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yakkudimag

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Arranged Marriage....is ek chees ne..sab k dil me itna sara confusion create kia hai..haalat kharab ho gayi hai sab ki..infact shaadi hoti hai gadbad wali chees..

Rajeev Khandelwal as Rajveer


Priyanka Bassi as Naina





Edited by yakkudimag - 28 October 2008 at 6:48am

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PART 1




Peechhle saal,meri Mausi ne mujhe Diwali me unke ghar bulaya..woh Delhi me rehti hain..meri Maa ne bhi kaha..k Mausi bula rahi hain chali jaa..is tarha unhone..kabhi request nahi kia..actually..Mausi k Bete ..mere Amrit Bhaiyya chale gaye hain Mailbourne,MBA k lia..Mausami..Mausi ki beti..bahut akeli pad gayi thi..isi lia Mausi ne aur Mausami ne mujhe Delhi bulaya..aur main jaane k lia raazi ho gayi..kyonki main khud us waqt Kolkata se bhaagna chaahti thi..kyonki ek sadial sa below standard ka ladka mere peechhe haath dhoke pad gaya tha..Diwali k waqt woh mujhe sab k saamne propose karega ..yeh usne claim kia tha.Maine socha bhaag jaana achha idea hai..filhaal k lia yeh musibat tal jaaye,fir baad ki baad me dekhenge,is waqt Kolkata me mujhe koi kaam bhi nahi tha..maine apni naukri chhod di thi,socha nayi naukri ki talaash karne se pahle..thode din aaraam kar loon..toh main chal padi..Delhi ki taraf..


Rajdhani Express ka ticket milna mushkil tha is waqt..par maine manage kia ..Vijaya Dashmi k baad..jana chaahti thi..par uske baad..ghar me Lakshmi Pooja bhi honi thi..aur khuskismati se Lakshmi Pooja k do din baad ki ticket hi mili mujhe..shaam k 4 baj kar 45 minute par meri journey shuru hui..agle din subha 9 baj kar 55 minute me New Delhi pahoochegi..main akeli thi.. socha ..bahut achha hua..koi nahi hai mere saath,naa hi Mom,jo mujhe sawal poochh kar pareshaan karengi..naa hi mere Dad..jo train me baaki sab se baat kar k..mujhe us conversation me ghaseetenge..I was all alone ..and glad too.Mujhe akelapan bahut zyada pasand hai.

Mere saamne ek couple baithe hue the..young couple..dekh kar lag raha tha ..shaadi hue kuchh hi din hue hain.woh dono aapas me baatein kar rahe the..bahut khush lag rahe the..


