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"The Haunting of Ms. Kripa".Last pt,Epilogue/pg181 (Page 7)

Rimsie. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 October 2008 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
caught up with both parts di
fantastic concept
seems really interesting
angad's entry is mindblowing
when did kripa had a time to recharge her cell?? bloooper lolz
do cont soon when you can

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Posted: 23 October 2008 at 8:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ShelDev

Hey Pallavi;Smile
OMG...finally you updated....I was eagerly waiting for it....thank you..
Great update as usual...
Haila Angad's entry was so good....back to the passionate, hot sexy Angad ..unbuttoned shirt halfway
AK spending the night in the jeep all
Tina's disappearance is freaky trace of that they have her scarf..let's see if that leads them to something...
You have a great way of describing the characters, places, situations Pallavi...I feel like I am actually watching it live infront of me...very nicely written...ClapClap
I love it..
Thank you, Shel! Big smile
Yes, Sexy detective Angad and pretty music teacher Kripa. Embarrassed
They found Tina's scarf. What will they find the next day?
Thanks for the compliments!  Embarrassed
 I visualize the scenes when I write them, its like watching a movie in my mind and then describing it.
sweet_mittal Goldie

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Posted: 23 October 2008 at 10:55pm | IP Logged

hey di u started another ff yay i am so happy

damn its scary part i was like whats going on haha
but it was simply awesome part and angad is cop
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
pallavi25 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 24 October 2008 at 6:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anitamalik

Pallu Di!
That was an awesome part! Your vivid descriptions of the dark, isolated forest had my heart skip a beat as I imagined it all in my head--the leaves scrunching under AK's feet as they walked, the owls hooting and all...It was very well penned down!!! I've told you before Di that you are a very imaginative and talented writer...Everything was in perfect ambiance...
I'm seriously loving the way you are taking this story...
Hmm...Ek hi mulaqat mein AK can't resist looking at each can't wait for the sparks to fly between them!
Awww..Kripa held on to Angad in the forest..LOL...So cuteee! I loved the line he gave after that " Agaar app chahte hain, then you can hold on to me"---I know I would hold on to
WOW, that part where Kripa felt a cold hand touch her gave me like goosebumps...If I was in place of Kripa, I would have fainted..Kripa sure is strong and brave...
Hmm..I wonder what happened to Tina...How did she dissapear and this really all Kripa's imagination? Too many questions you have to answer Di as the story unfolds..
Beautiful Di!  Continue soon! I will be looking forward to your Multistarrer FF when you finish AJT.--Who are the other couple making their appearance in the FF--give us a hint na please? LOL..I will make time to read all your AK fics too!
I hope you continue whenever time permits! Please pray for me as I submitted two of my Uni apps...I hope I get into Baylor U...I need best wishes from everyone! Smile
Thanks Anita! Big smile
Best of Luck for ur University applications! My best wishes are with you.
The multistarrer will have AK, AR, SK and KA.  I will start it when AJT ends.
Thanks a lot for reading and appreciating! Embarrassed
Inspector Angad and Ms. Kripa, pehli nazar mein kaisa jadoo kar diya. Wink
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Posted: 24 October 2008 at 8:30am | IP Logged
why is shimla always involved in a scary story lmaoooo
hhehe i knew itttt...angad is incharge of tinas case!!!!
wooooo ak met!!!!
woo love at first sight:P:P
hahaha hes prolly finkin kripa is insaneeee
but theyr elookin for her together...this will b fun...i hope she gets scared and hugs angad:p
wooo she gt long eyelashes lyk meeee:p
omg they found tinas scarf:O:O:O:O but did she really feel someones fingers/?
ak spending the night in the forest...that wud b cute:P:p
haha gosh im loving the suspense in this ff man...with every part i get mre hooked!!!
MS-meghasharma IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 October 2008 at 11:01am | IP Logged
fab part di
luved angad's entry
and both r together alone in jungle....dats cool
but it was scary...i did felt frightened but m not going to stop readin it.
luved it
pallavi25 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 October 2008 at 1:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet honey

hey....fabbb part....loved angads as always...hmmm both a-k cnt resist admirin eachoder.....omggg the forest part was reli kreepi...surrounded by trees n darknesss ....awwww poor kripa skared walkin ryt nex tu angad.....n angad being cheeky telling her hi dont mynd if she clung to him.....hmmmm tinaz scarf...wnda were da leads to....cont sooon plz
Thanks sweethoney! Embarrassed
Angad-Kripa feel a strange attraction for now. But they will fight more. LOL
Forests are always scary at night.
Originally posted by saridena

hi pallavi di
superb part di
angad and kripa serching for tina
angad at first glance only he is attracted to kripa
update soooooooooooooon
luv soumya
Thanks soumya!
A-K are attracted to each other at 1st sight but Angad is engaged. And Kripa is the case witness. Wink
Lots of clashes and fireworks in store.

Edited by pallavi25 - 25 October 2008 at 1:04am
tanasha1993 Goldie

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Posted: 25 October 2008 at 2:48am | IP Logged
oh my such an awesome part
gave me the chills...and i dont know why i feel kripa saw...not tina but her ghost...its such a intriguing mystery...cant wait to read more
and loved the dialogues shared btw AK...loved it;D
do cont soon pallavi

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