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A journey from engagement to marriage -pg (Page 4)

.:.MONA.:. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 October 2008 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
nice job..............keep it up.........

piya2025. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 19 October 2008 at 1:59am | IP Logged
Nice 1 sweets..
Keep going..
Badtameez_Dil IF-Addictz

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Posted: 19 October 2008 at 2:35am | IP Logged
aishah very beautiful ff
loved the concept & the name u kept for ur ff is very good
intro was faboulous & update was sooooooo beautifully written
will be waiting for next update
plzzz pm me
DivineDreams. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 19 October 2008 at 2:37am | IP Logged
Hey thats not fair Itna  chota part.Loved your parts.Please PM when u update it again.Waiting for it
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Posted: 19 October 2008 at 2:40am | IP Logged
great ff
plz continue soon
can you plz pm me when you update it

Edited by KaSh_4_eva - 19 October 2008 at 2:40am
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Posted: 19 October 2008 at 3:08am | IP Logged
A:  fikar mat karo riddhima main huna yaha .. tumhare saath his arms went around riddhima in a protective manner.
after a little more walking armaan and riddhima come across a farmhouse.
after knocking several times they realise that the farm house is deserted and realise that know one lives there, after a lot of struggling armaan manages to break open the stiff door, and both riddhima and armaan enter the lifeless place
R: errr ! oh god ! yeh jaga kitna ganda hai, main yaha par nahi reh sakti 
A: basket aab hum kissi 5 star hotel mein to hai nahi toh yaha par adjust karlo
R: *riddhima rolls her tounge out at armaan* 
A: tum yaha par ruko main kuch kapre dhoond kar lata hu * mutters to himself yeh basket  bhi na ... pata nahi kis cheez se bani hui hai ... jaha bhi jaati hai aapne nakhre dikhana shuru karde thi hai*
R: kya kaha tumne her * eyes narrowed*
A: kuch nahi meri maa
R: * makes another face*
he enters a room and finds that it is reasonably clean,   and even has a fire  stove  after searching for a while  he manages to find is a white vest for himslef and a red nightgown for riddhima
A: yeh lo riddhima aapne kapre jaldi se change karlo
riddhima looks at the red gown in his hand and hesitates
R: yeh .... umm aur kuch nahi mila kya tumhe
A: aab yaha par kaunsa mall kula hai .. jo dia hai voh chup chap pehen lo
R: nahi me in kapro main teek hu
A: riddhima agar tum kapre nahi pehno gi toh tum bimar par jaugi, agar tum bimar par gayi, toh tumhe pneumonia ho jayega aur agar tumhe pneumonia ho gaya toh Dr shashank  ko yeh lage ga ki tum bimar mere vajese hui ho ... phir voh humari sagaai tod denge ... voh toh vaise bhi chance dhund te rehte hai  
R: * anger*   armaan ... *points her finger at him* tum mere papa ko kuch mat kehna samjhe ... main change kar rahi hu gives * armaan a killer stare and walks past*
armaan laughed to himself .. this was the one topic that riddhima awlays got angry at ... he looked at himself
A: main bhi jaa kar change kar leta hu varna ...pata nahi iss basket ka kya barohsa LOLWinkEvil Smile
A : as armaan  enters the room he sees riddhima with her back towards him drying her hair ... she looked so beautiful in the red gown the straps hung loosely on to her shoudlers, the gown itself was fitted perfectly on to riddhima's body complimenting her figure, she had no makeup on yet she still looked so sensational
riddhima was busy drying her hair while singing some silly tune that armaan had got into her head in the car, she was still half annoyed with him
R : yeh armaan bhi na jab dekho  papa ki piche laga rehta hai ab  iss me papa ki kya galti voh hi to pehle mr supercool banke firta tha itni sare tatoos leke, aur jab dekho ladkiyon ki saath flirt kartha tha AngryWink
as riddhima muttered away to herself she was unobvious to the fact that armaan was so close to her ... as he touched her she stopped what she was doign instantly, and her breath drew in sharpish, armaan slowly turned her hair to the side and started grazing her neck and shoulder with fervent kisses, by this time riddhima's cheeks had turned crimson, she closed her eyes and held onto the cupboard as she felt armaan's kisses turning even more passionate, somehow the more she tried to get away from him the closer he came to her, armaan held on to riddhima's waist tightly and showered her with kisses all over, from her neck to her shoulder, to her cheeks ....
