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Mere Pass Pass - 7
 
OFFICE

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Aditya: u remember na aaj humari Miss Muskaan ki saath meeting hai...

Rahul: haan i knww..i m gonna convince her to..do dis partnership with us...as she wud need a indian based company to complete the contract anywayz..why not us then...

Aditya: tumhein lagta hai man jayengi..

Rahul:ofcouse she wud...i really worked hard on this project i m not just gonna let it go..in waste...

Aditya: i hope so...

Muskaan enters the office...

Muskaan: Hi.Mr. Gerewal...u have 15 mins...

Aditya: Hi...how u doin ?

Muskaan: time waste nahin karein....kaam ki baat karoo

Aditya: well u knw Mam..apki company aur humari company ek hi contract ke liye compete kar rahe thay...and u got it but...apko ek indian based comapny chahiye hogi...

Muskaan: 5 mins...
Aditya: toh hum soch rahe thay....

Muskaan: sun rahi hun...

Rahul: let me put it straight...hum dono ko ek dosre ki zaroorat padegi in order to complete dis contract...so is partnership mein hum dono ka fyda hoga...

Muskaan(smiles): i like ur attitude ....

Rahul:then better work with me...u might like other things too

Muskaan ( goes close to Rahul and runs her finger along his jaw line): jaise ke...? aap ?

Rahul: hosakta hai...

Aditya: ahem...

Rahul: Aditya tum bahar jao..yeh deal mein khud sambhal lounga...

(Aditya leaves and the deal btw the 2 companies is finalized..)

Since den Muskaan and Rahul had been spenting most of there times together...

Muskaan offers Rahul..to come to U.S with her and he agrees and decides to inform Ridz abt it

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Late Night

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Armaan comes back home and sees Ridz walking in the frontyard so he stops by.

Armaan: Hello...sab theek toh hai...

Ridz:haan bas enjoying the night.....

Armaan: 11 baje chuke hain...

Ridz: tabhi toh itna acha lag raha hai....pata hai Armaan Mumbai ki sab se buri baat kya hai...yahan per taare nahin nazar aate

Armaan:haan...bilkul...aur tumhari tarah husband ko yaad kark taare gine wale bhi kam hi nazar aate hain...

Ridz: shayad unk husbands itne ache na hoon isliye..

Armaan: haan..shyad woh khud itni achi na hoon...waise raat bahut hogayi hai tum andar chali jao

Ridz:tum chale jao...mein thori rukooongi yahan bahar acha lag raha hai...

Armaan: yun raat ko bahir rehna safe nahin hai

Ridz: kyun..? guard hota hai na

Armaan: guard toh bahir hota hai..andar toh nahin..(just den Ridz fone rings).

Ridz:RAHULLL...haan i m free.... 7 baje ? okay theek hai...yeahhh i will be there..(disconnects and she is really very happy) Rahul araha hai...

Armaan: wapis ???

Ridz: Armaan...i m sooo happy....

Armaan: woh toh lag hi raha hai..bachoo ki tarah excited hoo..

Ridz:ab mein jaa ke sou sakti hun...Good Night...thanks for the company haan

Armaan: my pleasure...( She leaves) Luckyyy Rahul...

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Office

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Muskaan: So Mr. Handsome...whr are u gon for dinner...

Rahul: well i had to tell someone abt me goin to U.S so wahin dinner karoonga...tum bhi chalu saath...

Muskaan: main wahan kya karoongi...?

Rahul:itna yakeen toh dilata hun...ke bore nahin hogi..mujhe waise hi bura lag raha hai ke u asked and i m dnt wanna say No..

Muskaan: i thought tumhein meri company chahiye..isliye bol rahe thay chalne ko...

Rahul: mujhe tumhari company chahiye...ab chalein

Muskaan: mere kapde theek hain ?

Rahul: beautiful..

Muskaan: okay chalu...

Restaurant

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Ridz arrange everythin how Rahul likes it..all his fav dishes and drinks...and even his fav place to sit....she reserved dat table already...she just wanted all this to be perfect...brings hi fav flowers too and Rahul arrives with Muskaan...and she is really disappointed

Rahul: Hi...

