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Posted: 06 September 2008 at 6:38pm | IP Logged
Mere Pass Pass - 4
Riddhima is taken to operation theatre...doctors are getting ready for the sugery....everything is being check...and all Ridz can think of is how much she wanted this much alone she gets when Rahul isn't arnd...wht doc said abt complications...she gets out of the OP and runs to the waiting room whr Rahul is waiting for her. She goes and hugs him tightly.

Ridz: mujhe yeh nahin hoga Rahul...i m sorry...

Rahul is shocked...he drives her home but he doesn't talk to Ridz.

R's Home


Ridz:Rahull...its our baby...i just cnt...its your child how can u even think abt dat...kaise baap ho tum...

Rahul: yeh sab dialogues mujhe nahin practical yaar...i m so busy with ma work...and i want ur support...aur tum yeh ek nayi zamedaari...mere gaale dalana chahti hoo...

Ridz:Trust me...tumhari life mein koi change nahin ayega...the baby wud be lucky for us...

Rahul: jis ki wajah se already humare beech mein ladai horahi hai...woh lucky kaise hosakta hai...

Ridz: come on Rahul....i cnt live with this guilt for rest of my lives...i cant...

Rahul: tumne decide karlia...toh theek hai...u r either gonna have dat baby or me...

Ridz(shocked): What...apne hi bache se comparsion kar rahe hoo..

Rahul: tum jo bhi samjhoo...mein ghar chor ke jaa raha hun...agr tum apna mind change karlou toh u knw whr to call me...

Ridz: Rahul...please...( he leaves)

2 days pass...Rahul hasn't been home...Ridz has been thinking but she cnt make a decision...she calls Aditya to find out whr is Rahul..he tells her he has taken leave from work..for a week.


Later One Morning


Armaan hasn't seen Ridz for a week now..he is concerned whr she has been....he takes the newspaper frm the newpaper guy and goes to her house...and rings the bell. Ridz think its Rahul and excitedly opens the door.

Armaan: umm yeh apka newpaper mere pass agaya tha..(hands her over both the newspapers)

Ridz: thank you..

Armaan: waise aap kya samjhi thee kaun aya hai

Ridz: milkman

Armaan:usse dekh ke itni excitement...Rahul kahan hai...bahut dino se nazar nahin arahe...

Ridz: bahar gaye hain...

Armaan: kab ayenge

Ridz: jald hi ajayenge

Armaan: waise apko kisi cheez ki bhi zaroorat ho..toh i m here...

Ridz: thanks..

Armaan: ok...bye.

Ridz: byee..ek apka hai..( giving her one newspaper back)

Armaan(smiles): thanks

Ridz(smiles back): thanks..


Rahul decides to stay at Aditya's place

Aditya: tera Ridz se jhagda hua hai..

Rahul: woh humari personal baat hai..u just tell me can i stay at ur place for a whyle..

Aditya: yeh bhi koi poachne ki baat hai but u did tell....Ridz abt it..?

Rahul: nahin aur tum bhi usse nahin bataoge

Aditya: woh pareshaan horahi hogi...

Rahul: meri biwi ki tumhein mujse zyda fikar hai...

Adityaa: haan kyunki dost mein uska bhi hun...

Rahul: acha yaar bata dena..aur yeh bhi ke i wnt be back..unless she agrees..

Aditya: on wha ?

Rahul: usse se poach leyna...


Later dat Morning ( Arnd 10)


Ridz is running late from work...she comes outta home in a hurry and sees her tire is flat.Armaan is seeing all dis too and thinks she wud ask for help but ..she takes out the spare tire and decides to change it...Armaan sees..and smiles..

Armaan:isk baad meri car ka bhi tire change kardiyega...

Ridz: jee zaroor

Armaan(laughs): mein ata hun...

(He comes and takes the tire from her hand)

Ridz: lejiye..

Armaan: waise mujhe pata chal gaya..Rahul apko kyun chor ke gaya...

Ridz:kya matlab ?

Armaan: mera matlab hai...apne usne saamne bhi yehi pretend kya hoga...aap bahut strong hain...bahut machoo hain...usk saamne bhi apne tire change kya hoga...usne socha hoga ab aap independent hogayi hain...aur woh apko chor ke jaa sakta hai...

Ridz( lost+sighs): possible hai ( she is all quiet again)

Armaan:aare sahee bata raha hun apko...aap ladko ko nahin jaanti....waise apko pheli bar dekh kar aisa nahin lagta ke aap aisi hain...

Ridz: kaisi ?

Armaan: chup chaap..khamosh...khoyi khoyi...mujhe lag raha hai..aap Rahul ko bahut miss kar rahi hain...right ? ( he is almost done with changing the tire)

Ridz: tire change karne ke liye thanks...

Armaan: aare yeh toh kuch bhi nahin hai..agr apke ghar ka koi aur kaam bhi hoo...sab mein kardounga...mein koi bulb kharab hoo...koi AC mein prob hoo..i m good with everything...

Ridz: aap bolte bahut zyda hain...

Armaan: thank you....mujhe apni tareef sunne mein bahut maza ata hai...

Ridz: thanks again...

Armaan: ma pleasure...

Ridz: ab gate bhi khul dein...

Armaan( smiles): jee Mam...

------------------------------------------------------------------------------Aditya calls Ridz and tells her to meet him

Aditya: tumhari aur Rahul mein kya prob hui...

Ridz: he is at ur place ?

Aditya: haan mere hi ghar per hai...but hua kya..

Ridz: u knw his temper...

Aditya: yeah best frnd hoon uska..temper ka toh pata hi hoga...

Ridz: uska bday araha hai...i m thinking of giving him a surprise bday party..shayad woh man jaye...

Aditya: i can help u with that..tum baki sab sambhal leyna i hope things btw u too get fine.


Plz do comment

Edited by Adildagr8 - 06 September 2008 at 6:40pm

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Supernatural_10 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 06 September 2008 at 6:46pm | IP Logged
Awesome Part
Im glad she didnt abort da baby Rahuls so stubborn hes such a idiot
Sidarth_lover1 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 September 2008 at 7:26pm | IP Logged
hey cont soon n fel free 2 PM me!
Bollywood_chic IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 September 2008 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
ohh poor ridz...
i really hoep she doesn't go through with the abortion...
pllz do cont soon...
mishti4maan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 September 2008 at 5:31am | IP Logged
gr8 part. continue soon!!!!!!!
..oneOone.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 September 2008 at 10:11am | IP Logged
great adi
i just luv the track

now looking forward towards the party...........Hope Rahul never came back to her.......and armaan help her

sorry for not a long comment but i will, further


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Posted: 07 September 2008 at 11:33am | IP Logged
jst read all 4 prts! n so far its awsum! i m lovin it! plz cntd asap and cn u plz pm me whenver u hve updated? thx in advance!
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Posted: 07 September 2008 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
amazing part sweety
plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooon

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