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Mere Pass Pass 8
 
 
 
MORNING

We see Armaan doing some stuff in the kitchen..early in the morning...he is trying not to make a noise..cuz he doesn't want Ridz to wake up...but she does...and seems Armaan in the kitchen....

Ridz:Armaan...?

Armaan: Hi...Good Morning...kaisi ho ?

Ridz: wht are u doin here..?

Armaan: sach bataoon ? mein tumhare liye breakfast bana raha hun..aur dophar ka khana bhi...i thought of doing all this b4 i go to work..aur bataoon tumhare kitchen ko junk food se pak raha hun...aur yeh sab karne mein thora shor toh hoga na.....

Ridz:kisne kaha yeh sab karne ko...i can manage quiet well...

Armaan: tumhari management mein dekh chuka hun...ab tum meri management dekhoo..jao fresh hoke aao..

Ridz: ek min Armaan....agr maine tumhein apne baare mein kuch bataya hai..dat doesn't mean u can interfare in ma life...mujhe yeh sab acha nahin lag raha...

Armaan: tum nashta karlou phir mein chala jaonga...

Ridz: i m serious Armaan...

Armaan: decide karoo serious ho ke Ridz ?

Ridz: Armaannnnn

Armaan:Ridzzzzz

Ridz: plz Armaan...

Armaan: i m serious too ( he holds Ridz frm her shoulders and make her sit) aur meri baat dhyaan se sunoo..mein tumhari zindagi mein bilkul interfare nahin kara raha...meri taraf dekho ( she looks at him) mein tumhein sirf yeh ehaas dilana chahta hun ke tum akeli nahin hoo...mein tumhare saath hun...tumhare pass hun...bilkul ek ache dost ki tarah...okay ?

Ridz: Okay...

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STUDIO

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Atul sees Armaan lost so he asks

Atul:kya soch raha hai ?

Armaan: socha raha hun teri bhabhi ki tabiyet kaisi hogi ab...

Atul: toh soch kyun raha hai poach leta

Armaan:woh expect kar rahi hai na...toh is waqt woh kya soch rahi hogi...

Atul: Mujhe lag raha hai tujhe doc ki zaroorat hai teri tabiyet kharab hogayi hai...itni khubsorat models tere aage peeche ghumti hain...tu usk peeche hai...

Armaan: yaar tu na bilkul sensitive nahin hai...mein lougo ke baare mein sochta hun...unki feelings ke baare mein sochta hun

Atul: yeh jo teri sensitivity hai na..yeh apne pass rakh...Ridz expect kar rahi hai kya ?

Armaan: tu pagal hogaya hai...tere aur meri baat mein Ridz kahan se agayi..

Atul: tu saaf saaf kyun nahin bolta toh usi ke baare mein baat kar raha tha...

Armaan:tujhe agr kuch nahin batana toh mat bata

Atul: mujhe kya pata..aise keha raha hai jaise mere 6-7 bache hain..acha sun is topic ke baare mein na u can get books...

Armaan: sun jab tu beemar hoga na toh mein tab us beemari ki book zaroor buy karoonga...

Armaan goes to the bookstore to get the books...he looks arnd and get all books abt pregancy..like a huge pile of em..

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R's OFFICE

Aditya: tumne acha nahin kiya...is halat mein Ridz ko akele chor ke...

Rahul: tum kaun hote hoo mujhe yeh sab batane wale...

Aditya: mein tum dono ka dost hun..Rahul...

Rahul: mere kam tum usk dost zyda lagte hoo...bahut fikar hai uski...

Aditya: haan hai...

Rahul: toh mein usse divorce de deta hun...usse tum shadi kyun nahin karlete..

Aditya: kya ho tum yaar....ho kya gaya hai tumhein...

Just then Muskaan enters...

Muskaan: everythin okay ??

Rahul: haan bas yeh Aditya ka dimgaah kharab hogaya hai...

Aditya: Muskaan...jo insan apni biwi ko chor sakta hai...woh dekhta hun kab tak tumhare saath rehta hai..( saying dis Aditya leaves)

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Now AR have breakfast and dinners together...

Armaan is just leaving after dinner..checking out everythin in kitchen

Armaan:kuch samjh mein araha hai ?

