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Kiran_1

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Posted: 23 October 2008 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Hi guyz I wrote a ff based on Ranbir and Kanya (Kuch is tara) a while ago and I've only just had the chance to post it here. Enjoy Smile
 
All the chararcters are the same as they are in the serial
Part 1
 
FF starts from 10 March where Reve and Devika walk off after having a go at Kanya

RN-Ranbir Nanda        

KN-Kanya Nanda

KN-(looks worried)

scene shifts 2 RN

RN-Picnic wonderful idea Big D ab iss chipkali ke saath aur time barbaad karna hoga. Waise ye chipkali hai kaahan. KANYA KANYA KANYA

RN sees her and

RN-kab se bula ra hoon. Ab behaari bee ho gayi ho

Notices KN is tense

RN-mu lat ka kar kyun kari ho ab kya huwa.

KN-(gettin mad) tumari pyaari reva bhabhi aur woh devika ne abhi abhi  keh kar gayi hai ke woh hamari contract marriage ka pol chald sab ke samne khol ne waali hain.

RN-ab yeh ek aur musibaat kahan pas gaya hoon main bagwan

KN-eh helllo ye shaadi ka mind blowing idea tumara ta ab bugto

RN-ye sab tumare us gunde bhai Guru ki waja se huwa ha. Use ja kar apni saari huwee baatein ja kar sunow

KN-Guru ne ye to nahi kaha ke tum mujse shaadi karo, yeh tumaari galti hai. Shaadi kee to choro. Shaadi ke baad kee baat karte hain. Plan to yeh nahin ta ke shaadi ko hum 2 ya 3 din baad torde den ge lekin tumare chote se dimaag se jitne bee idea nikle ek daam gatya aur flop tein. Aur ab ye do churalian huamre baand bachayen gee. Ek dum uloo ho tum.

RN-baat to tumahre teekh hai par unse ab hum kaise chutkara paayein

KN-tum abi kuch bee nahi socho ge. Ab jo kuch karna ya sochna wo me khud karoon gee samje

Both start pacing forwards and backwards

KN-(shouts) Idea........... Na wont work

RN-pata tha chipkali tum kuch nahi soch pao gi. Bloody 2 by 2

KN-are saand tum muje bato ke tumare kitne idea te aur kitne superhit hain.

RN goes red and gets embaresed

KN-ab kyun hogaya moon band. Now just shutup and let me think

yahhan ao maine kuch socha hai (she whispers to him)

RN-No way main ye nahi karoonga. Tum main............Never

KN-eh gaande muje be koi shok nahi par majburi main gaade ko bee baap banana parta hai

RN-tum ne muje gaada kaha

KN-please main tumhe gaada key ke gaade ki insult nahi karna chati. Ab apna moon band rakna warna mein khud mummyji ko sab kuch baatoingi. Massage palour waali baat par ek tappar (ranbir grabs his cheek) para ta is baar daande pareinge aur woh ek bee nahin par dus sabse samje.

RN stands finger on mouth

KN-ab plan shuru kaarein

RN raises hand like a school kid.

KN-bako

RN-shuru to kaarein ge par..........

KN-daande nahin kaane to chalo

They walk 2 the lawn where every1 is doin theire own thing and

 
Part 2
On the ground Kanya sees a running hose pipe and picks it up

KN(whisper)-ab is saand ko mai maaza jaakati hoon

Ranbir notices Kanya with the hose and shouts

RN-dont u dare kanya

On his shout all the family turn around to see kanya wetting ranbir and burst out laughing and Eva and Slok film them

Kanya chases ranbir suddeenly the water stops and

RN-ab main nahin tumhe chodoonga

Kanya screams and runs as fast as she can ranbir chases they get to a distance where the family cant hear them or see them

They high five each other

KN-phase one successful

RN-phase one to succesful hogaya par muje itna beegone ki kya zaroorat te tumhe agar muje pnemonia huwa to

KN-tum mar jao ge aur is darti se ek bodge ut jaye ga
ab apna mu band karo ar phase 2 shru karte hain, apne shirt ke do button kholo aur wahan jake kya kehna hai pata to hai na tumhe

RN-pata hai

They walk to the house when malika(mk) calls them

MK- Ranbir bata tum dono kahaan ja re ho yaan ao hum ek
game khel ne wale hain

RN-woh mom baad mein kanya ko kapre change karne hai aur slok ne kaha hai ke mera ek phone hai

MK-acha jao

Slok-daadi phone lines dead hain aur mobile network be kaam nahi karta to phone kahaan se ayga

Eva- aur kanya ke to bilkul teek hain par chachu shirt ke button khule te kahain woh
romance karne to nahin jare chalo slok ja ke film karte hain

Big D- hain chalo muje mere party ke film pe yeh chaiye kya kehta hai ranbir hain Big d ap muje kabi kisi ladki saath karte nahin dekhen gi aur agar deke to 2 dinon ka kahan main khud banownga

Malika, slok, eva, reva, big d, shanaya,ayan and devika all walk toward Ranbirs room window and stand outside

When.......

 
Part 3
Ranbir and Kanya walk into the room

Kanya looks to see if ranbirs family are there on seeing them she turns to ranbir

KN-(whisper)woh log bahaar karein hai naatak shuru karo

Kanya walks towards the cupboard closest to the window when Ranbir grabs her and pulls her towards hom

Outside Slok-u r getting this arent u eve
Eva-haan baba

Back in the room Ranbir is walking Kanya to the wall when

KN-Ranbir choro muje darwaza khula hai agar kisine dekh liya to

RN-kaun dekhe ga sab barlawn pe hain

KN-chodona

RN-kyun lawn pe tumne jabe muj pe paani pehnka ta tab meri suni tee. Nahi na. To ab mein be apni marzi karoonga

Pushes her against the wall Kanya hugs him and

KN-(whispers) Itne kareeb ane ki koi zaroorat nahin hai

RN-(whispers) Muje koi shok nahin hai tume haat lagane ka agar plan mein na hota to main tum jaisee chipkali ko galti se be nahin haath lagata. BTW tumne is he liye to plan nai banay ke mein tumare itne kareeb awun