Ridz: Hi.

Muskaan: i hope u dnt mind...woh toh Rahul ne bahut zid ki toh mein agayi....

Ridz: hmm no its ok...

Muskaan: Hi i m Muskaan...a really close person to Rahul...maine toh decide karlia hai ke ab Rahul ke saath lunch/dinner karne ka haq sirf mera hai....hai na Rahul...

Ridz: chup kyun ho ? bataoo..kaun hai tumhare sab se close kaun hai ?

Rahul: its none of ur business...

Ridz: Oh really ? main nahin poach sakti...

Rahul: mera khyaal humein jana chahiye...mein tumhein call karoonga..

Ridz: kyun ? tumhare pass mere sawloon ka jawab nahin hai ya tum bhaagna chahte ho...jaise hamshea bhaagte hoo..yehi karti hoo na tum Rahul...u r a coward..tum toh mere sawal ka muqabla bhi nahin kar sakte...halat ka muqabla kya karooge..

Rahul: yahan mein apni bezaiti karwane nahin aya...

Ridz: tumhari bezaiti us din hochuki thee jis din tum mujhe chor kar chale gaye thay...aise aadmi ki kya izzat hoti hai..jo apne bache ko disown karke marna chahta hoo..

Rahul:Oh SHutup in sab baaton ka time nahin hai mere pass tumhein yeh batane aya tha ke i m goin to U.S for some work

Ridz: why....why shud i shutup ? tum chahte hoo mein hamshea ki tarah wohi kahoon jo tum chahte hoo ? wohi karoon jo tum chahte ho ? Rahul mein hamshea aisa karti ayi hun...EK baar agr maine tumhari baat nahin maani...EK baar age mein tumhare against chali gayi...tum mujhe aise chor ke jaa rahe hoo jaise meri zindagi mein khabhi thay hi nahin...

Rahul:mujhe tum jaisi pagal ladki se baat nahin karni...

Ridz(starts crying now): mein baat karoongi toh tum karooge na...ab tum mere peeche bhaagooge Rahul..u understand me...( he leaves her crying)

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Ridz is Completely shattered ...her every hope is gone...she has been at the she sumhow manages to drive home...

Armaan asusal is waiting just to get a glimpse of her love....he sees her car comming...notices she is all lost he goes near the window and notices she is crying

Armaan: Ridz...kya hua Ridz ? a

(Ridz doesn't reply...closes her eyes and cries even more...)

Armaan: are you okay ?

(he opens the car's door )

Armaan: chalu andar chalu...ghar ke chabi...dou..kya hua Ridz?

(Ridz is continuely crying..he helps her to get out...she isn't even able to stand properly..she is abt to faint...when he holds her...and turns her to himself)

Armaan: Ridz...hua kya ? Rahul kahan hai ?

(Ridz is still silent) Rahul kahan hai Ridz..kuch toh bolo...(Ridz looks at him...and hugs him..she is crying badly...Armaan doesn't knw wht to do....)

Armaan: chalu andar chalu...( she isn't able to walk...he picks her up in his arms)

"Armaan"

tu jahan main wahan sang sang

yuhn chaloon tere jaise tera aasmaan

jo dhoop nikli chaaya ban jaaonga

jo ho tu akeli saaya ban jaaonga

jo uljhan mein ho mann main behlaoonga

(He takes her in he makes her sit on the couch and goes to the kitchen and gets water for her and makes her drink it)

Armaan: Ridz Rahul kahan hai ? tum kuch bol kyun nahin rahi...kya hua..koi prob hogayi....ladai hogayi hai tum dono mein ? toh bataoo na..plz..Ridz..bataoo kya hua ?

Ridz: dekhoo mere ghar ko Armaan...apne saath Rahul sab kuch le gaya...yahan...uska Computer hua karta tha...wahan...uska mangazine collection....aise gaya hai woh meri zindagi se jaise khabhi uska hissa hi nahin tha....(she cries again..Armaan goes and sits infront of her...)

Armaan: aisi kya baat hogayi thee...ke woh chala gaya....

