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Originally posted by watch rajeev

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PART 2




Raj ne bahut socha..udhar Dad bhi baar baar phone kar rahe hain...Raj ko Amritsar jana hi pada...


Dad--kal hum sab mil kar chalenge..unke ghar..tu ladki ko dekh lena..fir baat tai kar lenge...


Is bar Raj ne apna vakilon wala dimaag ladya...usne aitraaz jataya...

Dad--kyaa problem hai?

Raj--Main pahle us ladki k baare me apne tareeke se pata karna chaahta hoon..aap mujhe unke ghar ka pata de dijiye..main achanak se..jaana chaahta hoon..ek surprise visit...


Dad--Bahut achhe log hai..aur ladki bhi bahut achhi hai..

Raj--Aap logo k saamne achhi hi ban kar aayegi..par asal me kaisi hai..yeh main apne tareeke se malum kar loonga.,..mujhe akele jaana hai..


Dad--Raj...

Raj--Dad..agar main jaaoonga..toh aise hi jaaoonga..varna is rishtey ki baat aap bhool jaaiye..

Dad--Tere Chacha Chachi...Mama Maami..kyaa sochenge?

Raj--Enough..I have had enough..inke bachcho ne kyaa kia..?apni marzi se shaadi kar li sab ne..ab mujh par talwar chalegi...yeh meri zindagi hai..aur iske baare me faisla karne ka mujhe bhi pura hak hai..main thak chooka hoon.. aap sab k nakhre uthate uthate..shaadi mujhe karni hai..baaki sab isme shaamil ho..theek hai..they are most welcome..but..mere faisle me kisi ki dakhalandazi main bardasht nahi karoonga..

Maa--Dekho jee..baat iski bhi sahi hai..zindagi ise hi guzaarni hai us ladki k saath..kal ko..ladki me koi dosh nikla vaakei me..zindagi toh Raj ki hi barbad honi hai..isko apne hisaab se chhaanbeen karne do..

Dad ne socha..ladka bada ho gaya..zor zabardasti se kaam nahi chalega.. unhone kaha,"theek hai..par jhoot moot us ladki ko badnam nahi karega.. agar woh achhi ladki nikli..toh hum abhi sagai kar k fir Delhi lautenge.. bol.. manzoor hai?"

Raj--OK..manzoor hai..

Dad--Wada karta hai?

Raj--Jee  haan..wada..



Raj agle din us ladki k ghar jaa raha tha..taxi me hi gaya,ghar ka pate k baare me poochh hi raha tha..achanak usne ek bachcha khada hai.Raj ek shopping mall k paas khada tha..bachcha shoping mall k seedhi se geer raha tha..Raj bachane gaya..aur bachche ko usne geerne se bacha lia.. achanak se kisi ka dhakka lag gaya...aur jaakar geera sadak par...saare kapde gande ho gaye.. usne socha aisi gandegi k saath woh kisi k ghar jaa nahi sakta...woh mall k andar naye kapde kharidne chala gaya...sales-man se kapde le kar woh aaine k saamne dekh raha tha..achanak aaine me ek haath dikha..ek ladki ka haath ..Raj ki taraf peeth kar k khadi thi..aur apne khule hue zulfon ko..band se baandh rahi thi..Raj ki nazre uski haath par hi gayi..haath me wahi breclet tha ..Naina k haath me jo tha..NAINA word ka design bhi bana tha...Raj aur woh ladki dono ek doosre se ulte direction me khade the..Raj ne aaine me,ladki ka backview dekha,figure bhi jaani pehchaani lag rahi hai..ladki aaine ki taraf moodi..ab Raj k backside ko ladki ne dekha...ladki ne dhyaan nahi dia..par aaine me ladki ko dekh lia tha Raj ne..Naina hi thi..jo usko train me mili thi.. arre..Naina ..aur Amritsar me?Raj ne peechha kia..aur dekha Naina trial room me ghoos gayi..Raj bhi uske paas waale trial room k andar gaya..Naina k saath uski ek cousin bhi thi...dono kapde try kar rahe the..aur baatein kar rahe the...Raj dhyaan se unki baatein sunne laga..

Cousin--Didi..agar Mamajee ko pata chal gaya..k tumne kyaa kia hai..toh..

Naina--Kyaa karenge?arre bach gayi main,jo mujhe us sankhi vakil se shaadi nahi karni padegi..maine is tarha usko daraya hai,ab woh aayega..do din baad ..humare ghar pe..mujhe dekhega..aur ulte paaon bhaag jaayega..train me maine aisa impression jamaya hai..

