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AR ff "Mere Pass Pass"( DMG/New/Part 11) (Page 5)

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Mere Pass Pass 6
 
Ridz is really very happy...since Rahul called her home..she drives back home..and is waiting for him when the door bell rings...she opens the door and guess who it is...Armaaaan he is wearing a apron and has a bowl in his hand with a spoon...

Armaan: Hi...( comes in) aaj toh subah se khana banate banate mera dimaagh kharab hogaya hai...maine socha mein apko yeh taste karwa doun...

Ridz: per yeh hai kya...

Armaan: khao toh....

Ridz: agr mein beemar hogayi toh...

Armaan: Oh God..mera bharoosa nahin hai na tumhein..last time ka baad kuch hua ? aaj bhi nahin hoga...yeh chicken mushroom soup hai...

Ridz: per mushrooms kahan hai ismein...

Armaan(looks at it):Oh..mein mushroom dalna toh bhool hi gaya...tumne meri jaan bacha li..

Ridz: kyun kya hua ?

Armaan: aaj maine Atul ko khaane per invite kiya tha...agr mushrooms bhool jata toh unse mera bahut record lagana tha..

Ridz:chalu good for u haan...

Armaan( looks at her kitchen): aap yeh khana bana rahein theen...

Ridz: haan..aur kuch..?

Armaan: tum ek kaam karoo..apna stove band karoo aur humare saath dinner karooo..

Ridz: dnt be silly...tum dono frnds ke beech mein kya karoongi..

Armaan(smiles):Baatein...aur kya ? actually hum ek dosre ki baatein sun sun ke aur shakalein dekh dekh ke bore ho chuke hain..so it wud be a nyce change...

Ridz: nahin nahin...mein kahin nahin arahi..

Armaan: umm okay fine toh aisa karte hain hum loug khana le kar apke ghar aajate hain...akate beth ke khana khaye gaye..aur baatein kareinge...mein dishes waghira bhi le aaonga if u want..

Ridz(suprised): bas bas...ok theek hai i will be dere...

Armaan: phele hi maan jaati..anywayz ghar tumne bahut acha decorate kia hai..yeh apka idea hai..

Ridz: aadha mera adha Rahul ka...

Armaan: Wow..Rahul ki choice bahut achi hai...(looks at Ridz)

Ridz: thanks...

Armaan: acha toh tum 9 baje ajana..warna hum loug ajayenge...remember..( is leaving)

Ridz: i knww...aajaongi..

Armaan: Atul is really puntual woh ajayega...aur mein apka intezaar karoonga...aur haan ismein mushroom bhi dalne hain...c ya...

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Armaan leaves..Rahul still isn't here...so Ridz decides to go get Rahul's fav things frm market as he is gonna be back..when she is back...she..sees Rahul..getting some stuff in his car....

Ridz: Yeh..?

Rahul: Oh hi...thanks for comming...i just came to get ma stuff...kuch cheezain mil nahin rahein thee was wondering if u can help

Ridz(shocked): maine socha..u came back..

Rahul: agr tum apni zid chor deti toh mein jata hi nahin...

Ridz: Rahul...tum ab bhi...

Rahul: mujhe phir se argue nahin karna...i bought a apartment..toh wahin shift horaha hun...( he is talking to her whyle goin back and forth and getting the stuff)

Ridz: aur yeh ghar..

Rahul: for u and Your baby...

Ridz: yeahh MY baby...

Rahul: cupboard mein apne clothes nikalte waqt...i kinda messed up urs too...sorry for that...

(Ridz is all quiet in shock and is kinda numb) it doesn't seem dat u r gonna change ur decision so i dnt think we are gonna see e/o soon.

Ridz(cries): nahin jao Rahul..plz nahin jao

Rahul: tumhari zindagi mein ab koi muj se bhi imp hai..tum apna woh rishta nibhaoo ( he leaves with all the stuff and Ridz is shattered)

 

 

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OFFICE

Meeting

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A very important contract is gonna be annouced today...and Rahul is really hoping to get it. He has worked for it alot and finally wants his hardwork to be paid of it. Everyone else arnd there are sure too that Rahul is gonna get that.

Man: yeh contract is saal ka sab se bada contract hai...yeh jis bhi company ko milega..they are gonna be really sucessfull...and i invite the MD of our company to annouce the name..