Ridz: haan yaar yeh mera kitchen toh lag nahin raha..

Armaan: bilkul sahee...maine bas cheezon ko jagah per rakha hai...warna tum toh unki bikhari hui chor deti hoo...jaise

Ridz:Jaise Rahul ne mujhe chor dia...achanak bikhra bikhra sa hai na.?

Armaan: toh kya hua..samitne ke liye mein hu na...( he is lost for a sec) bas ek prob hai Mam yeh kitchen mujhe ab aise hi nazar aye...Photographer hun yaar..tumne toh chef bana dia hai...aur agr koi bhi cheez idhar udhar hui toh mujse bura koi nahin hoga ( Ridz is lost)

Armaan: Hello tumse baat kar raha hun...

Ridz: acha mere baap...

(Armaan walks behind Ridz to her bedroom )

Ridz: tum yahan kya kar rahe hoo

Armaan: kya haal bana rakha hai..kamre ka...

Ridz: Armaan...now here too ?

Armaan: yeh sab bhi mein hi theek karoon ke tum kar rahi hoo

Ridz: nahin sab sahee kar rahi hun...i'll do it

Armaan: acha hai..tum jitna kaam karoogi tumhari excersie hoti rahegi...

Ridz:tumhein kaun batata rehta hai yeh sab kuch

Armaan: Computer Chacha..

Ridz(confused): ohkie...

Armaan: doc ki appt. kab hai ? last time bhi nahin gayi thee tum is bar tumhein mein le kar jaonga...

Ridz: Armaan...tum kuch zyda hi helpful nahin horahe...mein tumhare saath nahin jaongi..

Armaan: kyun..??

Ridz: meri marzi jab dekhoo mere personal matters mein bas bolte rehte hoo

Armaan( gets naraaz): theek hai tumhari marzi..tumhein jana hoga toh chali jana nahin jana hoga toh mat jana..ab mein kuch nahin bolonga...khush ?

Ridz: bahut khush...

Armaan: theek hai mein jaa raha hun...

Ridz: ok bye....

Armaan: yeah bye...

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Next Morning

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Armaan is nowhere to be seen..Ridz is kinda missing him...dat night when she is walking when she sees Armaan comming back frm Studio

Ridz: kaise ho ?

Armaan: theek hun

Ridz: aaj subah se kahan gayab ho

Armaan: busy tha...

Ridz:kahan ?

Armaan: kaam mein

Ridz: Oh naraaz ho ?

Armaan: tumhein kya lag raha hai..

Ridz: yehi ke naraaz ho..kyun hoo naraaz ?

Armaan: tumhein nahin pata kyun hun naraaz ?

Ridz: acha i m sorry...ab ghussa chor dou..

Armaan(smiles) : tumse naraaz reh bhi nahin sakta...

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STUDIO

Armaan: mujhe pata woh nahin jayegi...

Atul: tune usse poacha hai ?

Armaan: nahin...tujhe lagta hai woh mere saath Shimla chalegi...shadi per chalegi ?

Atul: poach ke dekh lay...

Armaan: i dnt wanna leave her alone for dat long...

Atul: Long ?? ek week ki hi toh baat hai...

Armaan: ek week mein 7 days hote hain...

Atul: thanks for telling me dat Mr.Malik...

Armaan( to himself): i hope woh doc ke pass gayi hoo..usse apne aap se koi dushmani hai...

Atul: kya keha raha hai...

Armaan: tujhe nahin keh raha tha...ek toh insan khud se sukoon se baat bhi nahin kar sakta..

Atul: mujhe malooom hota ke tum khud se baat kar rahe hoo toh mein apne kaano per zor hi nahin deta...

Armaan: acha mein bahar jaa raha hun tu yahan ka kaam sambhal leyna...Mr.Mehra ki photos tayyar hogayi hain...payment le leyna...( Atul isn't paying attention) oh hello mein tuj se baat kar raha hun..

Atul: mein samjha toh abhi tak khud se baat kar rahe hai...

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AT NIGHT

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Ridz is finding something in the fridge to eat.

She hears someone frm the window...its Armaan...

Ridz: tum yahan kia kar rahe hoo ?

Armaan: tumhein check karne aya tha...