KN(whispers) ekbar plan khatam ho jaye to main tumhe dekhti hoon saare jahaan ke saand aur gaande mare hon ge tume banane ne ke liye

The get closer and look as if they will kiss when Kanya pretends to see his family outside

KN- Ranbir chodo window ke bahaar sab kare ho kar hume dekh rahen hai

Ranbir turns to see his family running in ifferent directions

Ranbir and Kanya burst out laughing

RN-Ab reva bhabi se aur us devika se peecha jute ga, woh ye saab dekh kar soch rahein hongi ke humari saach much ki shaadi huwi hai

Kanya doesnt notice the floor is wet from the water from ranbirs body and starts to walk away when she slips

Ranbir catches her and they have a eyelock They are so lost in eah other that they dont notice slok has com back and started filming them

They start to get closer and closer when their lips meet. Kanya feels a dizzying attack on her senses and was moaning as ranbir was kissing her harder and harder while their tongues battled for possession of each others mouths. All of a sudden slok shouts

Slok-Eva come fast yaar chachu chachi ko kiss kar rahen hai

They break apart and Ranbir drops kanya

 
Part 4
Ranbir looks at the window and sees Slok there and gets mad at being interupted

RN-Slok ke baache main tuje nahin chodunga

Slok runs and Ranbir chases

Kanya comes out of the spell and looks fit to kill

KN- ye sand khud ko kya samajta hai pehle zabardasti kiss karta hai aur phir zor se gira dehta hai. Pooja di teek hi kehti han laadkon ko hat tamow to who gale par jaatein hai. Ab is gaande ko main teek kartee hoon who us se karowngee jise use nafrt hai.

Walks out into the lawn and listens to Big D and Malika talking.

Big D-Maalika Ranbir kitna baadal gaya hai? Pehle kaita taa ke pyaar is dunya ki sab se baadi bimari hai aj khud apne parivar se jhoot bol kar
romance kar raha ta. Yaad hai tume Ranbir ne mujse meri pichli birthday pe kaha ta ke agar who kisi laadki ke kareeb gaya to do din ka khana wo khud banaye ga. Ab main use khana banwaon gi.

Malika-Rehne digye mom Kanya Ranbir ki biwi hai to yeh sab use jaiz hai aur doosre baat to yeh hai ke Ranbir ko is tara se kaam se sakht nafrat hai, muje to yeh shaak hai ke Ranbir ko to paata bi nahin kitchen kahaan hai.

Kanya-(thinking) Ranbir tume to mein kitchen mein pocha ke rahoonge ab dekna main kya karti hoo.

Kanya walks towards Malika and Big D.

Malika- ao humare paas beto beta

On seeing her upset

Malika- kya hua kisi ne kuch kaha tume beta

KN- Woh ranbir ne

Malika gets angry

Malika- Kya keha rehin tee ap mom ke Ranbir badal gaye hai kya khaak badla hai. Kya kaha usne tume

KN-(thinks) ab ayga maaza (outloud)Mom usne kaha ke muje khaana bana ana nahin ata aur (starts fake crying) agaar kisi khute ko mere haat ka bana khaan mile to wo be moon mor kar rejecxt kar dega.

Malika-Kya usne ye sab kaha

KN-(full on fake crying) haan aur kaha ke ab use office m'en 24/7 kaam parna barega kyunki hotel se roz khaan mangane ke bill bohot zyaad hoga

Big D-Us kote ko m'en seeda karti hoon khud khabi kitchen men per nahi raka aur tume baatein suna vaha hai Ranbir ko abhi bulaw Malika

Malika- RANBIR ABHI YAHAN AO

The whole family comes running followed by Ranbir who looks at Kanyas face and

RN- Kya huwa kanya ro kyun rahi ho

Big D-wa khud use rulaya aur pooch rahe ho ke woh ro kyun rahi hai sharam nahi aati

RN-(confused) maine? maine kya kiya?

Malika-Oh just shut up Ranbir aur naatak karna baand karo. Tumne meri bahun ko kaha ke use khaan banana nahin aata aur uski bezaati be ki. Kuch kehne se pehle soch liya karo tumari biwi ha woh

Big D- Tu itna Kanna banane ka expert ha na to do din ka khana tu hi ban aye ga aur agaar nahi banaya to ek hafte ke liye na kuch kahne ke liye milega aur nahi tum office ja sakoge SAMJE.

KN-(thinks) ab is Ranbir Nanda ki haalat iek saand se bi battar hogi. Jalo age dekhtein hai tamasha.

Part 5
Ranbir looks shocked as does the whole family

RN-Main aur kaana (starts laughing) app mazaak kar rahi hain na. Lekhin todi chaldi hogaya April fools aj nahin do haafton ke baad hain. App ko tab ye karne chaiye ta ab April fools ke liye app ke paas kuch be nahi

Big D- (lovingly)Bete main mazaak nahin kar rahi. Aj raat ke kane mein daal, chawal, ek sabzee ki dish, ek meat dish aur meete meingajar ka halwa hona chaye. Aur haan kana 8 baje table pe hona chaye, agar nahin huwa toh mein aur malikaa tume bohot saare tappar kil ayeenge

RN-Par Big D main.......

Big D- Mun band kar, Kanya is kade ko kitchen kahaan hai ja kar dikhao aur ek baar phir bata dena kaane mein kya hona chaiye.

KN-Ji Big D

Kanya and Ranbir walk towards the kitchen when all of a sudden Kanya starts laughing

RN-haas kyun rahi ho yan meri jaan pe ban ayi hai aur tume maazak suj raha hai

KN-haas is liye rahi hoon kyun ke aaj mere do plan te aur dono hit rahe aur tumare jitne be plan ya idea te woh tumari bhai ki filmon ki tara super flop rahein

RN-Eh just shut up waise tumare doosra idea kya ta pehla to Reva bhabi aur Devika ko yeh dikhlana ta ke hum tum pyaar kartein hain. Doosra kya ta?

