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[DMG] Pyaar Mill Gayya..*Finished* Pg.25! (Page 4)

Sonii_Babii Goldie

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Posted: 23 October 2008 at 10:33am | IP Logged
am updating 2mrw!

saridena Goldie

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Posted: 23 October 2008 at 10:52am | IP Logged
it was soooooooooooooooooo cute
padma agreed obvious
shanky is left ha
AR comments were so cute and sweet
update soooooooooooooooooooon
luv soumya
P.S. no pm (crying)
Sonii_Babii Goldie

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Posted: 24 October 2008 at 10:16am | IP Logged

Next Day..

Ridz is jogging and reaches the basketball court & saw him… She ran and hugged him..

R: thank god Armaan, tum wapas aa gaye!

A: I know (smiles) its good to be back

R: tumhe pata hai, main tumhe bohat miss kar rahi thi..

Armaan smiles & kisses her forehead..

A: I think uss fone call ke baadh ive got no doubts..(laughs)

R: Armaan, mama ko kya bata kar manaya?

A: maine? Unhe khud sachai ka pata chal gaya ke main ek perfect damaadh banooga and ek perfect husband..(he held ridz' hands & put his head against hers)

R: damaadh ka to pata nahi…lekin ek perfect husband zaroor banoge….(Armaan smiles).. umm Armaan…

A: kya? (stroking her hair)

R: Papa.

A: Papa?? Kaha?? (Armaan quickly lets go of Ridz and turns to look for his Strict father-in-law to be)

R: Armaan..(she laughs)…Main kehne wali thi ke Papa ko kaise manaiyge??(laughs again)

A: ohhh! (he holds ridz by her waist & pulls her towards him..) don't worry basket, my charm works on everyone..

Ridz pulled a face

R: yeh rite, agar tumhara charms works on everyone to pehle dad ko batana tha na? hmm, bolo bolo, tell tell..

Ridz started laughing..

A: Okay, da wasn't fair..(he smiles)…but Ridhima…tumpe toh challa hain, hain na?

Ridhima kissed his forehead

R: yes, acha ab main chalti hoon, mom wait kar rahi hogi..

A: ok bye..


Gupta House..

Ridhima ran back home, she opened the door and found her mom and dad talking…She heard her dad saying Armaan's name and pulled a big smile..

R: hi mom, hi papa

P: hi beta

Sha: hey Ridhima beteh, jogging kaisi rahi?

Ridhima laughed remembering when Armaan thought her dad was standing nearby. Shashank and Padma looked at her confusingly…

R: Umm, theek thi

P: Acha jaldi karo, Anjali kab ka wait kar rahi hai..

R: okay..

Ridz went to her room and saw Anjali sitting on her bed, still in her night suit with her head down. Ridhima walked to Anjali and put her head on her shoulder..

R: Di (no reaction 4rm Anjali)

Ridz shook Anjali, and Angie lifted her head to look at her..

An: kya hai ridz? Kya kar rahi ho? Soone doh nah..

R: sooch lo Di, maa se daant kahne ka shauk hai tho tum soo sakti ho..

Anjali quickly stood up..Ridhima laughed and went over to her wardrobe.. After a minute or two she decided to wear her black suit (the type she wore in 'gore gore se chore')


Sanjeevani..*Locker Room*

Saahil, Sunaina & Armaan were sitting on the bench talking!

Sa: So Armaan, kaisa raha tumhare lonavla ka trip?

A: it was ok

Su: okay kyun? I heard it's a nice place, very romantic?

A: it is, lekin Ridhima toh yahaan thin a toh main wahaan bore ho raha tha..

Sa: I understand, I was away from Sunaina for about a year..

A: kyun?

Su: Mujhe America ke ek medical college main admission mili thi..

A: oh..

Sa: but Sunaina summer ki chutiyon main mujhse milne aati thi..

As their conversation finished, Muskaan & Rahul walked in..

M: Rahul tu…Jahanam main jaa! (very, very, very angrily :@)

Armaan, Saahil & Sunaina looked at them & laughed!

A: kya hua Muskaan, bechare Rahool pe itna ghuss kyun ho rahi hai?

M: pata hain, issne mujhe kitchen main ghera diya! Agar muhje uttah nahi sakta toh phir uttah tha kyun hai!!

A: tut tut! Rahul das very rong! (he laughs)

Ra: is mein meri kya galti hai? Kah kah ke itni moti ho gayi hai!

M: main moti! Moti hogi meri patyala ki jhotee!

"Dr.Rahul, Dr.Muskaan General Ward mein report kare"

As they left, Ridhima, Atul and Anjali walked in.

An: What happened?

A: don't ask! (laughs)

Su: hi Ridhima

R: hi..Hi Armaan (she walks over to him)

A: hi, pata hain kabse tumhare wait kar raha hoon, tum itni der kyun laga thi ho?

R: Di ka wait kar rahi thi..

A: Rite, Angie tum bhi na..(he smiles)

An: sorry yaa, lekin is main meri koi galti nahi hai, sumbha mujhse uta nahi jaata!

They all start laughing…

"Sabi Interns Dr.Shashank ke cabin main report kare"

An: Dad ke cabin main?

A: Sasur-ji ke cabin main?

R: Lets go guys..

They all leave the locker room to go to Dr.Shashank's cabin…

Okay Guys, That's it! Thankyooh for the lovely comments! Hope you like the part!

Do Comment/Crtisize!



Sha: Dr.Armaan aap…


R: Lekin papa…

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yachna IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 October 2008 at 10:57am | IP Logged
hey wowwwwwwwwwwww dil khush kar ditta lekin fir atka diya nt fir yaart um sare writrs samaj nahi ata itna  kyu latkate ho bhut maza ata hai na intezaar karwake vryyyyy bad or hum bchare readrs soch soch ke hi bas god jst kiddng aaj pata nahi muje kya ho gaya hai to dnt mind ha abt prt superb lvd it specially whn armaan got scard nd ridz laughng nd muski gussa ufffffffff gira diya nd nw shanky ne interns ko bulwaya or wahi atka diya or ab jaldi jldi cont karna wth long prt kkkkkkkkk
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna
cutie_mahima IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 October 2008 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
heyy.......very nice part!! please update soon!! and can u pm me wen u update plz?
zhasan2 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 October 2008 at 4:02pm | IP Logged
yay! thanks for continuing! and great part!! wonder why they've all been called 2 shashank's cabin..plz cont. soon!
Neha.K. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 October 2008 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
keep it up
pls cotinue soon n pls ^pm meSmile
Craze_naina Senior Member

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Posted: 24 October 2008 at 6:39pm | IP Logged
wow....ur ff is too good!!!
I really luv it......
I hope dr shashank didn't get mad at armaan....
plzzz pm me when u update it......thx

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