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plzzz pm me wen u update part 4 its gr8

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Originally posted by pearlavari12

plzzz pm me wen u update part 4 its gr8

Thanks for commenting. i will surely pm u .



                                                            

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waohThumbs Up its really a nice oneStar superbSmileWink mansion is so sweetSmile so sam is entered in the storyEmbarrassed now its going to be funTongue and intresting oneSmileWink plz continue it soonSmile and thanks for the pmWink

"Pyaar Aise Karna Ki Cheez Parayi Bhi Apni Hojaye,
Saath Aise Nibhana Ki Khushi Hi Khushi Nazar Aye,
Raste Aasan Ho Na Ho Per Bhi Kadam Na Dagmagaye,
Dil Aise Lagana Ki Puri Khudayi Bhi Sir Jukaye,
Judaa Aise Hona Ki Zindigi Bhi Saath Chod Jaye!"

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PART 3B:
At sanjivani. ridz after talking to abhi went inside the changing room leaving her cellphone on the bench outside..............
Armaan entered, and went towards his locker,took out a file and started reading it. in b/w he went towards the bench and sat on ridz mobile.
A: ouchhh!!!!!!!!!OuchOuchOuch whats this.............oh!! dr. ridhima ka cellphone ...ab aye ga maza...Big smile
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after changing ridz went to take rounds in the general ward..
d.k: dr. ridhima sab theek hai???
R: yes dr. kirti aur kuch patients to kal tak discharge bhi ho jaeen geSmileSmile
k: good!!!!!
suddenly ridhima's mobile starts to ring..........
R:Shocked
K: dr. ridhima !!! apna phone utaheeAngryAngry
R: yes mam...........picks up the phone.....
From the mobile: hello dr. ridhima!!!!! maza aa raha hai>>>>>> mujhe bhi buhat maza aa raha hai  ohh!!! zayada deir baat nahi kar sakta mujhe duty par jana hai lekin haan....... enjoy doing rectal exams..... bye............
dr.k: ho gai aap ki baat..Angry ab do din tak rectal exams dene keliye tayyar ho jaeen aur haan ainda agar duty hours mein aap ke pass mobile phone dikha to aap samjivani mein nahi deken geeShocked
R: ss.....sorry dr. kirti..CryCry
k: u better beAngry
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R: ARMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANAngry.
IN THE LOCKER ROOM
ridz enters .....
everyone: kya hoa rizii tum itni udaas kyun lag rahi ho?????
R: kuch nahi bus aise he..
A: tit for tat...Big smile
R: u shutup ok... its not funnyAngryAngryAngry
A: haan yaar its not funny!!!!! its very funnyBig smile
R: i am not going to leave u armaan.
A: first catch me Tongue
R: urghhhhhhhhhh
 ridhima rans after armaanSmile
NEXT DAY:
D.K: Ab aap sab ko ek medical camp kay liye different jaghoon par do haftoon kay liye jana hai.
every one: yes mam.
k: dr.anjali aur dr.atul app log sanjivani orphnage jaen gay.
AN &AT: yes mam
k: dr. rahul aur dr. muskaan ! aap log oldage home gayen gey
RA & M: yes mam..
k: aur dr. ridhima aur dr. armaan app dono mentally or physically retarted children's foundation jayen gay.
AR: yes dr. kirti.
k: ok now move.........
every one goes.....
R: mein tumhare saath nahi jaoon gii
A: mujhe bhi tumhare saath jaane ka koi shauq nahi hai. tum bus se jao aur mein apni car se jaoon gaa.
R: fine!!!!!!!!Angry
A:fine!!!!!!!!Angry
both moves in opposite directions...
well guys, that is part 3b hope you enjoy reading it....plz leave your comments here after reading it as many just read and don't comment.plz guys,your comments mean alot to me.

LOVE,
SAMEERASmile



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awesome parts sameera
and do write more on the interactions btw the 2 grps of ppl yea
and thanks for the pm dear
do cont soon
 
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nice part update soon n wit a long part n plzzz pm me