Train jab Dhanbad pahoochi..tab meri ek saheli ka phone aaya..mera mobile roaming me tha..par main majboor thi..uski bakwas sunne k lia..usdin Set Max par Dilwale Dulhania Le Jaayenge telecast kia jaa raha tha,aur meri woh saheli..us movie ko dekh rahi thi..aaj ka show mila kar..usne century maar li thi..100 times..isse pahle usne 99 baar DDLJ dekhi hai,aaj century maar rahi hai..aur mera sar khaa rahi hai..break times me..yeh pehli baar nahi tha..1995 me jab yeh film release hui thi,tab se,yeh silsila chal raha hai,pahle bhi uskne jab Silver Jubilee complete ki...tab main 10th standard me thi..year 1999..Fir jab usne Golden Jubilee ki..tab main thi College k first year me..2002..2002 me hi usne Diamond Jubilee complete kar lia..aur jab main pass out ho kar nikli college se,2006 me..tab usne Platinum Jubilee complete ki...aaj usne century maari..par aaj ki baat alag thi..mere mobile k paise kat rahe the..jo mujhe manzoor nahi tha..asal baat yeh hai..k maine DDLJ ..ek baar bhi poori nahi dekhi..I lost my patience every time..mujhe itni romantic films pasand hi nahi aati hain..romance k maamle me..main pahle darje ki ghonchoo hoon.. action ..thrill..bardasht kar bhi loon..but..romance..!!Never..aur Train ka darwaza khula rehna..abroad me..kuchh ajeeb sa hi laga tha mujhe..jab k station se chhoot te waqt train ka darwaza apne aap hi bandh ho jaata hai.. London me atleast..yeh mera apna experience hai..Heroine jab finally mil jaati hai Hero ko..tab train ka darwaza ..khula tha...maanti hoon..kyonki..woh India k kisi station ka scene tha,train bhi indian,aur compartnment bhi second class..yeha darwaza khula chhod hi sakte hain..par London ..me yeh hona namumkin tha..main khud London jaa chuki hoon..kisi bhi train me aisa kuchh nahi dekha..jaisa DDLJ me first meeting k scene me tha.. actually ..mujhe illogical aur unreal..in dono cheeson se sakht nafrat hai...arre bhai.. Hero NRI businessman ka beta..aur ladki ka baap usko chhod kar kisi gawaar aiyaash k saath beti ki shaadi kara raha hai..is baat par koi yakeen bhale hi kar le..main yakeen nahi karti..wajah..ek hi wajah thi.I am unromantic .. kisi kisi ne yeh bhi kaha hai mere baare me..that..I love the four letter word, HATE..and I hate the four letter word,LOVE..from the deep of my heart..Ab main kyaa karti..?apne apne nazariye se sab sochte hain..meri problem yehi thi..main sapno me bhi logic dhoondha karti thi..haalaa k yeh baat sach hai.. har sapne ka koi naa koi matlab zaroor hota hai..par main fantacies me bhi logic dhoondha karti hoon.Mere andar bahut si kharabiaan hain. LOGIC .. main commercial films,TV Serial,masala movies..aise saari cheeson me logic dhoondha karti thi..jaha par logic k hone ka zara bhi chance nahi hota hai.. and..that's me..Shaayad dad se TV k remote ko le kar jhagda kar loon..k "aapne bahut news dekh li..ab mujhe serial dekhna hai.."..par ultimately ..main movie channels aur daily soaps ko chhod kar..news hi dekhti hoon.. mujhe maza aata hai.


Bahut de dia apna parichay maine..ab asal baat bata doon..sach toh yeh hai ..is baar main chidh gayi thi..in fact main pak chuki thi..kyonki..is baar mere phone se balance kum ho rahe the..isi DDLJ ki wajah se..film me baat toh hai..Sholay ka record tod dia is film ne..achha hi hoga..par mere mobile k paise kharach ho rahe the..isi film ki wajah se..main majboor ho gayi..apni saheli ko SHUT UP bolne ke lia...maine aur bhi bahut kuchh kaha,"dekh..life DDLJ nahi hai..varna roz..laakho handsome ladke aur roz laakhon hot ladkiaan train se jaati hai..par unme se kitne log baad me milte hain?Kitno ki shaadi hoti hai?Laakho log ek hi travel group k saath jaate hain..aaj tak tune suna hai..k unme se kisi ki shaadi hui..?Please..sar mat khaa mera..bahut paka chuki tu mujhe..ab k baar tune mujhe phone kia..toh..tera pura khandan gaya kaam se...main sab ko gaalian dena shuru karoongi..ab phone rakh.."

Kaafi temper loose kar lia tha maine..maine realize kia..woh Mian Biwi..mujhe hi ghaur se dekh rahe hain..aur muskura rahe hain.Maine poochha, "Anything wrong with my face?"

Biwi ne kaha,
"No..but something must be wrong with your mood.."


"Aahh..my stupid friend..ek film ko 100 baar dekha..aur sar khana chalu kar dia..usne..mera.."


Mian ne kaha,"Aap is film..DDLJ se itni naraz hain?"

"Nahi..main naraz nahi hoon..but..main is tarha ki story me yakeen nahi karti..train me mulakat...and aage ..aur bhi bahut kuchh.."


Biwi--Well..meri ek dost hain..Naina..uske aur uski husband ki bhi mulakat.. train me hui thi..aur ab unki shaadi ho chuki hain..


"What..?"

Biwi--haan..sach hain..

Mian--haan..Naina aur Rajveer..dono isi tarha train me hi mile the..


Maine socha..maamla interesting hai..sunne me kyaa jaata hai?Timepass bhi ho jaayega..maine kaha,"detail me bataayenge?"

Mian--haan..kyon nahi?

