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Part#7

Samrat: acha jaise hum tumhari baat maan layengae.Wink
Gunjan: ji,haan kyonki badi maa,ritu maa aur tanu mom nae bhi yahi kaha hai kae woh sab log lonavla jaa rahe hain, to hum sab log yahin humare ghar mein hi rahein aur bahar na jayen.
Uday: what? nahin mom aur baki sab humme chor kar vacation par jarahe hain, main abhi unse poochta hoon.
{Mayank comes from the door}
Mayank: abey,yaar tumbhi na mom, chhoti mom,aur ghar ke sabhi log hum sab bachon ko chor kar chotti mom ki behan kae father ki shok sabha main gayye hain.
Nupur{came eating an apple}: wohi,to hum sab ko kyon chhor gayye,hume bhi lae chalte.
Diya{took the apple from nupurs hand and took a bite}: woh,iss liye dear, kyonki shayad next week humarae college mein band audition hai,aur hum sab ko uski practice karni hai.
Gunjan:To mujhe kyon nahin lae gayye.
Diya: kyonki shayad unhain pata hai ki meri behan songs likhti hai.
Samrat: really!.
Diya: oh completely, to iss baar kaun sa song do gi humain.
Gunjan:aap log bethiye main diary lae kar aati hoon.
{Gunjan brought the diary}
{Uday took it and started reading the song loudly}
ek andheri si raat aur kuch qadmoon ki chap.
Diya: uday yeh duet hai aur gana hai koi story nahin,come on gunjan aisa karo tumne likha hai to tum hi gaa kar suna do.
Gunjan:di,par mere saat kaun gayye ga aur waise bhi main gaa nahin sakti.
Samrat: oh comeon,bebes,sorry gunjan main ga loonga tumhare saat try to karo.
{Gunjan starts the song in a very beautiful voice:
Gunjan: ek andheri si raat, aur kuch kadmoon ki chaap.
Samrat{looking at her}{diya give him a sigh}
Samrat{sang the other line}:alam ki thi kya hi baat,jaise andekhi si ghaat.
Both:kaun tha,kahan gaya mujhe mila armaan jagaye,soya mera naseeb.
Samrat:dhalta suraj dekhain,aur hawa chhoke guzray,dhalta woh nayaab tha.
Gunjan: asal tha ya kae khwab tha.
Both: kaun tha,kahan gaya mujhe mila armaan jagaye,soya mera naseeb.
Kaun tha,kahan gaya mujhe mila armaan jagaye,soya mera naseeb.
kaun tha,kahan gaya mujhe mila armaan jagaye,soya mera naseeb.
Kuch bhi jo acha lagaye aur mile bhi zaroori to nahin,sach hai par hai ajeeb.
{Actually i found this song on youtube its by atif aslam }.

i cannot post the link so sorry but do see and u can feel as if in real sajan are singing.

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v.nice ff plz continue more

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wow very nice pls do cont soon i will be waiting

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Hey pliz continue soon!

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awesome man !
love it
plzplz plz conmtinue soon

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where is the update?? plz continue soon

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I HOPE YOU CONTINUE SOON
I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE
IT WAS REALLY GOODSmile

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Sorry for the delay guys i was having my exams here are the part8 , 9 ,10:

PART#8
Excel College:[in the canteen]
Ms.Rohi: Attention please, jaisa ki aap log jaante hain ki aaj humare college kae har saal ki tarah band auditions hain magar iss saal hum ek naya twist laye hain,aanhaan darye mat,twist yeh hai ki iss saal 4 nahin balke purae bands select hoonge aur phir jaise aap ka competition hota hai waise hi hoga par uss mein 2 nahin 4 band select hoonge aur phir quarter final mein 2 aur jo band final mein jeetay ga usko humare great singers shriya ghoshal aur shaan kae saat album launch karne ka mauqa mille ga,par final mein judges bhi wohi donoon honge.
{Everyone claps and starts to hoot}
Samrat: so guys, aaj kae liye practice start karain.
Nupur: haan,par diya ko to aane do.
{Diya calls sam: hey sam zara loudspeaker on karo.Samrat on's it.}.
Diya: guys,i am sorry woh actually mujhe aur rahul ko sphychology project kae liye kuch information laini thi to main aaj nahin aa paongi,so tum log rehersal karke audition dae do,ok all the best,bye.
Mayank: chalo,ab chalain warna agar hiphop band wahan pohanch gaya to garbar ho jayegi,acha uday tumne rehersal room kae liye registration to karvai thi na?
Uday:shit,bhool gaya.Confused
Samrat: just chill dude,mujhe pata tha ki tum bhool jao gae iss liye maine already registration karwa di thi,let's go.

