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AR ff "Mere Pass Pass"( DMG/New/Part 11) (Page 4)

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Posted: 07 September 2008 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
Mere Pass Pass 5
At Night

Armaan is walking to and fro waiting for Ridz car..she hasn't been back frm work yet...she comes and he opens the gate for her...

Ridz: thanks...apko gate khulne ka shauk hai...

Armaan:tha toh nahin shayad ab hogaya hai..

Ridz: kya matlab...

Armaan: woh chorein..khana khaya apne ?

Ridz: nahin abhi jaa kar banaoogi

Armaan: is waqt...raat ke 10 baj rahein hain...banate bante aur time lag jayega aur itni late dinner nahin karna chahiye...actually i m very good cook...toh aaj khana kuch zyda ban gaya...aye na mein apko khilata hoon

Ridz: I dnt think so...i will manage...

Armaan: kaise manage karleingi..itni late

Ridz: apko itni fikar kyun horahi hai...take-away karloungi

Armaan: nahin...take-away bilkul nahin karna...bilkul nahin khaya karein bahut unhealthy hota hai...maine khana zyda bana lia tha..if u help me...toh woh waste hoone was bach jayega...aur aap toh jaanti hain food ko waste nahin karna chahiye...

Ridz(confused): thanks but no thanks..byee..( going towards her home)

Armaan:nahin agr..apko andar aane mein prob hai toh mein khana bahar le ata hun....its a great idea...

Ridz(surprised): Excuse me..???

Armaan: mein le ata hun ( says whyle walking towards his home)

Ridz is changing..when there is a knock at the door...its Armaan..he sets food on the staircase infornt of the door.

Armaan: food is ready...

Ridz: yeh sab kya hai ?

Armaan:aare maine itni mehnat ki hai..aye na..

Ridz: mujhe bhool bilkul nahin hai...

Armaan: khaane ko na nahin karte ( sits on a stair and food is in the mid and Ridz sits on the other side) khaye..aap meri familyse milengi ?

Ridz: jee ?? ( Ridz is busy eating)

Armaan: mere ghar waloon se..( he takes out his cell frm his jeans and shows pixs of his family members to her) yeh hai meri family...yeh mere dad...

Ridz: cute..

Armaan: Cute ?? yeh har waqt ghusse mein rehte hain...inko mere studio se bahut prob hai...woh kehte hain itna padh likh leta hai..(laughs) so funny...( but Ridz is all he stops laughing and goes to the next pix) yeh meri mom hain...inko cleaning ka bahut shauk hai...jab yeh cleaning nahin kar rahein hoti...toh inko mere khaane peene ki fikar rehti hai..

Ridz: aap apni mom per gaye hain..

Armaan(smile):haan...aur yeh mera dost hai..Atul...yeh dost kaam hai dushmaan zyda hai..( Ridz is curious and is still busy eating) i mean har waqt muj per spy karta rehta hai..aur mere jitne bhi secrets hain he blackmails me...on that...aur yeh meri behen hai..Kasturi..isse chedne mein mujhe bahut hi maza ata hai..aur jab yeh routi hai toh its even more fun...

Ridz: bahut bure hoo tum..

Armaan( makes a cute face):ismein burai kya hai..jab tak isse tang na karloun..mera food digest nahin hota...

Ridz: waise itna sara khaana kyun le aye

Armaan: well woh...main apne liye bhi laya tha ...waise apki family mein kaun kaun hai...

Ridz: behen hai Anjali but she isn't here woh US doctor hai...

Armaan:phir toh aap yahan akeli hojati hongi

Ridz: itni bhi nahin...friends hain meri...bas aaj kal....Rahul wapis ajayega na toh sab theek hojayega..

Armaan: yeh nahin khaya apne

Ridz: kha rahi ho na...aap kyun nahin kha rahe..khaye na..( she almost finished everything)

Armaan (smiles): Mein hi toh kha raha hun.....( Ridz feels embrassed)

Ridz:khana khatam hogaya...

Armaan: nahin..abhi bhi hai..yeh bhi kha lein...i knw ache banna hai..

Ridz: aap kha kyun nahin rahe thay..saamne hi toh pada tha..

Armaan: mein toh khata rehta hun...aap khaye...

Armaan is busy seeing how pretty Ridz looks..whyle she is talking and eating...

(Song at the background)


ye mulaqatein yeh teri ankhein

ek pal na main bhool pau

kitni mohabbat hai

kitni chahat tumse kaise bhala main bataoo

Acha lage jo toh samne muskuraye shayad yahi to pyaar hai

Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye shayad yahi to pyaar hai

kuch bhi kaha na kutch bhi suna na phir bhi

bechain dil hai humara behke kadam hai

mushkil main hum hai dekho sambhle bhala kaise yaara

chahe bina bhi nazdeek hum chale aaye

shayad yahi toh pyaar hai

Ridz: chalein Good Night ..(gets up to leave)

Armaan: so ab hum friend hain ?

Ridz: sochna padega

Armaan: kyun ?

Ridz:well abhi toh i dnt knw u..all i knw is bahutt bolte hoo tum..

Armaan: aapke bolne ka intezaar hai tab tak mein timepass kar raha hun khud bol ke...

Ridz(yawns): Good Night Armaan

Armaan: itna bhi bura nahin hun..haan keh dou

Ridz(smiles):thanks for the food..

Armaan: dosti na sahee..thanks toh nahin bolon

Ridz: toh kya bolon ?

Armaan: kuch nahin...Good Night

Armaan and Ridz have been friends since dis night..but still Ridz neva opened to Armaan..


It has been a month...

Ridz is too busy with her work she hasn't been takin care of herself...and isn't feeling dat good.

Armaan is out on a photoshoot...he has been missing Ridz like anything but is still making his heart understand dat she is married...



Fone rings Ridz rcvs it...its Rahul...she is really happy to lissen

Rahul: Hi..

Ridz( happy): Hii...kaise ho tum...

Rahul: i m good...tum ghar aasakti ho thori dayer ke liye...

Ridz: tum ghar per ho....mujhe pata tha tum zaroor wapis (Rahul inntrups)

Rahul: tum arahi ho ke nahin ?

Ridz: yeahh i m comming...





I knw dis is a short part but i was kinda busy today but hope u like it

Plz do comment

Edited by Adildagr8 - 07 September 2008 at 3:06pm

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Posted: 07 September 2008 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
Wonderful Part
Armaan is so cute Ridz should go wiv em nd leave Rahul he dnt even care bout y did Rahul cm bck 4
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Posted: 07 September 2008 at 4:18pm | IP Logged
amazing parts armaan is so sweet the way he cares 4 ridz and made her eat her food it was really goog
im glad ridz didnt abort the baby cant wait 2 read why rahul has called ridz home
..oneOone.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 September 2008 at 8:04pm | IP Logged
it was cool...................the way armaan showed curiosity towards Riddhima, i like that

Riddhima n armi became good friends, thats a bingo

now where rahul is upto...............hope nothing bad


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Posted: 08 September 2008 at 6:26am | IP Logged
omg.. awesome plz cont .....
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Posted: 08 September 2008 at 9:20am | IP Logged
really interstin prt! i wnder wat is gona happen nxt! cntd sna nd thank u so much 4 d pm!
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Posted: 08 September 2008 at 10:48am | IP Logged
amazing part adi sweeety
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Posted: 09 September 2008 at 2:05am | IP Logged
wow yaar interesting ff
its great..............
waiting for next parts

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