KN-Doosra ide ta Ranbir Nanda se baadla

RN-Ranbir Nan.. woh to mein hoon mujse baadla kyun wait a minute iska maatlab yeh sab tumne kiya

They are now inside the kitchen

KN-haan ye sab maine kiya aur ye sab is liye kiya kyun ke pele tumne muje zabardasti kiss kiya aur uske baad jaan buch kar zor se zameen pe gira diya

RN-Maine tume kiss kiya yaan tumne muje kiss kiya. Bagwwan ka shukar hai ke us waqt Slok agaya warna main kissi ko mun dikhane ke kabil nahin rehta. Meri izzat lut leti tum, agar ye hojata to main mom ko kya kehta

KN-Izzat tumari tab luti jab tumare paas izzat hoti

RN-Hai Kanya Gobergole dekle loon ga tume akir aukaad hi kya hai tumari

KN-Mera naam Kanya Nanda hai aur meri aukaad Nanda parivaar ki bahu ki hai. Aur haan mein woh Kanya Nanda hoon jo Ranbir Nanda se Kaana banwarahi hai. Kaane se yaad aya Big D ne kaha ta ke kaane mein dal,chawal, ek sabzi ki dish aur ek meat ki dish aur haan gajar ka halwa 8 baje bana kar table pe rakh dena

Kanya walks off behind her Ranbir grabs a kadu to throw at her which rebounds on a wall and hits him on the head Kanya turns around and starts laughing

KN-tut tut marne jare te muje aur lag gayi tume ya to khud ke per par khulati marne ki baat hogayi. Chalo cooking shuru karo tumare pass sirf 7 gante hain

Kanya walks away leaving a furious Ranbir behind her

RN-dekh loonga us chipkali ko mujse kanna ban wa rahi ha maar daloonga. I hate you bloody 2 by 2.

Kanya walks into Big Ds room where she sees Slok showing everyone the
video of her and Ranbir kissing and starts getting a weird feeling and is just about to say something when there is a scream everyone rushes to the kitchen to see
 
Part 6
KN-(thinking) Ab ise kya hogaya itna chila kyun reha hai
OMG ye cockroach to maine shanaya ke liye raki ti ise kaise mil gayi. BTW ye saand to hamesha ket ta ise kisi cheez se dar nahi to ab ek fake cockroach dekha aur table ke upar char ke ladkion ki taara chik raha hai. Aur ya to pura parivaar jama hogaya hai. Kuch kar Kanya warna jo jhoote Ranbir ko paarne wale te tume parenge.

Everyone has followed KAnya to the kitchen

Everyone- Kya hua Kanya ye chink kaise

KN-(thinking) ab is saand ko bachana parega warna woh muje mar dalega (outloud) woh actually mummyji muje cockroach se bohot daar lagta hai ye upar se giri aur Ranbir dekh raha hai ke koi aur ro nahi hai upar

Malika-okay ab sab chalo yahaan se

They all leave only Kanya and Ranbir are in the kitchen

RN-tumne jhoot kyun bola? ye kyun kaha ta ke tum cheekein

KN- woh main ye sab nahin karti to ye jo tumare I am Ranbir Nanda the Brave an Great ka persona would have come crashing down and u would have lost all self respect

RN-(stumbling on the word) tha tha thanks

KN-ure welcome (is about to leave when she sees his hand is bleeding and runs to him and grabs his hand) ye kya kiya tumne

RN-(shocked to see her so concerned but enjoying it) it nothing baba

KN-kya matlaab it nothing itna khoon beraha ha. Chalo yahaan ao main mein saaf karke paati band deti hoon

RN-(loving her touch)Kanya main khud kar loonga

KN-(feeling guilty because it was her fault he got injured) Ranbir maine kaha na yahaan ao main kardoongee

She washes his hand and puts that antiseptic on which really stinks which hurts Ranbir. On his sound of pain Kanya blows on his hand

KN-ab teek hai

RN-nahin ek baar phir(thinking)ye muje kya ho raha hai main Ranbir Nanda jo ladkiyon se door bakta ta aj ek laadki ke itne kareeb. Ranbir snap out of this. Aur ye toh wahi chipkali hai jis ki wajse ye sab huwa hai

Kanya finishes bandaging his hand and leaves on her way out she sees Sloks camera and takes the tape out and gos to Ranbirs room and watches it

After watching it Kanya starts to think

KN-(thinking) ye maine kya kiya. Ranbir ko main be kiss kar rahi ti phir kyun maine uske saat ye sab kiya. Muje to gusa isliya ayaa ta kyun ke usne muje kiss karfna chor diya aur maine use ye ke diya ke ye sab usne kiya. Muje Ranbir ke madat karne chaiye.

She goes to the kitchen and sees ranbir beating whole eggs including the shells, also him and the entire kitchen are coated in flour and says

KN-need any help

RN-oh tum. Haan please help karo muje nahin pata ye sab kaise karte hain. Main mante hoon ke galti saari mere te ab help karo na yaar

KN-Ok baba tum gajar ka halwa bano mein waki sab jisen banati hoon

Ranbir is impressed on how she tidies the kitchen up with ease and still manages to look hot and is staring at her

KN-(catching him staring at her) tume gajar ka halwwa banana to aata hai na

RN-(blushing at being caught staring at her) umm no

She tells him what to do and starts cookin herself she tells ranbir to add the sugar but he picks up the salt instead and adds it. Thay have finished when they hear Maalika coming and Kanya says

KN-Ranbir sab tayaar to hain na oh mummyji ap

Malika -Kanya tum yahaan Ranbir ki help to nahin kar rahi ti na

KN-main iski help mummyji main to Ranbir ko yeh kene ke liye aytee ke 8 baj chuke hai aur kahna table pe lay

Malika- acha ab ye sab table pe lejao

They take all the food to the table where Big D says

Big D-sabse pehle muje gaajar ka halwa do (this is the gajaar ka halwa full of salt)

Big D is about to eat it

 
Part 7
Big D is about to eat the halwa when Malika stops her by saying

Malika: Ye halwa Ranbir ka fave hai aur aaj is ne khud banaya hai to sab halwa ye khud hi kaye ga. Ap sab log waki sab kana kain. Kanya apne haaton se apne pati ko kana kilao

KN:(thinking)God kis pagal khane me pass gayi hoon. Jab be dekho muje is cartoon ke paas bechte rahtein hai. (outloud) Ji mom

Everyone is eating the food and complimenting Ranbir on his cooking. Ranbir is feeling pretty good about himself and is thinking

RN:(thinking) Pehli baar aaj maine mom ki baat nahin maani aur itni tariff ho rahi hai. Halwa to maine khud banaya hai bohot hi acha bana hoga.

