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u r toooooooo good....tht was awesomeSmile

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heyy i love your all parts plzz contuied soon i enjoy reading your ff

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Part:12
[everyone at excel college]
Samrat: benji sab packing hogayi hai, shaam ko nikalna hai.
Benji: haan all done,waise dia,mayank aur nupur nahin jaarahe na.
Samrat: no, neither uday,kyonki dia ko kuch khaas kaam hai aur nupur, mayank aur dodo seniors hain.
Benji: hmm, to gunjan ko tang karne ka poora mauqa hai.
Samrat: nahin yaar, main sooch raha tha ki apnae dil ki baat keh doon.
Benji: to der kis baat ki,here she comes.
{Gunjan comes in blue chorridaar along with priyanka}
Gunjan: hi, kya kar rahe ho.
Benji: woh, gunjan sam tumse kuch kehna chahta hai.
Gunjan: haan samrat bolo.[i hope yeh iss baar keh dey ki yeh mujhse pyaar karta hai].
Samrat: woh, actually i love,i love BASKETBALL.
Gunjan and Benji: haan.
Priyanka:yeh to sab jaante hain,tum gunjan se kya kehna chahate thae{come on sam say it}
Samrat: yahi,ki class cancel hai to basketball match ho jaye,girls vs boys.
Gunjan: soch lo haar jaoge.
Samrat: tumhare liye yeh bhi seh loonga.
{gunjan eye's met with samrat's}
{samrat nods}
Samrat: to hojaye.
Priyanka: let's go.
Basketball Court
[all boys came in their white and red track suits and all girls in red top and short skirts]
Benji:yaar sam gunjan dikhai nahin dae rahi.
Samrat:hmm.
{gunjan comes with Basketball, wearing a red track suit with a red and white jacket}
Samrat: kill her dudeCool
{Match begins}
{samrat get's the ball, he basket's three times and then his concentration brokes when gunjan put her hand on his and takes the ball, samrat is staring,gunjan did four baskets non-stop}.
Half Time:
Chako: arre yeh sam ko kya hua hai benji.
Benji: pyaar
Chako:kya?
Benji: kuch nahin yaar.
Chako: sam tu to cool dude samrat tha na,ab kya hua.
Benji: haan pehlae cool dude aur ab majnu jo laila kae ishq mein dewana hai.
{Samrat run's behind benji and is slipped due to the water on the ground}
Gunjan{shouts}: samrat!
{samrat looks at her}
{everyone comes running}
Gunjan: samrat tum theek to ho na?
Samrat: haan,chashmish.
Gunjan: dard to nahin ho raha na.
[Samrat looks at gunjan, his eye's met with hers, she was about to cryCry}
Samrat: hey,tum ro kyon rahi ho, don't cry warna aisa na ho ki tumhara chehra dekh kar jo tum par mar mittae haan woh bichare mit hi jaen.
{gunjan gave a smile}
Gunjan:samrat
Samrat: that's like my girl.Smile
Annie: your girl.
Benji: haan,to yahan sabhi ladkiyaan sam ki hi to hain.
Samrat: benji.
Benji: so let's continue.
Gunjan: shutup benji yeh sab tumhari wajah sae hua hai agar samrat ko kuch hojata to.Angry
{Samrat looks into her eye's,they could feel each others breath}
Samrat: toWink
part 13
Bus:
{All of the media studies students are loading their bags on the bus, samrat was walking towards benji when a hand came and took him from his colar, the hand is of}
Samrat: Tia, tum?
Tia: haan, samrat tia, tumhari tia.Oh, sam tum bhi na, main itne months bahar kya rahi, tumne to apne aap ko hi badal dala.
Samrat: tia, dekho main iss waqt jaldi mein hoon, hum sab ms ki confrence kae liye shimla ja rahe hain, i'll catch you later, haan.
Tia: ok, but jaldi aana.
{Gunjan sees this and turns towards annie}.
Gunjan: annie, yeh ladki kaun hai.
Annie: Yeh, yeh janab tia hain apne aap ko ms world aur samrat ki girlfriend kehti hai, but in real samrat isse bilkul bhao nahin deta.
Gunjan: agar bhao na deta to aisae thodi milta.{murmured}
Annie: kuch kaha tumne.
{gunjan denies and went inside the bus}.
{Samrat comes up and sees that the only place left to sit is next to gunjan, he smiles and went to sit, when gunjan stands up,}
Samrat: kya hua chashmish uth kyon gayin.
Gunjan: woh, kuch nahin mujhe annie sae kuch kaam hai to kya tum benji kae saat beth jao gae.
Samrat:{sadly} ok.
{he went behind gunjans seat and annie came and sat with gunjan}.
Samrat: benji, yeh chashmish ko kya hua hai?
Benji: woh, shayad usne tumhain tia kae saath dekh liya tha.
Samrat: shit.
{Samrat leans forward and tried to play footsie with gunjan but gunjan didn't reacted}.
{In the whole journey Gunjan didn't said a word to samrat}.
Shimla
{They finally reached shimla, all the bags were unloading when gunjan came out from the bus}.
Gunjan: bhaiya ji, woh hara wala bag dejiye ga.
Samrat: hey, chashmish batao tumhara bag kaunsa hai main uthar deta hoon.
Gunjan: no thanks samrat,benji karlega, benji mera bag uthar do.
Benji: woh to maine kab ka uthar kae wahan rakh diya hai.{pointing his finger towards red bag}.
Samrat: agar tumhara bag red hai to is green bag main kya hai.
Gunjan: tumse matlab.
Samrat: gunjan, chill kya hua sab theek hai na.
{gunjan started to cry and runaway towards a mandir, samrat runs behind}
Samrat: Gunjan, listen, gunjan kya hua hai.Gunjan.
{he reaches the mandir and saw gunjan sitting on a side crying, he went to her and sat beside her and put his hand on her hairs}.
Samrat: gunjan, kya hua ?
Gunjan: tumne, tumne mujhse jhoot bola, mujhe dosri ladkiyon ki tarah use kiya.
Samrat: maine aisa kya kiya hai, haan bolo gunjan.
Gunjan: woh ladki.
Samrat: tum kahin woh tia wale incident ki baat to nahin karrahin, utho, maine kaha utho.
{gunjan and samrat gets up}
{samrat took her hand and went infront of Radha-Krishna morti and putted his hand on her head.}
Samrat: gunjan, jaanti ho yahan kae log kehtae hain ki yahan akar koi jhoot nahin bolta agar bolta hai to mar jata hai, aur main tumhari qasam khata hoon ki main sirf tumse pyaar karta hoon, aur kissi sae nahin, sirf tumse gunjan.
Gunjan: kya? tum mujhse pyaar karte ho?
Samrat: haan, main tumse buhat pyaar karta hoon.{wind blows and shimla famous leaves comes infront of both.}

