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tanasha1993 Goldie

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Posted: 26 October 2008 at 10:34am | IP Logged
thanks for the long part sameera...enjoyed it;D
and also thanks for the PM;D
loved the fight btw AR,AA, RM
but why is abhi being so mean to sam..just coz hse tied with him
make them frends soon yea
and do cont soon

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nidha1983 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 03 January 2008
Posts: 21049

Posted: 26 October 2008 at 10:36am | IP Logged
waohThumbs Up its really superbStar both the parts r mind blowingSmileWink sameera is very sharpSmileWink i agree with tanvi they hv to behave properly with sameeraSmile and armaan is just impossibleLOLLOLLOL so funnySmileTongue and ridhima is sweet oneSmileWink plz continue it soonSmile and thanks for the pmWink

Teri berukhi ko bhi rutba diya humne,
Pyar ka har farz ada kiya humne,
Mat soch ke hum bhool gaye hain tujhe,
 aaj bhi khuda se pehle tujhe yaad kiya humne.

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sanjana25 Goldie

Joined: 02 October 2008
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Posted: 26 October 2008 at 11:02am | IP Logged
really gud waitin 4 d party wen dey all meet

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sameera_12 IF-Rockerz

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Joined: 12 September 2008
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Posted: 27 October 2008 at 2:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjana25

really gud waitin 4 d party wen dey all meet

hey, i am glad that u liked the part but i wana make 1 thing very clear that they all r going 2 meet but not in the party and there is so much left that u have 2 wait for a little long for the part. sorry for that.

sanjana25 Goldie

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Posted: 27 October 2008 at 7:43am | IP Logged
its ok but how much time wil u take

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sameera_12 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 October 2008 at 8:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjana25

its ok but how much time wil u take

Don't worry, i wont take much time but the fight has just began yaar.
enjoy the fights and belive me interns and hawks meeting is going to be very intrestingSmile

sanjana25 Goldie

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Posted: 28 October 2008 at 11:20am | IP Logged
why so much suspense cant wait any longer

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sameera_12 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 30 October 2008 at 1:02pm | IP Logged

In the morning when the birds started chirping, sameera woke up and saw that all of the others had done the same thing that she did last night. sameera slightly smiled SmileSmile and took a deep breath then she got off from her bed to go and fresh up. First she thought of folding her bed but as she turned she got shockedShockedShocked to see that abhi was also sleeping in the garden.she then slowly walked toward door as she doesnt want anybody to wake up. After a while as sameera got inside the mansion she took a glance of that mess again and started thinking of where to start fromShockedShockedShocked . Then she moved towards the bathroom and saw the water tank that was dirty too.sameera got confused after seeing all the stuff and then something clicked in her mind and she went outside happily........SmileSmile
after an hour as the sun rises others also got up and started folding their beds. then they all sat and started thinking of what to do???????first they were very hungry .
Samrat: yaar !! abb to lagta hai ki nashtaa bhi mirchi se he karna pare gaa aur paani!!!DeadDeadCry
Farhan: paani to kum se kum peeo.Cry
Tanvi: guys!! Hum kya kisi prison mein reh rahe ShockedShockedhain,jo hum mirchi khaa rahe hain aur paani bhi thoda thoda kar ke pee rahe hain?????ShockedShocked
Eisha: to tum he batao ke hum khana aur paani kahan se laaen..????bahar se kuch bhi laana mana hai''ShockedShocked
Abhi: hey!!! Who sameera kahan hai????Question
Farhan: tujhe bari fiqar hai uski....Wink
Samrat: hey!! Not a bad idea , sameera ne kal raat ke soone ka buhat accha intezaam kiya tha and I am sure ke who khane ka bhi kuch intezaam kare gii'SmileSmile'
Abhi: who kuch nahi kare gii aur agar kare gii to who rules ke khilaaf ho jai gaa''AngryAngry
Then every1 saw sameera coming out of the house,wearing a simple pink colour shalwaar kameez and a little kaajal and pink gloss and was looking beautiful..