Kanya feeds him 2 spoons. Ranbir starts to chew the halwa and is about to spit it out cos it tastes disgusting. He thinks

RN:(thinking) Agar sab ke samne ye maine spit kardiya to mom ko pata chal jayga ke ye kahana maine nahin banaya sirf halwa banaya. Us ke baad woh sab ke saat mil kar band bajain gee. Kahana parega

He sits there eating after about 8 spoons hes had enough and starts to signal to kanya to come to the kitchen.

KN:(thinking)Kuch to garbar hai ab yahaan se kaise nikhlen. Idea (outloud) Ranbir woh apne kitchen mein chai rakhe ti stove par woh band to ki ti apne.

Ranbir gives her a WTF u on about look when kanya winks at him and he understands.

RN: oh crap woh to on hai

Both of them rush to the kitchen

RN: Thank you thank you (kisses her on both cheeks) bachalya tumne

KN:(shocked that he kissed her) par hua kya

RN: Dekho marna mat. Maine galti se halwe mein chini ki chaga namak use kiya

KN: Ranbir tum bi na ek halwa hi to banana ta tume woh bi nahin huwa. God ab woh sara halwa pehnk na warna mom ko pata chal jayga ke main ne tumari help ki aur tumare sath sath muje bi jhoote pareinge.

RN: Chill out baba hojayga. Just relax

KN: Yehi problem hai tumari tum kabhi koi baat seriously nahin lete. Upar se ab muje chai bi bananeen pare gi.

RN: tum halwa pehnko chai main bana loonga

KN: Nahin kya pata us mein bi tum namak dhal do

RN: Ghalti hogayee, kya tumne kabhi koi galti nahin ki. Aur upar se sorry kaha na maine aur chaiye kya tume.

KN: apne sorry apne paas rako aur ye lo halwa tum khud pehnko ayr chai bi khud banao. Mein chali kahna kane muje to bohot book lagi hai. Bye (she walks off)

RN: Samajti kya hai khud ko bloody chipkali. Koi zaroorat nahin hai muje tumari ye saab main khud kar sakht hoon. Just get lost

10 minutes later we see Ranbir covered in sugar and halwa when Malika comes in

Malika:(laughing) Ranbir ye tumne kya kiya

RN:Mom aap has rahin. Jaaye Kanya ko bulain Plzzzz

Kanya comes and starts laughing uncontrollably. Ranbir sees her and is shocked

RN:(thinking) WOW kitni khoobsoorat lag rahi hai aur kitni pyaari haasi hai. Dil chahta waqt tam jaye aur main yahaan bet ka rise dektaha rahoon. God shes
gorgeous

Kanya in between laughs asks

KN: Ye sab tumne 10 minute mein kar liya? Khud ko decka hai sheeshe(mirror) main. Ao main tumara chera saaf kharti hoon.

She goes towards him laughing and slips on he halwa on the floor. Too save her RAnbir grabs her waist and she grabs Ranbirs shoulders. They stare at each other and start to get closer and closer when their lips meet.

Kanya feels at war with her brain and heart. Her heart is telling her to go with the flow whereas her brain is telling her to leave him. She tells her brain to shutup and carries on with her makeout session. Ranbir moves forward.............

 
Part 8
Ranbir moves forward so thet he can bring Kanya even closer to him. He puts all his feelings into that one kiss.

Still making out

RN:(thinking) Ye kya ho raha hai muje. Kyun jab ye mere paas hoti hai sab kuch perfect lagta hai aur ye jab door jati hai to kyun mein khud ko adoora mehsoos karta hoon. Do i love her? Is this love? It has to be otherwise why would i feel so restless, why do i always want her with me, why do i feel complete when she is in my arms. God I LOVE HER.

While Ranbir is thinking all this Kany is just going with the flow and wants him desperatly (who would'nt)

RN:(thinking) I have to tello her i love her before we make love. She may regret it later if we make love and I dont tell her what my real feelings are

He slowly breaks the kiss. Still hoding her in his arms and stroking her hair gently

RN: Tum to meri shakal saaf karni ayi thi par ab khud ko be halwa lagaliya hai.

Kanya still blushing after their makeout session:(whispers) to tum saaf kar do na

RN: wo to kardoon ga par baad mein pehle mein tumse kuch kehna chata hoon

KN: to kaho na

RN:Kanya I... mein tums....I

All of a sudden Eva and Ira rush in

EandI: Chachu u wont believe what shana....

Seeing them jump apart from each other they realise they interupted something pretty importtant

Eva: we r sorry

They rush out

Ira: OH CRAP. We just interupted chachus
romance, hell kill us

Eva: No he wont not after our suprise

Ira: suprise what suprise. ye kya bak rahi ho tum

Eva: yahaan ao idiot

Eva whispers something to Ira ehich causes ira to break out into a huge smile like this Big smile

Ira: chachus soooooooooo gonna love us now. Ye tumare dimaak mein ye ideas kaise ate hain

Eva: honey its just natural

Back in the kitchen Kanya says

KN: Ranbir u go get cleaned up I'll tidy up in here.

RN: U sure

KN: haan baba tum jao

And pushes him out of the kitchen

Ranbir goes towards his room when Eva jumps at him

Ranbir still mad at her about before: ab kya hai

Eva: Chachu aap bohot gussa hain na. Im sorry. Mein to ap ko ye envelope dene ay ti. Ye lijeye

Gives him the envelope and Ranbir opens it too seeeeee....   
 
