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[DMG] Pyaar Mill Gayya..*Finished* Pg.25! (Page 7)

Sonii_Babii Goldie

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Posted: 27 October 2008 at 11:44am | IP Logged

Next Day...Basketball court

Armaan was playing basketball on his own in the court, thinking of the few days he's going to spend with Ridhima in Chandigarh. He scores and decides to ring Ridhima when his fone rings. It was Ridhima.


A: hey beautiful, main abhi tumhare baare main soch raha tha.

R: acha? Who kyun?

A: well, hum mil rahe na aaj?

R: haan, pehle Sanjeevani jaana hai, Dr.Keerti ne kaha hain.

A: ok, main tumhe Sanjeevani main milta hoon.

R: ok bye…


Armaan disconnects the phone and leaves the court…


Sanjeevani…Nurse Station*


Armaan is standing at the nurse station with Sister Lovely…

A: Erm, Sister Lovely

L: haan ji Dr.Armaan?

A: mujhe Chaya ki case file chahiye

L: Chaya kaun?

A: Dr.Shashank ki patient Chaya

L: Oh! Haan main abhi deti hoon, ek minute ji.


Sister lovely gets up to search for the file. Armaan looks at his watch, it was 8:56am.

L: yeh leejiye Dr.Armaan

A: thankyou.


Armaan is looking through the file when he notices Sister lovely was looking abit upset.

A: Sister Lovely (he whispers)

Sister lovely doesn't hear him, so he repeats himself again but still wasn't heard. This time he says it louder and she looks up at him with embrassement.

L: jee Dr.Armaan

A: kya hua?

L: oh ji kuch nahi

A: kuch to hain, bataye kya baat hai?

L: acturally nah Dr.Armaan main ek problem main hoon.

A: kya?

L: dekhiye na Dr.Rahul ki shaadi hogi

A: yah, who Muskaan ke saath bohat khush hain

L: (pulling a face) haan main jaanti hoon aur Dr.Atul toh hamesha Dr.Anjali ke saath hote hain…bachte hain toh sirf (shyly) sirf aap aur Dr.Shubankar

A: KYA???(Shocked :O )

L: haan ab Dr.Shubankar toh senior hain, lekin aap (grabbing Armaan's hand)

A: Sister lovely (moving his hand away) well ive got to go now…(he quickly makes a move, and leaves)

Locker Room*

Anjali, Atul, Sunaina and Muskaan are sitting on the bench talking when Armaan enters.

A: Hey guys, kaisa chal raha hain sab kuch?

An: great! Tum kab nikal rahe ho?

Su: kyun? Kahi jaa rahe ho?

A: yeh

Su: abhi toh tum wapas aaye ho, kitna kam time spend karte ho apne doste ke saath! [L]

Waise jaa kaha rahe ho?


Ridhima comes out of the changing room..

A: main aur Ridhima

M: kya! Setting hogi? Honeymoon pe jaa rahe hoon..(she laughs reli weirdly, as usual)

A: kya?

R: Muskaan, tum bhi nah, hum dono chandigarh jaa rahe hain, papa ke liye.

M: oh (laughs) sorry ha..

A: its ok..wese Saahil aur Rahul kaha hai?


Rahul and Saahil walk in the locker room..

Ra: hey Armaan, all set?

A: yeh..


Armaan walks over to Ridhima…

A: chale?

R: yep, all ready…chalo.


Armaan & Ridhima say goodbye to everyone and leave.

Armaan's Car**


Armaan keeps staring at Ridhima whilst driving…

R: tum mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho?

A: eh vay..

R: eh vay? (she laughs)

A: acha Ridhima, suno

R: hmm

A: thora phaas ao na, tumhe sunai nahi dehga

R: acha! Kyun? Main behri hoon?

A: kya pata? But neway tum bohat achi lag rahi ho..(Ridhima smiles at his compliment)


After a few mintues Armaan stops the car and moves closer to Ridhima…

R: kya hua Armaan? (breathing heavily)

A: I dono, aaj tumpe bohat pyaar ah raha hain..

R: (pushing him away) Armaan! Chalo!


15minutes later…

Armaan looks  and smiles at Ridhima who was sound asleep. She looked so beautiful whilst she was asleep… After about half an hour they reached Chandigarh, Armaan got out the car and opened the front passenger seat. He was going to wake Ridhima up when she opened her eyes and smiled at him.

A: hi umm, main tumhe jagaane hi wala tha

R: hum ponch gaye?

A: yeh, main samaan nikal tha hoon, tum chalo.


