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bhuvana3

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Posted: 24 October 2008 at 10:20am | IP Logged
Niceee Shonaa... your DV are sooo different from the DV of Vishwaas .. I like this veer a lot... I love his sister n I really admire DVs mom.. waiting eagerly for next part !

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Posted: 24 October 2008 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhuvana3

Niceee Shonaa... your DV are sooo different from the DV of Vishwaas .. I like this veer a lot... I love his sister n I really admire DVs mom.. waiting eagerly for next part !
 
Thanks Bhuvi
yh DV here are different from DV of vishvaas
this veer is very naughty n anti-princesses-glad u like him thoughEmbarrassed
yh i also DV's mum in this
 

heaven princess

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Posted: 24 October 2008 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
Too0o0o0o0o Good Jus continuee!!!! cnt w8 til the next part i like ure precap

shona.

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Posted: 24 October 2008 at 3:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by heaven princess

Too0o0o0o0o Good Jus continuee!!!! cnt w8 til the next part i like ure precap
 
aww seema thank u
im glad u liked it
yh will continue 2morrow

anusha_123

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Posted: 24 October 2008 at 10:10pm | IP Logged
Wow, I love this story a lot.
Differs from Vishwas.Wink
But one suggestion-isn't it too predictable?? i mean the story
Are there no twists???LOL

shona.

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Posted: 25 October 2008 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anusha_123

Wow, I love this story a lot.
im glad u like the story
Differs from Vishwas.Winkyh it is dofferent from vishvaas
But one suggestion-isn't it too predictable?? i mean the story
Are there no twists???LOL yh it is predictable and as for the twists...well this is just the beginning the twists will come soon

Rash2cool

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Posted: 25 October 2008 at 4:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by **Shona**

Originally posted by Rash2cool

yippee
shona u lisened to me..lol the onli reason why i bothered to go ahead with the ff was coz u kept telling me to write something...so yh credit to u that im even writing no dear no need of credit...at all.muah u atleast thought of it n end up writing such a lovely script Embarrassed Hug
so sweet muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
i'll definitely comment on this fan fic..for sure...Hugits ok...u can comment in ur own time...i hope u will like thid FF yup i loved it..infact..Hug
BTW my comments r coming now..Hugafter this Embarrassed post of mine Tongue

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Posted: 25 October 2008 at 4:08am | IP Logged
Shona.u n ur brilliat FF's ... Star
I enjoy reading alllTongue
I couldn't comment on prev two FF's sry for that..... ConfusedTongueCry
i started with ur first FF when u had already reached half of ur second FF....Ouch
 
now this time i m alble to catch up with ur FF in time.....Tongue
 
Loved d introduction part... Clap
sounds different than prev two's..Big smile
both are bro's finally n also rajkumari's also sis...WinkLOL
n entry of new sis of DV .. good. some thing different...Embarrassed
My veer is as usual natkhat n his opp..too..LOL LOL
and dharam savni are also adorable... Embarrassed
 
plzz update soon..
loved it..muahhhhh Hug


Edited by Rash2cool - 25 October 2008 at 4:11am

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