Cousin--tum bahut badi chaloo ho...ghar par bata kar gayi..k tum saheli ki shaadi k lia Mumbai jaa rahi ho..aur Mumbai se filght ki ticket book kar k tum Kolkata gayi..aur ladke k baare me chhaanbeen karne lagi,,,


Naina--arre..meri kismat mere saath thi...maine toh socha tha..us Vakil k aas paas ki seat paane k lia..kisi se seat exchange karna padega..par ittefaak se..mere hi paaswale seat me tha woh ullu..mujhe zyada mehnat nahi karni padi..

Cousin--tune toh uski saari details pata kar li thi..

Naina--haan..aur pahooch gayi main Kolkata..do chaar din usko follow kia.. bas kaam ban gaya..itna bada sankhi hai..pahle toh usko neend nahi aa rahi thi..jab maine cold drink di usko..yeh keh kar k usme Vodka mila hua hai.. usne pee lia..aur bola...sar bhaari lag raha hai..neend aa rahi hai,pura psycho hai..jab usme cold drink k ilava aur kuchh nahi tha..mere artificial tatoo usko permanent tatoo lage..yaar..jo kapdo se yeh samjhe..k insaan k khaylaat kaise hain..uske dimaag k baare me mujhe shak hai..uske criterias maine sune the...mera dimaag tabhi jal gaya tha..matlab toh yehi nikalta hai..k jo salwar kameez pahne woh Sita Savitri..aur jo kuchh aur pahne..woh Chameli yaa Julie type ki hai?How pathetic !!Maine tabhi decide kar lia tha..aise
psycho se main nahi karnewali thi shaadi..aur fir..itna drama kia maine..


Raj sab kuchh khade ho kar sunta raha...Naina wahi sab bata rahi hai ..apni cousin ko ..jo us raat us train me hua tha...Raj hakkabakka reh gaya...itna naatak..sirf yeh shaadi nahi karne k lia?Ohh My God!!!This girl is different.. she is terrific..!!

Cosuin--So..Advocate Rajveer ki shaadi..Dr. Naina se nahi ho rahi hai...right?

Naina--yes..is janam me toh nahi...

Naina wahi ladki hai...kyonki Dad ne hi bataya hai..k ladki Doctor hai..matlab yehi..uff..achha ullu banaya Raj ko..Raj baahar nikla..dekha Naina jaa rahi hai ..apni Cousin k saath baatein kar rahi hai..hans rahi hai...achanak Naina ne jo note chhoda tha..woh yaad aaya.."Jo jaisa dikhta hai..waisa hota nahi,take care.."



Asal me Naina kaisi hai..jaisa Raj k gharwale dekh kar gaye hain.. waisa.. yaa ..fir jaisa Raj ne usko train me dekha tha..yaa fir..Naina toh yehi hai..jo is waqt jaa rahi hai..apni Cousin k saath..Raj ko ab Naina k ghar nahi jaana..kyonki Raj faisla kar chuka hai...woh sidhe apne Dad k paas aaya..


Dad--kyaa hua?


Raj--yehi ladki hai na?

Raj ne mobile dikhaya..

Dad--haan..yehi hai..teri Maa k paas dekh..aur bhi achhi photo hai uski..

Raj ne dekha us tasveer ko...

Maa--kyaa socha tune?

Raj--sochna kyaa hai?kal chalte hain..aap log sagai ki taiiyyari k saath chalna .. mujhe yehi shaadi karni hai..ab faisla kar lia hai maine..

Dad--sach?

Raj--haan..agar shaadi karoonga ..toh isi se karoonga..thanks to you..aap logo ne itni achhi ladki ladki dhoondhi..thanks..


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Agle din Sabarwal house me sab intezar kar rahe hain..Shergill family k aane ka waqt ho gaya hai..ladka aa raha hai..ladki ko dekhne...

Ladki..matlab Dr. Naina Sabarwal...mann hi mann bahut hans rahi thi..ladka aayega..aur doom daba kar bhaag jaayega..sankhi..ullu...ghonchu..

"Naina..Beta ..woh log aa gaye..chal neeche chal.."

"Jee...Mom..aai.."

Raj aur Naina aamne saamne baithe hain...

Raj ki Maa ne poochha,"Beti..tum kuchh bolo.."

Naina--Jee..jo ghar k log faisla karenge..mujhe manzoor hai..jaisa aap sab theek samjhe..

Raj k Dad--hum toh Raj k faisle ka hi intezar kar rahe the...Raj ..chup kyon hai Beta..?

Raj sharmate hue bola.."Jee..mujhe ..Dr. Sabarwal pasand hai..ab aap log.. jaane.."

Naina k sar par aasmaan toot pada..aur Raj zara bhi shocked nahi lag raha hai...par ab bahut der ho chuki hai...


Mr. Sabarwal--So..Mr.Shergill..shaadi...

