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HUMTUM (a RagVir story)..FF..Pts 31,32..Uptd..Pg56 (Page 5)

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Part 7




Ranvir bada smile kiye jaa raha tha ke use Ragini ko dance class tak chodne ka mouqa mil gaya...... tabhi Ragini ne poocha....."kya baat hai Ranvirji....aap bahut khush lag rahe hai aaj."

 

Ranvir ne Ragini ko dekha toh uski chechre ki smile aur wide ho gayi....phir halki hassi se Ranvir ne kaha...."khushi ki wajah hi mujhse khushi ka sabab pooch rahi hai."

 

Ragini ko kuch samajh nahi aaya'..usne kaha''hmm  ???'

 

Ranvir ne sar hilate hue kaha'.'mera matlab hai ke khushiya mouqa dekh kar nahi aati'.hamein mouqa dekh kar khushiyon ko sametna chahiye.'

 

Ranvir ne Ragini ko gaur se dekha aur soncha ke shayad usko meri golmol baatein samajh hi nahi aa rahi hongi'.toh usne achanak kaha'.'chaliye bhabhi ke room mein chalte hai'.bhabhi wahi aa jayengi'..aur aap Alekh bhaiyya se bhi mil lengi.'

 

Ragini muskura kar uske saath chaldi'..voh khamosh apni hi dhun mein kuch sonche jaa rahi thi....Ranvir ki abhi kahi baat uske dil per asar kar gayi'.voh log abhi corridor mein hi aaye the'.ke Ragini ne kaha'.'ek baat batayiye Ranvirji'..kisiko kaise pata chalega ke yahi sahi mouqa hai ??'

 

Ranvir ko thoda thoda samajh aa raha tha ke Ragini kis silsile mein baat kar rahi hai'.voh Ragini ko dekhta hua uske gol ghoomne laga'..phir Ragini ke peeche se use dekhne laga'..Ragini abhi bhi kuch sonche jaa rahi thi'..Ranvir ne thoda uske left shoulder ke paas jhuk kar'uske kaano mein kaha'..'jab mouqa hota hai'toh dil khud hi aapko bata deta hai.'

 

Ranvir ki saanson se Ragini ke baal uske kaan per udd rahe the'.ek gudgudi si toh hui per Ragini ka dil zor se dhadak bhi raha tha'..usne pehle neeche dekha phir thoda hichkichaate hue slowly Ranvir ki taraf palti.

 

Ranvir bhi Ragini ko dekhe jaa raha tha'.phir usne mehsoos kiya ke voh thoda uncomfortable ho rahi hai toh'.usne thoda ek qadm peeche lete hue kaha''aur phir aapko apni dil ki sunni chahiye'..kyunki zyaadatar aapka dil jhoot nahi kehta.'

 

Ragini ne still kuch nahi kaha toh'Ranvir ne gala saaf kiya aur aage badhte hue kaha'.'chaliye chalte hai.'

 

Jab Ranvir aage nikal gaya toh Ragini bhi thoda ghabraate hue'.uske peeche chal di''.usse samajh nahi aaya ke abhi yeh jo hua tha'voh kya tha'.Ranvir ki nazdeeki uske pure body mein gudgudi ki tarah daud gayi'.phir usne soncha ke itni choti baton per itna nahi gaur karna chahiye'.shayad Ranvirji ka bhi aisa koi matlab nahi tha hoga.

 

Ragini ne apni hi sonch per sar hila diya aur Ranvir ke peeche Alekh ke kamre mein aa gayi aur Alekh ko dekh kar kaha''Namaste jijaji.'

 

Alekh ne palat kar dekha aur bada hi khush hua'.voh jaldi se Ragini ki taraf aaya aur kehne laga'.'oh tum ho'.gud gud'..achcha kiya tum aa gayi'.meri dost tumhe dekh kar bahut khush hogi'..aao aao.'