Abhi was so shocked ShockedShockedto see her like that as he thought that she is a modern girl so she will never wear these kind of clothesSmileSmile'then suddenly he notices something and said:
Abhi: hey!!! Yahan peene keliye paani kam parh raha hai aur tum naha kar aa rahi hoo''AngryAngry
Sameera: so what!Angry!! Tumhe naa nahane  aur paani kum peene ko maine to nahi kaha na !!! Aur bythe way  maine yahan se koi bhi bottle paani peene ya nahaane keliye use nahi ki hai'''''ok!!!!!AngryAngry
Tanvi: waise sameera paani andar to hai nahi aur tanki gandii hai aur hum bahar se kuch la nahi sakte to phir tum '''ShockedShocked
Sameera: paani buhat hai bus tum logon ka dheyaan nahi hai''any ways'mujhe buhat bhook lagi hai ..
Farhan: aur khane ko kuch nahi hai'
Sameera: tum mere saath aao mujhe tum se kaam hai'
They both goes''
Eisha: abb isse farhan se kya kaam haai?????ShockedShocked
Samrat : arre yaar ho ga kuch ..abhi!! chalo hum chal kar mirchi torte hain'
When they both return eating chilliesDeadDead ,they saw every1 eating coconuts,apples..LOL
Abhi : yeh kahan se aaya???AngryAngry
Tanvi: sameera aur farhaan laye hain'
Abhi : bahar sey???AngryAngry
Farhaan: abay gadhe iss ghar ka ek chakkar laga aur dekh..LOLLOLLOL
Every1 goes to take a round and see at the back there was a spring of fresh and cold water. There were different vegetables and fruit trees'LOL
Abhi: ohh!!!Smile
Eisha: what ohh!! Agar tum itni akar nahi dekhate to iss waqt sameera hamari dost hoti aur hum paani ke liye na lar rahe hote'AngryAngryAngry
Samrat: aur haan!! Mirchi bhi nahi khaani parti..AngryAngry
Farhan: aur kum se kum choohon ke beech to nahi sona parta'AngryAngryAngry
Abhi: what!!!Angry Tum log mujhe blame kar rahe ho???Angry
Every1: haan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AngryAngry
Abhi: ok fine , karo uss se friendship.AngryAngry
Every1: who to waise bhi karne waale hain'AngryAngry
Sameera enters and sees them fighting''ShockedShocked
Sam: tum log lar kyun rahe hoo???????????ShockedShocked
Tanvi: who, actually hum tum se maafi maangna chahte hai.. itna rude behave karne keliye'EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Sam: comeon guys!! Is ski koi zarorat nahi hai. Agar mein tum logon ki jagah hoti to shayad aise he react karti'SmileSmile
Eisha: friends'' moving her hand forward for shakingSmile
Sam: friends' and shakes her hand''SmileSmile
Every1 became happy except, mr. khuroos (according to sameera)LOL

On the whole journey AR keep on fightingAngryAngry.when they fainally got off the bus people, actually tokk a deep breath of relief that now alteast they can sleep peacefully'SleepySleepy
On the way from bus station to the mentally welfare foundation,they didn't talk with eachother as they kept on remembering some special moments they spend on the bus'SmileSmile


