New User? Register Now
pj2012
Goldie
Joined: 02 December 2006
Posts: 1316
?"
"
and said,
"pink kabse tumhara favourite colour ban gaya...tumhara toh favourite colour blue hai na..."she says looking at her blue dress
."After all she is so beautiful.""
"
bol toh aise rahe ho...jaise you are some Tom Cruise...Just stop the bike,I want to get down right now."
.
.Nihaal suddenly holds her hand and places it around him.and Prerna smiles shylyLove was in the air and they both were bubbling with love at that moment.
."."." and tears of happiness roll down her cheeks.And she thinks in her heart,"Kitna masoom hai bilkul mere Krishna jaisa,kabhi
kabhi bachon ki tarah zidd karta hai aur mujhe pareshan karta hai,and
kabhi unki tarah rone lagta hai,kabhi mujhe hasata hai aur kabhi rulata
hai...aur kabhi kabhi mujhse itna pyar karta hain ki darr lagne lagta
hain,kahin main tumhe kho na doon.Hey!Krishnamere pyar ki raksha karna."we've reached the auditorium.Chalo or we'll be late.".
"he exclaimed. of Nihaal dropping Prerna on his bike that he accidently slashes Nihaal's arm and blood spurts out.Prerna is shocked and cries out loudly running towards him
,Nihaal are you okay..."She almost goes to remove her duppatta for tying it on his wound when Nihaal stops her and says,.Saksham takes her with him.Nihaal goes to the Green Room and dresses his wound..She takes the opportunity to meet Nihaal.She rushes to the green room and hugs him with all forcecrying aloud. even more tightly.you are hurting me now.""She gets away from him and looks at his wound."."He lifted her chin... " and says,"Mazzak mat karo,I'm serious.""you just forget it!!"
".She gets up from the floor and turns to leave.".and he's promised me that we'll be together for ever...koi bhi hamein juda nahi kar payega...","".""She undrestands his wish and shyly looks down.He comes very close to her.They both are drenched completely in each others love and are lost in their eyes.He was still holding her hands,he slowly moves his hands up her arms,shoulder and then takes her face in both his hands.They were too close,her hair flies over Nihaal's face.He turns his face to one side.She smiles shyly and comes even more closer to him,almost touching his face.She slowly whispered in his ears,I...I..."""Nihaal let go off her and turns around to look at the door.She laughs and runs away from there.There was no Saksham at the door,she was lying...Nihaal stomps his feet and knocks his head smiling to himself.and ruffles his hair.And just when he turns,Prerna comes in and kisses him on his cheek.she slowly whispers into his ears,"I Love You!!"and runs out before he could reply anything.
The love was blooming to it's fullest and the whole of the universe was conspiring to bring them together
Kiran_1
Goldie
Joined: 26 February 2008
Posts: 1222
pj2012
Goldie
Joined: 02 December 2006
Posts: 1316
.
pj2012
Goldie
Joined: 02 December 2006
Posts: 1316
CHAPTER ELEVEN
Introduction
Saksham sees them together...and he could not tolerate it,as he too is in love with
Prerna,she is his childhood lovebut,for Prerna he is only a good friend.
Scene 1: Green Room
In the
Auditorium
Saksham comes
in and looks at Nihaal who is still lost in her thoughts.He stirs him up from his
thoughts and asks him,
"Nihaal...ab
kaisa hai hath..."
"Oh!
Saksham...I didn't notice you...my hand is okay...there's a bit of pain,but there's
nothing to worry about..."
"I'm
very sorry Nihaal...I should have been more
careful..."
"Arre
yaar...it's not your fault .You are my friend and you don't have to say sorry
or anything...This pain is very ordinary...chala jayega."
But ,Saksham thinks in his mind," Ordinary,Nihaal but the pain you've
given me is very deep and untolerable....tumne meri Prerna ko mujhse cheen liya
hai..."
"Saksham!!What
are you thinking?Chalo rehearsal karte hain...."
"Yes..I'm
coming..."
Scene 2: On the stage
A scene where Saksham and Prerna are separating is being rehearsed.
Saksham says,
"You
never understood my love...and now you are leaving me for a guy you recently
met."
