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Posted: 29 September 2008 at 3:44pm | IP Logged
Guys i know that the show is just started but lets start our fanfictions from now as we can share all our ideas and imaginations and expectations for Miley jab hum tum.
so this is my fanfiction:

MAINE TUMSE PYAAR KIYA
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Introduction to Characters

Samrat Shergil: A cool,handsome,everloving hunk of excel college, he is a basketball champion and a rockstar of excel.He is a son of a bussiness tykoon in India.He thinks that love means flirt,dating and crushes, and according to him he had fallen in love for almost 10 times a day and he is totally opposite to his couson Mayank Shergil.


Gunjan Malhotra: A calm, simple, dedicated daughter of a bussiness tykoon2 in India.She is simple although she is rich, she is talented, religious and totally opposite to her elder sister Diya Malhotra.Love for her is like , everything because she believes a person who have true love is the most lucky men/women on earth.


Nupur Malhotra: A bubbly, lively girl who is always dreaming about her dream prince, she is talented, loveable, and most of all couson of Gunjan and Diya.She takes reality as a game which you play, no matter what the results would be,she is satisfied with that.

Mayank Shergil: A cool, guy without attitude, he is religious, talented and also a basketball champion, he donot believe in love.He is Samrats couson, and most of the time he remains with him if he is not found in library.

Diya Malhotra: She is proud, cool, beautiful diva of excel college, love her sister very much, she is some times emmotional,she is dedicated and she is the president of excel college drama club.Her funda about love is totally different from real diya, she is in love with a guy but don't want to tell him.

Uday Malhotra: He is funny, everloving, caring, guy who is not allowed to have a girlfriend as he is always around her three sisters, actually gunjan is the youngest so he love her the most, he is an adorable brother and basketball player,he is also a president of excel drama club.
PART#1
Malhotra Mansion:
Kiran Malhotra{Gunjan and Diya's mom}iya aur kitni der lagaogi,breakfast ready hai,aur Gunjan ko bhi airport sae pickup karne jaana hai.
Diya:[in red shirt and capri]:mom,i am ready aur waise bhi mom, gunjan ki flight late hai,so we can easily reach in no time at the airport.Acha mom hum sab airport sae hi college chale jayengay.
Raddhika Malhotra{uday and nupurs mom}:woh kyon?
Diyah,badi mom aap ko nahin pata,aaj humare college ka Greenfields college kae sath match hai.
Uday[in his excel basketball team uniform]:Yes mom, aur iss baar deeds [nupur] aur diya nae, greenfields college ki cheerleader Ash aur Nikki sae purae 20,000 ki bet lagai hai.
Nupur[In her cheerleading costume,white capri and orchid colour T-shirt]:ji,haan aur humain yakeen hai ki hum yeh match zaroor jitengae.
Uday:exactly kyonki iss baar humari team ki captain hai gunjan.
Diya and Nupur{slap him on his shoulders}Cry:Uday, gunjan nahin SAMRAT.
Uday: haan, wohi,wohi samrat.

Shergil Mansion:
[a guy in track suit,with headphone in his ears is playing BasketBall].
Ritu Shergil[mayanks mom]:samrat beta akae aarti ka prasad lae lo.
[another guy in track suit comes from upstairs].
Tanu Shergil[samrats mom]: Mayank,samrat jaldi aao.
 
[the guy on stairs come and bow and touch ritu and tanu's legs] and he is ....SAMRATClap,then a guy with basketball turns and its MAYANK.Clap
Tanu:arre yeh kaisay basketball lover ki jaghaan aaj mayank, sab theek to hai na.

Samrat: haan, mom woh mujhe aaj basketball practice nahin karni, i am fully prepared, mayank ko thodi concentration ki zaroorat hai.{he gave a naughty smile}..

Airport:
Diya: oh, god najane yeh kab nikle gi.
Uday: dia, abhi abhi announcement hoi hai ki switzerland sae aane wali flights 2 hours late hain.
Dia: Dodo, gunjan switzerland sae nahin Malaysia sae arahi hai.
Uday: waise kyon arahi hai? oh right adha college wahan kiya ab baki ka yahaan karne arahi hai right.
[dia and nupur give him an irritated look]
{And there is a girl in choridaar and suit}
{she hugs the both girls}
Nupur: gunjan, kaisi ho, bua ke ghar sab kaise hain, especially rohit.
Dia: oh, nupur yeh sab hum baad main bhi pooch sakte hain.
Uday: well, gunjan ke kaproon ko dekh kar koi bhi bata dega ki yeh terit yatra kar kay loti hai.
Dia: uday, yeh malaysia sae aye hai.
Gunjan: uday, bhaiya aap kaise hain?
Uday: i am fine.
Dia: ab chalein match kae liye late ho jayega.