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Raj..Rajveer..Advocate Rajveer Shergill,Raj ne Law ki padhai Kolkata se hi complete kia..aur...Calcutta High Court k..hi ek naami vakil Barister Pradip Sinha k office me Assistant ban kar kaam karne laga..usko kaam sikhna tha.. aur experience bhi mil jaayega..Raj k gharwalon ne usko pareshaan kar k rakha tha..shaadi k lia..ab Raj ki list bahut lambi thi..apni Dulhan k lia..


1.Polite,2. Poise,3.Obedient,4.Humble,5.Soft Spoken..iske ilava..aur bhi baat honi chahie..ladki me..sab mila kar ek aisi ladki..jo ek Indian ladka dhoondhta hai..Indian ladko ki yehi khasiat hoti hai..bhale hi chakkar kisi Mini Skirt pahenne wali ladki se chalaaye..par Biwi aisi ho..jiska sar se le kar paaon.. pura dhaka rahe..Biwi unko apni Amma ki replica ki hi chahie.

Aisa nahi hai k..sab aisa sochte hain..in fact..koi bhi aise nahi sochta..har kisike dil me..apni dreamgirl ki ek tasveer hoti hai..bas aankhe khulne ki der hai..sapna toot jaata hai..fir bahut saare factors, Society, Status, Economy, Relatives..Pride..aise hazaron factors hote hain..aise me aadmi bhool jata hai..k actually woh kis type ki ladki dhoondh raha tha..Jisko uske saath baandh dia..usike saath rehna hota hai..zindagi bhar...College k dino me Raj ne bhi sapne dekhe.. par ..uski soch bhi monotonous ho gayi..wajah..family problem..kai relatives ne apni marzi se shaadi ki.. shaadian kamyab bhi rahi.. par ab..sab log Raj k zarie apna armaan poora karna chaahte hain,apne Bete yaa Beti k time unko Bahu yaa Damad dhoondhne k lia kasrat nahi karni padi ..ab woh kasrat Rajveer k lia karna chaahte hain..Raj k  Parents  toh the hi..ab uske Chacha Chachi..Mama Maami..sab is venture me shaamil the..Raj ko aitraz karne ka mauka nahi mila..Raj khud par naraz tha..kyon ek ladki se chakkar nahi chalaya usne..varna aaj is tarha bali ka bakra nahi banta...isi lia Raj ne itni lambi list thama di..apne rishtedaaron ko..Raj ne socha..jab sooli chadna hi hai..tab inko bhi zara maza chakhaya jaaye,dekhte hain,aisi ladki kaha se dhoondhte hain.Raj ne jaisa socha waisa hi hua..achhi ladki milna.. mushkil hi nahi namumkin lag raha tha..2003 se lekar,2005 k end tak,yehi chalta raha,par 2006 k January me Raj ka bulava aaya..Amritsar se..Raj k Mama ka ghar hai Amritsar..unhone ek ladki dekhi hai..Raj k lia..sab ko bahut pasand aai hai.. ab Raj aaye..aur uske lia HAAN keh de..sab ..sab theek ho jaayega..


2006,January 22nd..Raj Howrah se Rajdhani Express pakda..flight me jaa sakta tha..par musibat k paas jitni der se pahooche..utna hi achha..Mom aur Dad Delhi me nahi hai..woh log Amritsar chale gaye hain..Raj ko Amritsar hi jaana hai..Dad ne ladki ki detail batani chaahi..par Raj ne nahi suna..gussa bahut aaya hai usko..

Raj ki shakal dekh kar doosre passangers ko lag raha tha..k usko Iraq bhej rahe hain..America k khilaaf jung ladne..par aisi baat nahi thi..par jo baat thi ..woh kuchh kum khatarnak baat nahi thi..usko kahte hai..shaadi. Marriage ..rather ..ARRANGED MARRIAGE.


THE GREAT INDIAN ARRANGED MARRIAGE.


Raj ko upper berth mila tha..aur uske paas waale berth par do lookkhe type k ladke the...par passage berth par..ek ladki thi..ladki ki taraf woh dono ladke line maar rahe the...ladki..theek thaak hi thi.. salwar kameez pehni hui..ek normal Indian ladki..kitaab padh rahi thi..ankho me chashma tha..par uske right wrist me ek breclet hai..Gold se hi bani hai..ladki ka naam Naina hai..us breclet par isi word ka design banaya gaya hai.. yehi ek baat Raj ko zara odd lagi..ladki itni stylish nahi lagti..uske haath k breclet k hisaab se..breclet ko yeh haath suit nahi karta.. yaa haath ko breclet suit nahi karta,kehna mushkil hai..

