarrassed

THANKS A LOT..


yyyy

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Posted: 05 November 2008 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
A very interesting story..how can u come up with such brilliant ideas yaar...and i wish u would continue from where u stopped..that would be fun anyway please continue your other fics yaar

yakkudimag

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Posted: 05 November 2008 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj ne sahi kaha ke unke saamne toh acchi ban kar hi aayegi!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile

Raj's this dialogue reminds me of the movie Aur Pyaar Ho gaya!!!!!Smile Smile Smile

Usne accha tareeka nikala hai!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink WinkAnd good thing he protested!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

Sahi toh kaha ke unke bacchon ne apni marzi se shaadi ki aur ab sab milke uske peeche pade hai!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Raj ki mom ne bhi saath diya aur Raj ke dad ko manna hi pada!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Just as I thought that Naina was the girl who was on the train!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Yeh sab kuch Naina ka plan tha!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueYeh sab kuch usne Raj se shaadi naa karne ke liye ki thi!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Wink Wink Wink Wink

She really is something!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap ClapRaj ko toh aur pasand aa gayi!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Raj ko usne wakai ullu banaya!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFLBut she is right ke kapdo se aise judge jo kare he is pathetic!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Raj toh shaadi ke liye bilkul ready hai!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileAur kehta hai shaadi karega toh issi se karega!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile SmileWow!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Naina toh phas gayi!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueBahut confident thi!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLMagar Raj ne toh haa kar diya!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

The way you described Naina's face this time is too funny!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Sagai bhi ho gayi aur saat din baad shaadi bhi!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Raj ko bahut hasi aa rahi thi!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLNaina toh muh latka ke baithi thi aur Raj ne usse sab kuch bol diya!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj ne kaha ke bahut saalon pehle uske jaisi hi kisi ki kalpana ki thi jo uski life partner!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed EmbarrassedHaaaiiii!!!!!Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

Waise sahi hai jo huya woh kisi comedy se kam toh nahi tha!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Narrator ne pakad hi liya ke wohi Raj aur Naina thhe!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueWow!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap 

Narrator ke peeche jo ladka pada tha uski shaadi ho gayi kisi aur se!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Sach kaha ke sapne hote hi hai logo ko jeena sikhane ke liye!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile

I think that was very well said that kuch kahaniyan hote hi hai itni khubsoorat ke unpar sachai ki talwer nahi chalani chahiye balki unke saath kuch haseen pal bitane chahiye!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

The story was very good and had a great ending!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

 
 
 
 
 



Yeh kahani..kuchh haquikat hai..kuchh fasana hai..par..yeh mere dil k bahut kareeb hai..basically..shaadi se mujhe bahut darr lagta hai..zaroori nahi..har Arranged Marriage kamyab aur har Love Marriage nakamyab hoti hai..yaa fir
vice-versa..shaadi..kismat ka lekha jokha hai..Insan ka janam aur maut..jaise uske bas me nahi hota..waise hi shaadi kiske saath hogi..koi bata nahi sakta ..bahut baar aisa bhi hota hai..mandap me baith kar bhi shaadi nahi hoti..par shaadi me jo chees honi chahie..woh hai..ek doosre k lia mohabbat.. haan.. yeh baat sach hai..humesha mohabbat kaafi nahi..par mohabbat ka hona
zaroori hai..bahut zaroori..


Sapne..khushkismat hote hain woh insaan..jinke sapne pure hote hain..agar har kisike jaayez sapne pure ho..toh duniya bahut khubsurat ho jaayegi..itni nafrat nahi hoti...mushkil yeh hai..k kuchh logo k najayez maange pure ho rahe hain..aur kuchh logo k jayaez maango ko dafan kia jaa raha hai.. ghoomnaami k andhere me..bas..sab kuchh bigad raha hai..duniya me nafrat zyada hai..Sapne..jo..dil armaano ki tasveer hoti hai..unko pura karna..har kisiki khwaish hoti hai..kuchh sapne pure ho jaate hain..kuchh pure nahi hote ..par sapne dekhna..kabhi chhodna nahi chahie..

Kahani...humare jazbaaton k jeeti jaagti nishanian hoti hai..yeh kahaniyan.. kahani..shayad zindagi ka hi aks hoti hain..par kalpana k rang bhar kar inko ek khwab me tabdeel kia jata hai...isme koi burai nahi..k insaan sachchai ki duniya chhod kar..thodi der k lia..kahani ki duniya me kho jaaye...kyonki kahanion me sab theek hota hai..hona padta hai..sab kuchh theek thaak...aur isise ummeed  banti hai..k zindagi k is sachchi jungh me hum zaroor jeetenge..jung jo baaharwalon se hain..yaa fir is system se..yaa fir apne aap se...

Anyways..kahani achhi lagi sab ko..mujhe bhi achha laga...thanks a lot..



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