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Posted: 10 September 2008 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by swansea

amazing part bheegi sweetheart
 
thanks swanseaSmile

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Posted: 10 September 2008 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
Congrats on ur 4th thread bheegi di!!! Loved this part, u r such a good writter, u should write books!!! I am wondering what will happen with shashank and abhimanyu? continue soon! Big smile and congrats once again Clap , keep it up!!!

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Posted: 10 September 2008 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
Sangeeta...

Awesome work and congratulations for part number 57, and the new thread! look forward to the upcoming parts!

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Posted: 10 September 2008 at 2:54pm | IP Logged
thanks for the PM
love the part
ridz is so right, shashank/abhi will NEVER change ugghh
aww poor armaan, feel sorry for him, i am so mad how dare shashank to say stuff like that to armaan
aaww AK part was very sweet and cute, i love the way angad says "kripa kripa kripa.....kripa ho tumhari" lol it sounds freakin hillarious, i can so imagine him saying that
do cont soon

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Posted: 10 September 2008 at 3:06pm | IP Logged
Congrats on the 4th thread Di! I told u..u'll be starting a new thread coz the response u get is amazing! Clap Thanks for the PM btw..
Now back to the part, I jst knew Armaan couldnt hide the news.. aww man that must hav been so embarrasing for Riddhima..poor her! Ugghh this Shashank gets on my nerves..cant he be happy for his child for once atleast! Angry and yes, Abhimanyu is also behaving like a jerk! Lol, these wishes and so many people get tiring dont they! Tongue Uff this Shashank started again.. Can I please murder him! This Shashank is interfering in their happiness! Lol, we would love to bear with this story and you always! LOL Lol, I liked the way Kripa planned the surprise for him and Angad worries soo much for her..thats soo sweet! Liked the cute scene between them! Embarrassed I wonder if guys like Angad and Armaan really do exist! Day Dreaming Anyway..awesome part..enjoyed it a lot.. do update soon! Big smile

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Posted: 10 September 2008 at 3:09pm | IP Logged
Congrats on your new thread di!!!!!!!! Clap
 
I can't believe Shashank! He should be happy for them but instead he's subtly criticizing the decision?! Awww AK part was toooo cute!! Embarrassed

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Posted: 10 September 2008 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
Hi Sangeeta Di... thanx for d PM...
 
OMG... The Dadies are the same... When will they grow up... They are such stupid people (sorry to say this i know they are oldUnhappy, but cant help it)... Why cant they be happy with their kids' happiness... They wont change... They spoiled the HAPPIEST moment of their kid's life. I really felt bad for AR...
 
AK scen was also very sweet... i liked Kripa's rick and surprise... But i liked Angad verse more than that...
 
Love
- Sheetal

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Posted: 10 September 2008 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
MIND BLOWING!!!!! CONGRATULATIONS ON UR 4TH THREAD BTW!!!!!! ur perhaps the only writer on the forum tht has and still is and hopefully will keep writing an ff adored sooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AR and AK are definetely popular...but them combined makes it double the mazaa..nd with a lot of bheegi's creativity..their jodi becomes the best of the best!!!!!!!!! :)
 
hmm as fr AR...sympathetic preggy was hilarious and this part was really sweet..........actually i missed ur pm bout the previous part so just caught up with tht!! in fact i was thinking about u all thru out skool today.....im like how cum she hasn't updated yet...nd sumthing came up during my english class (trying to remember it) which reminded me of AK and ur past ffs...aww wish i had the time to re-read those but first yr of hi-skool doesn't allow me!!! :( anywayss....back to AR...im glad tht both of them hav a good understanding....as in its not only armaan hating on his father-in-law but ridz understands his remarks too and doesn't like them either...same thing with armi's dad....ridz respects him a ton but luckily armi knows how to deal with him and his remarks!! armi has really matured...but i think ridz is the one persn in ur ff the grew the most!!!!!!!!!!
 
now AK...awwww.........chooooo chweeettt!!!! lols angad is a sweetheart...tho now im a bit worried after kripa's superstition..i dunt want there to be any problems later on...altho u promised no more sad parts...and while i was trying to find the last part...(lols.u pmed me the wrong page) i saw sum1's comment.....u promised tht person tht u'll keep writing this ff until she yells stop...well i know fr a fact she wont yell stop and i hope u'll keep ur promise :).... but AK are really adorable....lols....very cute together....and the kesar bavan was really sweet...angad's hindi was exceptional...hmm.....i really liked how angad kept praying but talking to kripa at the same time...lols i could clearly imagine tht and another scene: "kripa, kripa, kripa, kripa ho tumhari"....tht was waaayayayayaya toooooo hilarious!!!!!!!! lols...and plzz dunt mention the AK seperation anymore...it reminds me of their old times too!! :(....but im sure being a writer u do it fr a reason!
 
now my most fav and i hope u continue more amazing parts bout this couple:AA
"abbe saale" i luv how u use tht phrase...nd tht goes out fr all ur ffs....lols...the cell phone exchange b/w the four was hilarious......lols...its payback time..LMAO...i luv their jodi......hope we can see these two couples on screen together in a show written by you..it shud be called....__________________(whtever u decide to call it) and in the credits it shud say "based on the fan-fiction 'two err is human'..exceptionally written by sangeeta di"
 
wht say??? lols...keep in touch and keep writing
luv
Samra


Edited by masin - 10 September 2008 at 3:19pm

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