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[DMG] Pyaar Mill Gayya..*Finished* Pg.25! (Page 2)

cool_pisces IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 October 2008 at 12:39pm | IP Logged

Hey                                                                                                                 Just read all ur parts, when r u updating next?

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hi srry cdnt upd8 2dy.. defo 2mzz
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plzzz update soon....
pm me when u do update....waiting eaerly for next part
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hey plzzzzzzzz update sooooooooooon yaar tdy is ur tom jaldi se update karo
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upd8n in bwt hour..
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wowwwwwwww eagrly waitng yaar sooooooooon
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update fast yaar waiting for the part
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Posted: 21 October 2008 at 12:14pm | IP Logged

Hey thanks for the comment guys…here's the update.


Two Days later….Gupta House


Ridhima just freshened up and was getting ready to go bed, Anjali was sitting on her bed reading a patients file. Ridz picked her fone up to check if Armaan had text her or called her. Disappointingly, she put the fone back…Anjali looked at her and smiled.

An: kya hua ridz? Why u upset?

R: who Armaan, abhi tak no fone call aur no txt.

An: dnt wrry, busy hoga warna you know Armaan, raat mein doh theen baar toh atleast fone karta hain.

R: yeh…I guess so

An: pata hain ridzy, main bohat khush hoon ke Armaan tumhare mr.right hain. Armaan's a reli nice guy, who tumhain bohat khush rakhe ga..he takes such good care of you..tumne mom ko bataya?

R: abhi tak nahin…mujhe nahi pata main kaise…


Ridhima paused as she saw her mom standing by the door


An: Kaise? Kaise kya matlab? That's easy, mom Armaan ko bohat pasand karti hain aur waise bhi tum dono ek dusere se pyaar karte ho, that's good, rite?


Anjali finishes what she had to say and looks up at Ridhima; who was looking at the door and pulling a face, she turned around and saw Padma standing there. She gulped and made a 'Sorry' face towards Ridhima. Padma walked into the room and sat beside Anjali.


P: Ridhima

R: Jee mom…maa who acturli main aur Di..

P: mujhe pata hain


Ridzy's fone rings..She quickly picked it up and saw it was Armaan..

Ridhima thinking: Oh no! Armaan ko bhi abhi fone karna tha!


P: kya hua Ridhima?

R: kuch nahi..(laughs) kuch bhi to nahi, oh who private no. tha

P: oh, Armaan ne kiya tha?

R: jee? (confused)


Padma started laughing and sat next to Ridhima, she hugged her and kissed her forehead..

Ridz was confused but she just smiled pretending she knew what her mom was on about.


P: main bohat khush hoon Ridhima

R: kyun maa?

P: tum aur Armaan ek dusare se pyaar karte ho, muhje pata tha, kuch to tum dono ke beech.


Ridz was shocked to hear this but happy too. She hugged Padma and kissed her cheek.

R: thankyew maa! (very, very happily)


Anjali & Padma smiled to see Ridhima soo happy.

An: lekin mom, ek problem hai

P: kya?

R: maa..papa Armaan ko pasand nahi karte..

P: ye kisne kaha tumse?

An: who hospital main har problem ka blame Armaan par jaata hain na isi liye.

P: haan lekin profession ka personal se kohi talak nahi hain, tum dono chinta mat karo..tumhare papa ko main samjhao gi, ok?


Anjali smiled, she was so happy for Ridz.

R: thankyou maa..(hugging Padma)

P: acha ab tum dono soh jao, kal hospital jaan hain..


Padma kissed her daughters and said goodnight and left the room.


*Half an Hour Later…

Ridhima was trying really hard to go to sleep but she couldn't. She was missing Armaan, she badly wanted him here so she could scream and say 'I love you' to him… Ridz saw her phone & thought of ringing him, she picked it up and went out on the terrace.

She dialed the number and waited till Armaan answered.


Armaan was asleep but woke up as he it was Ridhima's call.


A: hello..(half asleep)

R: hey Armaan (talking with lots of excitement) kaise ho? Lonavla kaise hai? Mujhe miss kar rahe ho? Main toh tumhain bohat miss kar rahi hoon! Seriously!


She took a deep breath and laughed…Armaan on the other hand was surprised as he had never heard Ridhima talk like that before.

A: lagta hain aaj kal Sanjeevani main bohat kaam hai.

R: nahi toh? Kyun? Main to bilkul thakee nahi hoon, who acturally kya hua na Armaan, main tumhe bohat miss kar rahi thi to maine soch tumhe fone kar loo, tumhe disturb kiya main kya? Aww am sooo sorry who

A: Ridhima, Chill..

R: huh?

A: huh kya? Ek hi speed main baat kar rahi ho kuch samaj nahi aa raha, tum theek to hona?

R: haan (she laughs) Acha Armaan

A: hmmm

R: sorry

A: kis liye?

R: tumhe jaagane ke liye

A: its ok basket =) Suno

R: kya?

A: main parsoo wapas aa raha hoon


A: haan

R: yay!

A: pata hai basket, lagta hai tumne mujhe bohat miss kya na is baar?

R: haan, bohat..Armaan tumne pata hai…maa ko sab pata chal gaya

A: haan kyun?

R: kya! Tumhe kaise pata?

A: madam, aap ki maa ko humne bataya tha, jaane se pehle..

R: acha, toh main poonch sakti kyun pataya aap ne?

A: nope, aap nahi poonch sakti (he laughs)

R: Armaan!!

A: waise tum khush to hona?

R: bohat! Acha ab soona jaa rahi hoon, kal hospital jaana haina aur agar late soyi tho subah mujhse uttah nahi jayega..Goodnight

A: Goodnight…love you

R: love you too, bye

A: bye.


Okay Guys, that's it…I know it was quite short but ill write more next time..Sorry for the late update…Promise next 1 will be sooner..Do Comment! xxx

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