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PART 4:
As the hawks finished watching the hawks mansion from outside they came towards the door......
sam: this is beautiful !!!!!!!!!!! a place perfect in anyways..... (pics in part 3a)
abhi: so what do u expect???? hawks ke rehne kayliye koi jhopri ho gii???
sam:( why r they all rude towards me i am seeing this from the beginning now....enough i can't tolerate this any more. i belive in tit for tat rule and now i am going to make them learn that what SAMEERA MALLIK is?)SmileSmile
tanvi: so, who has the keys???
sam: i have them
sam opened the door and everybody got inside and wereShocked shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sam: what the hell is this????AngryAngry
abhi: what is this???????AngryAngry
every1 else: OMG!!!!!!!!!!this is not possible...
till evening the hawks has seen the mansion fully and now they were very much worried b/c there were 30 big rooms in the house with attach baths, dining hall, T.V room, kitchen, library, gym were not included in those 30 so, in total the rooms were more than 30. they were not allowed to have ant cheif or maid or servant all the work was to be done by themselves and veer had called them and told them that at the end on their 2nd week in hawks mansion they r going to throw a party in which D.M is also going to come.
The mension was so big and they have to takecare of that from outside to inside all...... now they all understood why they have been given 2 weeks holiday to settle down.
After seeing the mension.........
sam: this is horrible, i am going out for a while otherwise i'll faintDeadDeadDead.................
samrat: now with this hell we also have to adjust with her...UnhappyUnhappy
abhi: no!!!! she had to adjust with usAngry
tanvi: guys!!!!!!! dont u think hum sameera ke saath kuch zayaada he rude ho gai hain...i mean whats her fault if she is selected for hawks and she has a tie in points with abhi definitely she has some special skills with her
eisha: Confused hmmmmmmmmmm i think tanvi is right guys.
farhan: sameera ko choro ab yeh batao ke agay kya karna hai mujhe to is jagah ko dekh kar hee ajeeb sa lag raha hai hum yahan rahen gay kaise??????????
abhi: whatever..dekha jaye gaa
farhan: kya dekha jaye gaa ???? hamari dead bodies????AngryAngryAngry
abhi: shut up and just think its night and we must go to sleep now.......
tanvi: aur hum kahan soye gee????
samrat: yahan lounch mein aur kahan kynki khalii yahin ka paankha sahi salamat hai...
every1: hmmmmmmmmmmmUnhappy
SITUATION INSIDE HAWKS MENSION:
although no doubt the house was beauti full but from inside it was a mess, it was horrible. the mouses, cockroches and lizards were running here and there.only 1 lounch fan was working, no light, nothing, all electricity problem was also to be sort out by them as they were not allowed to call even the electrician. the rooms which they could say r neat and clean as compared to thers were like this



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farhan: mujhe bhhok lagi hai yaar aur nahana to choro kyunki water tank bhi buhat ganda hai usse bhi saaf karna hai .
samrat: guys yeh dekho mujhe bahar se mirchi mili hai abb filhaal yahi khani pare gii...DeadDead
every1 eats chillies except sameera.
sam: mein mirchi nahi khaoon gii.
abhi: to bhooki raho.AngryAngry
sam: FINE!!!!!AngryAngry
tanvi: guys lets go to sleep...
sam: yahan?????????DeadDead
abhi: nahi to kahan??????Angry
sam: mein bahar jaa rahi hoon mein yahan nahi sooun(sleep) gii.
abhi: kisi hotel mein jana rules ke khilaaf hai.
sam: i know AngryAngry
abhi: go to hellAngryAngryAngry
 sam left with anger...........Angry
every1 sleeps
AT MID NIGHT:
farhan: Big smile stop it whos it?????
abhi woke up..
abhi: whats the matter why r u shouting.
farhan: stop tickling me...
abhi sees and starts to laughBig smile
every1 woke up
tanvi: whats the matter????
abhi: see... poing farhan's leg
every1 burst out laughing...Big smile
farhan fainally wakes up starts to shout
farhan: MOUSEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HELP!!
after farhan's session, every1's sleep was gone so they went out for the fresh air and they saw that at the right side of the mansion in the garden sameera had made a swinging bed of a cloth, had tied its bothends with trees and was sleeping peacefully in the fresh air....
abhi: hum wahan garmi mein chohooon(mouse)ke beech so rahe hai aur yeh yahanAngryAngryAngry
tanvi: so what.AngryAngry..she has the prsence of mindAngryAngryAngryand now i am going to do the same u stay here....
at last every1 got to sleep applying the same method and abhi also b/c he had no other way to sleep.
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AR SIDE:
A: so, basket abb van mein jaye gii. GOD mein bachh gaya.
R: that idiot !! mein to us ke saath kabhi marr ke bhi naa jaoon...
as armaan reache the car parking he saw his tyre punchured....
A: oh!!! no!!!!!!!! ab mein kya karoon?????????? ab to lagta hai ke bus se he jaana pare gaa...
armaan calls the bus station and bocks the ticket....
IN THE BUS:
conductor: sir!!! yeh app ki seat hai..
A: thanksSmileSmile
and went there
A: conductorrrrrrrrrrr.....
c: jee sahab ??????
A: mein yahan nahi bethoon gaa....
c: sahab aur koi seat khali nahi hai...agar aap yahan nahi bethay to app ko un kay saath beth na ho ga pointing towards a seat....
armaan sees