*Night Time*


Ridz decided to go to Armaan's room as she was bored on her own. She went out and knocked on Armaan's door…No answer, she knocked again, again no answer. Ridhima gently opened the door and walked in, she saw the bathroom door was closed and thought Armaan was probably in there. A minute later, the bathroom door opened, it was Armaan wearing nothing but just a pair of boxers.

R: Armaan!! Arghh! Yeh Tum!! (She screamed)


Armaan who didn't notice Ridhima was standing there before quickly rushed back into the bathroom. Armaan felt a bit embrassed and got changed into his black 3 quarter combats and a black top. He came out and found Ridhima standing on the terrace with her back to him. He slowly and quietly crept up to her and hugged her from the back.

A: Hi!

R: (turned to look at him) Armaan!

A: tumne khaana kaya?

R: haan aur tumne?

A: yeh


They talked till 3:00 In the morning

*!Next Day!*





Rahul and Muskaan were sitting, talking


M: Rahul, kal raat main soh nahin payi

Ra: Kyun? (holding her hand)

M: Actuli, mujhe bura lag raha tha

(Rahul lowered his eyebrows)

Ra: Kis bare mein?

M: Maine tume kabhi thanks nahin kaha na, Isi liye (she lowered her eyes with shame)

Ra: Thanks? Ye tu kya keh ree hain?

M: Chup. Mujhe bolne deh.


Rahul shut up and listened to Muskaan.


M: Rahul, maine jab se Sanjeevani join kiya hain, maine tujse hamesha nafrat ki, tujhe maara, ghusa hui, Aur tu, tu toh mera hero banke meri madat hamesha ki.

Rahul smiled and looked down

M: Rahul ham kab dost bane mujhe pata hi nahin chala.Tujhe mujhse pyaar hua, aur tumne kabhi nahi kaha. Tuje pata hain main tujpe roz ghussa kyon hoti hoon, woh is liye kyunki tu mujhe irritate nahi, mujhe bohat bohat acha lagta hain aur mujhe ghussa hona acha lagta hain. Mujhe jab ek dost ki zaroorat pari, tune hamesha mera saath diya. Meri shaadi, uss chinto se ho  jaati lekin tu ne kaha ke main tujse shaadi kar loo. I really love you! Tu meri zindagi hain. So in the end…Thank Yuu! Thank yuu so much!


Rahul looked up at Muskaan who was in tears. He held Muskaan's hand and kissed it.

Ra: I love you too Muskaan, aur tujhe thankyou bolne ki koi zaroorat nahi hain, maine wohi kiya jo mujhe theek laga okay… ab tu jaa moo dohle.itne itner bareh ansoon se tera sara make-up spoil hogaya..(he laughs)


Muskaan hits his arm and gets up and leaves.


That's it! Hope yuu liked it! Sorry cudnt upd8 yday, had guests over! As I promised I would update 2parts, so I did! Thankyew too all those friends who commented! Thankyew!

Do comment/crtisize

SoniiNee xx


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cutie_mahima IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 October 2008 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
yayyyy i'm the first one to comment! lol.......ur parts were very nice and cute!! plz update soon!! and HAPPY DIWALI!! Smile
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Posted: 27 October 2008 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
that was awsoooooooooooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do coninue sooon n plezz pm me wen u continue only if u don't mind k
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Posted: 27 October 2008 at 7:08pm | IP Logged
hey amezing ff.....keep it up.....and wanted to say that love ur banner on the first page.....keep itup.....
yachna IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 October 2008 at 4:39am | IP Logged
hey it ws suprb wowwwwwwwwwwww arridz finlly spnd sm time togthr..........lvd it nd lst1 sooooooooooooooooooooolong.......................fantastic sooooooo confusd shashank snd thm grt how cute nd ar naughty tlks in car sweeeeeeeeet.......
cont sooooooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna
Sonii_Babii Goldie

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Posted: 28 October 2008 at 5:54am | IP Logged
@ dmgluver01: Hey! Congrats! Lol 1st one 2 comment hehe
@ Mona: thanks!!
@ sarazahid: hey no prblem iv upd8d my PM Requests on pg1 & ur name is on der nw!

Lastly, i hope you all have a very warm, bright & blessed Diwali!!!
God Bless!
Love SoniiNee xxx
Sonii_Babii Goldie

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Posted: 30 October 2008 at 5:05am | IP Logged
try upd8n 2day...
yachna IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 30 October 2008 at 5:06am | IP Logged
plzzzzzz update waitng.......

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