by the time annie and benji comes in mandir}.
Annie: kya hua gunjan tum yahan agayi,is everything all right?
Benji: sam, sab theek hai na.
{no one answers , both were busy in their eye contact, benji realizes the weakness of the situation}.
Benji: chalo, annie yeh donon to ladte rehte hain,lets go warna best kamrae humare haath sae nikal jayengae.
Annie: haan, aur main aisa hargiz nahin hone dongi, never.
{they both leaves}
Samrat: Gunjan, janti ho najane kitni ladkiyaan meri zindagi main ayen aur chali gayen kyonki koi meri type ki nahi thi, woh sab mujhe impress karna chahti theen aur mujhe koi aisi chahiye thi jisse main impress karna chahon aur woh ladki tum ho gunjan, sirf tum.
{He leans down, take a box out from his pents and opens it, it is an aquamarine ring}.
Thumbs Up" I LOVE YOU GUNJAN "Thumbs Up
{gunjan is shocked and is still, samrat takes her hand and tried to put the ring in her finger but gunjan runs away}.
{Samrat follows her, gunjan went to the resort and locked herself and cries}
Gunjan{in front of radha krishna morti in her room}: bhagwan ji, yeh kya ho gaya, main, maine samrat ko sirf acha dost maana tha aur woh mujhse pyaar karne laga.
{gunjan's reflection comes out}
Gunjan reflection: kyon gunjan, kya hua? samrat tumse pyaar karta hai to ismain kya hai.
Gunjan: par main usse pyaar nahin karti.
Gunjan 2: jhoot, agar tum usse pyaar nahin karti to jab woh tumhare qareeb aata hai tumhari dharkanain tez kyon hoti hain. jab woh tumhain chhota hai to tumhae kuch mehsoos kyon hota hai, jab woh kisi aur kae saath hota hai tumhae bura kyon lagta.
Gunjan{ shouts} : haan, haan, haan main samrat sae buhat pyaar karti hoon, par main jaanti hoon ki hum kabhi ek nahin ho sakte kyonki, kyonki meri sagai ho chuki hai.
{ samrat is listening all this from window}
Samrat: what?
Gunjan: samrat.
{He jumps in}
Samrat: kya kaha tumne, tumhari sagai.
Gunjan{crying}: haan meri sagai ho chuki hai.
Samrat: { grabbing gunjans shoulders} tum, tum mazaak kar rahi ho na.
Gunjan denies.
{Samrat steps back and went away}.
{gunjan cries}
{ Samrat is shown crying in rain outside the resort and remembering all the moments he spended with her}.
Next day:
{gunjan got a call on his cell}
Gunjan: hello, kya?
{ gunjan runs and go to the hospital where samrat is sleeping and doctor checking his nerves}
Gunjan: doctor, samrat ko kya hua hai?{ weeping}
Doctor: kuch nahin ab yeh khatray sae bahar hain, agar woh ladke isse na bachate to aaj to yeh.
Gunjan: hua kya tha.{ to the 2 boys who saved sam}
boy1: yeh gaari kae saamne aatae aate bach gaye thae jab yeh pahari sae girnae walae thae kae humne bachaya par unfortunately in ko sir par chhot lag gayyi.
Gunjan: thanks.
doctor: humare ek doctor aaj aarahe hain woh abse inka case handle karenge.
{the guy is shown coming inside the hospital and every girl is looking at him}
{He enters samrats room}
Dr. Karan: tum.
Gunjan: karan, tum yahan.
{Dr. karan is none other than our karan singh grover aka dr.armaan and also gunjans fiance in my ff}.
Dr. karan: haan mujhe yahan ek operation kae liye bulaya hai,tum yahan kya kar rahi ho.
Gunjan: woh, yeh samrat hai mera , i mean di ka college friend.
Karan: really, great samrat mera bachpan ka dost hai aur main uska case handle karne bhi aaya hoon.
Gunjan: kya, samrat tumhara bachpan ka dost hai.{she gets worried}
{actually gunjan and karan are cousons and he is 2 years older than gunjan and there engagement occured in their childhood}.
Don't worry guys i will not make a love triangle here, see what will i do.LOL
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great ffClap liked it  and do pm me plz when u update next


