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amazing part sweety
 
really hope Armaan and ridhima go with each other
 
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooon
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Posted: 06 September 2008 at 5:07am | IP Logged
so rude Adi
i think u really forget that we were used to be friends right...........(now, i think so) as u really forget us

newaz, i m greatlt great happy that u started a Armaan-Ridz fic..........wow...

i will read it asap and will let u know.............either u want me or not

(i m really angry that its almost going to be 8 months, right after my B-day that u talk to me and i m not going to forget it now)

no lolz
ana

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awesome plz pm me ....................................plz......Clap
awesome job.
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Lovely Part

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Posted: 06 September 2008 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cool_SK

so rude Adi
i think u really forget that we were used to be friends right...........(now, i think so) as u really forget us

newaz, i m greatlt great happy that u started a Armaan-Ridz fic..........wow...

i will read it asap and will let u know.............either u want me or not

(i m really angry that its almost going to be 8 months, right after my B-day that u talk to me and i m not going to forget it now)

no lolz
ana
 
Aaree i had been really really busy na Ouch i m sorry..i will PM u all detials and excuses of mine Tongue 
 
But i m soooo glad to see your comment....hope u like dis of ma FF too Embarrassed i really want u to read it..so do so...
 
 
Thanks Anam , swansea and Aishar, i will PM you when i post the next part


Edited by Adildagr8 - 06 September 2008 at 11:39am

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Posted: 06 September 2008 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
Mere Pass Pass -3
 
 
Ridhimaa is tensed about the way Rahul reacted to her pregancy report and left. She waits for him all night arnd 3:30 in morning the door opens and its Rahul.

Ridz (sad): yeh kya baat hui...aise ghar chor ke koi jata hai..?

Rahul:mujhe samajh nahin araha tha ke mein kya karoon

Ridz: isliye chale gaye...aur mujhe pareshan kiya

Rahul:Ridhiima.....nahin khabhi bhi nahin karoonga..

Ridz:promise.

Rahul: yeah..

Ridz: good..u better not

Rahul: toh ab kya karna hai ?

Ridz( confused):kis baat ka ?

Rahul: us report ka...

Ridz: report ka tumne karlia jo karna tha

Rahul: mein bache ki baat kar raha tha

Ridz: Rahul..loug bacho ka kya karte hain...

Rahul:ek min bethoo..(he makes her sit on dinning table and sits on the chair next to her) lissen...hum yeh bacha nahin rakh sakte...tumhein is bache ko abort karna hoga..

Ridz: mazak kar rahe ho na Rahul?

Rahul: zindagi mein har cheez planning ke saath hoti hai....aur yeh bacha humare plans mein nahin tha...

Ridz(shocked): Rahul..yeh koi office work toh nahin hai...this is our baby...Rahul..sochoo humare ghar mein ek chota sa baby hoga...we have alot of time to plan everything out...

Rahul:tumhare job ka kya hoga ?

Ridz: bhar mein jaye job

Rahul: aur tumhara career?

Ridz: i don't care

Rahul: but i care...mein tumhien hum dono ki zindagi barbaad karne nahin dounga...we cnt have this baby...

Ridz(stands up): Rahul tum yeh kaisi baatein kar rahe ho....yeh humara baby hai..isse rakhne na rakhne ka sawal kaise paida hosakta hai....

Rahul: hosakta hai...cuz mein keha raha hun

Ridz spent all that night up...and all depressed the next day too in office when Rahul calls.

Ridz: Hello..

Rahul: hiii...kya kaam kar rahi ho

Ridz: nothin much...

Rahul: wht did ur boss say abt our party..

Ridz: tareef kar rahein thee tumhari..

Rahul:acha abhi nahin bataoo..ghar per baat kareinge...btw yeh doctor ka # likhoo yahan call karoogi toh tumhara appt. banwa dia hai..

Ridz: Rahul...hum is baare mein thora aur soch nahin sakte plz...