Ladki toilet gayi..toilet se jab baahar nikli..tab Raj waha par khade hokar baahar k basin me apna haath aur muh dho raha tha..Ladki wahi par khadi rahi..Raj ne ladki ki taraf dekha..Raj ne poochha,"Any problem?"

"Dekhiye..aap k paas jo log baithe hain..mujhe bahut pareshaani ho rahi hai..aap zara mujhse is tara baatein kijiye..taa k unko aisa lage..k hum dono saath hain..varna..woh log.."


Raj--Hmm..theek hain..aap kaha tak jaa rahi hain?

"Jee..Delhi.."


Raj--main bhi Delhi jaa raha hoon..fikar mat kijiye...

"Main kis tarha aapka ehsaan maanoo..?"

Raj pighal gaya..yaar..abhi is ladki ko milna tha?Ab..jab uski shaadi almost tai hai?Nahi..Yeh sab Rajveer k saath hi kyon hota hai?


Ladki ne kaha.."Aap ka kaam ho gaya?main zara haath muh dho loon?"


Raj--Ohh..haan..

Raj k lia yeh naya tajoorba tha..ladki se baat kar raha hai..unofficial baatein ..aur woh bhi..is theek thaak.arre nahi.yeh toh bahut achhi dikhti hai!!..

Ladki ko bina chashme k dekha Raj ne..ladki ne muh dhote waqt utaar dia hai..arre..aisa nazara..aur Raj..tu chala hai..us Amritsar ki gadhi se shaadi karne?Nahi..ab toh is ladki ko hi follow karna hai, dono aakar apni apni seat me baith gaye,baatein chalti rahi,woh do ladke samajh gaye..unki daal nahi galne wali hai idhar..woh log ek doosre se baatein karne lage,dinner ho chuka tha,raat k 10 baj chuke the, compartment k lights bandh hone lagi thi ..isi beech Raj ko pata chal gaya..k ladki ka naam Naina hi hai..ladki jaa rahi hai apni saheli ki shaadi me..


Raat k 12 baje..Raj ko neend hi nahi aa rahi thi..achanak ek awaz suni usne ...usne dekha..Naina k berth taraf..Naina hi bol rahi hai.."Is dupatte ne paka dala..dhatt..!!"


Raj ne dekha..Naina ko bathroom ki taraf jaate hue...10 minute baad..Naina waapas aai..par yeh kaun thi?Arre baap re..Sita se Soozi?Nahi..yeh sach nahi ..sleeve less T-Shirt..aur three-quarter trouser?? Yeh kaun hai?thodi bahut roshni me Raj ne dekha..Naina k haath me tatoo bhi bana hai,likha hai ,"Who Cares?"Raj ka gala sukh gaya..Naina apne berth me chadh baithi. .. Raj sone ka naatak kar toh raha tha...par..so nahi paa raha hai..usne

Kuchh aur bhi dekha..Naina ne koi ek bottle nikala..aur usme se ek liquid usne apne cold drink me milaya..Cold dring usne kharid k rakhi thi...Naina ne dekha Raj ki taraf...Raj bewakoofon ki taraha muskuraya...

Naina--yeh lijiye...neend aa jaayegi..

Raj--kyaa hai yeh?


Naina--Cold drink and Vodka ka cocktail...train hil rahi hai..mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai...mujhe pata tha..aisa hoga..isi lia maine taiyyari kar k rakhi thi..

Raj ka gala darr k maare sukh hi gaya tha..usne bottle lia..aadhi bottle Naina ne saaf kia tha..baaki aadha..Raj ne saaf kar dia..

Naina--neend aa rahi hai?


Raj--haan..mera sar bhaari ho raha hai...

Naina--dekha..kaam kar raha hai..aaram se so jaaiye..

Raj so gaya...subha uski neend tooti..toh paas wala berth khaali tha..aur uske pillow k paas ek note tha..


"Jo jaisa dikhta hai..waisa hota nahi..take care.."