Prerna replies,
"No,you
are wrong,I might have met him recently,but I know that i have known him since
ages...when he's near me i feel like I'm in heaven,when he smiles,a thousand
flowers blosson in my heart...and when he touches me...aisa
lagta hai...jaise mein sirf usi ke liye bani hoon,aur hamesha usi ke paas
rahoon..."she suddenly looks at Nihaaland he smiles at her."You will always be my good
friend...but,pyaar toh sirf ek hi baar hota hai...and I'm in love with him...I
really love him mein uski ho chuki hoon."
Saksham says,
"Theek
hai...I'm happy cuz you are...but I
shall wait for you...agar is janam mein nahin toh agle janam mein toh mein
tumhe kisi aur ki nahi hone doonga..."
He leaves and the curtain falls over Prernastaring in his direction.
Scene 3 : The Auditorium
Saksham comes to her and says,"Prerna I want to talk to you..."
"What
Saksham?...please not now...have you seen Nihaal
anywhere??.."She stopped and again cleared her
question to hide her anxiety.
"Nihaal!!
he is with Deepika...tum meri baat toh suno..."
But,she still is not listening to what he is saying and asks,"Deepika,when did she come?"and she hurries away from there
leaving Saksham all sad and frustrated.
Scene 4: The garden
In the garden they both were talking...
"Nihaal,how
should i tell you this...I'm really nervous..."
"Deepika...the
flambouyant girl in our class is nervous...i don't believe this...you just tell
me frankly.."
"Some
study problem..."
"No..Nihaal
nothing like that!1"
"Then
what is it?Just tell me..."
"I
wanted to tell you that....I...I...I think I'm in love with
you..."
He stood up all shockedand exclaimed,"WHAT??""What are you talking about?"
"Yes
Nihaal,I really love you."
"Deepika
look...I don't know what to say? You are a very good girl...but I've never seen
you in that way....I can understand your feelings,but i can't hurt you by telling
you the lie...I've always liked you as a friend..but not anything more...and i
really want to remain so.."
"But why
Nihaal??Why can't you love me?"
"Cuz..I
love.."
At that moment Prerna comes there and hides behind the
bush...and gestures to him not to tell her anything.
He stops halfway and says,
"I love
someone..."
"Who?"
"That i
can't tell you..."
"Oh!!
Nihaal!!"
and she starts crying
"Deepika
I'm sorry...mujhe naf kar do...please understand my feelings.."
"Nihaal
tumhi kaho...mein apne dil se kaise kahoon ki woh timhare bare mein sochna band
kar de...to forget you..How Nihaal how??"and she goes away.
Prerna comes out and sits next to him.
"Prerna..suna
na tumne what she said...How can she misunderstand my friendship as love?Oh!!
God...I'm so disturbed...she must be so much pain...Prerna you go and console
her..."
"Nihaal...love
is blind...she misunderstood your friendship as love...but,she'll soon
understand the reality that it was a mere infactuation and would accept
it...she's very strong...I can't see her like this"
She cries and Nihaal hugs her...Saksham sees this and again feels
hurt.
Scene 5:The Garden
After some time
Nihaal asks Prerna,
"Prerna did you tell your parents?"
She was sitting next to him with her head on his shoulders and holding each others hands
"No,I haven't...They are never at home when I need them...Did you tell your family about us?"
"No!!"he sighed.She lifted her head and looked at him,he too looked at her
"Nihaal we must tell our parents soon...I know our love will over all tests.My Krishna is always with us...par darr lagta hain."
"Main hoon na,chahe kuch bhi ho jaye,I'll never leave you...I'll always be there for you."
That day they both decide to tell their parents about their love.
"Accha Prerna,just imagine once we are married ,how would it be?"
"Hmmmm....tum roz office jaoge...and mein tumhara ghar mein intezar karoongi..."
"And if i come late..."
"Late...maroongiyou'll have to come early and roz mere liye tum red roses laoge..."
"Aur...?"
"Aur...haan...we'll go for long walks in the evening..."
"Aur..?"
"Aur...han...hum
ghanton tak ek doosre ki aankhon mein dekhte rahenge...aur tum mujhe
apni bahon bein bhar kar...chilla kar sabse kahoge ki...."
"ki...nothing..."and she runs away from there shyly...
But Nihaal calls her from behind and screams,
"Prerna mein chilla har sabse yeh kahoonga ki...I love Prerna..."