 
Part 9
He opens the envelope and sees a letter and a pair of keys

Chachu hume pata hai ke aap hum dono par bohot gussa hain. Is liye as a way of an apology hum dono ne farmhouse ke peeche jo outhouse hai wahan aap ke liye aur kanya chachi ke liye ek suprise chora hai. Yeh outhouse ki keys hain. Aap dono wahan ja kar romance yan kuch aur kar lein, hum log yahaan pe sab kuch sambaal leingein. Aur haan agar suprise pasand aaya to ap ko humare liye kuch karne parega. EVA&IRA

Ranbir walks to the outhouse to see what disaster is waiting for him there

RN: Ab yaahan pe kon si musibat in logon ne kari kad di hai. Whatever these girls touch turns to dust

He opens the door (BTW its evening now) and is shocked at what he sees

The entire floor is covered in pink, yellow and white rose petals. The walls are covered in fairy lights, in the background low soft music was playing. In the centre of the room is a candle lit table with a tablecloth covered in red rose petals and a note

He picks up the note amused

So chachu pasand aaya humara suprise? Well obviously pasand to aaya hai. Kitchen mein chachi ka favourite khana hum logon ne order kar ke rak diya hai. Ab to aap ko humare kam karna padega aur wo bi kal.......... hmmmm ok chalo the day after tomorrow ure probably gonna be a liitle busy with chachi EVA&IRA

RN:Wah kya dimaag paya hai ino ne. Well after all meri hi batichiyaan hai. Kanya ko mein yahaan la kar hi propose karronga. Aj use mein apni dil ki baat ke kar hi raoonga

He runs back to the house and sees Kanya walking out of the shower wearing only a towel to her kneees.

RN: WHOA main to gaya

KN:(blushing)Ranbir tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho

Ranbir still in his own little disneyworld

RN:Tume dekh raha hoon. Jaan bohot sexy lag rahi ho. Har waqt towel pehna karo plzzzzzzzzzzz mere liye

KN:(Reallly really red now) RANBIR sharm karo

On hearing her yell his name he comes out of his daze and reallises what he came here to do and goes to the wardrobe

RN: Sharam waram baad mein karoonga pehle (takes out a red sari) ye pehno aur chalo mere saath



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Part 10

Heres the link for the sari http://www.utsavsarees.com/pages/sarees-large.asp?icode=SDS6 25&sview=9

KN: Ranbir ye kya kar rahe ho tum

RN: kuch be nahin. Tum ye sari pehno

KN:Pehle tum jao yahaan se

RN: Kya kanya

KN: Plzzzzzzz

RN: Acha baba ja raha hoon but tumare paas sirf panch minute hain jaldi se change kar ke ao

Kanya pushing him out says

KN: Okay and she locks the door

KN:(thinking) pata nahin Ranbir ko kya ho gaya hai

Outside Ranbir is pacing forwards and backwards waiting for Kanya to come out

RN: Jaldi karo na Kanya

Kanya comes out and Ranbir is stunned to see her

Kn: Kya baat hai. Itna chil a kyun rahe ho. Aur ye sari pehne ke liye ke kyun kaha

RN: Woh mein baad mein bataoonga. Pehle ye pehno

Holds a blindfold out to her    

KN: Ranbir ye mein nahin pehnoo gi Sari tak baat teek ti lekin ye blindfold kis liye

RN: Kanya plzzzz pehno mujhe par vishwaas nahin.

Kanya doesn't say anything, she just takes the blindfold and puts it on and holds on to Ranbir

RN: Ab chalen

KN: Par kahaan. Ranbit batoa na

RN: wahan ja kar pata chal jayga ab chalo

On the way to the outhouse Kanya slips due to the fact she is wearing heels. Seeing this Ranbir picks her up and walks to the outhouse. When they get there he puts her down and leads her inside and removes her blind fold.

WHen Kanya sees the outhouse she is shocked

KN: yeh sab tumne kab kiya Ranbir

RN: Bas kiya. Tume pasand hai

KN: I love it

RN: And I love you

KN: WHAT

RN: Haan Kanya. I LOVE YOU. Tumhe jab mein pehli baar mila to muje nahin pata ta ke tum meri puri zindagi hila do gi. EK chipkali ki tara chipak gayi muj se.

KN: Ranbir (starts wacking his arm)

Ranbir runs a little but then just grabs her hands and brigs her close to him

RN: Sach mein Kanya pata nahin kab mere dil tumara ho gaya. Jab tum mere paas nahin hoti to ek dum akela ho jata hoon ma, jab tum hasti ho to muje hasi aati hai, jab jab tum roti ho mere dil rota hai. Tumare saath jagra karne mein ab bohot maza aata hai lekin jab naraaz hoti ho mujse tum to lagta hai ke mein adoora hoon. Kanya you complete me. Your my other half. I can't live without you any more.

Kanya has tears in her eyes

Ranbir gets down on one knee and takes a square box out of his pocket and opens it

RN: Kanya I love you I love you more than anything. I want to spend the rest of my life with you. I want to be there to spoil our kids aur haan I want at least 8 kids Kanya agar aur chaye to muje koi problem nahi. Kya tum muje apna saath is janaam aur agle saath (7) janmo ke liye do ki?

Kanya after hearing what he said is actually crying now and on seeing her cry Ranbir gets up and wipes her tears and says

RN: Kya kanya itni achi proposal ki maine kam se kam jawab to de do aur ab rono band karo

KN: Ranbir mere jawaab...................

 
Part 11
KN: Ranbir mere jawaab haan par ek shart par humare sirf aur sirf chaar (4) baache honge, do (2) larke tumari taara au..........

RN: No way Kanya comeon whats wrong with 8 kids.

KN: Nothings wrong Ranbir with 8 kids lekin tum socho hum jab bi romance kar rahe hote hain to koi na koi ajata kam ki waja se aur agar humare 8 bache huwe to hum kabhi be saath mein nahin honge

RN: Okay forget 8 kids what about 7

KN: No Ranbir

RN: Kanya learn to comprimise come on say yes

KN: How about 6 kids.

RN: 6 is fine

Ranbir goes closer to Kanya and starts to kiss her neck

KN: (obviously enjoying it) Ranbir yeh kya kar rahe ho choro muje

RN:(with a sexy grin) Tume nahi pata. Hai bagwan ye kya kiya apne meri biwi ko shanaya ka dimaag de diya. Ye to nainsaafi (injustice) hai

KN: (whining) Raaaaanbiiiiiiiiirrrrrr

RN: Kya jaan agar chaay (6) bache chaiye to shuruwat to abhi karni paregi.