Pure compartment me Naina nahi mili...Train jab Delhi pahoochi..tab subha k 10 baj chuke the...Raj ne reservation chart dekha..Naina Delhi hi aanewali thi ..ticket bhi yehi tak ka tha..fir..Raj ki neend tooti..tab ..jab train Kanpur cross kar chuki thi..iska matlab Naina Kanpur me hi utar gayi thi..


Raj ne apne mobile par Naina ki tasveer dekhi..jo usne chupke se khincha tha..ab kaha dhoondhe usko..naam pata hai Naina..aur ek photo hai uske paas..Raj kaise pata karega uske baare me?Dad ko phone kia..k do din baad aa raha hai..Amritsar..aur ek dost se mila..Delhi..


Dost--tere kahne ka matlab hai..tu ek ladki se train me mila..aur tujhe usse pyaar ho gaya?

Raj--haan..

Dost--abe..teri shaadi ki taiyyari ..Amritsar me ho rahi hai..aur tu..Raj..have you lost it?

Raj--yaar..ladki ..kyaa style hai uska?Kyaa hot ladki hai..kis style se daroo peeti hai..!!


Dost--Ek minute..tujhe aisi ladki kab se pasand aane lagi,tujhe toh humesha ..ghareloo..aggyakari..shareef..Raj..chal
Amritsar..Uncle ne jo ladki dekhi hai ..bahut achhi hai..

Raj--My dear friend..jis ladki ko mere lia dekha hai..kyaa gurrantee hai ..k woh sach me shareef hogi?Matlab shareef ban k hi saamne aayegi..aur sharafat se shaadi bhi karegi..jiska andaza bhi mujhe nahi hoga..aur Naina ka mujhe pata hai..known danger is better than unknown danger..


Dost--Naina k ghar ka pata malum hai?

Raj--nahi..sirf uska naam hi malum hai..Naina..

Dost--Surname?

Raj--nahi malum..


Dost--saale..ghoos de kar tune vakalat pass ki hai kya?Tera kuchh nahi ho sakta..


 



yeha tak bol kar woh Aadmi rook gaya..


Mujhe kaafi maza aa raha tha sunne me..DDLJ jaisi hi kahani hai..fark sirf itna hai..waha par Heroine ki shaadi tai thi..aur yeha apne Hero ki shaadi ..almost tai hai..maine poochha.."fir kyaa hua?"

"Fir kyaa?Raj ko Amritsar jaana pada..ladki dekhne..waha par..sab ne sagai ki taiyyari hi kar k rakhi thi.."






Edited by yakkudimag - 28 October 2008 at 2:43am

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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Your narrative style is very good and different!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

It reminds me of Chalte Chalte and Jaane Tu Yaa Jane Naa!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Tumari friend ne Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge dekhne mein century marli!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueWow!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Maine bhi yeh film bahut baar dekhi hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileAnd I just love it!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Tumara dimaag garam ho gaya DDLJ se!!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLAb story shuru huyi Raj aur Naina ki!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Indian ladke wakai aise hi hote hai!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveShaadi ke liye ladki unko aisi hi chahiye!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Raj ki list wakai lambi hai apne dulhan ke liye!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

Toh Raj ne in sabse bachne ke liye itni lambi list di hai!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink WinkVery clever of him!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj ko lag raha hai ke woh musibaat ke paas jaa raha hai!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLAur uski detail bhi nahi sunna chahta!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

The way you described Raj's face was too funny!!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Bechara Raj!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyShaadi tai hai aur ab mila ladki se!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile

Raj toh usse dekh kar gaya!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Naina toh Raj ne jo socha tha opposite nikli!!!!!Wink Wink Wink WinkTattoo.sleevless T-shirt aur capri!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueWow!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

Now she is having drinks as well!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueRaj ki toh haalat kharab ho gayi!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Naina note bhi chhod ke gayi hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileKya baat hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

Sach hi kaha hai note mein!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile SmileRaj kehta hai known danger is better than unknown!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Naina Raj ko jaisi pasand thi uske opposite hai phir bhi usse pasand aa gayi!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileWow!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile

Kuch malum nahi hai magar Raj ko usse dhundhna hai!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchDost ne kaha ghoos dekar paas ki thi vakalat!!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

This is like DDLJ only yaha hero ki shaadi tai hai magar mujhe lagta hai woh ladki Naina hi hai jiske saath uski shaadi tai huyi hai!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 



Edited by Shaina_b - 27 October 2008 at 6:41pm

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intereting
update soooooooon
luv soumya
do pm me

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TOOO GOOO....
 
