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Posted: 06 September 2008 at 3:00am | IP Logged
amazing part sweety
 
really hope Armaan and ridhima go with each other
 
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Posted: 06 September 2008 at 5:07am | IP Logged
so rude Adi
i think u really forget that we were used to be friends right...........(now, i think so) as u really forget us

newaz, i m greatlt great happy that u started a Armaan-Ridz fic..........wow...

i will read it asap and will let u know.............either u want me or not

(i m really angry that its almost going to be 8 months, right after my B-day that u talk to me and i m not going to forget it now)

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Posted: 06 September 2008 at 6:34am | IP Logged
awesome plz pm me ....................................plz......Clap
awesome job.
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Posted: 06 September 2008 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cool_SK

so rude Adi
i think u really forget that we were used to be friends right...........(now, i think so) as u really forget us

newaz, i m greatlt great happy that u started a Armaan-Ridz fic..........wow...

i will read it asap and will let u know.............either u want me or not

(i m really angry that its almost going to be 8 months, right after my B-day that u talk to me and i m not going to forget it now)

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Aaree i had been really really busy na Ouch i m sorry..i will PM u all detials and excuses of mine Tongue 
 
But i m soooo glad to see your comment....hope u like dis of ma FF too Embarrassed i really want u to read it..so do so...
 
 
Thanks Anam , swansea and Aishar, i will PM you when i post the next part


Edited by Adildagr8 - 06 September 2008 at 11:39am
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Mere Pass Pass -3
 
 
Ridhimaa is tensed about the way Rahul reacted to her pregancy report and left. She waits for him all night arnd 3:30 in morning the door opens and its Rahul.

Ridz (sad): yeh kya baat hui...aise ghar chor ke koi jata hai..?

Rahul:mujhe samajh nahin araha tha ke mein kya karoon

Ridz: isliye chale gaye...aur mujhe pareshan kiya

Rahul:Ridhiima.....nahin khabhi bhi nahin karoonga..

Ridz:promise.

Rahul: yeah..

Ridz: good..u better not

Rahul: toh ab kya karna hai ?

Ridz( confused):kis baat ka ?

Rahul: us report ka...

Ridz: report ka tumne karlia jo karna tha

Rahul: mein bache ki baat kar raha tha

Ridz: Rahul..loug bacho ka kya karte hain...

Rahul:ek min bethoo..(he makes her sit on dinning table and sits on the chair next to her) lissen...hum yeh bacha nahin rakh sakte...tumhein is bache ko abort karna hoga..

Ridz: mazak kar rahe ho na Rahul?

Rahul: zindagi mein har cheez planning ke saath hoti hai....aur yeh bacha humare plans mein nahin tha...

Ridz(shocked): Rahul..yeh koi office work toh nahin hai...this is our baby...Rahul..sochoo humare ghar mein ek chota sa baby hoga...we have alot of time to plan everything out...

Rahul:tumhare job ka kya hoga ?

Ridz: bhar mein jaye job

Rahul: aur tumhara career?

Ridz: i don't care

Rahul: but i care...mein tumhien hum dono ki zindagi barbaad karne nahin dounga...we cnt have this baby...

Ridz(stands up): Rahul tum yeh kaisi baatein kar rahe ho....yeh humara baby hai..isse rakhne na rakhne ka sawal kaise paida hosakta hai....

Rahul: hosakta hai...cuz mein keha raha hun

Ridz spent all that night up...and all depressed the next day too in office when Rahul calls.

Ridz: Hello..

Rahul: hiii...kya kaam kar rahi ho

Ridz: nothin much...

Rahul: wht did ur boss say abt our party..

Ridz: tareef kar rahein thee tumhari..

Rahul:acha abhi nahin bataoo..ghar per baat kareinge...btw yeh doctor ka # likhoo yahan call karoogi toh tumhara appt. banwa dia hai..

Ridz: Rahul...hum is baare mein thora aur soch nahin sakte plz...

Rahul: nahin....time nahin hai..tum bas likhoo...shaam ko chali jana...

Ridz: hmmm

Rahul: okay sweetheart byeeee.

Ridz: bye

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At Night

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Ridz comes home but the main gate it closed...she honks...and Armaan(he is wearing a black muscle tee and jeans.) comes to open the gate frm his house...( as they share the same Gate) . She parks the car...and as she gets out...Armaan runs to her.