KN: (tomato red and shy) Par muje bookh lagi hai

RN: Muje bi bohot bookh hai par kane ke liye nahin

Kanya somehow escapes his tight grip and runs

KN: Par muje khana chaaye

Ranbir decides to give in

RN: Acha chalo chal ke khate hain par ek shart par

KN: Konsee shart

RN: Shart ye hai ke tum wahi karogi jo main kahoonga

KN: Acha baba ab chalo

They go and eat. They feed each other and finish. Ranbir gets up to and walks to Kanya and holds out his hand

RN:Dance?

KN: Ofcourse

Kanya puts her hand in Ranbirs and he pulls her up. They walk in the centre of the room and Ranbir pulls Kanya close to. Kanya puts her head on his chest and her arms around his neck. He puts his arms on her waist and put his head on top of hers.
 
 
Part 12
Kanya looks up at Ranbir and is just about to say something when someone starts crying (any guesses who)
Ranbir and Kanya break apart and go hand in hand to find who distured them. They go out side and see shanaya crying and hitting Ayaan.

Shanaya= S
Ayaan= A

S: (inbetween sobs) Ayaan dekho na chachi aur woh gandi kanya kitne romantic hai aur tum t............


A: Shanaya would u shutup. Tum se bewakoof ladki is duniya mein nah hogi

Ranbir and Kanya decide to stop this from going any further

RN: Yeh kya ho raha hai?

A: Chachu woh shanaya muje yahaan keech kar layi ander se par aap yahaan kya kar rahe hain

Ranbir grabs Kanya from behind and holds her to him

RN: Tum ne suna nahin shanaya ne kya kaha hum yahaan
romance kar rahe te aur tum log aage humko disturb kar diya

A: SOrry chachu par aapko malika dadi dund rahi hain

Ranbir, Kanya and Ayaan walk to the farmhouse and leave shanaya outside alone
 
Part 13
Inside their room

Ranbir is hugging Kanya who is lost in her own thoughts

RN: (kissing her neck) kya soch rahi ho jaan

KN: ( enjoying Ranbirs mouth on her neck Embarrassed ) Mmmmmm kuch nahi woh bas shanaya aur Ayaan ke bare mein

Ranbir decides to have a little fun with her, he has to get back at her 4 sending him to the kitchen even if the kitchen trip helped them get 2gether. (BTW they havent done IT yet)

Letting go of her

RN: KYA

He turns her around to face him

RN: WHat is this honey? Yahaan mein tumare saath romance kar raha hoon au tum doodron ke baare mein soch rahi ho (turns around to hide his grin) I'm not talking to you

Kanya feels bad

KN:Ranbir main to bas ye soch rahi ti ke hum ab kitne khush hain kyun na ayaan aur shanaya ko be ye khushi dedein une ek ker ke. You know Shanaya really loves Ayaan and she is really hurt when he calls her stupid or makes fun of her.

Kanya tries to turn Ranbir around to face her when that doesnt work she goes and stands infront of him.

KN: (stroking his face) Ranbir I'm sorry ab se tumare aur sirf tumare baare mein sochungi okay baba( holds her ears) Maaf nahin karoge?

RN: (holding her face in his hands)Jaan koi apne jaan se naraaz ho sakta hai (kisse her forehead tenderly)mein serious nahin ta main to bas maazak kar raha ta. Aur jahaan tak Ayaan aur Shanay ki baat hai you're right we have to do something

Kanya breaks away and starts to make the bed

KN: But what

On seeing Kanya making the bed Ranbir gets a very naught glint in his eyed and a very sexy smirk on his lips

RN: Woh saab baad mein (walks towards her and Kanya totally unaware) Pehle mujhe I mean hume kuch aur kaam karna hai

Before she can ask what they have to do he grabs her from behind and gives her mind altering, breathtaking, earthshaterin and a veryyyyyyyy hot kissssssssss
 
Part 14
Its morning

Kanya wakes up nd is about to get up but cant due to a sleeping ranbir on her. Seeing him she blushes and slowly tries to slide out of bed without waking Ranbir up. She manage to get out when

RN: Kahaan ja rahi ho (holding her wrist)

KN: Shower ke liye

Ranbir know is veryyyyyyy awake

RN: To pehle batana ta na. (getting our of bed) Chalo

Ranbir picks Kanya up and they "shower"

They are both out of the shower and dressed and on their way down

KN: Ranbir how are we gonna start operation AS

RN: Ye operation AS kya hai

KN: Ranbir ure stupid AS as in Ayaan&Shanaya

RN: Oh well muje lagta hai that we should let shanaya in on the plan and tell her what to do

KN: But why

RN: Know whos stupid if we i mean u talk to shanaya it will allow us to manipulate Ayaan more easily

KN:OH

The whole family except shanaya are going on a picnic

Ranbir and kanya are outside shanayas room

RN: Kanya knows ure chance go talk to shanaya

KN: WHy me

RN: Who wants Ayaan and Shanaya together

KN: me

RN: So who should talk to shanaya

KN: Me wait what

RN: too late know jaan( and pushes her in)

Inside the room Shanaya is on the bed crying and doesnt notice Kanya. Kanya goes to comfort shanaya

KN: SHanaya tum ro kyun rahi ho

Shan: Ayaaan mujse pyaar nahi karta

KN: Agar main kaon ke Ayaan tumse pyaar karega

Shanaya gets up and pulls kanya to sit on the bed with her

SN: Kaise

KN: Woh baad mein pehle apne moon do kar ao aur ye pehno



Shanaya goes and changes then goes to kanya

Shan: Ab batao kaise

KN: Hum sab picnic ke liye beach par ja rahen hai aur tum be aogee par tum ayaan se bilkul baat nahi karoge aur nahi us ke paas jaogee and if he comes to you just move away (shanaya is about to protest) Ayaan chaye na

Shan: Haan

KN: To ye sab karna hee parega

Shan:Ok baba karoonge. Picnic ke liye hum beach par hi ja rahen hai na

KN: haan pooch kyun rahi ho

Shanaya points to kanyas outfit



Shan: No offence par tum ye pehen ke jaogee beach par

KN: Haan in kaapron mein kya kharabee hai

Shan: Koi kharabee nahin ache hain par beach ke liye nahin. Tum ye peno plzzzzzzzzzzz mere liye



KN: fine

Kanya takes the outfit and goes to change


Part 15
Also (brackets)= thoughts

Okay lets recap Kanya gets Shanaya on board for missionAS Shanaya agrees

Shanaya and Kanya walk outside laughing and talking. The family are shocked on seeing them. Half are shocked cuz Kanya's wearing modern clothes and half are shocked cuz Kanya and Shanaya are actually talking. As usually Shanaya always complains about Kanya and cries but today she was actually smiling.