Prerna runs to him and shuts his mouth with her hand.He holds her hand and they look into each others eyes.He takes her hand and kisses it.She blushes and he leaves her hand and says,"Jao tum...warna mein tumhe jaane nahi doonga...cuz tumse bichad kar ek pal bhi mein rah nahi sakta...go..."And he turns,she smiles and leaves...
pj2012
Goldie
Joined: 02 December 2006
Posts: 1316
pj2012
Goldie
Joined: 02 December 2006
Posts: 1316
.The love potion by cupid had cast its spell,and her charm was doing magic on him.She was on his mind all the time.His eyes reflected his heart,beating fast at every thought of hers., no one knows.But,one thing was sure,that whatever may come,their love will face all odds with dignity.Their love has become eternal and would never be lost into oblivion.In all troubles their love will find a way!!!Whatever she did,she just couldn't get him off her mind.The old chirpy, flambouyant , full of life Deepika has now become a silent, grave and melancholic Deepika.Prerna was very concerned for her.She tried to console her a lot,but nothing could make her come back to her old happy state.She was completely disheartened and shattered by the rejection of her love by Nihaal. and pain are the two sides of love.For some love comes as an enchanting spell of blossoms,spreading joy and colour.And for some it brings simply nothing but pain.Deepika too was pining away in Nihaal's love, and Prerna could no longer tolerate her best friend's condition.She decides to break the silence and divert Deepika's mind.,?"I've withdrawn my name from the contest."
""But it was your dream...and you are telling me you withdrew your name...why are you tormenting yourself like this?""she begins to cry. I simply can't live without him...this agony would kill me...I can't tolerate this anymore..."and she hugs her...""."""","....She just couldn't tolerate to see her in such a condition,she stood up and ran out of the reading room with tears.,what should i do?There's nothing I could do to relieve her of her grief.I feel so helpless and guity.Tell me what should I do?"...she shudders at this thought and opens her eyes in shockShe stares at the hedges for a long time still pondering over the images. And after a tough battle with her heart she comes to a decision...how
could she choose between friendship and love,one being her life and the
other the very soul of her life.It was impossible for her to
choose,after all it was her life and not a shop where you pick and
choose.But,she had to choose sooner or later,and the sooner the better she thought.??Why didn't you give me atleast a hint??It could have saved so many heartbreaks.If I hadn't come in between them,Nihaal would have been hers..." but the very thought of losing him tore her heart to pieces...and she sighed,No,I can't forget him...butI
have to...she was always there for me in all my happiness and
troubles.She never left me alone.She was always there for me when I
needed her,and now it's my turn...but how can I pluck out the very soul
from my heart and survive...I can't..." and tears came rolling down her cheeks.anywhere...He finally thinks of looking for her in the glass garden,their favourite meeting place....I asked you to help me and you showed me the images of Nihaal and Deepika together...if you want it so,I too have decided...Yes,I can't be so selfish...and i can't crumble like thisI have to be strong and fulfil my decision sincerely.My decision can save my best friend's life.."...And have you ever thought about Nihaal?Could heever live without you,or think about someoneelse other than you..." and says,".But, she has decided to sacrifice her love for her friendshipShe closes her eyes and ters gush out emptying her soul...Nihaal extended his hand and caught hold of one tear drop falling down her cheek,and looks at it sadly... wiping her tears... when her heartwas crying unbearably.She take hold of his hand with the tear drop and wipes it with her duppatta....", "His
eyes were weakening her decision.There was so much of love in her eyes
that she couldn't kie to him so she turned away from him and stared at
the far end of the garden where there were two butterflies fluttering
in the pleasant sunlight filtered by the glass roof with windows in
them...Nihaal understood there was something wrong with her,and that she didn't wanted to tell him..He understood she was sad because of Deepika... in her heart for a moment forgetting her pain...All the pain rushes back into her heart and the very thought of losing Nihaal like the lonely butterfly brings tears back into her eyes,which she could no longer haide from him...She
turns and hugs him tightly crying aloud...as if she'd lose him the very
