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PART#4

[Gunjan gave an angry look to Samrat],Angry
[Samrat ignores it and smiles naughtily].Wink
Gunjan: yeah,kya badtamizi hai,utaro mujhe.
Samrat{confused}:Badtamizi,what badtamizi ek to maine tumhain catch karliya aur tum ho ki mujhi se lar rahi ho.
Gunjan: kyon,kiya maine kaha tha, dekho main bhaley hi malaysia sae aye hoon par apne sanskaar nahin bhuli hoon,samjhay.
Samrat:{dropping her down} ab theek hai miss sanskaari,aur haan mujhe bhi koi shok nahin tha tumhain pakarnae ka woh to tum gir jati iss liye warna meri taraf sae bhar me jao.
[gunjan gets up and leave].

POOJA:
[all the guests arrived,diya had invited all her friends also,Samrat,Uday,Mayank all three comes from Stairs,Uday in green kurta and white lungi,Mayank in black kurta and white pajama,Samrat in red kurta and white pajama].
[amar introduce them to the guests and the three jointed their friends],
Kiran: arre ladkoon wahan kya khade ho idhar aao abhi pooja shuruh hone main todha waqt hai to todha gaana ho jayye.
Samrat: ji,chhoti maa,mayank aur uday doonon buhat acha gatay hain chal bhai shuruh ho jao.
Ritu: arre hum khali un donon sae nahin balki tumse bhi gaane ko keh rahae hain.
Samrat: kya?badi mom aap jaante ho main gaana nahin ga sakta hoon.
Tanu: kya,keh rahe ho samrat, kya excel ke rockstar ko gaana gana nahin aata, {reffering to principal saxena} Saxena ji aap nae kya in logon ko bina auditions kae hi excel ke band main shamil kiya tha.
Saxena: arre,yaar samrat come on,excel ki izzat ka sawal hai.
Mayank : abbey dude yaar ziyada bhao mat kha shuruh hoja.
Uday: haan sam,tum gao main moon hilata hoon,shayad koi ladki mujhse bhi pat jaye.LOL
{Sam was about to say no when he saw girls coming down, Diya in blue saree,nupur in orchid shalwar suit and Gunjan in red saree,with her hairs spreading on her face}Day Dreaming
{lights got dim and samrat starts whistling the song Pehli Nazar Mein}
{Then he went and took the drum from the drummer and started to sing Woh Ladki hai Kahan, all the girls and boys joined him,all danced in full mode, dance ended and pooja started one by one in jodi's}
Daadi 1: ab, samrat aur gunjan tum donoon aao.
[They both went thali in gunjan's hands, samrat wanted to touch the thaali but mistakenly touched gunjan's hand, gunjan hesitated but cannot leave the thaali,so continued.]
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{The pooja ended everyone went back to their home}.
SHERGIL'S MANSION:
{Samrat cannot sleep, he continuously see Gunjan around him, he went to wash his face,but in the mirror he saw gunjan,he went to bed and want to sleep but thought of gunjan didn't left him so due to that he was late for college and got scolded for that by Shukla}.
Shukla: Yeh,koi samay hai apni kaksha main upastit hone ka, hum aap ko poray do ghante ka dand detay hain,aap humare saath do ghanta 2 baje sae 4 baje tak pooja mein bethain gain}.
Samrat: sir, magar us waqt to meri bb practice hai.
{He looked with an angry look to gunjan}
Samrat: yeah,sab tumhari wajah se hua hai.
Gunjan: oh,hello maine kya kiya hai.
Samrat: tumne raat...{he thought: nahin agar maine gunjan sae kaha to sab mera mazaak urain gae}.{he went away}.
POOJA 2:
Samrat{thinking: arre yaar bhagwan ji please help me, ek to meri practice rok rahi hai aur dosra sir ki sir kae tael ki badboo,oh god},
{he saw gunjan}.
Precap: Gunjan,Gunjan aur sirf Sajan.


Edited by demi lovato - 01 October 2008 at 3:28pm

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Ah! Thanks for starting a fanfic. I was really looking forward to reading one about our new favorite jodis! Plus I need something to do while waiting for the next episode to come during the weekends! Smile

It sounds great so far. Do continue! Smile

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PART#5
Samrat:Tum?{loudly}
Shukla:kya hua samrat aap pooja mein badha kyon daal rahe hain?
Samrat:sir,woh gunjan.
Shukla:{turning backwards}ji,farmaiyay aap ko koi kaam tha humsae.
Gunjan:ji,sir woh aap nae jo karya diya tha ussi kae baare mein aap sae kuch sawal karnae thay.
Samrat: par sir abhi to pooja kar rahe hain.
Shukla:nahin,pooja samapt hoi samrat aap ja sakte hain.
{Samrat gave a thanks with his head and eye's to gunjan and walks away}.
BASKETBALL COURT:
Raj: Sam, mujhe gunjan samajh nahin aati yaar,dekho jis waqt tum shukla kae saath thay uske liye achi oppertunity thi bb ki practice karnae ki par usnae ja kar tumko churwaya,kyon?
Samrat:right,dude even i don't understand it,khair tu yeh bata ki rahul kab aaraha hai.
Raj:yaar meri kal usse baat hoi thi to usne kaha tha ki aaj ajayega par aaya nahin.
{bell rings}.

