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FF: Kabhie Kabhie Pyaar Main Epi11 Pg13 3 (Page 5)

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Posted: 24 September 2008 at 6:55pm | IP Logged

Episode 4

Recap- Kanya goes to college with Ranbir. Anita is upset with Kany and don't talk to her. Kanya wants to know why. Anita tells her the reason and storms off at lunch. Kanya wonders why Anita made a big fuss about this when Sonia, Shanaya and Kripa tease Kanya about dating Ranbir. Kanya thinks Ranbir spread a silly rumour. Everything is fine. Ranbir decides that they all go for bowling and for dinner after college. Kanya is reluctant but the others and Ranbir force her so she agrees.


Kanya is exhausted after her PE class and she is taking a shower. Someone knocks at the door.

Kanya- Yes?

Voice- Kaun hain?

Kanya- Kanya!

Voice- Sorry for disturbing you.

Kanya- Aap kaun hain? Huh huh? Kaun hain?

But there is no answer so Kanya continues showering. After taking her shower she goes ourside and changes back into her casual wear. Then she leaves her hair loose-

Then she fixes her make-up a bit and she walks out of the locker room. There she waits for about 10mins before Ranbir comes. He comes upto her and squeezes her! She smiles.

Kanya- Toh workout kaisa laga?

Ranbir- Same as yesterday! Anyways let us go and wait for the others!

Kanya- Yes but after I get a chilled coke for myself from the vending machine!

Ranbir- Okay!

So Kanya and Ranbir go upto the vending machine and buy the coke. Slowly sipping their drinks they walk towards their waiting spot and meet Kripa there.

Kanya- Hey Kripa!

Kripa- Hey guys!

Ranbir- So Kripa ready to go bowling?

Kripa- Sort of!

Ranbir- Kyun tumhe bowling pasand nahin hain kya?

Kanya- Ranbir Kripz is a girly-girl! She only enjoys girly activities! She hates bowling and stuff!

Kripa- I am just coming for Sunny.

Ranbir- Kya faithful girl friend hain yaar! Lucky Sunny!

Kripa- Wo toh main hoon hi!

Kanya- Here comes Sonia and Shan!

Sonia- Hey Kan! Hey Kripz! Hey Mr. Hottie!

Kanya- Hello Sun!

Kripa- Hi!

Ranbir- Hello gorgeous!

Shanaya- I am waitng to go bowlingggggg!

Kripa- Baath poochoon Shan?

Shanaya- Kya?

Kripa- Tum har word bolne ke baad hamesha bahut stress kyun karti hain like bowlinggggggggggggggggg?

Shanya- Wo toh meri aadat hainnnnnnnnnnnn!

Sonia- Stop it Shan! Grow up! Yeh Amit aur Ayaan kahaan hain? Wahan dekho meri Amit aa raha hain!

Shanaya- Ayaaaaannnnn!

Kanya- Grow up SHANAYA KHER!

Shanaya- Okay! Hey isnt that Anita? Why is she standing there alone? Good! Hamare group ka image spoil nahin honge!

Kanya- Spoil hona tha toh bahut pehle hote!

Sonia- Whatever! You guys havent made up kya?

Kanya- No! I will go and speak to her.

Kripa- Whatever!

Kanya goes over to Anita to speak to her.

Kanya- Hey Ani!

Anita- Hi.

Kanya- Ham sab ke saath bowling aur dinner ke liye chaloge kya?

Anita- No.

Kanya- C'mon Ani! Ab baath maan hi lo! Maaf karo naa! Kal se main teri saath hi aawungi!

Anita- Koi zaroorat nahin hain!

Kanya- Awww! C'mon!

Anita- Kanya! PLEASE!

Kanya- Ani understand!

Anita- Leave me alone! And don't call me ANI my name is ANITA. ANITA understand? ANITA? Say it say it!!!

Kanya- Anita.

Anita- Good! Now go from here!

Kanya- Please!