Ridz: mein koi baby nahin hun jo mujhe checking chahiye

Armaan: tum baby se barh ke hoo..door khuloo..

Ridz: mujhe bhook lag rahi hai..

Armaan: tum bethoo mein karta hun...( he takes out a pizza and puts it in oven and sees Ridz is lost somewhere) kya soch rahi ho ?

Ridz: mein soch rahi thee ke mein kitni akeli hun..aur galz hoti hain unk parents hote hain...Anjali bhi yahan nahin hai..probs discuss karne ke liye...baat karne ke liye...

Armaan: tumhare parents kahan gaye...?

Ridz: shadi ke baad hi..car accident mein unki death hogayi..

Armaan: Oh..tu koi rishtedaar..

Ridz: Uncle hain ek...per Rahul khabhi milne nahin deta tha toh.. ab kahan se miloongi

Armaan: yeah i can understand...

Ridz: khabhi khabhi toh i really get lonely..

Armaan: mein har waqt tumhein tang karta rehta hun..phir bhi ?

Ridz(smiles): u knw u really have been a good friend...really...tum bhi yahan akele hoo..family yaad nahin ati

Armaan: shuroo mein prob hui thee...itni badi family chor ke Mumbai jaise sher mein settle hona bahut muskil kaam hai...

Ridz: wapis nahin gaye ?

Armaan: nahin woh samjhte hain ke mera kaam respectable nahin hai..doctor hota..engineer hota toh theek tha...

Ridz: baat bhi nahin hoti..?

Armaan: baat hoti hai Mom se...

Ridz: dat means u r lonely like me too

Armaan: yeahh..isliye toh tumhein akela nahin rehne deta

Ridz: chalu..yeh ehaas nahin hoga..ke tum eshaan kar rahe hoo..

Armaan: Whaat ? ab yeh nahin bolna...

Ridz: okay baba...

Armaan: actually mujhe tumhari care karna acha lagta hai ...tumse baat karna acha lagta hai..i really like it...

Ridz: thank u...

Armaan: acha ab mein jaa raha hun...sleep well..and mein door lock kark jaonga ( he gets up to leave and Ridz hold his hand)

Ridz: Armaan...

Armaan: haan ?

Ridz: tum mera itna khyaal kyun rakhte hoo ?( he turns back and looks at her)

Armaan: dimaagh kharab hai na mera.....( Ridz is confused) jk..aise hi...acha tum bahut tired hogi..go to sleep now...

Ridz: yeah i m really tired...

Armaan: i knww...acha sunoo

Ridz: hmmm

Armaan: next week mere ek friend ki shadi hai...tum chaluoogi ?

Ridz: mein kya karoongi wahan...

Armaan: just for a change...baby tumhari tarah boring nahin hoga na...

Ridz:aise le kar jaogi mujhe...

Armaan: haan na..cute lagti hoo..

Ridz: sochoongi..

Ridz goes to her bedroom...and Armaan puts his hands on his head and smiles to himself thinking abt her...just then Ridz's Home fone rings and Armaan rcvs it....its Muskaan.

Armaan: Hi...

Muskaan:Kaun..

Armaan: apko i think Ridz se baat karni hai lekin woh sou gayi hai..aap mujhe msg de dein..i will tell her

Muskaan: nahin mujhe Ridz se hi baat karni hai...

Armaan: well she slept and i cnt wake her up...aap mujhe apna naam aur fone number de dein...i will tell her to call u...

Muskaan: aap kaun hain ?

Armaan: mein unka dost bol raha hun...

Muskaan: okay Ridz nameless friend...mein kal usse khud hi fone karloungi..byeeeeeee.

Muskaan( says to herself): itni late night..itna sweet friend...kitni achi baat hai...how wonderful

 

 

 

 

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Wonderful Part

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hey nice part..thanx fr PM dear..update next part soon..

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thanks for the pm sweetyWink
lovely part slowly AR frnship is becoming strong naaEmbarrassed
very cute yaar
n that rahul he better be away from ridz nowAngry
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hmmm awesome i like it.............

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really nce prt, i lked it! thx 4 d pm! cntd sn!

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so sweet n cute prtz btween AR do cont soon! thnx 4 tha PM/update!
 
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