On seeing Kanya Ranbir is drooling and very turned on as she looks damn hot
On the other hand Ayaan is thinking

AY= Ayaan

AY: (Whoa shanaya looks good wait what am i thinking, i think she looks good because she smiling for the first time in her life and not crying. God im gonna be stuck with her for the entire trip. On the bus she'll sit next to me and off the bus she'll stick to me like glue. Kahan pass gaya main)

Back to our hero, heroine and Shanaya. They discuss the second phase of the plan.

Ran: Shanaya u have to totally ignore him and stay away from him okay? And u cant sit with him on the bus

Shan: Sooo where do i sit then?

Kan: U go sit with ira and eva get tghem on ure side and remember no crying whatsoever and on the beach make sure u sit away from Ayaan as well. Get it?

Shan: Got it

Ran: Good

They all sit on the bus and Shanaya goes and sits with ira and eva. Ayaan (poor guy) is shocked and worried and is talking to himself.

AY: ye mere pass kyun nahin beti. Iski tabiat to teek haina.

Meanwhile Shanaya, Ira and Eva become gr8 friends as Ira and Eva discover Shanaya is actually pretty cool. They spend the entire time talking about fashion and men(what else is there to talk about)

Eva: U know bhabi ure not the bad

Ira: yeah i agree. ok true test who do u think looks hotter Iqbal Khan or Ejaz Khan?

Shan: Neither I think Akashdeep Saigal is the hottest

Eva: U r sooooooo rite

And they goooooooooo on to talk about Akaash's hotness

The bus stops at the beach

Part 16

Everyone gets off the bus and go off in their own groups. Ranbir an Kanya walk to a secluded spot, Ira, Eva and Shanaya go sit near the water and talk, Aditya and Siddarth are running from their wives, Big D and Malika are ordering Arth, Slok and Ayaan to remove the picni stuff from the bus and set it up.
 
The guyz well Arth and Slok are setting up while Ayaan keeps on staring at Shanaya confused as to why she isnt following hi or whinig when his thoughts are broken
 
Slok: Ayaan yaar tu kar kya raha hai? Come and help us set up
 
Arth: YEAH ARE WE GONNA HAVE TO DO ALL THE WORK
 
Meanwhile Ranbir and Kanya are walking along a private area of the beach holding hands and talking when kanya sees water and decides to have fun.
 
She breaks away from Ranbir and goes to the water and Ranbir being the devoted husband he is follows her. He is a couple of steps away from her when she splashes him and runs. After a minute Ranbir realises what jus happened and runs after Kanya
 
Ran: Kanya main tumhe nahin chorunga, kahan tak bagogi
 
He soon catches her
 
Ran: Pani kyun pehnka
 
Kan: Woh bas yun hi
 
Ran: Acha to agar main bas yun hi tumhe pani mein pehnk doon to kya
 
He grabs her and acts like he is about to throw her
 
Kanya is clinging to his neck
 
Kan: Plzzzzzzzzz muje pani me mat dalo i promise main ainda aise nahin karoongi
 
Ran: Promise
 
Kan: Haan baba promise
 
They are soon disturded as Big D has decided its too boring and has started a game of volleyball Girlz VS Boyz
 
On the girlz eam it is Kanya, Ira, Eva and Shanaya
 
On the boyz team it is Ranbir. Arth, Slok and Ayaan
 
 
Part 17
I don't know much about the game so i wont go into detail
 
The game starts and Kanya scores the first point because Ranbir was not playing at all he was just staring at her
 
Slok: Chachu...... Chachu............ CHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAACHUUU
 
Ranbir is shocked and stops staring at her
 
Half way through the game and the boyzz are winning. The scores are 12-10 to the boyz
 
Ayaan then hits the ball and it hits Shanaya on the head who is about to cry when Kanya signals her not to. So she's quite and
 
Shan: I'm fine 
 
And every1 but Kanya and Ranbir are shocked. Why are they shocked well Shanaya makes a fuss over every little thing today got hit in the head and didnt cry, get mad or shout all she said was that she;s fine
 
Shan: Aap sab muje aise kyun dekh rahein hain? Hey guyz lets play
 
And the game continues the scores are tied at 19-19
 
Ira has it the ball over to the boyz side and ranbir is about to hit it when he sees Kanya is about to fall and leaves the ball (causing the girlz to win) and ruhes to her side where she faints in his arms
 
Everyone gather round
 
Ran: Kanya utho Kanya
 
And shakes her
 
Malika: Ranbir take her home, Slok go with them, Ayaan go to the doctor and take him to the farmhouse, Arth take Big D home and Era,Iva and Shanaya help me tidy up
 
They have packed up and all her home 
 
Everyone is gathered in Ranbir and Kanya's room waiting for the doctor. Kanya is on the bed and still unconscious.
 
Ayaan comes in with the doctor 
 
The doctor asks everyone to leave the room so that he can examine her
 
Outside the room is a very tensed Ranbir pacing forwards and backwards
 
Arth: Chachu relax chachi wi......................
 
Ran: HOW THE HELL CAN I RELAX? KANYA JUST FAINTED WHAT IF THERES SOME THING WRONG WITH HER
 
Malika: And will Kanya get better with you shouting at everyone huh?
 
Ran: but mom................
 
Malika: But nothing just st down and relax. We are all worried for Kanya. Now sit down
 
Ranbir is about to sit on the couch when the doctor comes
 
Ranbir rushes to the doctor
 
Ran: Doctor how is my wife. Is she okay?
 