PSYCHOLOGY CLASS:
MS.ROHI:good evening,to aaj hum face expressions parhain gae jis mein aap ko ek documentory bhi banani hogi apne partner kae saath,to aap sab iss box mein sae chits nikaliye aur jiska naam ho uske saath beth jaiye.
Raj: madam,meri chit mein to mera hi naam likha hai.
Soniya:aur meri bhi.
{everyone laghs}
Rohi:to aap donoon ek doosre kae partner hain.Dia tumhari chit mein kis ka naam likha hai?
Dia: madam,iss mein to rahul likha hai.Embarrassed
{Rahul enters the class}
Rahul:sorry,madam i am late.
Rohi: it's ok rahul, how is your sister now.
Rahul: she is fine,madam.
Rohi:rahul,hum aaj face expressions parh rahe hain,to shuruh karain,aap ki partner dia hain.
{rahul went gave a hi-fi to samrat and sat beside dia}.
Rohi: samrat,tumhari chit par kiska naam hai.
Samrat: wow,Gunjan.
Rohi: bechari buri phasi.
{everyone laughs}
{sam went and sat beside gunjan}
Rohi: to iss lesson mein aap apne partners sae kuch kahein gae aur woh jo expressions dae ga uspar aap batayengae ki kya kehna chahata hai aap ka partner aur phir partner bhi chit par apnae expression ka matlab likh kar batayega.to samrat aap gunjan sae sawal karain aur woh jo expression dain uss ka matlab aap chit par likh kar dain aur gunjan bhi apna jawab chit par likh kar dain agar jawab matching huay to aap expressions read kar sakte hain.
Samrat: will you go on a date with me gunjan?Wink
{whole class laughs}
Rohi: samrat tum flirting kae ilawa koi sawal kar sakte ho, khair ab gunjan ka expression dekho aur uska jawab likh kar do aur gunjan tum bhi apna jawab likh kar do.
{they both give their chits}
Rohi: to samrat kae mutabiq gunjan nae kaha hoga,main dosri ladkiyon ki tarah apne sanskaar nahin bhuli hoon,aur yeh bilkul sahi hai,samrat kaisay samjhay batao.
Samrat: well madam gunjan baaki ladkiyoon sae alag hai,sanskari hai,aur most of all meri family friend hai,main isko bachpan sae jaanta hoon.
Rohi:hmm,good,to aap sab ko expressions par ek documentary banani hogi,class dismiss.

CANTEEN:
Samrat: hey,diya tum rahul ko bata kyon nahin dethi kae tum usse pyaar karti ho.
Diya:main nahin bata sakti.
Nupur:tum nahin batao gi to kya uday batayega.
Diya: not a bad idea,main uday sae kehti hoon ki jakar rahul sae pooche that he likes me aur not.
Diya:{calling uday} dodo,tum jakar in directly rahul sae poochu ki kya woh mujhe pasand karta hai?
{Uday in canteen,asks rahul}
Uday:hey,buddy do u likes me.
Rahul: kya matlab tu to mera sabsae acha dost hai yaar.
{Sam,mayank,diya,nupur and gunjan putting their hands on head}
together: uday.
Samrat: acha gunjan hum aaj practice kar liye tumhare ghar par arahe hain tumko kahin jaana to nahin hai na?
Gunjan:tum sab ki practice ka mujhsae kya taluq, meray rehnae na rehnae sae practice to nahin roke gi na.
Mayank: what do u mean tum practice nahin karo gi.
Gunjan: kahin tum loug yeh to nahin samajh rahe ki maine bb team permenantly join kar li hai,ofcourse not,main sirf temporarily aye thi ab rahul agaya hai to woh tum logon kae saath rahega.
Samrat: yaani,no more challenge.Cry
Gunjan: no. acha hum chalte hain,bye.
Diya: haan guys see u at night,bye.

Malhotra Mansion:
{door bell rings}
Raddhika: gunjan,beta darwaza kholna main kitchen mein hoon.
Gunjan: ji,badi maa.
{she went and opens the door and saw samrat looking at her like an statue}. SmileSmile
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