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prerna1 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
ohhooo so that was love at first sight πŸ˜‰
so nice u depict Raj's feelings so well after seeing NainaπŸ‘
Raj's Mom is so cool she knows that if Raj saw Naina then he surely say yes to marry herπŸ‘πŸΌ
and now Raj will definately say yes to Naina
what happened to Naina's DadπŸ˜•
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
Hey really amazing fic buddy. πŸ‘
Really loved the way u expressed Naina's beauty.😳
I am touched by it.πŸ˜‰
Update was really awesome.⭐️
Naina kitna miss karti hai na apne bhai ko yaar, kitnma roti hai us ko yaad kar k.😭
Raj ki mom ka plan bhi bahut accha hai, hope so vo jaldi hi maan jaaye shaadi k liye.πŸ˜ƒ
Ye Naina k dad ki awaaz thi na?πŸ˜•
update soon yaar.
Edited by varshita - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj ne Naina ko dekha aur dekhta hi rahe gaya!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜ŠAur kho gaya!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ

The lines describing Naina's beauty were too good!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ 

But Naina ki ankhon mein kitna akelapan hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Raj ki mom ne usmein shagun bheja tha!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜Š πŸ˜ŠWow!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

She is right!!!!!   Raj Naina ko dekhne ke baad haan zaroor karega kyunki Naina toh hai hi aisi ke usse pyaar ho jaye!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

Raj's mom is so clever!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ‘ πŸ‘Good for her!!!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Raj ko lagta hai agar pehle milta toh he would have fallen for her!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜ŠHaaiii!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³

Navin ke jaane ke baad uske dad ko paralytic attack aa gaya!!!!!   Thats so sad!!!!😭 πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­

Navin Raj ki baatein karta tha!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜ŠNaina toh rone lagi yeh yaad karke!!!!😭 πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­Poor Naina!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Ab Raj phir se apne aap ko kosh raha hai!!!!😭 πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­

Raj ab Naina ko comfort kar raha hai!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜ŠSo sweet!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

Naina ki mom ko heart attack aaya tha!!!!    Dukhon ka toh jaise pahad tut pada hai!!!!😭 πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­

Raj jaana chahta hai magar Naina ki mom usse rok rahi hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Thats nice!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

Raj rukega toh Naina ke saath aur wat bitayega!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

Naina ke dad ko kya huya???πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Ab Raj shaadi ke liye haa zaroor kar dega because he has already fallen for Naina!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³

 
 
 

 

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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
excellentπŸ‘.cont soon......... Edited by *Rajeevian* - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
hey  fantastic update!
 
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waiting for the next.
plz update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Amazing really!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Thanks darling.😊
 
U r terrific n d update was outstanding really!!!!!!!!πŸ‘
Thanks again darling.πŸ˜ƒ
 
Loved the way u express the emotions...I think Raj will say yes now aas he has fallen for Naina surely...
Vo to hai hi, humari Naina hai hi aise.πŸ˜‰
 
Do update n pls inform me abt other updates of your fictions tooo
Thanx again
Yeah shure dear.😊
 

 
Thanks for reply sweety.πŸ˜›
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: rituka7

simply great
update was awesome
update soon long asap

 
Thanks dear.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: KRIZZY

fantastic

so raj is in first site love
hmmmmmmmmmm.......
how cute
great ud
ud asap
keep it up

 
Not shure dear ki ye first sight love hai ya nahi.πŸ˜‰
Thanks a lot for such sweet reply.πŸ˜ƒ
Yeah i am updating it now.πŸ˜›
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII VARTIKA HOPE U R SUPERB. THE UD WAS FANTASTIC MINDBLOWING TOOO GOOOD ROCKING TUM BAHUT AACHA LIKTI HO SWEETY EAGERLYWAITING FOR THE NEXT PART LOVE DEEPA.

 
Yeah really darling but i am not so rocking bus theek hoon.
Thanks for liking my writing skills darling.😳
Thanks a lot for reply.πŸ˜›
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

fabulous.....loved d way u narrated naina n raj meet ....tooo good..

 
Thanks dear .πŸ˜›