Reharsal Room:
Samrat:chalo uday,drum rolls start karo.
[uday starts Drum rolls,mayank pick the guitar,nupur took the piano,samrat starts singing with gunjan}
{Song is Thoda sa pyaar}.
{song ends}
Samrat: guys, its time just relax and kick the stage.
Gunjan: par mujhe dar lag raha hai.
Samrat: jab main tumhare saath hoon to dar kis baat ka.{he look in her eye's}
{Silence for 5 minutes}
Samrat: i mean, i am a rockstar remember.
Mayank: ab chalein,ms.roohi wait kar rahi hoongi.
{They went to music hall}

Music Hall:
Ms.Rohi: guys, to aap logon ko besabri sae intizaar hoga auditions ka to shuruh karain, to sabse pehlae hiphop band.
{ they came,sang and next}
{ many bands came and now}
Ms.roohi: to ab humare last band ki baari hai so comeon Reth and kick the floor.
[all came]
[uday went to drums, gunjan was tensed,samrat start to whistle,and now gunjan has to sing,she is standing like a statue,samrat came near and}
Samrat: gunjan,relax samjho tum gaana nahin ga rahi ho bb khel rahi ho,aur tum yeh basket kar sakti ho.

PART:9

[Samrat comes closer to gunjan}
Samrat: just relax socho ki yahan sirf tum ho aur koi nahin comeon.
[gunjan took a deep breath and samrat starts singing she accompanies him:meelon ka jaise tha faasla.
[ Shriya smiles and all including the teachers move on the song}
{song ends}
{everyone stands and claps}
Ms.roohi: wow, reth aap logoon nae to kamaal kar diya, to ab waqt hai judgement ki baari to shaan ji kaun se woh 4 band select hoye hain please reveal it.
Shriya: to aaj kae auditions main jo bands semi final kae liye select hoye hain unka naam hai: hiphop band, charms,pink bunnies aur any guesses.
All: reth
Shaan: to ajao.
{Diya, uday, mayank,nupur came}
Ms.Roohi: gunjan aur samrat kahan hain.
Sound Room:
[Gunjan is fainted and lying on a couch and Samrat trying to contact the doctor]
{all came}
Ms.Roohi: isse kya hua
Nupur: pata nahin madam, auditions kae baad chakkar aye aur yeh gir gayyi.
Diya{crying} madam please aap doctor ko bulaiye.
Samrat: maine doctor ko phone kar diya hai woh arahe hoonge.
Mayank: sam, doctor nae ambulance bhijwai hai chalo isko lekar chalte hain.
{Samrat picks her and went in the ambulance}
Hospital:
{all are worried gunjan is in ICU}
Doctor: ghabrane ki koi baat nahin hai ab woh theek hain, mujhe aap se ek baat pochni hai kya inhoon ne kuch khaya piya tha.
Nupur: ji,doctor woh humari dost riya[not u riya sorry]nae isko juice diya tha,actually woh pereshaan thi isliye.
Samrat: what do you mean, tum pagal ho usne gunjan ko juice diya isliye takae gunjan perform na kar sakae.
Doctor: ji,haan us juice main behooshi ki goli thi woh to shukar hai ki aap inko waqt par lae aye,ab woh theek hain.
Diya: kya hum usse mill sakte hain.
Doctor: dekho bachoon main jaanta hoon ki tum loog iss waqt kis asthithi sae guar rahe ho par usko abhi hoosh nahin aaya hai, aur main tumhare dad ka dost hone kae naate tum logoon sae yahi kahoon ga ki abhi tum log ghar jaao, aur koi ek yahan rukh jayye.
Ms.roohi: yeah,doctor sahi keh rahe hain.
Diya: to phir main rukh jaati hoon.
Ms.roohi: tum pagal hogayyi ho, itni raat ko main tumhaen iski permisssion nahin doongi, samrat yahan ruke ga aur tum sab abhi ghar jaao.
{everyone leaves}