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interesting..... we don't have any problem if u make it triangle.... excited what will happen next... update soon

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Posted: 15 November 2008 at 11:47am | IP Logged
cool part 12 &13 plzz contuied soon

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thanks for the comments:

MAINE TUMSE PYAAR KIYA:
{Samrat wakes up}
Karan: dude,kaisa hai yaar.
Samrat: karan tu yahan.
Karan: haan, main ek operation kae liye aaya tha to tera case bhi maine lae liya.
Gunjan: karan ab samrat kaisa hai.
Samrat: tum donoon ek dosre ko jaante ho.
Karan: jaante ho, yeh meri fiance hai.
Samrat: kya.
Karan: haan, dude woh humari engagement bachpan main hogayi thi, par ab hum yeh engagement torna chahte hain, i mean main,
Gunjan: kya?
Karan: haan, jaisa ki tum jaanti ho ki i love shilpa aur tum bhi mujhse pyaar nahin karteen to, mujhe lagta hai ki humain yeh sab ghar waloon ko bata dena chahiye.
Samrat: wait a minute, u mean tum isse pyaar nahin kate, right.
Karan: right par tu kyon itna uchal raha hai.
Samrat: abbey tu nahin jaanta tu nae aaj mujhe kitni bari khushi di hai.
Karan: freeze,kahin gunjan hi woh ladki to nahin jisse tu pyaar karta hai.
Samrat: haan.
Karan: ab samjha, usne tujhse kaha hoga tht she is engaged aur tu nae khod khushi karne ki koshish ki, right.
{samrat nods}
Gunjan: par karan yeh itna aasaan nahin hai.
Karan: ofcourse aasaan nahin hai, par try karne main kya harz hai.
{benji,annie,chaku comes inside}
Benji: dude, tu theek hai na.
Samrat: aisa theek hoon jaise pehlae kabhi nahin tha,{winks at gunjan,she smiles back and nods}.
Annie: samrat, woh humain saari details de do hum seminar nain khod chale jaengae.
Samrat: no worries annie, samrat is fine now aur hum sab ek saat seminar jaengae.
All: yeah!
Gunjan: par samrat.
Samrat: thank god tum kuch bolein to.
Karan: abhi itni der sae to bol rahi thi aur tum keh rahe ho bolein to.
Samrat: mujhse bolein to, ab theek hai. chashmish don't worry i am fine.
dekho.{he gets up}.
Gunjan: ok.
Samrat: karan yaar mera discharge.
Karan: haan abhi karwata hoon.
Samrat: great.
RESORT:
everyone is ready for the dinner.
samrat comes wearing a cool black jacket and sees gunjan.
Samrat: killer dude.
{gunjan is in red shalwarsuit}.
{he walks towards her}.
Samrat: hey.
Gunjan: ab tumhari tabiyet kaisi hai.
Samrat: perfect.
{The waiter comes and announces tht the dinner is served}.
Everyone goes and have dinner.
Samrat: gunjan i thought ki tum veg hogi.
Gunjan: nahin.
dinner ends.
DJ invites everyone to the dancefloor.
Samrat: gunjan lets dance.
Gunjan: par.
Samrat: mujhe dance nahin aata,pata hai, main sikha doonga.
They went and samrat ask dj to change the song and put on :
Kahin to.
{sorry for short part}.Sleepy

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heyy
v. nice ff...
 
do cont soon..
 
 
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