A very different and fun filled story.....loved reading this part....it will be good to see naina is such a bold character....
 
update soon

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wow yar perfect diwali materialSmile Smile Smile Smile SmileSmile Smile Smile Smile Smileintroduction bhi bhut kamaal ki thi....aur naina..........aha ah ah ......ROFL...ROFLROFLROFLbhut mazaaaa aaya....raj ka chehra to choosa hua aam ban gaya tha....hahahahahhahahahha....naina ka tatoo..."who cares"ye to sixer tha.......naina ne to raj ko clean bold kar diya.......par pata nhn mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki jis ladki ke saath raj ki shaadi teh hui hai vo koi aur nhn ye item naina hi hai...aur mujhe aisa bhi lag raha hai ki jo couple kahaani suna raha hai....jo train mein romance mein busy hai vo ye do namune raj aur naina hi hain..Wink..superb ud........plzzzzzzzzz cont soon....waise diwali special hai to aaj to ud hona hi chahiye......

Edited by watch rajeev - 27 October 2008 at 11:20pm

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Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!==Thanks a lot

Your narrative style is very good and different!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile==hmm..

It reminds me of Chalte Chalte and Jaane Tu Yaa Jane Naa!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile==yes..wahi se copy ki hai..Tongue

Tumari friend ne Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge dekhne mein century marli!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueWow!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap==pata tha..tu zaroor khush hogi..

Maine bhi yeh film bahut baar dekhi hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileAnd I just love it!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile==lage raho..

Tumara dimaag garam ho gaya DDLJ se!!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLAb story shuru huyi Raj aur Naina ki!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Indian ladke wakai aise hi hote hai!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveShaadi ke liye ladki unko aisi hi chahiye!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry==mann karta hai..un joota khol kar maroon..Angry

Raj ki list wakai lambi hai apne dulhan ke liye!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue==Raj..aur uski list..LOLLOL

Toh Raj ne in sabse bachne ke liye itni lambi list di hai!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink WinkVery clever of him!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile==haan..insan jab pak jata hai..tab aisa karta hai..

Raj ko lag raha hai ke woh musibaat ke paas jaa raha hai!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLAur uski detail bhi nahi sunna chahta!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile==hota hai..

The way you described Raj's face was too funny!!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL==thanks..

Bechara Raj!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyShaadi tai hai aur ab mila ladki se!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile==Sad..

Raj toh usse dekh kar gaya!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Naina toh Raj ne jo socha tha opposite nikli!!!!!Wink Wink Wink WinkTattoo.sleevless T-shirt aur capri!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueWow!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up==hmm..eeeesshhhtyyyle...

Now she is having drinks as well!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueRaj ki toh haalat kharab ho gayi!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL==very normal..

Naina note bhi chhod ke gayi hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileKya baat hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile==bahut badi baat hai..

Sach hi kaha hai note mein!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile SmileRaj kehta hai known danger is better than unknown!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL==Raj ullu nahi hai..ek dum..

Naina Raj ko jaisi pasand thi uske opposite hai phir bhi usse pasand aa gayi!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileWow!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile==aisa hi hota hai..

Kuch malum nahi hai magar Raj ko usse dhundhna hai!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchDost ne kaha ghoos dekar paas ki thi vakalat!!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL==Dost bhi pareshaan ho chuka hai Raj ki wajah se..

This is like DDLJ only yaha hero ki shaadi tai hai magar mujhe lagta hai woh ladki Naina hi hai jiske saath uski shaadi tai huyi hai!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile==Guess achha kar leti ho..

 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 






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Posted: 28 October 2008 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dazzling_glory

TOOO GOOD...==thanks..
 
A very different and fun filled story.....loved reading this part....it will be good to see naina is such a bold character....==keep reading..
 
update soon


Originally posted by saridena

interesting==thanks a lot..
update soooooooon==yes...
luv soumya
do pm me==Sure..





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