moment she loosens her hold over him...He too hugs her feeling perplexedplease don't hate me..."...To hate you I'll have to die...and even after my death I'll continue to love you...How can I ever hate you??"and looks into his eyes,and says,"...it was impossible for her,but still she had to ... and she finds heaven in those looks .....",""""" and tells her" and says,"and neither could she.Nihaal came near her and kissed her on her forehead and said,"and come soon...there's a surprise for you...",but when he is gone,she falls on the grass all shattered
pj2012
Goldie
Joined: 02 December 2006
Posts: 1316
.But,Nihaal is still unaware of her intentions,dreaming about his love.Prerna decides to spent the time left with Nihaal
with all her heart...as she is going to lose him soon.Deepika on the
other hand is still depressed and dreams of the old days spent with Nihaal.Saksham too is thinking about Nihaal and Prerna, and he couldn't tolerate his love being snatched away by someone... Diwali was a grand affair in their house.The entire house was bustling with people of all age groups.The women were cleaning the diyas and were putting the wick and oil in them.The
men folk were too busy with the arrangements.The children were having a
great time running around the house,bursting crackers and gobbling
sweets.Nihaal was busy decking the house with flower garlands while thinking all the time about Prerna.Her shy smiling face emerged in every single thought of him like a blushing roseThe love in his heart was quite evident on his faceand he was unable to contain his feelings anymore.Buddy sees the sparkle of love on his countenance and smiles at him.nihaal blushes and tries to compose himself.But,Buddy understood everything.,"" and says,"and says,...and I can clearly see in your eyes...that you are in love..."" he retorts,but before he could say anything his mum calls him from the kitchen frying some gujiyas for the guests..."??"he smiles to himself...and gets up..."".......He stops and keeps the basket down.He picks up the earing and looks at it lifting it up to his face.He smiles at it and says,...and I know my family would be overwhelmed with joy to know that you are my love...."and thinks about her....Her eyes are closed,and she could feel him beside her when the breeze touched her.When Nihaal
kisses her earing in his room,she suddenly turns,as she feels his touch
on her face...but he isn't there...and she looks at his photo smiling
at him".
but her eyes reflect the melancholy of her heart..." at the mention of Nihaal's name."...and looks very grave.
.She slowly drapes the odhini around her waist and shoulder and looks into the mirror...She sees him behind her,she turns and he's standing there.Her eyes fill with tears and she hugs him.Her odhini falls down...Nihaal picks it up and drapes it around her waist,holding her close to him...and covers her head with the rear end of the odhinilooking into her eyes...She is still dreamingly looking at him with tears and a smile. ,but
he doesn't utter a single word.He then losens his grip around her waist
and withdraws himself from her and moves back slowly gazing into her
eyes...She tries to stop him coming out of her dream...but
he slowly dissolves into thin air...just like her dream...She stands
there holding out her hand sighing like a inanimate being with tears
rolling down her cheeks.
pj2012
Goldie
Joined: 02 December 2006
Posts: 1316
"The course of true love did never run smooth"just this one night..."Prerna's mobile rings and it's Nihaal.She nervously looks at Deepika before enabling the call,but she is indifferantly staring out the front glass driving the car.Prerna quickly picks up the mob. and whispers slowly,She deliberately tries to ignore the fact that it was Nihaal's number,which she had recognised even before looking at the mob.Hai na !!! "or i'll cut the call""I'm on the way...Deepika is with me."and looks at her in sudden surprise.and he's feeling guilty...but mein apne dil ka kya karoon""| Topics | Topic Starter | Replies | Views | Last Post | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| MJHT FF (SG_MN): Tere Liye- 18/05/10- pg81 PMs L | Nadz_YuNalover | 699 | 41168 | 13 November 2011 at 9:32am By Favouriteofall |
|
| AR FF:~*Ek duje ke vaaste*~ FINAL p53 [9/11] | freezinme | 477 | 43356 | 22 March 2011 at 5:32am By mehak_mangi |
|
| Tere Liye, Tumse Mile - who? | SuhanaSafar | 75 | 3192 | 19 December 2009 at 4:45pm By -Lipsa- |
|
| DrSK-Pyaar Ke Liye Pg 79 and 80 updatd (FF) | falak298 | 639 | 72878 | 22 November 2009 at 9:17am By Miracle_sweet |
|
| *AR*Tere Liye Meri Sansen*NEW* Part-17, Page-90* | .:.MONA.:. | 733 | 29063 | 02 September 2009 at 3:20pm By -Dolly- |
Be the part of India's biggest discussion portal.
It’s easy to Join and it’s free.
Register now while it’s free!
Already a member? Close this window and log in.
