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HUMTUM (a RagVir story)..FF..Pts 31,32..Uptd..Pg56 (Page 6)

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Amazing part dear...!!! Clap Very well written...!!! Waiting for the next part and you update quickly that's too good...!!! Big smileBig smileBig smile
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next part will be updated soon in couple of hours.Smile
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wOww really outstanding.. gud gud LOL

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Part 8



Jab sab Sadhna ko muskurati nazron se dekh rahe the voh mare sharm ke paani paani ho rahi thi'.magar uska dil chehek raha tha ke Alekhji inn choti choti baton ko bhi gaur karte hai.

 

Phir usne baat badalte hue Ragini se kaha''arre jiji'.aapko kahi deir toh nahi ho gayi ??'

 

Sadhna ke kehne per Ragini bhi chamak gayi'.usne ghadi dekhi toh pata chala ke sach mein bahut deir ho gayi'.voh agar abhi nikal gayi toh shayad utni deir na ho'.usne jaldi se kaha'.'arre haan Sadhna'..deir toh ho gayi hai'.main abhi nikal jaati hoon'.tumse baad mein phone per baat karloongi.'

 

Sadhna ne sar hila diya'.aur waha se Ranvir bhi Ragini ke peeche peeche jaane laga toh Sadhna ne poocha'.'oh ho Ranvirji'.ab aap kaha jaa rahe ho?'

 

Ranvir ne kaha''bhabhi main aapki jiji ko dance class drop karne jaa raha hoon.'

 

Ragini palti aur kaha'.'nahi nahi Ranvirji'.aap toh sach mein aa rahe hai'..please takleef na karein'.main chali jaongi.'

 

Ranvir ne sar hilate hue kaha'.'aap phir se shuru ho gayi'..takleef ki kya baat hai'..aur waise bhi hum wada karke todne walon mein se nahi hai''''.phir usne Ragini ko gaur se dekha aur bol pada'..'bahut log toh waada karte hai aur pura na kar pane per sorry kehte rehte hai.'

 

Ranvir ki kahi yeh baat waha khade sab logon per asar kar gayi.

 

Sadhna aur Alekh soncha rahe the ke'..'Ranvirji jiski baat kar rahe hai'.voh unke saamne khadi hai per dono ko pata nahi hai'..ab toh koi chamatkaar ki hi khwahish hai.'

 

Ragini ko pata nahi kyu achanak aisa laga jaise Anmol bol rahe hai'..usne palat kar Ranvir ko gaur se dekha'.kuch deir bol hi nahi paayi'..bas sonchne lagi ke Ranvirji ki baatein kabhi kabhi Anmol ki yaad dilate hai'.Anmol ke zikr per Ragini ke honton per ek sharmili si smile aa gayi jo voh sabse chupa rahi thi.

 

Yaha Ranvir khud ki kahi baat per hairaan bhi tha'itmenaan bhi''itmenaan isliye..kyunki usne apni dil ki baat kehdi'hairaan isliye kyunki voh nahi chahta tha ke Ragini ko iss tarah pata chale ke Ranvir hi Anmol hai.

 

Usne baat ko sambhalte hue kaha'.'mere saare doston ke saath mujhe yehi ek problem hai.'

 

Sab ek dusre ko dekh kar muskura rahe the'.toh achanak Ranvir Ragini ki ore dekh kar kehne laga''chaliye Raginiji warna aisa na ho ke mein aapko dance class chodne jaa raha hoon magar kahi aapko ghar tak na chod aao.'

 

Iss baat per Ragini ko hassi aa gayi'.usse hasta dekh Ranvir bhi smile karne laga.

 

Raaste mein Ranvir gaadi chalane mein gum tha'.aur Ragini kuch sonch rahi thi'.aur baar baar Ranvir ki taraf dekhe jaa rahi thi'..toh achanak Ranvir ne kaha'.'keh bhi di jiye Raginiji'kya kehna chahti hai aap.'

 

Ragini hairaan ho gayi''aapko kaise pata chala ke main kuch kehna chahti hoon?'

 

Ranvir ne palat kar kaha'.'aap mujhe ek saath dekhe jo jaa rahi thi.'

 

Ragini thoda embarrass ho gayi'phir usne kaha'.'lekin aap toh meri taraf nahi dekh rahe the'.toh phir'.??'

 

Ragini kuch keh paati use pehle Ranvir uski taraf palta aur kaha''kya karein dil se dil ki raah hoti hai kabhi kabhi'..jo aap keh nahi paate'voh saamne wala khud hi jaan jaata hai.'

 

Ragini ko phir aisa laga jaise Anmol ne kuch kaha ho'.usse baar baar Ranvir ki baatein anmol ki yaad dila rahi thi'..voh sonch mein thi toh Ranvir use dekh dekh kar car chala raha tha'..phir usne jaana ke Ragini yehi sonch rahi hogi ke Anmol aur Ranvir ki baatein kitni milti hai.

 

Sab jaante hue voh muskuraya aur kaha'''kya kehna chahti thi aap ??'

 

Ragini ne soncha phir halke se kaha''kehna nahi'.kuch poochna chahti thi''agar aap bura na mano toh.'

 

Ranvir ne hassi se kaha'.'aapki koi baat per main bura nahi manta'..poochiye.'

 

Ragini ne badi hichkichahat ke saath poocha'.'kya aap kisiko chahte hai??'

 

Ranvir achanak aaye iss sawal per thoda chamka aur dheere se Ragini ki taraf palta aur kaha'.'chahta toh hoon.'

 

Ab Ranvir ek took Ragini ko dekhe jaa raha tha'.aur Ragini mare embarrassment ke yehi sonche jaa rahi thi ke maine poocha kyu'.Ranvirji kisiko bhi chahe'.voh unka mamla hai'.main kyu pooch rahi hoon.

 

Phir ranvir ne dheere se kaha'.'chahta toh hoon'..per aisa lagta hai usko abhi tak mera pyar samajh nahi aaya'.toh abhi bhi baat ek tarfa hi hai.'

 

Ragini ne jab nazre uthayi toh Ranvir use hi dekhe jaa raha tha'..Ragini uncomfortable ho rahi thi'.toh uski bechaini ko aur badhaate hue Ranvir ne poocha'.'kya aap kisiko chahti hai??'

 

Ragini ke hosh udd gaye'.voh kuch keh nahi paa rahi thi'.ab iss moment per usko khud per itna gussa aa raha tha ke kabhi kisi per nahi aaya hoga.

 



Edited by starz4me - 07 October 2008 at 2:29pm

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that was great....but pls let ragini find out already.....
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Posted: 07 October 2008 at 5:44pm | IP Logged
nice story...
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Ragini ne jab nazre uthayi toh Ranvir use hi dekhe jaa raha tha'..Ragini uncomfortable ho rahi thi'.toh uski bechaini ko aur badhaate hue Ranvir ne poocha'.'kya aap kisiko chahti hai??'

 

Ragini ke hosh udd gaye'.voh kuch keh nahi paa rahi thi'.ab iss moment per usko khud per itna gussa aa raha tha ke kabhi kisi per nahi aaya hoga.

     You left it at a cliff hanger. Please update soon, wanna know how ragini reacts. Loving ranveer teasing ragini and ragini being all flustered.LOLClap
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Posted: 08 October 2008 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Lovely part yet again finally read it the first thing i have done comng online today is read ur ff its totally rocking yaar cant wait for the next part!!

Luv,

Shagun

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