Armaan: Hi..i m Armaan...aur maine apke saath wala ghar lia hai...

Ridz(smiles): oh..you are our new neighbour

Armaan: yeahh.

Ridz:well thanks for opening the gate...

Armaan(smiles): you r welcome...

Ridz(walking towards her home door): mera naam Ridhimaa hai...khabhi..apko kisi cheez ki zaroorat hoo..let me knw( just then Rahul comes out)

Ridz: Oh..this is ma Husband Rahul...Rahul..he is our new neighbour...whr were u aaj unhoon ne mere liye gate khula hai...

(Armaan is surprised and disappointed )

Rahul: acha acha..haan jaanta hun mein emin inko...i have gone to his studio for some work...

Armaan just nods his head..they both leave and Armaan is all confused and disappointed

R's Home

Rahul: kya kaha doc ne ? fone kya tha usse ? kab ja rahi ho?

Ridz: kyun kar rahe ho itni zid Rahul...

Rahul: zid mein nahin kar raha tum kar rahi hoo...jab humari shadi hui thee maine tumhein kaha tha ke mujhe bache nahin chahiye..... aur tum maan bhi gayi thee..

Ridz: Rahul..ek bache se kya fariq padega tumhein...

Rahul: baat ek ya dou ki nahin hai...abhi nahin...

Ridz: abhi ya baad se kya fariq padhta hai Rahul..i want dis baby now....kab tak intezaar karwaooge

Rahul: jab tak hum finanically settle nahin hojate...

Ridz: Rahul..sab kuch toh hai humare pass....wht else do u want..

Rahul: itna nahin hai baba...

Ridz:Rahulll...plz in baaton se kya fariq padhta hai..

Rahul:yaar mujhe tumse argue nahin karna...meri na haan mein nahin badalne wali..mein sirf yeh poach raha hun...ke kal tum doc ke pass jaa rahi ho ke nahin...

Ridz: nahin hai muj mein himmat...tum saath chaloge

Rahul:hmm ok

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Armaan is upset and taking his anger out on his models whyle doing a shoot Atul sees this and tells him to take a break...

Atul: kuch pata chala uska ??

Armaan( disappointed): uska naam Ridhimaa hai...aur woh married hai...

Atul(surprised): really...

Armaan: usk husband ka naam pata hai tujhe...Rahull

Atul( shocked): apna Rahul ?

Armaan: haan apna Rahul..

Atul: us langoor ki biwi hai...

Armaan: wht are u surprised at ? ke woh uski biwi hai ke...Rahul uska husband hai

Atul: mujhe dono per nahin horahi..mujhe tuj per horahi hai...

Armaan: muj pay heraan mat ho..shukar hai mein bach gaya warna toh mujhe phasa dena tha...

Atul: oye maine kya kiya..

Armaan: tu mere peeche para hua tha..yeh pata kar woh pata kar...

Atul: woh toh maine aise hi bola tha

Armaan: haan ab toh tu yehi kahega

Atul:tuje toh kuch nahin hona tha na

Armaan: haan mujhe toh kuch nahin hona tha..mein toh supermaan hoon...

Atul: i like spiderman more...woh ban jaa

Armaan(again lost ): thee waise achi yaar

Atul: maine toh dekha bhi nahin tha bhabhi jee ko...

Armaan: kheir..aur suna..?

Atul: sab theek hai..but i knw dis gal...if u r serious

Armaan:tu chup ho ja..tere ideas nahin

Atul: she is really nyce...

Armaan: tu pagal hogaya hai...mera dil hai..koi aisi waise cheez nahin ke kisi per bhi phisla jaon...time lagega

Atul: agr soch lia hai toh can we get back to work....Mr. Superman..

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Ridz is all lost at work too..she just cnt concetrate..she goes to the doc..she tells her there are alota complications she shud give it a second thought...

On the other hand Atul takes Armaan on a double date with 2 models they had a shoot with...but Armaan isn't interested

In Car

*****

Atul: tujhe dono mein se koi ladki passand nahin ayiii

Armaan:passand ki baat nahin hai....they just dnt touch ma heart the way she did...

Atul: she is married...apne dimaagh se uska khyaal nikal de..usse bhool jaa..inko yaad rakh..

Armaan: I knww but she was so different...by the way yeh idea kisne dia tha...

Atul: tune hi kaha u need time ab dia toh..pura 24 hrs

Armaan: aur tu mujhe yahan le aya...