Rahul: nahin....time nahin hai..tum bas likhoo...shaam ko chali jana...

Ridz: hmmm

Rahul: okay sweetheart byeeee.

Ridz: bye

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At Night

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Ridz comes home but the main gate it closed...she honks...and Armaan(he is wearing a black muscle tee and jeans.) comes to open the gate frm his house...( as they share the same Gate) . She parks the car...and as she gets out...Armaan runs to her.

Armaan: Hi..i m Armaan...aur maine apke saath wala ghar lia hai...

Ridz(smiles): oh..you are our new neighbour

Armaan: yeahh.

Ridz:well thanks for opening the gate...

Armaan(smiles): you r welcome...

Ridz(walking towards her home door): mera naam Ridhimaa hai...khabhi..apko kisi cheez ki zaroorat hoo..let me knw( just then Rahul comes out)

Ridz: Oh..this is ma Husband Rahul...Rahul..he is our new neighbour...whr were u aaj unhoon ne mere liye gate khula hai...

(Armaan is surprised and disappointed )

Rahul: acha acha..haan jaanta hun mein emin inko...i have gone to his studio for some work...

Armaan just nods his head..they both leave and Armaan is all confused and disappointed

R's Home

Rahul: kya kaha doc ne ? fone kya tha usse ? kab ja rahi ho?

Ridz: kyun kar rahe ho itni zid Rahul...

Rahul: zid mein nahin kar raha tum kar rahi hoo...jab humari shadi hui thee maine tumhein kaha tha ke mujhe bache nahin chahiye..... aur tum maan bhi gayi thee..

Ridz: Rahul..ek bache se kya fariq padega tumhein...

Rahul: baat ek ya dou ki nahin hai...abhi nahin...

Ridz: abhi ya baad se kya fariq padhta hai Rahul..i want dis baby now....kab tak intezaar karwaooge

Rahul: jab tak hum finanically settle nahin hojate...

Ridz: Rahul..sab kuch toh hai humare pass....wht else do u want..

Rahul: itna nahin hai baba...

Ridz:Rahulll...plz in baaton se kya fariq padhta hai..

Rahul:yaar mujhe tumse argue nahin karna...meri na haan mein nahin badalne wali..mein sirf yeh poach raha hun...ke kal tum doc ke pass jaa rahi ho ke nahin...

Ridz: nahin hai muj mein himmat...tum saath chaloge

Rahul:hmm ok

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Armaan is upset and taking his anger out on his models whyle doing a shoot Atul sees this and tells him to take a break...

Atul: kuch pata chala uska ??

Armaan( disappointed): uska naam Ridhimaa hai...aur woh married hai...

Atul(surprised): really...

Armaan: usk husband ka naam pata hai tujhe...Rahull

Atul( shocked): apna Rahul ?

Armaan: haan apna Rahul..

Atul: us langoor ki biwi hai...

Armaan: wht are u surprised at ? ke woh uski biwi hai ke...Rahul uska husband hai

Atul: mujhe dono per nahin horahi..mujhe tuj per horahi hai...

Armaan: muj pay heraan mat ho..shukar hai mein bach gaya warna toh mujhe phasa dena tha...

Atul: oye maine kya kiya..

Armaan: tu mere peeche para hua tha..yeh pata kar woh pata kar...

Atul: woh toh maine aise hi bola tha

Armaan: haan ab toh tu yehi kahega

Atul:tuje toh kuch nahin hona tha na

Armaan: haan mujhe toh kuch nahin hona tha..mein toh supermaan hoon...

Atul: i like spiderman more...woh ban jaa

Armaan(again lost ): thee waise achi yaar

Atul: maine toh dekha bhi nahin tha bhabhi jee ko...

Armaan: kheir..aur suna..?

Atul: sab theek hai..but i knw dis gal...if u r serious

Armaan:tu chup ho ja..tere ideas nahin

Atul: she is really nyce...