MD: the contract goes to...( Rahul almost gets up with a smile) Miss Muskaan..( everyone aplauds and Rahul is shocked...

 
 
 
a gal walks towards the stage in a black suit and high heels...
 
Chhaliya Chhaliya Chhaliya
Ruh Churalo Mein Hu Aisi Chhaliya
Chhaliya Chhaliya Ohhh Chhaliya
Haath Na Aao Mein Hu Aisi Chhaliya

Mmm
Chhaliya Chhaliya Chhaliya
Ruh Churalo Mein Hu Aisi Chhaliya
Chhaliya Chhaliya Ohhh Chhaliya
Haath Na Aao Mein Hu Aisi Chhaliya

Oos Lehar Hu, Dhoop Sehar Hu
Baath Mehar Hu
Bach Ke Jayega Kahan
(Na Lada Na Lada Tu Ankh Na Lada
Don'T Look At Me Like That Mahi
Na Lada Na Lada Tu Ankh Na Lada
Don'T Look At Me Like That Boy)

Chhaliya Chhaliya Chhaliya
Ruh Churalo Mein Hu Aisi Chhaliya


 
 
looking stunning...everyone looks at her...
 
 
Raat Hun, Taaro Mein Mil Jaoo
Har Mod Pe Mein Aaho Ki Bahon Mein Khil Jaoo
Chal Hun, Tujpe Mein Chal Jaoo
Tu Na Janega Kab Baazi Mein Dhoke Se Maar Jaoo
Bhikhre Dil Ka Mein Haal Hun
Aur Gulib Ka Mein Khayal Hun
Mein Noor Hun, Mein Hoor Hun
Bach Ke Jayega Kahan
(Na Lada Na Lada Tu Ankh Na Lada
Don'T Look At Me Like That Mahi
Na Lada Na Lada Tu Ankh Na Lada
Don'T Look At Me Like That Boy)
 
Rahul is way too angry to look at Muskaan right now...

MD: Congo Miss Muskaan

Muskaan: thanks alot...

Rahul to Aditya: who is she ?

Aditya: she just came frm USA a month back...already inki company ki market value bahut barh gayi hai...

Rahul: but yeh contract toh humara tha...

Muskaan( is passing by): but ab yeh mera hai...

Rahul is really angry and leaves..

Aditya: Rahul..woh Ridz keh rahi..( Rahul interups)

Rahul: usse bata toh dia hoga tumne ke main tumhare ghar per hon...usse yeh bhi bata dena ke agr usne meri baat nahin maani..aur mujse milne ki koshish ki toh woh humari akhri mulakaat hogi...

Aditya: Rahul...yeh tumm.

Rahul: yeh humara personal mamla hai..ab tum messanger bane hi hoo.toh sirf messanger rahoo..isse zyda tumhari koi imp nahin hai...and woh Muskaan ke baare mein i wanna knw everything...and fix a meeting with her...asap

Aditya: hmm ok

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That Night

Armaan has been waiting for Ridz..but she is nowhere ..he is waiting for her impatiently...

Atul: yaar woh nahin aane wali...

Armaan: kaun ?

Atul:Ridhima aur kaun.. yeh zyda acting nahin kar...ajaye na toh mera naam badal dena

Armaan: tera toh mein waise hi naam badalne wala hun

Atul: rakh le jo naam rakhna...phir bhi nahin ayegi woh...

Armaan: aare kaise nahin ayegi...usne mujse khud kaha tha..

Atul: aur tune maan lia...dekh mujhe bahut bhook lag rahi hai..subah ek bahut imp shoot bhi hai...chal kuch kha lete hain

Armaan: dekh kisi bhi cheez ko haath na lagayi lets wait for another 30 mins..agr woh agayi toh bura lagega yaar..

Atul: 30 mins ..yaar insan ka bacha ban..mujhe bahuttttt bhook lag rahi hai...mein jaa raha hun khana kaane...apko ana hai toh ayen...warna darwaze per karoo uska intezaar

Armaan(annoyed) : Jaooo..Khao

Atul: aaja yaar

Armaan: ja na kha

Atul: tu bhi kha lay..

(Armaan is really disappointed...and decides to forget Ridz and not talk to her..)

On the other hand..Ridz almost forgets abt Armaan's dinner..and spents her night crying for Rahul..