Atul: yeh nahin toh koi aur sahee.

Armaan: ab tune kuch aisa kia na toh mein usse teri shadi karwa dounga..

Atul: abbe pagal hogaya hai..

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R's Home

Rahul: maine jab bola tha doc ko tab toh usne koi complications ka nahin bataya...tumne hi kuch kya hoga

Ridz: maine kya karna tha...

Rahul: u shud have convinced her ....kal mein chaloonga tumhare saath...and lets get it ova with...

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Next Day

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A'Studio

Atul: kahan ghum hai ?kheiryat ?

Armaan:haan...yaar aaj woh bemaar lag rahi thee

Atul:kaun....Ridhima..

Armaan: hmmm...maine aaj tak usse itna down nahin dekha

Atul: kya hogaya usse...toh kuch karleta

Armaan:kya karta...

Atul: tabiyet...waghira poach leta...(sings) kiska hai he tumko intezaar mein hoon na...

Armaan: mazak na kar yaar...

Atul: mazak toh tu kar raha hai...woh bemaar ho..jo bhi ho tera kya jata hai...she is someone's wife yaar

Armaan: mein toh kuch nahin kar raha...

Atul: haan jee abhi toh aap sirf pareshaan hain..

Armaan: yaar please...

Atul: yeh please nahin bol...she gotta a husband so is chakkar mein na hi per toh acha hai...

Armaan: bhool gaya hun usse...bhool gaya hun...ab kya uski fikar karna bhi chor doun...

Atul: haan chor dou...dur dur tak tumhara koi chance nahin hai...why dnt u get it..she is married..

Armaan: tu pagal hai..bilkul pagal hai...

Atul:maine kya kiya..

Armaan: ek baat ke peeche par jata hai..

Atul: acha kahin khaane ko chalein..

Armaan: kyun ghar mein nahin milta khaane ko...

Atul: i meant kahin bahar...

Armaan: chal...

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RR at Doc's

Rahul: Hi...

Doc: Hi..how u doing...

Rahul:good apse baat ki thee ?

Doc: maine phele bhi kaha tha aur ab bhi keh rahi hun..complications hain....and if things went bad...u wnt be a dad eva

Rahul: waise kuch hona toh nahin chahiye...if it did...then mujhe bache waise hi passand nahin hai..

Doc: aur apko wife ko...

Rahul: usse wohi passand hai jo mujhe...

Doc: ok...just fill these forms out....mein OP tayyar karwati hun....

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Edited by Adildagr8 - 06 September 2008 at 1:05pm

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Posted: 06 September 2008 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
amazing parts
poor armaan finally found out ridz is married
hope rahul changes his mind about not having the child because ridz will be really upset after nowing that she can never become a mother again
 
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Posted: 06 September 2008 at 4:43pm | IP Logged
Wonderful Part
 
I h8 Rahul hes so mean i hpe he changes his mynd
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Mere Pass Pass - 4
 
 
Riddhima is taken to operation theatre...doctors are getting ready for the sugery....everything is being check...and all Ridz can think of is how much she wanted this kid...how much alone she gets when Rahul isn't arnd...wht doc said abt complications...she gets out of the OP and runs to the waiting room whr Rahul is waiting for her. She goes and hugs him tightly.

Ridz: mujhe yeh nahin hoga Rahul...i m sorry...

Rahul is shocked...he drives her home but he doesn't talk to Ridz.

R's Home

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Ridz:Rahull...its our baby...i just cnt...its your child how can u even think abt dat...kaise baap ho tum...

Rahul: yeh sab dialogues mujhe nahin maroo...be practical yaar...i m so busy with ma work...and i want ur support...aur tum yeh ek nayi zamedaari...mere gaale dalana chahti hoo...

Ridz:Trust me...tumhari life mein koi change nahin ayega...the baby wud be lucky for us...

Rahul: jis ki wajah se already humare beech mein ladai horahi hai...woh lucky kaise hosakta hai...

Ridz: come on Rahul....i cnt live with this guilt for rest of my lives...i cant...

Rahul: tumne decide karlia...toh theek hai...u r either gonna have dat baby or me...

Ridz(shocked): What...apne hi bache se comparsion kar rahe hoo..

Rahul: tum jo bhi samjhoo...mein ghar chor ke jaa raha hun...agr tum apna mind change karlou toh u knw whr to call me...