riddhima abruplty moved away from him anf broke the contact his love seemed uncontrollable today and she wasnt sure whether she could trust herself
R: armaan plzz .... .....
she took a step backwards towards the wall, armaan did the same as well, in this way both armaan and riddhima moved towards the wall riddhima hadnt realised this untill she didnt hit her head on it
R: armaan plzzz ......
armaan cornered riddhima and pinned her completely againts the wall, their bodies were totally pressed together now ... his lips were only  inches away from hers, he held he wrist tightly, his grip getting tighter on her every second, somehow he was awakining unknow feelings in her
R: armaan ... ouch !!!
A: riddhima aaj aapne aap ko mat roko .... his other hand was on her waist, he kissed riddhima passionately below the ears, nibbling her lower neck
R: riddhima let out a sudden gasp suprising both herself and armaan
armaan smiled, and bent down aiming for her lips ... even riddhima's lips were slightly parted now, she could feel their bodies still completely pressed againt each other ... armaan bent down even closer ..................................
when suddenly a loud knocking broke them apart, riddhima was completely flabbergasted and started blushing again, even armaan was a little embarassed
A: main jaa kar dekh tha hu kaun hai  * looking direclty at riddhima*
riddhima looked down, not making any eye contact with him ...
R: hmmm  *her hand on her night gown* armaan tried to look for a approving look in her eyes, he didnt intend to make her feel uncomfortable but the knocking got louder ...
A: armaan opens the door
Stranger 1: sorry to disturb you sir  par voh car jo band hogaya tha .. kya voh aap ki hai
A: armaan nodded
Stranger 2 : voh humne dono ne fix karlia ... actually hum mechanics hai
ghar jaa rahi the toh raaste main yeh car milgayi ... dont worry its completely fixed now
A: umm thanks a lot * dissapointed that he and riddhima would have to leave no*
Stranger 1: dont worry about it sir yeh to humari duty thi
suddenly riddhima arrives at the door from behind armaan, armaan turned around and saw that ridd hima was back in her blue churidar
R: car teek hogaya kya
Stranger 1: yes madam aab aap ki car belkul teek hai  riddhima says thanks and the strangers leave
R: chalo armaan ab hum bhi chalte hai .. dekho na baarish bhi ruk gayi
 just as she turns around to leave armaan grips her arm and turns her around so that she is facing him, riddhima looks up to see that armaan's eyes are moist
R: armaan tum
A: now taking her hands into his and kissing them softly ... riddhima agar maine tumhe kisi bhi tarah se uncomfortable mehsus karaya then i'm sorry
R: riddhima started cursing herself inside, she knew this was to happen, she trusted armaan more that herself but lately because of her nervous behaviour he was starting to feel like she didnt trust him, she promised herself not behave like this anymore and become the normal riddhima,
R:  nahi armaan esi koi baat nahi hai ... tum jaante ho na ki main tumhe aapne aap se bhi zyada trust karti hu ... main toh bas ... voh ... she was lost for words ... and looked down indicating that she was shy
A: fikar mat karo riddhima main essa kuch nahi karunga joh tum na chaho
without saying anything she hugged armaan tighly and buried her head into his chest .. armaan didnt say anything and responded back to the hug with full passion. they stayed like this for a few minutes ... armaan and riddhima's relationship was different because it didnt depend on words or actions , they managed to understand what each other's eyes spoke ... this was the beauty of their relationship and what made it so pure.
thats it guys thankyou for all the lovely comments ... really appreciate all the support
tried to write a long part .. hope u'll werent too dissapointed
will include some angie- atul and rahul -muski scenes next time i update 
plzzz feel free to leave any suggestions/ ideas
-luv aishah
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Posted: 19 October 2008 at 3:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by piya2025

Nice 1 sweets..
Keep going..
thanks a lot piya was really waiting for your approval ... thank you soo much sweety ur support was really needed Hug
and thankyou everyone else who has replied and liked my ff so far EmbarrassedHug
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