A: kya yaar meri kismat he kharab hai , atleast basket un se to betterhai..... mein yahin beth jata hoon
R:Big smilejao naa armaan tumhe un kay saath bethna chahiye
A: hehehe   shutupAngry
R:
meri bhi kya kharab kismat hai mujhe bhi iss ke saath bethna ho ga warna meri seat us kay saath hai aur mein wahan nahi beth sakti..Angry
 on the way few people stopped the bus and got inside. ... those people were robbers.......
robber:jo kuch bhi nikaal de warna iss ladki to maar doon gaa...pointing the gun towards ridhima...
every1 gives their valueable to them except armaan.
robber: o hero tum bhi...
A: pagal samjha hai kya iss ke liye mein apni ghari de doon never waise bhi yeh buhat larti hai le jaoo isse....
R: mein jhagra karti hoon!!!!!AngryAngryAngry hamesha tu start karte hooAngryAngryAngry
A:tum
R:tum
A:tum
R:tum
A:tum
R:
tum
robbers: khamoshhhhhhhhhh warna mein tum dono ko golii mar doon gaa aur iss ladki ka to woh hashar karoon gaa ke maut ke liye tarse gii...
A:kya kahaAngry maut!!!! abhi bata hoon.... ek to derh pasli ka hai upper se  khalli goli dekha kar maut ki dhamki deta hai????Angry
R: kya kaha derh pasli aur kHALLI GOLLI abhi dekhata hoon yeh dekh....Angry
he shoots but nothing happens.....
robber: yeh kaise ho sakta hai????ShockedShockedShocked
A: abhi batata hoon.....
when robber saw armaan's muscles and his angry looks he ordered his mates to return all valueable they have taken and runs away....
R: TUM PAGAL HOO Angry tumhe kisi ki koi parwa nahi pistol mein bullets thiAngryAngryAngry
A: nahi thi
R: thiAngryAngryAngry
A: nahi thi
R:thiAngryAngryAngry
A: tumhe kaise pata ?????? ke thi ya nahi
R: mera bhai ek I.A.F officer hai....
A: oooooSmileSmileSmile anyways u r right pistol mein bullets thi par mein nai nikaal li thi......yeh dekho...
armaan showed ridhima the bullets
R: tum nai itni safaai se kaise nikaal li kya tum bhi un ke group mein shammil the
A:Big smileverry funnyAngry meri bhi behen  ek I.A.F officer hai aur uss ke saath rah kar mujhe bhi thodi buhat tricks to aa hi gai hain....
R: thanks meri jaan bacchanai keliye
A: us ki zaroorat nahi hai aggar woh tumhe uttha kar le jaate to mere saath jhagra kon karta...mein bore ho jata yaarBig smile
R: mein jhagra karti hoon????Angry
A: haan
R: nahi
A: haan
R: nahi
other van passengers : yaar woh log in donow ko utha kar kyun nahi le gayeAngry
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rahul: kitna bura waqt aa gaya hai mera jo mujhe tumhare saath jana par raha hai....AngryAngryAngry
M: oye ...AngryAngry chup reh warna tera jeena mushkil kar doon gii...
R: kar do gii to kya abhi tak nahi kiya hai????Angry  yeh to accha hoa ke us din mein bhagg gaya warna tujh se shaadi karni par jati...AngryAngry
M: tu bhi nahi aaya tha????Shocked
R: tu bhi se kya matlab
M: mein bhi bhaag gai thi..
other people in the busClap
yeh dekho yeh wahi hai na jin ki shaadi mein hum gaye the aur yahi dono nahi aaye the
R: dekh log hamay pehchaan rahe hai, yahan se bhaag le
M: haan oye chalo
suddenly they saw their parents coming in the van muskaan and rahul were shockedShocked
parents: ajj to tum donow ki shaadi kara kar he dum lenge....shaadi se bhaag gai aur yahan par ek saath bethei hooAngry
R&M: mare gayeCry
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ATUL: woh dekho na anjali kitne acche plants hai...
ANJALI: haan atul buhat acche hai tum enjoy karo Stern Smileaur mujhe sone do sukoon seAngry
AT: theek hai anjali tum soo jao ....
AN: oh  god kahan phanss gai...AngryAngry
AT: tum nai kuch kaha anjali????
AN: kuch nahi
AT: ok
conductor: lonavla aa gaya.........
AN: thank god.... jan chooti
AT: mere plants............ ab mein apne lonavla waale plants ko bhi kuch time doon gaa anjali tum mind to nahi karo gii naa????
AN: is se better to AR ki fight jhelna hai.......AngryAngry
and after sometime fainally both of them reached to the orphanage and went to bed.......
                                                                                  
Hey guys, this was part 4 i hope you will like it. plz leave your comments after reading it as they encourages me to write more and more and scilent readers plzz do comments.....
love,
sameera




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hey sameera yaar vryyy nce ff yaar i readed all prts nd it ws superb yaar arridz hate ech othr lke cat nd dog heheheeh intrestng yaar nw cnt wait fr d nxt prt
cont sooooooooon
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