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awwwwwww nice FF....do continue.....n yeah pls use darker colors for the text.........

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superb.plz continue soon

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Posted: 30 September 2008 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
 
PART#3

{And the girl wearing short skirts comes and stands behind diya}[the girl is riya][the 2nd diva of excel,but samrat don't hang around with her as she is junior]
Riya: oh, my god the miss cool dia is in love.whoo,guys[reffering to other students] the miss diya malhotra is in love.
Samrat{in an angry way}: don't make a fuss of it, got that ria.
Riyah:Embarrassed sam anything for you sweety.
Samrat:so, don't interfere in our matters and secondly only my chumps can call me sam, do u get that.
{samrat gave a Angry look}[riya pass away]
Gunjan: dee yeh bala kaun hai?
Mayank: don't ask, yeh apne aap ko diva samajhti hai, magar excel college ki devil hai.
Uday: abey yaar tujhse kaha hai na ki meray samnay bhooton ki baat nahin kia kar.
Nupur: acha guys lets move aur haan mayank aur samrat tum logon ko jaldi aana hai,pooja ki tayari bhi karni hai.
[everyone says bye to eachother and go].

Malhotra Mansion:
Kiran: Bachon jaldi karo, pooja ki tayaariyan logon kae aanae sae pehlae khatam ha jani chahiyen.
Gunjan: maa, aap chinta mat kijiye sab time pae ho jayega.
[Door bell rings]
Daadi 2{malhotra}: Jaldi sae dekho baher kaun hai.
[gunjan opens the door and saw samrat standing with sweet box[large]in one hand and flowers in the other]
Samrat: jaldi hato,jaldi hato.[he pass from gunjans right and put the things on table and bow to touch Daadi 2 legs].
[ and from the door comes shergils]
[Gunjan bow and touch legs of each senior member]
{From upstairscomes dev amlhotra and amar malhotra{dev is nu father and amar of dg}.
Amar: arre, yaar vikrant kaisa hai.
Vikrant{samrat's dad}: abey tu bhi na abhi subah to poocha tha ab phir pooch raha hai.
Veer{mayanks dad}: lijiye do dost mile aur kahani shuruh.
Vikrant: arre bhaiya yahi to din hain gappe laganay kae.
Dev: haan haan,vikrant borhape mein hi to loog gapae lagate hain na, kyon bachon tum loog burhay hogaye ho.
Uday:kya? arre nahin meri to abhi shaadi bhi nahin hoie hai aur waise bhi mujhe ladkiyan kahan milti hain in mahaan hastiyon ki wajah se aur agar main burha ho gaya to phir to jo aati hain woh bhi..[imagining girls calling her uncle].
Uday: {loudly} nahinnnnnn.DeadDeadDead
[everyone laughs and went to help in preparations]
Preparations:
[Diya and Mayank are putting lights, uday is checking the listLOL , nupur is making rangoli,gunjan and samrat are putting flower layers on wall].
{Gunjan standing on a stool, is trying to put flower layer at the top of the wall, and she gets disbalanced and about to fall when Samrat grabs herWinkWink  , and the todhe badmaash song is played in backgroud}SmileSmile.
Guys i am sorry for short part but i'll try to cover up it tomorrow, and yah thanks for replies.

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demi lovato

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Posted: 30 September 2008 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Raee_rockz

awwwwwww nice FF....do continue.....n yeah pls use darker colors for the text.........
thanks, and sure will use dark colors.

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Posted: 01 October 2008 at 8:13am | IP Logged
nice FF dear
do cont soon
love
tanasha

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Posted: 01 October 2008 at 8:25am | IP Logged
so nice ff.Clapplz continue more

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Posted: 01 October 2008 at 8:58am | IP Logged
really a nice oneStar superbSmile so sweetSmileWink so they all r gud friendsEmbarrassedWink plz continue it soonSmile

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hey very nice superb i really loved samrat and gunjan scenes do continue with the scenes like this soon

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