Mr. Shergill--Oohh..jee..jitni jaldi ho jaaye..utna achha...

Pandit ko toorant bulaya gaya...Pandit bhi bahut efficient nikla..saat din baad ka muhurat nikla..varna..agle teen maheene tak..koi muhurat nahi..in dono ki shaadi abhi ho jaaye toh achha..


sab ne bola.."SHUBHASHYA SHEEGHRAM".



Naina k haath me kuchh nahi tha...ab Naina ko dekh kar lag raha hai..k usko Baghdad bheja jaa raha hai..Medical camp k lia..sagai ho gayi...Raj k gaal laal ho chuke the..hansi rok rok kar...


Saat din baad shaadi ho gayi...

Naina ko Delhi k ghar me laaya gaya,suhaag raat wahi par honi thi.Naina muh latka k baithi hai..


Raj uske paas baitha.."tum ko pata hai..tumne Kolkata aakar kitna achha kaam kia tha?Agar main waha tumhe nahi milta..toh aaj yeh shaadi nahi hoti ...I fell in love with you..aur tum utar gayi Kanpur me..maine bahut socha tumhare baare me..finally socha..pahle is arranged marriage se peechha chhodaaoon..main tumhare ghar ki taraf hi jaa raha tha..tum me koi burai
nikaalne..aur shopping mall me tum mujhe mil gayi...aur trial room me khade hokar tumne sara sach ugal dia..apni Cousin k saamne.."

Naina--Ohh..ab mujhe samajh me aa raha hai..tum zara bhi shocked nahi hue mujhe dekh kar..

Raj--Mujhe itni hansi aa rahi thi..soch raha tha,uske ek din pahle..main tumko hi reject karne wala tha..tumse hi setting karne k lia..par tum apni kahi hui baat bhool gayi..

Naina--kyaa?

Raj--"Jo jaisa dikhta hai,waisa hota nahi.",tumne mujhe ullu samjha.. psycho samjha..ghonchu samjha..main waisa dikhta zaroor hoon..par hoon nahi..


Naina--yeh gaalian kuchh suni sunai lag rahi hai...

Raj--trial room me tum inhi adjectives se meri aarti utaar rahi thi..

Naina--tum baahar khade ho kar..sun rahe the?

Raj--ittefaak..jaise tumko mere paas wala berth mila..waise hi..ek ittefaak aur hua..tum jis mall me gayi thi..mere kapde usi mall k saamne kharaab ho gaye ..main bhi usi mall k andar gaya..tumhara breclet dikha mujhe,maine tumhara peechha kia..paas wale trial room me main tha..sab kuchh suna..



Naina kuchh der chup chaap baithi rahi...

Raj--arre..ab toh muskurao..

Naina--tum bahut zyada hans rahe the..kyaa baat hai?

Raj--tumhe dekh kar hans raha tha,bahut saalon pahle,tum jaisi  hi kisi ki kalpana ki thi..jo meri life partner banegi..par..is arranged marriage k chakkar me..sab bhoolna pada...log dimaag kharaab kar dete hain..but..finally..jaisa socha tha..waisa hi paaya..so thanks to you..for your desperate nature..tum agar sach me usi gharelu bahenjee hoti..toh ..pata nahi..kyaa hota..now it's quite challanging..

Naina--hmm..

Raj--So..jo hua..humare saath..infact humne jo kia..pahli chaal tumne chali.. akhri daaon maine khela..isko kyaa bologi?


Naina--THE GREAT INDIAN ARRANGED MARRIAGE..agar yeh nahi hota.. toh..itna sab kuchh nahi hota..aadhe India ki sair maine kar li..iske chakkar me.. Amritsar se Mumbai..waha se Kolkata,waha se Kanpur,waha se waapas Delhi..finally Amritsar..meri haalat kharab ho gayi thi...


Raj hansne laga...GREAT INDIAN ARRANGED MARRIAGE...ek tha GREAT INDIAN LAUGHTER CHALLANGE..aur ab yeh..waise jo hua..woh kisi comedy se kum toh nahi...



kahani khatam hui...dinner ka waqt ho gaya tha..hum khana khaa rahe the..


Maine poochha,"So ,Advocate Shergill..kaam k lia Kolkata aaye the aap?"


Aadmi chauk gaya.."kyaa kaha aapne?"


"Yes..aap hi toh hain na..Advocate Rajveer Shergill..aur yeh aapki Biwi..Dr. Naina Shergill..?"


Biwi--aapko kaise pata chala?

"kahani ko itni baariki se wahi bata sakte hain...jo in ghatnaao se guzre ho.. theek keh rahi hoon na main?"



Rajveer aur Naina dono hans pade...

Naina--Aap..is waqt..Delhi ..kyon jaa rahi hai?