Armaan: tu pagal hogaya hai...mera dil hai..koi aisi waise cheez nahin ke kisi per bhi phisla jaon...time lagega

Atul: agr soch lia hai toh can we get back to work....Mr. Superman..

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Ridz is all lost at work too..she just cnt concetrate..she goes to the doc..she tells her there are alota complications she shud give it a second thought...

On the other hand Atul takes Armaan on a double date with 2 models they had a shoot with...but Armaan isn't interested

In Car

*****

Atul: tujhe dono mein se koi ladki passand nahin ayiii

Armaan:passand ki baat nahin hai....they just dnt touch ma heart the way she did...

Atul: she is married...apne dimaagh se uska khyaal nikal de..usse bhool jaa..inko yaad rakh..

Armaan: I knww but she was so different...by the way yeh idea kisne dia tha...

Atul: tune hi kaha u need time ab dia toh..pura 24 hrs

Armaan: aur tu mujhe yahan le aya...

Atul: yeh nahin toh koi aur sahee.

Armaan: ab tune kuch aisa kia na toh mein usse teri shadi karwa dounga..

Atul: abbe pagal hogaya hai..

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R's Home

Rahul: maine jab bola tha doc ko tab toh usne koi complications ka nahin bataya...tumne hi kuch kya hoga

Ridz: maine kya karna tha...

Rahul: u shud have convinced her ....kal mein chaloonga tumhare saath...and lets get it ova with...

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Next Day

********

A'Studio

Atul: kahan ghum hai ?kheiryat ?

Armaan:haan...yaar aaj woh bemaar lag rahi thee

Atul:kaun....Ridhima..

Armaan: hmmm...maine aaj tak usse itna down nahin dekha

Atul: kya hogaya usse...toh kuch karleta

Armaan:kya karta...

Atul: tabiyet...waghira poach leta...(sings) kiska hai he tumko intezaar mein hoon na...

Armaan: mazak na kar yaar...

Atul: mazak toh tu kar raha hai...woh bemaar ho..jo bhi ho tera kya jata hai...she is someone's wife yaar

Armaan: mein toh kuch nahin kar raha...

Atul: haan jee abhi toh aap sirf pareshaan hain..

Armaan: yaar please...

Atul: yeh please nahin bol...she gotta a husband so is chakkar mein na hi per toh acha hai...

Armaan: bhool gaya hun usse...bhool gaya hun...ab kya uski fikar karna bhi chor doun...

Atul: haan chor dou...dur dur tak tumhara koi chance nahin hai...why dnt u get it..she is married..

Armaan: tu pagal hai..bilkul pagal hai...

Atul:maine kya kiya..

Armaan: ek baat ke peeche par jata hai..

Atul: acha kahin khaane ko chalein..

Armaan: kyun ghar mein nahin milta khaane ko...

Atul: i meant kahin bahar...

Armaan: chal...

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RR at Doc's

Rahul: Hi...

Doc: Hi..how u doing...

Rahul:good apse baat ki thee ?

Doc: maine phele bhi kaha tha aur ab bhi keh rahi hun..complications hain....and if things went bad...u wnt be a dad eva

Rahul: waise kuch hona toh nahin chahiye...if it did...then mujhe bache waise hi passand nahin hai..

Doc: aur apko wife ko...

Rahul: usse wohi passand hai jo mujhe...

Doc: ok...just fill these forms out....mein OP tayyar karwati hun....

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Edited by Adildagr8 - 06 September 2008 at 1:05pm

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Posted: 06 September 2008 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
amazing parts
poor armaan finally found out ridz is married
hope rahul changes his mind about not having the child because ridz will be really upset after nowing that she can never become a mother again
 

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Posted: 06 September 2008 at 4:43pm | IP Logged
Wonderful Part
 
I h8 Rahul hes so mean i hpe he changes his mynd

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