tum se hi(short ff).... the end!

Post Reply New Post

Next Topic

Prev Topic

mystified

Goldie

Joined: 29 August 2008

Posts: 1228

Posted: 14 September 2008 at 5:11pm | IP Logged

Pranaam everyone!!

I am very happy with the response I got for my fic "whatever it takes". So I have decided to start another one. But this is a very short fic. I wrote this after rajveer's exit was aired on the show. Cry

I have decided to name this fic "tum se hi.." if in case this name resembles anybody elses' fic I apologise sincerely. Smile

I hope u will like this one also. I would like to say that this will not have many twists. This is a very simple story. The emotions, state of mind of the characters etc. will be shown. The story line will be similar to that of the original track but I have changed a few things to suit my story of which you will come to know in the forthcoming parts.

I would also like to dedicate this fic to all the lovely readers of my other ff with whose support I've got the courage to post this one. Big smile

So please do read and leave your comments.

Until then take care...sayonara.

Edited by mystified - 07 October 2008 at 3:35pm

Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "tum se hi(short ff).... the end!" in Fan Fictions forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!

mystified

Goldie

Joined: 29 August 2008

Posts: 1228

Posted: 14 September 2008 at 5:12pm | IP Logged

Journey towards the past

As she was staring out of the window she could see the trees swinging to the rhythm of the wind as if they are dancing to some unknown music but she couldn't enjoy them or feel the beauty. Her life seemed to be void of any color and music was probably the last thing she could imagine. Nobody sitting with her in that bus could probably have imagined what was going through her mind. Her life seemed to have come to a halt with that fateful incident. Now she traveled a journey where she couldn't see any clear destination but all she knew was that this road was worth traveling to unwrap the mystery which disrupted her life,her parent's hopes and dreams.

She was deep down feeling guilty of betraying her parents but this was a decision that she had to make. She had to fight, fight for freedom, for redemption, for honour at most important of all for justice. She still remembered her brother telling her that truth always triumphs. Sometimes she thought that the whole world was full of deceit and the people fighting for truth are probably fools. Yet she was ready for the battle, ready to face the world which could give her nothing except pain, scorn and sorrow. Because as long as there was breath, there was hope. So she would fight. It is with this hope that she traveled to an unknown place, amongst strangers very well aware of the fact that a single wrong move and she could end up ruining everything.

She was deep in her thoughts that she probably didn't realize her phone ringing. It was ringing continuously that disturbed her flow of thoughts.

When she recovered she found her co passengers staring at her oddly but she chose to ignore it and quickly attended it.

"where are you? Why didn't you attend the call early? Is everything alright? Are u…"

"Calm down pooja! I am alright. Actually I was asleep that's why I couldn't attend your call. I am sorry."

"oh that's okay Naina, actually I just had a gut feeling that you were in trouble. You know ..instincts…"

"don't worry I am fine. I will be arriving in another two hours or so. I will inform you as soon as I arrive is it ok?"

"ok then no problem.. I'll see you then. Have a safe trip…bye"

"bye"

Pooja was always bubbly and energetic,a girl who was a dreamer and would do anything to fulfill her dream. She strongly believed in destiny along with her crazy funda for hindi music. In short she was fun to hang out with. May be that is the reason for naina to inform about her visit. Nobody could suspect her when she was with pooja. She would however be careful enough so that she does not put pooja in trouble.

Still two more hours and she had to stay awake. She could not become weak. This was the last chance. Last ray of hope. Last lead to the mystery. Yes naina had to stay awake, calm and composed as she could not afford any mistakes or allow anybody to suspect her. Finally Naina singh ahluwalia was on her way to Kanchanjunga Military Academy, .the journey to prove to the world that her brother navin singh ahluwalia had died the death of a martyr, he had died protecting the country against the vultures who tried to trap him.

This is a journey she had to make. She told her parents that she was going to join KMA only to prove herself worthy of being considered a good soldier and bring the lost honor but she was here on an entire new mission. She managed to convince her parents that she would not do anything dangerous or self revealing to put her in trouble. Now as she approached near the gates she was overwhelmed, a feeling arose in her which she couldn't comprehend. There she stood standing at the entrance of KMA with no idea of what was in store for her. Naina had finally arrived in KMA.