Doc: Relax Mr Nanda
 
Ranbir thinking: Relax relax what the hell is wrong with everyone my wife just fainted for no reason and i'm supoosed to relax Bloody idiots
 
Doc: Congratiolations Mr Nanda your wife is pregnant thats why Mrs Nanda fainted
 
Part 18
Ran: Kanya pregnat hai to kya...................... OHHHHHHHHHHH MY GOOOOOOOOOOD KANYA PREGNANT HAI. MOM I'M GONNA BE A DAD. I'M GONNA BE A DAD
 
Ranbir literally goes mad with happiness and runs to everyone saying hes gonna be a dad. Everyone is shocked and happy. Happy because there gonna be a new arrival in the house and shocked as Ranbir has never acted like this before
 
Malika thinking: Thank you Kanya tum ne mere bete ko bilkul baadal diya hai pehle muje ye dar ta ke mere marne ke baad ye akela raha jay ga lekin ab muje koi fikar nahi hai. Aaj Ranbir bohot khush itna khush woh kabhi nahi hua aur main dua karti hoon ke woh aisa hi rahe zindagi bar. Ek dar ta ke mere marne ke baad ye toot na jai par ab muje vishwaas he ke tum ise tootne nahi dogi. Thank you
 
Malika: Ab tum yahaan kare rah kar chilate hi rahoge yahaan Kanya ke paas be chaloge
 
As Ranbir and Malika enter the room they notice everyone leaving as they've already met Kanya.
 
Ran: Aap sab log yahaan kab aiye
 
Big D: Jab tum jungli ban kar bahar chila rahe te
 
Ranbir blushes
 
Malika goes to Kanya
 
Malika: Thank you beta aaj mein bohot khush hoon
 
Ran: Thank you Kanya ko nahin Mom mujhe karein after all mere hard work ki waja se aaj Kan...........
 
Malika and Kanya throw pillows at him
 
Ran: Ouch kar kya rahe hain aap log lagta hai
 
Malika: Lagta hai to sharam ainee cha\iye apni maa ke samne aisi baatein karte hui
 
Ran: Kaisi sharam ab mom app se kya chupana........................
 
Malika: Main to chali is se pehle Ranbir kuch aur bakwaas kare
 
Malika kisses Kanya an leaves the two alone.
 
Seeing his mother leave he jumps on the bed next to Kanya and holds her
 
Ran: OK Kanya aaj se tum koi kaam nahi kar rahi ho bas is kamre mein araam karogi aur jab hum vapaas ghar jaayenge tab bhi tum humari room mein rahogi aur agar kuch chayee to mujhe kahogi. App ka ghulam 24 hours app ke saat ho ga
 
Kan: Acha to agar ghulam ko office janna para to
 
Ran: Office ko maro gholi Aditya bhaiya saambal lenge waise wo ab yahi kar rahenhe. Woh Astha bhaibi yahaan ha to woh yaahaan nahin aina chaite hain. To te hogaya ke aaj se Aditya bhaiya off ice aur mein tumare saat.
 
Kan:OK done
 
Ran: Naam kya socha hai tumne meri beti ka
 
Kan: What do you mean by beti agar beta hua to
 
Ran: Pehle beti hogi mujhe ek  tumari tar cute aur meri tar shaitaan beti chaiye
 
Kan: Aur muje pehle beta chaiyee
 
Ran: Keh diya na beti hogi
 
Kan: Nahi Beta
 
Ran: BETI
 
Kan: BETA
 
They continued arguing like that for a while but you know what they both were right Kanya and Ranbir had twins 1 boy and 1 girl
 
9 months from that day they were attending Pooja and Sloks wedding. How did that happen. Well as soon as Pooja knew Kanya was pregnat she made sure she was at the Nanda house daily and  Slok was always around when Pooja was visiting Kanya and he felt attracted towards her and they started taling and he soon fell in love with Pooja. And Pooja well she felt that Slok understood her, her career demands plus he was good looking soooooo they got to know each other and slowly Pooja came to Nanda house just to meet Slok and soon fel for him too and Before you know it their married.
 
Now back to Ranbir and Kanya as I was saying they were attending Pooja and Sloks wedding when during the reception she went into labour. And Ranbir well lets just say Ranbir and birth don't go together as soon as Kanya was in the delivery room Ranbir fainted. They had a boy first thedn a girl 6 minutes later 
 
Kanya and Ranbir named the girl Malika Kanya Nanda after Ranbirs mom who passed away a month ago due to cancer. They named the boy Rajveer Ranbir Nanda after Ranbirs father on Malikas request. Before passing away Malika told Kanya she was dying and requested  her to name her son after her late husband and Ranbirs father.
 
As for the others well Ayaan and Shanaya are now happy together and Shanya is in her first month of pregnancy. How did this happen well Ayaan was feeling attracted to Shanaya and was starting to fall in love with her but was unsure. As Kanya hit her sixth month of pregnancy she felt ill and Shanaya along with Ranbir was there for her 24/7. On seeing her kind and caring side he realised that all the qualities he wanted in his life partner were present and tols her he loved her.
 
Ira and Harry hit it off as well and they got married 3 months before Pooja and Slok. And on that day Arth tied the knot with Simran, Kanyas cousin.
 
And Eva well she fell for a guy called Jai who worked at her radio station. It turned our that they both liked each other for ages and only figured it out wen Jai got the guts to tell her I Love You to which she replied I Love You Too and they got married a month after Ira&Harry and Arth&Simran.
 
Aditya bhaiya, Siddarth and Ranbir all ran the office together so Astha Reva turned from witches they were to the wives they were supposed to be.
 
Big D well she felt a little lonley after Malikas death but that was soon changed as Astha, Reva, Baby Malika an Pummy kept her occupied. Why is Pummy there well after Malikas death Ranbir really missed having a mother and felt Pummy was a second mother too him so he expanded the house and the Godboles and Nandas lived together.
 
Everyone was happy and the family was complete.
 
The End. Tongue
 
Love is a very special emotion that everyone waits for, craves for but when it hits they don't realise right away like Ranbir and Kanya and many others. But are'nt those the best love stories two people together without realising. KYUN HO GAYA NA! 



Edited by Kiran_1 - 23 October 2008 at 12:25pm

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hey! just read your fanfic! nice work!

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Originally posted by sweetdamage

hey! just read your fanfic! nice work!
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