Ridz: aisi kya baat hogayi thee ? woh baap banne wala tha..( Armaan is shocked) i m having Rahul's baby...usse bache khabhi ache nahin lage...shuroo se mujhe kehta tha ke bache fazool hain...waste of money...uski list of priorities hamshea si aur hai...bada sa ghar...car...ek bahut bada business empire...Armaan mein isse khatam nahin kar sakti..i cudn't kill ma baby...maine theek kia na ? Armaan maine theek kiya na ?

Armaan: tumne bilkul theek kiya..lekin itna arsa chupa ke rakha....akeli sehti rahi...itna dukh...

Ridz:kya kehti...kisse kehti...

Armaan:mujhse kehti..main tha na tumhare pass

Ridz:aur tum kya sochte mere baare mein ? nahin keh sakti thee mein tumse...

Armaan: dekhoo tum mujhse keh sakti thee..okay

( Ridz starts crying again....she buries her head in her hands)

Ridz: Armaan maine kuch galat nahin kiya

"Armaan"

ho ghum ke badal mujhpe tham jaane de

bechainiyo ko mujhse takraane de

dukhti ho koi baat mujhpe aane de

tu jahan main wahan

sang sang yuhn chaloon tere

jaise tera aasmaan

( Armaan apne haatho se usk baal side per karta hai..for a second is lost and then realizes whtz happening)

Armaan: tumne wahan kuch khaya tha....( Ridz looks at him and is like do u think so ?) nahin khaya na..chalu uthooo

Ridz: Armaan nahin....

Armaan: chalu ache bachoo ki tarah uthoo..( he holds her hands and makes her get up)

Ridz:Armaan...kya kar rahe hoo

Armaan: uthoo na..jaldi aao...agr bhooki rahoogi na toh utli seedhi baatein sochti rahoogi...

Ridz: Ulti seedhi baatein tum kar rahe hoo

Armaan: chalu andar jao..freshen up

He himself goes to the kitchen and is looking for stuff...but all he cud find are chips,biscuts and junk food.

Armaan: kuch bhi nahin hai...umm kya karooon..( he goes to his place)

Ridz see Armaan is nowhere to be seen..she thinks she left..she is about to close the door..when Armaan..comes...with a glass of milk.

Armaan: aare..tum abhi tak ase hi khari hoo..change bhi nahin kiya...woh wohi rouni shakal....chalu mein tumhare liye khana laya hun chalu kha lou...

Ridz: Armaan mujhe bhook nahin hai...

Armaan: naa ho bhook khana toh padega...

Ridz: plz mujhe chakkar arahe hain..mein nahin kha sakti...

Armaan: Ohkie..theek hai toh yeh milk toh pi lou

Ridz: Armaaaaaan

Armaan: Ridz...no arguments..yeh piyo i m gonna put dis food in kitchen...( he comes back ) he kya abhi tak piya nahin tumne..chalu chalu piyo..(Ridz is being all whiny abt it....and making funny faces whyle drinking it ) come on Ridz pura peena hai....

Ridz: ab hogaya na...( she drinks it all)

Armaan(smiles): datz like a good gal...aur haan kal se tum sab baby ke liye karoogi...tum khaoogi baby ke liye...sou gi baby ke liye...okay ? aur mujhe bilkul argue nahin karna...( all thru Ridz is looking at Armaan and smiling) acha ab mein jaa raha hun kisi cheez ki bhi zaroorat hoo...toh mujhe fone kardena....

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awesome cont.... soon lovely part

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veryyyy nice! please continue

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hey nice update..waitin fr next part..Smile n add me 2 ur PM list..

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cool ! ht rahul is ...... bad.. bt gud armaan ws der..

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Posted: 12 September 2008 at 5:54am | IP Logged
hey
thanks for the pm sweety
um soo glad armi knows the truth n that that creep left ridz
well um waiting for some nice +ve twist
actually my net was not working for a fornite so now im filled with pms so have to read all of them n have to reply to each ff to the replies will be short for now but a big reply from next part onwards pucca
sorry for now

update soon

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Wonderful Part
 
Armaans so sweet

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hey nice prt cont soon n thnx 4 tha update/PM!
 
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