Shaina_b

IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 13 July 2007

Posts: 23454

Posted: 14 September 2008 at 7:43pm | IP Logged

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Naina has come to KMA to prove her brother innocent!!!! Smile

Pooja is her friend already!!!! Tongue

Thats nice!!!! Smile

I am looking forward to her meeting with Raj!!!!! Smile

hinal60

Senior Member

Joined: 15 May 2006

Posts: 474

Posted: 14 September 2008 at 8:14pm | IP Logged

hey really nice i like the update very much

please continue soon

fanatic 21

Goldie

Joined: 12 June 2007

Posts: 1856

Posted: 15 September 2008 at 12:10am | IP Logged

awesome start!!!!!!!waitin to read ahead.......

suhana.dixit

IF-Dazzler

Joined: 03 October 2007

Posts: 3440

Posted: 15 September 2008 at 5:04am | IP Logged

Dis fiction is staring from the point where Raj left or from the beginning or when Naina joined KMA to proove her brother's innocence

EimenEnchanted

Goldie

Joined: 24 May 2007

Posts: 2353

Posted: 15 September 2008 at 5:31am | IP Logged

Clap

cont soon

-Yaz-

IF-Rockerz

Joined: 06 May 2007

Posts: 5035

Posted: 15 September 2008 at 10:10am | IP Logged

Originally posted by suhana_dixit

Dis fiction is staring from the point where Raj left or from the beginning or when Naina joined KMA to proove her brother's innocence

i think this is starting from the beginning when Naina comes to prove her brother innocent ... am i right mystified .... Big smile

by the way what's your real name i feel weird calling you mystified lol ... LOL

by the way .............. YIPEE!! LOL

lol do you know what that was for ........... no ........ well i'll tell you because you started another fic ......... by the way is this for the contest because if it is ... i have to tell you that the deadline is end of this month ... which is nearing .... Big smile

and yeah .... the first part was great ... good job hun Clap

i am feeling really sick ... Dead

so i'll read WIT later on ... after i take a little bit of rest ...

take care Big smile

yasmin

p.s looking forward to see my Raju *blushing* in the next update ........ Embarrassed

Page 1 of 15
« previous
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
...
14
15
next»

Post Reply New Post

Go to top

Topics	Topic Starter	Replies	Views	Last Post
A Woman...?~MN-KashSSs-Pt2(Lst)Pg126-14/10/12 2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 126 127	kashishk	1010	57421	20 October 2012 at 2:54am By love.mayurarti
Arranged Marriage-SS-(AR-ArSh)-T:NotPg152(9/11/10) 2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 152 153	kashishk	1218	94506	26 November 2010 at 9:46am By -SmokySapphira-
sajjan short story:THE STRANGER:(only 2 parts):-)	-nautankidollz-	2	821	27 January 2010 at 3:29am By tazy_rahul
~~MY UNIQ LOVE STORY~~ [AR] SHORT FF 2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 10 11	arshluver_15	82	6781	17 January 2010 at 6:10am By arshluver_15
“Dil ki baatein” Short story last part VI 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9	bhoomikauttam	65	7265	13 December 2009 at 10:21am By bhoomikauttam

tum se hi(short ff).... the end!

Page 1 of 15

Posted: 14 September 2008 at 5:11pm | IP Logged

Posted: 14 September 2008 at 5:12pm | IP Logged

Posted: 14 September 2008 at 7:43pm | IP Logged

Posted: 14 September 2008 at 8:14pm | IP Logged

Posted: 15 September 2008 at 12:10am | IP Logged

Posted: 15 September 2008 at 5:04am | IP Logged

Posted: 15 September 2008 at 5:31am | IP Logged

Posted: 15 September 2008 at 10:10am | IP Logged

Related Topics

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Search

Join India-forums Today!

Here's why members would love to be a part of India-Forums.com:

Join Us Close