[everyone move towards the car]
College:
[Samrat enters in college on his bike with mayank on another]
[he comes to a guy]Samrat: hey, raj,dude ladkiyon ko takne sae koi faida nahin, tujhe teri dream girl nahin mile gi.
Raj: acha, tu to aisae keh raha hai jaisae tujhe teri wow kill her dude mil gayyi hai.
Samrat: impossible, woh iss duniya main hai hi nahin, uss ladki ki half type bhi yahan nahin hain.
Mayank: Kyon, teri ladki kya pari hai.
Samrat: haan, ek aisi ladki jo Day DreamingDay Dreamingchale to jaisay wind charms ki awaaz[wind charms sound played], woh muskoraye to samander ki leheren khill uthain,[sea is shown where the waves are high] woh muray to uss ke murney par aisa lage jaise rock performance ka drum roll[drums sound].[he went into a trance and there shown gunjan in diya's car flying her hand in the air.]
 
PART#2

{the car stops at excel gate},{dia comes out with others from the car and from her opposite the two of her chumps,;[sonia and karan]comes and hugs her}.
Diya: oh, guys meet my sister Gunjan[pointing her fingers towards her sis].
Karan and sonia:hi,gunjan.
Sonia: well, u really don't seems that u are diya's sister,b'cause u r looking to LS .
Diya: soni, please meri behan ko koi kuch nahin kahega,ok, aur waise bhi she wears this because she is religious and to be comfortable.
Uday: hey,guys sab kuch theek hai abhi class shuruh hone mein poray 2 ghante hain so lets go to see the movie.
Diya{gave a slap on his shoulder}: uday,aaj ki sari classes cancel hochuki hain kyunki aaj basketball match hai.
UdayCry:deeds subah se yeh tumhara 30th thapar hai, aur subah se nupur mujhe 25 dafa daant chuki hai, main tum dono se baat nahin karta, meri behan aaj se sirf Gunjan{he gave a tight hug to her}.
Gunjan:bhaiya sab theek hai, par ab chalein.
{everyone move towards basketball court}[there was a huge applause and cheerleaders were shouting EXCEL,SAMRAT,EXCEL,MAYANK.}
{A guy comes running}
Diya: kya hua laksh,sab theek to hai na.
Laksh:kuch bhi theek nahin hai diya woh actually humari team ka ek member, rahul[the guy whom dia loves] is not here due to his sisters injury ,to koi naya player chahiye.
Diya: no, problem player samjho milgaya[she looks towards gunjan.]
Gunjan: no, way dee main , mera yahan pehla din hai aur aap.
Diya: pehla din hai to kya hua yeh humare excel ka sawaal hai,please.
uday:haan aur deeds ke 20,000 ka bhi.
Gunjan: ok!,show me the changin room.
[Match commentary is started,one by one excel and greenfields players are coming and shaking hands];
Commentor:aur yeh match shuruh hone wala hai, excel ke captain samrat nae puray josh ke sath court main kadam rakh dia hai,aur yeh aye captain of greenfields aditiya bhagav.
Commentor2: Aur excel se Mayank,to greenfields ke Karan.
Commentor1: aur excel ke uday aur greenfields ke abhi.
[Commentors called name after name and..]
commentor1:aur ab greenfields ke amit, aur yeh kya excel se ek volenteer araha hai kyunki rahul iss waqt due to personal problem available nahin hai and the volunteer is..... GUNJAN MALHOTRA, yes she is a girl and from malaysia she achieved many gold medals, she is dia malhotra's sister, dekhte hain ki kya gunjan apna jadu excel pe chala payengi,here is gunjan.
[Gunjans enters the court in excel bbt uniform]
{samrat turns to see her and is freezed, his eyes on gunjans hairs which are falling on her face}.
[Gunjan comes and stands with other excel members,samrat eyes still on her,then mayank sees him and gave him a pinch]
Mayank: dude,kya hua dream girl to nahi milgayyi.
Samrat: shayad,forget it.[he shakes his head]
Commentor2: aur ab shuruh hota hai match.
MATCH STARTS:
Commentor 2: aur yeh ball sabse pehle aye excel kae samrat ke paas,aur yeh adi nae unse chini aur yeh gayi ball excel ki gunjan ke paas,aur excel ne apni pehli basket ki ,gunjan ki badolat aur ab yeh bal aye hai samrat kae paas aur yeh excel ka dosri basket.
[after many baskets finally the last one by excel's uday].
Commentor1: aur yeh time up hua aur excel phir se legaye trophy.
CANTEEN:
diya: [counting her money] yes, main bet jeet gayyi, thank you god and ofcourse my sister Gunjan and my friend Samrat,waise guys yeh dono hain kahan.
Uday: lo agaya samrat,trophy liye.
Samrat:[smiling] hey guys, hey candy how are you.[he sits next to dia].
Diya: i am fine, and congratulations.
Samrat: yah, thanks but only because of your sis, woh hai kahan waise.
Nupur: lo woh agayi.
Gunjan[enters the canteen in her previous clothes shirt and choridaar] hi,guys.[she sits next to samrat]
Diya: hey, pony to ab tum sab ka main intro karwa doon apni behan sae, so guys she is gunjan aur gunjan yeh{pointing towards mayank} mayank hai, samrats couson, yeh karan [chump of dia], sonia, and ofcourse samrat.
Samrat{smiles and forward his hand for a shake}: hi, well i must admit u can give me a tough competition in basketball, afterall 7 baskets karna koi asaan baat nahi hai.
Gunjan{shaking hands with samrat}: well, mera nahin khayal i believe jo hum real main chahate hain woh humain mill kar rehta hai, chahe woh 100 baskets hi kyon na hoon.
Samrat: pretty impressive, magar uss sorat main jab samne wali team se tough competition mile to.
Mayank: ya, right, acha guys tum sab ko pata hai sam ko apni woh miss different mill gayyi hain.
Uday: kya baat kar rahe ho yaar kaun hai woh,batao na.
Samrat: sab ko waqt aane par pata chal jayega.
Dia: ok, guys as you know ki aaj dashera hai,to ghar main pooja hai aur gunjan ke aane ki khushi main party.


