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tum to janti ho na.. what tomorrow is Shocked

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PART 40 

Note** I actually wrote this part on agust 3rd LOL I hope you enjoy it









Shal, Nish, and timmy all cram into a cab and drive to a store in the middle of nowhere (in Switzerland). It was a small shop that had a few motorcycles displaying in front of it. They slammed the doors and timmy ran out of the car with nish and shal behind him. It was plain inside.. no decorations hanging or anything special. Just plain white walls with that kind of smell as if it was just painted.  As they opend the door bells rang and a guy behind the counter looked up. He had big glasses and short gray hairs. He looked up from his glasses and asked how he could help them.


Note*** this is all in francais but I put in English for u lol



Shal- yes we need one motorcylr pls


Old man- we have ver many which one would you like


Nish- one that can fit all 3 of us


Old man (looking around)- uh



Nish looks down.. timmy waves at the old man


Old- ahh come this way


Timmy have to go to the bathroom so he goes.. 



Shal- this is perfect. Thanks you monsieur Big smile


Nish- I'll get our stuff..


*infront of store*

Nish digs through her back pack to find a chunk of money to pay the old guy while shalu is speeding around in circles with the motorcycle in the background. By this time timmy is back and his ice cream is falling all over the place lol.


Nish- shalu come back here Angry


Shal- wooeeeeeee ooohh yeaaahhhhhhhhhhh *making vroom vroom noises*


Nish wipes timys face with her scarf and picks him up and goes over to shal.


Nish- okay I will drive Angrycant trust sharlene


Timmy- where will I sit


Shalu- on the side na Shocked


Timmy- o don't want to .. Cry


Shal- bien sur come on.. Allez


Timy- I don't waaaaant to.. :Cry


Nish- arrey.. go  Angry

Timmy goes on sidekick side lol and nish messes up his hair and gives kiss on his cheek.


Nish- aww.. so cuteeeeeeeeee Embarrassed


Shalu- I know isn't he so cute (giving hugs)


Timmy- this is enough Angry


Shal hops in the back but-


Shal- Nish I promise I will behave


Nish- you brits. I don trust you shal what if you crash because of some stupid thing you do and we DIE


Shal- nis, its not like ive been drinking or anything


Timy- HAVE you??


Shal- 'no. you can trust me na. come on what you saw back there (doing flips with motorcycle) was nothing.


Nish- ughhhhhhhhhhhhhh Angry (gets off motorcycle)


Timmy (in his cute voice)- what are you doing  Angrywe cant trust her


Shal- oh tim, I don't know why you hate me so much *vroom vroom*


Timmy- mommy Cry


Shalu stops to put on her sunglasses and cover her head with her dupatta (nish does same). They do this so that peter bell wont rcognize them. They all manage to pack up all the crap in a tiny compartment in the motorcycle. Shalu sits in front holding onto the handle bars, nish sits behind her and timmy sits in the little seat thingy attatched to the motorcycle llollolllol. They all have their disguises including timmy who insisted on dressing up as a german boy. Shalu puts a fake mustache to her face.


 Shalu- ready guys.. lets go (driving slowly)


everyone waves slowly to the old guy.. old guy chuckles to himself LOL



nish- man... switzerland kitnaaaaaaaa khoobsurat hai



tim- YOUR switzerland?



nish- yes MY SWITZERLAND AngryAngryAngry



T- Shocked



shal- chill yaar chill.. jus enjoy the ride.. hum sab cool hain Cool



nish- so you promise not to speed at 200 miles per hour and kill us?



shal- yep



timmy- or do any crazy stunt moves



shal- das ist richtig Approve



nish- okay yaar am trusting you---

timmy and nish and shal jerk back fast as shal starts speeding through the highway 100 miles per hour.. ROFL


timmy, nish,.. al screaming ROFLROFLROFL


Edited by *Nishi* - 31 October 2009 at 7:15pm
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just update -.-"
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Originally posted by Girl_2007

just update -.-"
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hahaha,, aww... =P
update soon plz...
btw, hows Shalu wearing a dupatta wid the moustache on?.. XD crazyy
nice update, waitin for the next one.. =D

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whoah i havent updated in so long.. i had to go back 8 pages and unlock this thing LOL

nish,shal, y timmy drive and drive.. all day and all night. passing scenic places lit up by the moonlight. its around 6am when the sun is rising when they decide to take a break..

shal- pheww.. im so tired

nish- me too and i need some food. what about you timmy? oh, you're still sleeping.

shal- nish, lets talk while hes sleeping. its better for him not to hear how much danger we're in. we gotta  stop running like this.. how old are we, 14? this is the time to start living life and enjoying it. especially with all this freedom and unlimited credit card we have.

nish- i know.. what are we gonna do with all that money its driving me insane on the possibilities.

shal- no yaarAngry i meant we have to stop running from people

nish- oh right Shocked yeah what r we gonna do...

shal- yeah so what do we do...

nish- well what and who are we running from?

shal- peter bell... hes gonna kill us for not paying him back

nish- so how are we gonna get rid off him

shal- by killin him off Angry

nish- no no by paying him off Angry

shal- right Shocked no violence

nish- but we cant go in person. we gotta send someone.. he'll get mad just by looking at our faces.

shal- yeah lets send tim

nish- come onnnn yaar.... hes just a child Ouch

shal- we gotta figure out what language he speaks Shocked maybe its dutch that'll be even better we wont have to have a translator

nish- ughhh ur so dumb. thats why we have a note na LOL  we send the note with tim to give to peter

shal- ohhhh right... good plan Wink

nish- good. so we sleep some and then eat, then we plan more. we should be free the day after toorrow at latest.

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