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Some Days Later

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Armaan is excercising asusal..when he sees Ridz comming out of her home...phele toh woh naraaz hota hai...but then he sees dat Ridz doesn't seem well...he goes to her...

Armaan: kahan jaane ki tayyari hai..?

Ridz:Supermarket...( Ridz holds her head)

Armaan:kya baat hai..tumhari tabiyet toh theek hai...

Ridz: nahin bas thoda sa chakkar agaya tha...

Armaan:tumhein mein aisi haalat mein jaane nahin de raha...list mujhe de dou..mein le ata hun

Ridz: mein keh rahi hun mein theek hun..peeche hi padh jaate ho..jaa rahi hun mein..( she feels dizzy again..and is about to fall.when Armaan takes her in his arms)

Armaan: tumhein chakkar arahe hain..aur tumhari tabiyet bhi theek nahin hai...zid nahin karoo..list mujhe de dou i will bring everything...

Ridz: koi list nahin hai mere pass...jo samjh mein ayega utha loungi..

Armaan: theek hai phir mein tumhein le jata hun...

Ridz: tumhare pass aur koi kaam nahin hai kya...

Armaan: its Sunday...akela bore hi horaha tha ghar per...maine toh yeh socha tha ke main Atul ke pass jaa kar usse bhi bore karta hun...but ab tumhein karoonga

Ridz: dat means aap meri help ke liye hamshea fariq hote hian...

Armaan: jee bilkul agr aap mujhe karne dein toh...chalein ?

Ridz: aap har kisi ko itna tang karte hain ke sirf mere hi peeche pade hue hain...

Arman(murmers): sirf tum hi toh ho...

Ridz: kuch kaha ?

Armaan: nahin....tumne kcuh suna ?

Ridz(confuseD): nahin

Armaan: tang toh nahin kar raha..mein toh sirf care karte hun....give me the keys mein drive karta hun...( they both sit in the car and drive to the supermarket) waise tumhari car bahut cute lagti hai mujhe...its a cute car...

Koi Aarzoo geet ga to rahi hai
Magar dheere dheere
Hoooo
Magar dheere dheere


Meri zindagi mein tu aa to rahi hai
Magar dheere dheere
Hoooooo
Magar dheere dheere
Ooohoooo
Magar dheere dheere

In the Supermarket

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Ridz puts all the junk food in basket..like all the chips and sodas...and stuff...Armaan sees dis

Armaan: yeh kya ulta seedha le rahi ho tum...yeh sab bahut unhealthy hota hai...(takes those things out) yeh tum juice lou..cereal lou...

Ridz: Armaan...thanks alot for ur help...but mein apni marzi ki shopping karoongi...

Armaan: mein toh healthly cheezain hi bata raha tha tumhein...( Ridz puts all dat junk stuff back )

They drive back home...Armaan carries all the stuff and takes it to Ridz home...

Armaan: actually yeh cheezain apne buy ki hai na yeh bilkul healthy nahin hoti..yeh chips hain na mota karte hain insan ko...high proteins diet lou...fruits khao..

Ridz: thanks for the advice...thank u for ur help Armaan...

Armaan: np...darwaza khulo

Ridz: nahin i will take it inside maself..

Armaan: mere andar aane mein prob hai ?

Ridz: i can manage Armaan...

Armaan(disappointed): okay..theek hai..(Ridz is abt to go in) sunooo

Ridz: Armaan maine kaha na..

Armaan: car ki keys....( he gives em to her and leaves)

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Plz do comment..

and thanks to every1 to commented..they mean  alot


Edited by Adildagr8 - 09 September 2008 at 10:06pm

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hey reely cute i luved it Nisha soooo sweet! Ridzy must b shoked dat Armaanz dad had an attack! do cont soon n thnx 4 tha PM/update!
 
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Posted: 09 September 2008 at 10:18pm | IP Logged

lovely cont... soon

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amazing part sweeetie
loved it sooooooooooo much
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i can't believe he left...
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do cont soon..
 
 
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gud awesome thnx fr pm...
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Wonderful Part
 
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Posted: 11 September 2008 at 4:43am | IP Logged
hey
awesome part dear i liked ur concept n the story the way its taking shape
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running out of time now willl comment later on in detail from the next part onwards
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