 

Ragini bhi bahut khush hui Alekh ko dekh kar'.usne kaha''aap kya kar rahe ho jijaji?'

 

Alekh apne excitement mein bhool gaya ke usko nahi batana thi yeh baat'.'main Ranvir ki dost ki painting bana raha tha.''.yeh kehte hi Alekh toh Alekh'Ranvir bhi chaunk gaya'.voh janna chahta tha ke kya uski imagine ki hui aur Alekh bhaiyya ki banayi hui painting ek hi hai'.Ragini ??

 

Ragini bhi hairaan ho gayi'.usne Ranvir ko dekha'.lekin Alekh se kuch pooch paati tabhi Ranvir aage badhte hue painting board ki taraf dekhte hue bola'..'mujhe dikhayiye na bhaiyya'..main dekhna chahta hoon.'

 

Alekh pareshaan ho gaya aur kehne laga'.'nahi nahi'.maine abhi complete nahi ki hai'.aur main jab tak na dikhaao'.usse koi nahi dekhega'..ok ok.'

 

Ranvir kehne laga'.'ok ok bhaiyya'..aap jab tak nahi dikhaoge'.hum nahi dekhenge.'

 

Alekh happy ho gaya aur tabhi sadhna andar aayi aur kehne lagi'.'kya chal raha hai yaha per''Alekhji ko koi tang toh nahi kar raha na.'

 

Ranvir ne jhat se kaha'.'nahi nahi bhabhi kisi ki koi himmat hai jo Alekh bhaiyya ko pareshaan karein ??'

 

Sab hasne lage toh Alekh ko gussa aa gaya'usne chid kar Ranvir ki taraf dekha aur kaha'.'mujhe waha se red color toh dena'..aur ab mujh per hasna mat.'

 

Ranvir, Sadhna aur Ragini ek dusre ko smile karte hue dekh rahe the'.phir Ragini red color ko utha rahi thi ke waha se Ranvir bina palte Paint box mein haath daal raha tha......uska haath Ragini ke haath se takraya toh Ragini ke haath se color choot gaya aur neeche gir gaya.

 

Ranvir jhuka use uthaane toh Ragini bhi jhuk gayi aur unke haath phir takra gaye'.per iss baar Ragini ka haath Ranvir ke haath se takraya.

 

Ragini ne jhat se apna haath hata toh liya per uske puri body mein jaise bijli si guzar gayi'..voh achanak uth kar khadi ho gayi aur apne duppatte se khelne lagi'..Ranvir apne aap mein smile kiye jaa raha tha'.usse achcha bhi laga apne liye aur bura bhi laga Ragini ke liye.

 

Voh phir smile karte hue sar hilata hua red color ki bottle ke saath khada ho gaya'..Ragini Ranvir se contact avoid karne ke liye achanak bol padi'.'I'm sorry jijaji'.yeh meri wajah se gir gaya.'

 

Alekh aur Sadhna smile karne lage aur Alekh ne kaha'.'koi baat nahi..koi baat nahi'.yeh toh mere aur meri dost ke saath roz hota hai..'

 

Yeh sunte hi'.Sadhna ki aankhen badi ho gayi'.uska chehra sharm se laal ho gaya'.aur Ranvir Ragini usko dekh kar muskuraye jaa rahe the''sadhna kuch bol bhi nahi paa rahi thi'''lekin Ragini ko yeh jaankar khushi bhi hui ke Alekhji ke dil mein ab Sadhna ke liye shayad koi aur jagah bhi ban rahi hai.

 

 



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Originally posted by *meghna*

Smilei'm so glad sonal that you started with a new ff. TongueTongue

i read all parts together and like always...your ff simply rocks.
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And i'm very much glad that u are reading this ff as well.
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SImply fantabulous part yet again yaar loved it totally am waiting for the next part now really its wonderfuly written can imagine all the ficticious scenes happening i wish it wud have happen in the show as well!!

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