"Ek lookkha mere peechhe pada hai..usise peechha chhoodane k lia..bhaag rahi hoon.."


Raj--Jo jaisa dikhta hai..waisa hota nahi..lookkha nahi hai shaayad...

"I don't know.."

Naina--ek baar usko mauka dena chahie tha aapko..

"is baar laut kar ,mauka zaroor doongi.."

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subha 10 baje..train Delhi pahoochi..mujhe taxi pakad k Airport ki taraf jaana tha..Mausi ka ghar Airport k paas hi hai..Raj aur Naina ne bhi Car hire kia..


Raj aur Naina ko maine Good Bye kaha..aur unhone mujhse wada lia..k main us ladke ko mauka doongi..sachche pyaar ko mauka dena hi chahie..


Maine wada kar dia..kyon ki main jaanti thi..isko poora karne ki zaroorat hi nahi padegi..Subha hi mere Bhai ka phone aaya tha mere mobile par..usine bataya..woh ladka..kisi aur ki beti se chhedkhaani kar raha tha..maholle k logone usko pakda..aur usise zabardasti shaadi kara di,bahut dino se undono ka meljol tha..thode dino k lia..woh ladka mere peechhe pada tha .. better option chahie tha usko...apni aukaat bhool gaya..woh ladki usi  k type ki hai..dono ka class same hai..main yeh baat Raj aur Naina ko tabhi bata sakti thi..par maine nahi bataya..maine dekha..woh dono khush hain..apne sapno ki duniya me..woh log yehi samajhte hain..k har kisiki story unke jaisi ho sakti hai..kuchh khayaalat..kuchh sapne itne meethe aur naazuk hote hain..jinko todna nahi chahie..aise hi ek sapne ko Naina aur Raj jee rahe hain ..mujhe koi hak nahi banta k ek kadve sach k patthar se unke sapno k mahel ko main tod doon..

Kuchh sapne barkarar rahe toh hi achha..kyonki sapne hain..isi lia dil me yakeen hain..k ek din woh pure zaroor honge..kyaa bura hai..agar Raj aur Naina..aur unke jaise laakhon log..isi sapne k saath jeea,aur doosro ko jeena sikhaaye?Koi burai nahi hai..sapne aise hi hone chahie..ek saath hone k sapne..pyaar k sapne..maar kaat se bhari lahoo lohaan is duniya me..aaj aise sapno ki bahut zaroorat hai..jo logo ko jeena sikhaaye..

Main apne reallity ki duniya me hi bahut khush hoon..bas kabhi kabhaar aise sapno bhare kahanion me kho jaati hoon..aur fir ankh khoolte hi..un sapno ko..apne dil k kisi kone me chhupa leti hoon..kahani ki kitab ko bandh kar leti hoon..kuchh kahanian hoti hi hai itni khubsurat..unpar sachchai ki talwar  nahi chalni chahie..bas un kahanion k saath kuchh haseen pal beet jaaye ..yehi bahut hai..



Main pahooch chuki thi..Mausi khadi thi..ghar k saamne..Mausi bahut khush hui mujhe dekh kar.Mausami..meri bahen bahut zyada thrilled thi..mere saath bahut si planning karni thi usko..raat ko..Silvester Stallon ki The Assassins movie dikha rahe the HBO me...main maze se woh movie dekhne lagi....





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Edited by yakkudimag - 28 October 2008 at 12:23pm

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hi

thks for the pm dear

wow superb yaar

the person guessed that it was raj and naina Clap

this ff had very expect crying that no poblem
enjoyed reading this amazing ff
keep writing more like this and do pm me
wish u a happy diwali
luv soumya


Edited by saridena - 28 October 2008 at 7:05am

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ClapTHAT'S ALL I CAN DO....SUPERB FIC YAAR.....ANYWAYS HAPPY DIWALI

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fafafati fic Di
eii narrative style ta darun kintu
Happy Diwali

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Hey Anu......,


       wonderful dear......Clap the Gr8 indian marriages always have that charm isn't it!!!Wink
RN rocks dear......Naina's character is sooooo different here aur ek baar fir sabit ho gaya arranged ho ya love jinhe milna hota hai woh mil hi jate hai chahe milne ka tarika kitna bhi ajib ho....Embarrassed

              thanku so much for this wonderful Diwali Gift....Tongue


                         
~*~  Happy Diwali ~*~


              


Edited by vvdn - 29 October 2008 at 7:48am

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great
amazing
beautiful
superb
fantastic
mindblowing
bas ab aur adjectives nahi likh sakti is fic ke liye
its really too good
I love the last bit vey much
 

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Smile

so cute story

woonnderful anu

thankyou so much for this beautiful Diwali giftSmile

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