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Posted: 23 October 2008 at 2:20pm | IP Logged

Hi guys im back with another new FF based on DV

Its called Ahista Ahista-credit for name goes to Vinisha_RAJAT aka vini
credit for all pix-vinisha_RAJAT aka vini as wellClapClapClap
 
Updates:
 Part 1-Page 1
  Part 2-Page 3 
  Part 3-Page 6  
 Part 4 -Page 8 
 Part 5 -Page 9 
 Part 6-Page 11
 Part 7-Page 15
 Part 8-Page 19
 Part 9-Page 22
  Part 10-Page 22
Part 11-Page 25
Part 12-Page 25
Part 13-Page 28
Part 14-Page 30
Part 15-Page 33
Here are the main charectors:
 
Maharaj Ajaypal:
 
he is the king of Aryanagar. He is one of the best kings of the country.He loves his wife Niviriti very much. He is the father to Dharam,Veer and Deepti
 
 
Maharani Niviriti:
 
Niviriti is the queen of Aryanagar. She is the mother to Dharam,Veer and Deepti. she caes alot about her kids and advises Ajaypal often when he is having trouble making decisions.
 
Rajkumar Dharam:
 
Dharam is the oldest son to Ajaypal and Niviriti. He is handsome and shy and very obedient. He follows rules and regulations blindly. He loves his brother Veer and sister Deepti very much. Dharam's wedding is arranged with Rajkumari Sanvi whom he has never seen before...eventually they realise they are soulmates.
 
Rajkumar Veer:
 
He is the younger son and is very mischievious. He is the apple of Niviriti's eye. He isnt responsible and hates obeying people but always obeys Niviriti. He doesnt believe in marriage and love. He likes doing everything his own way. Sometimes is approach to life worries his father. Veer will eventually fall in love with Rajkumari Vanshika.
 
Rajkumari Deepti:
 
She is the youngest child to Ajaypal and Niviriti. She is therefore pampered alot and loved by one and all. She has charecteristic of both her older brothers...she is mischievious and shy. She obeys only those who she wishes to otherwise like veer she does whatever she likes.
 
Rajkumari Sanvi:
 
She is the beautiful Princess of Amargardh. Her wedding has been arranged with Dharam though she hadnt seen him,she has heard quite alot about his bravery.Sanvi is very obedient and responsible. She loves her family very much and is ready to sacrifice her happiness for others.
 
Rajkumari Vanshika:
 
Vanshika is the younger sister of Sanvi. Like her sister she is also very beautiful. She isnt very obedient and doesnt believe that she will get the Prince Charming she wants. She doesnt approve of her sister's decision of marrying Dharam without even seeing him. Things change when she meets Veer and slowly falls in love with him...
 
 
Other charecters:
 
Maharaj Amar:
 
he is Vanshika and Sanvi's father. He is a good friend of Ajaypal so therefore has arranged his older daughter's wedding with Ajaypal's older son Dharam.
 
Maharani Prateeksha:
 
she is Sanvi and Vanshika's mother. She is very happy that Sanvi will be getting married to Dharam. She loves her daughters very much and wishes that Vanshika becomes more like her sister
 
 


Edited by **Shona** - 11 April 2009 at 4:21am

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Hey shonaa..... yipeee ure bk with another ff.... i loved the plot..n character sketch please continuee soon!! looking forward to reading it

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Posted: 23 October 2008 at 3:17pm | IP Logged

Ahista Ahista Part 1

It was a sunny morning  and the atmosphere in the garden of Amargardh's Palace was so peaceful until
 
Maid: Rajkumari Vanshika...ap kya kar rahi hai...rukiye
 
A beautiful princess was running across the garden trying to find her older sister.
 
 
Vanshika: didi!...ap kahan ho
 
Vanshika got to the end of the garden where she saw her older sister Sanvi sitting besided the fountain of water
 
Sanvi: kya hua Vanshika...itna shor kyun macha rahi ho
 
Vanshika: woh Aryanagar se sandesha aya hai...Rajkumar Dharam apse Amargardh ke Ganpati visarjan mein milenge
 
Sanvi looks at her reflection in the water, she had big dark eyes, pink cheeks,fair complexion and a million dollar smile...her cheeks went even more pink when she blushed
 
Vanshika: is mein itna sharmane wali kaunsi baat hai...sab jante hai Rajkumar Dharam batsurat hai
 
Vansikha loved to tease her sister...Sanvi got up and chases Vanshika for a while but stops to inquire more from the dasis
 
Sanvi: arre ruko...Aryanagar se kya sandesh aya hai
 
Dasi: suna hai ke rajkumar Dharam apse Ganpati Visarjan mein milna chahte hai
 
Sanvi: aur?
 