PART#10
Hospital:
[Gunjan is sleeping and samrat continuously looking at her beautiful face, he remembers all those moments spend with gunjan].
Samrat: gunjan jaanti ho, main hamesha sae yahi soochta tha ki iss pori duniya main aisi koi ladki nahin jisse samrat impress karna chahae par main ghalat tha, main ghalat tha ki iss duniya main meri dreamgirl nahin hai, i was wrong because u r my dreamgirl gunjan, u r my love, my life, my everything,I LOVE YOU GUNJAN.

{Someone is shown but not the face, she is a girl, she mistakenly dropped the flowerpot outside Gunjan's room, and when Samrat saw her, he was shocked,it was non-other than}
Samrat: Priyanka! tum yahan?Embarrassed
{Sammy dear,jahan tum wahan hum}{Priyanka is samrat's school friend}
Priyanka:Hey,samrat how r u aur yeh ladki kaun hai,hmm?
Samrat: oh, yeh,yeh gunjan hai,she's a friend.
Priyanka: a friend or Girlfriend.
Samrat: hmmm,to tumnae sab kuch sunn liya,bad manners,anyways tum yahan,kaise.
Priyanka: haan woh meri di yahan Doctor hain na aur waise bhi mera mumbai kae best college main admission hogaya hai.
Samrat:congratz, kaun sa?
Priyanka: EXCEL COLLEGE
Samrat:what?don't tell me main bhi wahin parta hoon, arre balkae humara pora gang, mayank,dia,nupur,uday, sab.
Priyanka: acha, tht's great, hey dia ki sis aanae wali thi na,aye kya, aur kya woh bhi tum par fida hai baki sari ladkiyon ki tarah.
Samrat: {looking at gunjan}:she is exquisite.
Priyanka: kya? main dia ki behan ki baat kar rahi hoon.
Samrat: haan,yahi to hai Gunjan Malhotra.
Priyanka: no,u mean childhood love is back.
Samrat: haan,yaar par uss waqt main serious nahin tha par ab hoon.
Priyanka: ok,then see you tomorrow,bye.
Samrat: bye,hey Priya woh please kisi ko meray confession kae baray main batana nahin,please.
Priyankafcourse not, ok see ya.

EXCEL COLLEGE:
[gunjan came along with all the gang except dia, all went in class,class ended,all in canteen}
CANTEEN:
{Every boy was having flowers with him,they came to gunjan}.
Boy1: gunjan ji,aap theek to hain na?
Boy2: gunjan ji,yeh aap kae liye.
{all gives flowers to gunjan}
Samrat: {coughing naughtily} {to gunjan}: agar,phuloon ki malka farigh ho gayi hoon to project discuss karain.
Gunjan:{with an appology face} sorry,samrat woh class main ek nayi ladki aye hai aur woh chathi hai ki main uske saat project karon,so tumko majboran benji kae saath project karna padae ga.
Samrat: abey nahin, yaar no way main iske saath aur waise bhi yeh project ek ladki aur ek ladke ka hai, kyonki yeh project inside relation of boy and girl ka hai.
Benji:waise woh ladki hai kaun, is she hot?
Samrat:ab main jaan kae kya karoonga mujhae to meri waali mill gayyi.
Gunjan:lo woh agayi.
{Priyanka came from behind}
Samrat: tum, tumnae aatae hi meri life cheena shuruh kardi.
Priyanka: hey,hello Mr. maine kuch nahin kiya hai.
Benji: hey ,dude tu isko jaanta hai.
Samrat:arre main hi nahin pori team siwai gunjan kae.
Gunjan:kya.
Samrat: yeah,actually jab tum malaysia chali gayyi thein to yeah humare school main ayyi thi.
Gunjan:oh,ok.
Priyanka: haan,aur main samrat ki buhat achi friend bhi hoon, buhat bohat zayada achi, u know like...LOLLOL

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