After the fight they, turn opposite sideAngryAngry and after a while ridz go to sleepSleepySleepy and didn't realize, when her head turned and she came close to armaan and slept, putting her head on his shoulder' armaan got shockedShockedShockedShocked by this sudden action and a nice unknown feeling ran down his heartSmileSmile' he turned and as he saw her sleeping peacefully,he just stared her, her innocence, her beauty'.and after a while he also went to sleep putting his head on hers''Clap
Suddenly after an hour when the bus stroke, he woke up and saw her sleeping stillSleepySleepy' armaan thought for a while and saw people seeing towards them'although he fights with her but also respected her a lot so, he just can't make her Image bad in other people's eyes so he started shouting'
A: Bachaaoooooooooooooooo
R: kya hoa 'tum kyun cheekh rahe hoo?????????ShockedShocked
A: kyunki tum''tum''CryCry
R: mein' mein kya????ShockedShocked
A: tum bakri ki tarah mein mein kyun kar rahi ho???Angry
R: armaaaaaan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tum ' tum'u r dicussting'
Mein tumhe nahi choroon gii'AngryAngry
A:(wispered) mein chahta bhi nahi ke tum mujhe choro'EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
R: blushed' and realized what he just said'SmileSmile
A person in the van' aap ki shaadi hone waali hai kya????ConfusedConfusedConfused
A: shaadi!! Never''''AngryAngry
R: shaadi!AngryAngry Aur isse kabhi nahi' and by the way I am already engaged''
A: shocked''ShockedShockedShocked'WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!! U r engaged ????????Shocked
R: yes!!!!!!!!!
A: ahhh!! Good, but u never told me'Cry
R: I don't think that was necessary'
A:bhagwaan bachhae use'LOL
R: kya!!!!!!AngryAngry!!!! Bhagwaan bacchae use jot um se shaadi kare gii'
A: woh buhat luck hai hai''WinkWink
R: lucky hai matlab???ConfusedConfusedConfused
A: mutlab I am also engaged'Smile
R:OHH!!! By hearding that she felt like her heart was sinking''Cry

Rahul and muskaan on the mandap'
Rahul: kahan phanss gaya'' itni mushqillon se to bacch kar bhaaga tha'AngryAngryAngry
M: kya musibat hai'abb iss se shaadi karni par rahi hai.Angry
R: abb mujhe bhagwaan!! Bachaana..Cry
M:plzz mea iss se jaldi se divorce karwana..AngryAngry
Pandi: Abb app war pal dalye..
M: kabhi nahi' then her cousins holds her hand and enters the maala into rahuls neck'CryCryCry
Now its rahuls time and the same thing was done with him'CryCryCry
Pandit: abb app kaaneya ki maang bharye aur mangalsutr daalye
Rahul: yani apne pair par kulhaari mar loon.Cry
After that their marriage was finished''
Parents: abb tum log jahan jaana chaho jaa sakte ho''SmileSmile
Both: hum ek saath!!!! Jahanum mein jaaye ge''AngryAngry

In the morning when anjali woke up he called abhi .
An: hey bhai !!! kaise ho???
Abhi: lag raha hai ke qeed mein hoon'AngryAngryAngry
An: kyun kya hoa ???ShockedShocked
Abhi: kuch nahi tum aao gii to bataoon gaa.. by the way ridhima kaisi hai'Question
An: armaan ke saath hai theeek  hogi .gusee mein ho gii'Smile
Abhi: kyun???ShockedShocked
Anjie: it's a long story baad mein baton gii.. any ways abb mujhe check up karne ke liye jaane hai so, call u later..
Abhi: bye!Smile
An: bye!!Smile
Atul comes'
Atul: anjali !! chalo hum late ho rahe hai..Smile
An: atul!! ConfusedConfused
Atul: hmmmmmSmile
An: tell me 1 thing , kabhi kabhi tum itna meture aur serious behave karte ho aur kabhi itna bacchpana karte ho'ConfusedConfused
At: life ko enjoy karta hoon!! Jo buhat zaroori hai..
An: that means tum mujhe jaan bujh kar irritate karte ho???Angry
At: arre hum doctors ki life mein waise bhi sub kuch serious hota hai, aise mein thodii musti hona zaroori hai.SmileSmile
An: ur rightSmileSmile
At: to phir chalo abhi serious hone ka waqt aa gaya hai..SmileSmileStar
An: ( he is perfect)' SmileSmile
so, guys this is part 5. hope you'll enjoy reading this. sorry!! guys if u did not find it interesting, actually, my monthly tests r going on so, i didn't get the time to update plzz bear me for that..plzz leave your valueable comments and helpful suggestions.i'll be waiting!!


Edited by sameera_12 - 26 August 2009 at 8:45am

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