Ridz: Rahul...please...( he leaves)

2 days pass...Rahul hasn't been home...Ridz has been thinking but she cnt make a decision...she calls Aditya to find out whr is Rahul..he tells her he has taken leave from work..for a week.

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Later One Morning

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Armaan hasn't seen Ridz for a week now..he is concerned whr she has been....he takes the newspaper frm the newpaper guy and goes to her house...and rings the bell. Ridz think its Rahul and excitedly opens the door.

Armaan: umm yeh apka newpaper mere pass agaya tha..(hands her over both the newspapers)

Ridz: thank you..

Armaan: waise aap kya samjhi thee kaun aya hai

Ridz: milkman

Armaan:usse dekh ke itni excitement...Rahul kahan hai...bahut dino se nazar nahin arahe...

Ridz: bahar gaye hain...

Armaan: kab ayenge

Ridz: jald hi ajayenge

Armaan: waise apko kisi cheez ki bhi zaroorat ho..toh i m here...

Ridz: thanks..

Armaan: ok...bye.

Ridz: byee..ek apka hai..( giving her one newspaper back)

Armaan(smiles): thanks

Ridz(smiles back): thanks..

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Rahul decides to stay at Aditya's place

Aditya: tera Ridz se jhagda hua hai..

Rahul: woh humari personal baat hai..u just tell me can i stay at ur place for a whyle..

Aditya: yeh bhi koi poachne ki baat hai but u did tell....Ridz abt it..?

Rahul: nahin aur tum bhi usse nahin bataoge

Aditya: woh pareshaan horahi hogi...

Rahul: meri biwi ki tumhein mujse zyda fikar hai...

Adityaa: haan kyunki dost mein uska bhi hun...

Rahul: acha yaar bata dena..aur yeh bhi ke i wnt be back..unless she agrees..

Aditya: on wha ?

Rahul: usse se poach leyna...

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Later dat Morning ( Arnd 10)

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Ridz is running late from work...she comes outta home in a hurry and sees her tire is flat.Armaan is seeing all dis too and thinks she wud ask for help but ..she takes out the spare tire and decides to change it...Armaan sees..and smiles..

Armaan:isk baad meri car ka bhi tire change kardiyega...

Ridz: jee zaroor

Armaan(laughs): mein ata hun...

(He comes and takes the tire from her hand)

Ridz: lejiye..

Armaan: waise mujhe pata chal gaya..Rahul apko kyun chor ke gaya...

Ridz:kya matlab ?

Armaan: mera matlab hai...apne usne saamne bhi yehi pretend kya hoga...aap bahut strong hain...bahut machoo hain...usk saamne bhi apne tire change kya hoga...usne socha hoga ab aap independent hogayi hain...aur woh apko chor ke jaa sakta hai...

Ridz( lost+sighs): possible hai ( she is all quiet again)

Armaan:aare sahee bata raha hun apko...aap ladko ko nahin jaanti....waise apko pheli bar dekh kar aisa nahin lagta ke aap aisi hain...

Ridz: kaisi ?

Armaan: chup chaap..khamosh...khoyi khoyi...mujhe lag raha hai..aap Rahul ko bahut miss kar rahi hain...right ? ( he is almost done with changing the tire)

Ridz: tire change karne ke liye thanks...

Armaan: aare yeh toh kuch bhi nahin hai..agr apke ghar ka koi aur kaam bhi hoo...sab mein kardounga...mein koi bulb kharab hoo...koi AC mein prob hoo..i m good with everything...

Ridz: aap bolte bahut zyda hain...

Armaan: thank you....mujhe apni tareef sunne mein bahut maza ata hai...

Ridz: thanks again...

Armaan: ma pleasure...

Ridz: ab gate bhi khul dein...

Armaan( smiles): jee Mam...

------------------------------------------------------------------------------Aditya calls Ridz and tells her to meet him

Aditya: tumhari aur Rahul mein kya prob hui...

Ridz: he is at ur place ?

Aditya: haan mere hi ghar per hai...but hua kya..

Ridz: u knw his temper...

Aditya: yeah best frnd hoon uska..temper ka toh pata hi hoga...

Ridz: uska bday araha hai...i m thinking of giving him a surprise bday party..shayad woh man jaye...

Aditya: i can help u with that..tum baki sab sambhal leyna i hope things btw u too get fine.

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Edited by Adildagr8 - 06 September 2008 at 6:40pm

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