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pickytg
pickytg @pickytg Goldie
Anniversary 16 Group Promotion 3 Commentator 1
Posted: 15 years ago
niceee!!!

grt goin...!! i mite nt comment every time..usually read it in skool..bt i read it neway so keep ritin!! :D
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nidha1983
Nidha @nidha1983 IF-Sizzlerz
Anniversary 16 Group Promotion 6 + 5
Posted: 15 years ago
waoh👍🏼 really an nice one⭐️ shasnak is impossible😡 but armaan so cute😊😊 he is in dream of ridhima😉😆😆 so sweet😊😉 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"Jab hume unse mohhabat hui tab,
Unhe hamari mohhobat par shak tha,
Jab unhe ehsas hua hamari mohhobat ka tab tak,
Hum par kisi aur ka huk tha...!"


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Wild.Aimee
Aimee @Wild.Aimee Goldie
Anniversary 15 Group Promotion 3 + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Sana Dear 😊
You know what Sana, the first scene between Shashank and Padma was very well put. I mean the conversational part was very realistic, coz i have seen people using the same words when they get into disputive mode, even though they dont actually mean it. Very good.
I loved the scene between Armaan and Arnav. Oh so Armaan was dreaming about Riddhima and took his brother as her...😆 Wow. Great. But whats this, it was such a small part.
Anyways update soon sweety.
 
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saridena
soumya @saridena Goldie Inactive
Anniversary 17 Group Promotion 3
Posted: 15 years ago

hi sana😊

thks for the pm dear

nice parts (3,4)

i was so tensed that shanky will behave

omg he told padma to leave😲

😆hehehehehe armi is drearming of ridz and hugging his brother

update soooooooooooooooooooooon
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cool_pisces
Mini @cool_pisces IF-Dazzler Inactive
Anniversary 15 Group Promotion 4 + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Sana
This part was really sweet, wonder whts wrong with Shashank
Armaan's interaction with his brother was really funny
Thanks for the PM
Mini
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sana20n
Sana @sana20n IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 16 Group Promotion 5
Posted: 15 years ago
hey guys, part 5 is up... im sori bt i wnt b able 2 PM u guys 2day but wil try 2mrw... and also i have a lot of work piled up from uni so wnt b able 2 update, bt mayb nxt week... sori luv sana
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Iqbal Neha1
Samina @Iqbal Neha1 IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 18 Group Promotion 4 Networker 2
Posted: 15 years ago
part 5 was really funny
i really liked the way u showed how shubhankar and the boys were scared of keerti.
cant wait 2 read wat kirti does to them
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Robin_M
Robin @Robin_M IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 17 Group Promotion 5 Networker 1
Posted: 15 years ago
nice part, like how they are all scared of kirti!
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bary
swetha @bary IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 15 Group Promotion 5 + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
so nice part is really enjoyable and thanks for pm
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