Dasi: Rajkumari...apko itna beechain humne khabhi nahin dekha
 
Sanvi blushes but urges the dasi to continue
 
Dasi: aur jahan tak humme pata hai Maharaj ne manzoori deh di hai
 
Vanshika comes back to them....
 
Vanshika: kya baat hai didi...ap bohat khush lag rahi hai
 
Sanvi: Vanshika mein tumhe choodungi nahin...kya keh rahi thi unke bare mein
 
Vanshika: kin ke bare mein didi
 
Sanvi: Dharam ke bare mein
 
As she takes Dharam's names she blushs
 
Vanshika: kyunki maa ne bola hai humasha sach bolo...isliye mein sach keh rahi thi...
 
Sanvi: Vanshika aaj mein maa se tumhari shikayat kar keh rahongi
 
but just then another Dasi enters
 
Dasi: Rajkumari ji Maharani ne apko bulaya hai
 
Both sisters walk back in
 
On the other hand many miles away in Aryanagar Rajkumar Dharam walked into his younger brother's room....Dharam threw the curtains open
 
Dharam: veer uttoh
 
Veer: umm...sune doh na...
 
Dharam: veer uttoh...severa ho gaya hai
 
Veer: nahin mujhe suna hai
 
Dharam picked up a cushion and threw it at veer
 
Veer opened his eyes
 
Veer: kya hua
 
Dharam: humme woh...sandesh bhej diya...Rajkumari Sanvi ki liye...hum unse Amargardh ke Ganpati Visarjan mein milna chateh hai
 
Veer: Dharam ek baat batao
 
Dharam: hmm
 
Veer: tum ek ladki se shaadi kaise kar sakte ho
 
Dharam: toh kya humme gai(cow) ya bel se shaadi karni chahiye
 
Veer: nahin...par ek rajkumari...jaane kitne tewar dikhati hai
 
Dharam: tum kitni Rajkumariyon se mile ho
 
Veer: kisi se bhi nahin
 
Dharam: toh tum ye kaise keh sakte ho
 
Veer: aise hi...mein janta hoon
 
Dharam: achha jaldi se tayar hojao...maa puja ke liye intazar kar rahi honge
 
Veer: haan abhi ata hoon
 
Dharam: waise tum humare saath ah rahe hona...ganpati visarjan ke liye
 
Veer: ganpati visarjan ya phir bhabhi ke darshanLOLLOLLOL
 
Dharam throws another cushion at veer and runs off before Veer can strike back
 
Veer: dharam mein nahin ah raha hoon
 
Veer smiled and got out of bed and went to get ready
 
 
Enjoy
 
Shona
 
 
 
 


Edited by **Shona** - 23 October 2008 at 4:05pm

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Eyy me first to commetn yippee lol

i loved the opening... simpli awser lol veer saing how can u marry a girl haha....LOL
please continue soonn......(add a precap if u can)Embarrassed


Edited by heaven princess - 23 October 2008 at 3:24pm

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ohhh my god...my shona is back....wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
love u dear.....muaahhhhhhhhhhhhh
havent read the first part.... will soon read it....HugHug

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Posted: 23 October 2008 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by heaven princess

Hey shonaa..... yipeee ure bk with another ff.... i loved the plot..n character sketch please continuee soon!! looking forward to reading it
 
hi Seema
lol im bak...i realli wasnt planning on writing any time soon but i got the idea so cudnt resist n decided on writing the FF
 
im glad u liked charecters n plot

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Posted: 23 October 2008 at 3:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jigs_b

ohhh my god...my shona is back....wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
love u dear.....muaahhhhhhhhhhhhh
havent read the first part.... will soon read it....HugHug
 
lol yh i am bak agen
 
like i sed didnt want to write another FF but cudnt resist...hope u will like this as much as Vishvaas
 
its ok read in ur own time

shona.

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Posted: 23 October 2008 at 3:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by heaven princess

Eyy me first to commetn yippee lol

i loved the opening... simpli awser lol veer saing how can u marry a girl haha....LOL
please continue soonn......(add a precap if u can)Embarrassed
 
lol yay the first comment on ahista Ahista
 
im glad u liked the opening
lol Veer cant come to terms that his bro agreed to marriage
yh will continue soon!
as for precap...will try to add from now on

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