Samrat: yah sure we all will come aur waise bhi daadi ne to pechlay mahinae hi sae aanay ki tayaariyan shuruh kar di theen.
Uday: sab theek hai par deeds inke dad humare dad aur chachu ke rival hain.
Diya: Nupur, tum maro gi ya main maroon[ nupur slap him twice on his hand],dodo samrats dad and chachu are our partners not rival, acha samrat woh rahul ki behan ab kaisi hai usse zayeda injury to nahin hoi.
Nupur: arre bhai, woh ek athelete hai apne school ki, chot to ayyi hogi, magar tum kyon itna pareshaan ho rahi ho.
Gunjan: kya, nupur dee pareshan kaisay na hoon arre bhai dost ki behan hai.
Samrat: Gunjan, shayad tumhe pata nahin hai, kya dost ki behan ke liye koi ghareebon ko puray 20000 daan karne kay liye manat manta hai.
Gunjan: dee, kya yeh main jo sooch rahi hoon woh sach hai.
Mayank: haan bhai, diya is inloveEmbarrassedEmbarrassed with rahul, magar batana nahi chahati.
[a voice of a girl from somewhere came: pyaar oh my god, do you believe in love].SmileSmileSmile
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by demi lovato - 30 September 2008 at 12:49pm

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Posted: 29 September 2008 at 3:48pm | IP Logged
woooow that amazing !! great beginning loved the introduction of everyone and the way sammy looked at gunjan thats really dreamy well done !!

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Posted: 29 September 2008 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
Great FF please continue soon....
 
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Posted: 29 September 2008 at 4:10pm | IP Logged

sounds great !! Do continue. can u avoid using light colors it's hard to readEmbarrassed

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Posted: 29 September 2008 at 4:11pm | IP Logged
ya specially the yellow colour Embarrassed

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Posted: 29 September 2008 at 4:15pm | IP Logged
hey gr8 fic i luv it  pls continue but ya avoid using light colors espl yellow

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Posted: 30 September 2008 at 12:42am | IP Logged
really good ff u turned gunjan into totally a ridhima charecter but i hope it doesnt happen in mjht bcoz all says that they are copying but really good ff and please pm me when u updated next time

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Cool Luved it....SmileSmileUD soon and please dont use yellow color It gives lots of diffi

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