Anita- Kanya Godbole go from here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya- Okay! Main jaa rahi hoon!

Kanya goes from there and back to the others.

Sonia- No luck right?

Kanya- Nhah!

Ranbir- Chalo chalo! Mood spoil nahin karte! Let us go bowling!

Kripa- Okay.

Kanya- Okay!

Ayaan and Amit come and kiss their respective girl-friends.'

Ayaan- Ready to go?

Kanya- Absolutely!

Amit- I love you Sonia baby!

Sonia- I love you too Amit!

Ranbir- Chaloooooo!


When she says this everybody starts laughing. Kanya and the gang get into Ranbir's car and go to the bowling alley. Anita looks at them with tears in her eyes and goes home.


All of them have arrived at the bowling alley. It is a beautiful place. Ranbir, Amit, Sunny and Ayaan go straight to the bowling center when Kanya and the girls go over to the food counter. Now we are at the food counter.

Sonia- Guys order all what you want! It is on me!

Kanya- Kyun? Lottery lagi kya?

Sonia- Nahin yaar! Treat hain!

Kripa- Kyun? Aaj toh teri ya Amit ki birthday nahin hain! Phir?

Sonia- Dono ke beech main hain!

Shanaya- Shaadi karne waale ho kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa?

Sonia- Shanaya! C'mon! It is our 3rd meeting anniversary tomorrow! Kal tum hum dono saath main bitane waale hain toh socha ki aaj main tum logon ko treat deti hoon!

Kanya- Cool! I will take french fries and coke!

Kripa- Diet coke only!

Shanaya- Burger!

Sonia- Okay! Bhai sahab yeh seab bill karo aur mujhe ek burger with coke chahiye!

The man bills it and gives them the items. Then they all sit down to eat when the guys join them.

Ranbir- Kanya tujhe bowling aati hain?

Kanya- Nahin kyun?

Ranbir- Aao! Main tujhe sikhati hoon!

He grabs her hand and takes her. Then he holds her hand and makes her bowl. While he is doing that, his whole body weight is on Kanya. They look at each other and there is a eye lock.


Kripa- Kitni cute couple hain naa? So much chemistry!

Sonia- I know! Unfortunately they both are not ready for love!

Shanaya- How nice it would be if Kanya and Ranbir start dating. Then our whole group will be dating!

Sonia- Not the whole group! Don't forget "ANITA"

Kripa- She toh waste yaar!

Kanya comes over then.

Kanya- Kripz! Aise baath mat kar! She is my BFF!

Sonia- Toh hum teri kya lagte hain?

Kanya- You all are cloes friends but Anita is my BFF. Anyways after dinner I am going over to her place to knock some sense into her. Then I will stay over at her place. Kal toh Saturday hain naa aakhir!

Shanaya- Whatever you say Kanya madame!

Scene fades.


Guys hope you liked it! I know it was not great and all! But hope you liked at the very time. Next time Ani and Kan will perhaps make up!

Pre-cap : will show the dinner and sleepover!


patel12345 Groupbie

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Posted: 24 September 2008 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
great update soon plz
Nadz_YuNalover IF-Addictz

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Posted: 25 September 2008 at 2:16am | IP Logged
WOW!!!!!! it was awesomeeeeeee!!!!!LOLLOL i read epi 3 and 4 now and i think they were great cant wait for the next part, Keep it up!!!!!!!!
matwamango IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 September 2008 at 5:24am | IP Logged
This is really good. Keep it up
miss.sonia Senior Member

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Posted: 25 September 2008 at 9:44am | IP Logged

Ranbir- I don't know know if this is coincidence or not but you and I have similar thoughts and similar interests!

Kanya- Main bhi wahi soch rahi thi!

Ranbir- Can I ask you something?

Kanya- Go ahead!

Ranbir- Your best pal Anita she really doesn't seem like your other friends! You all are like the typical popular girls while she looks like a typical nerd! How come you are such close pals? there he said it

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Posted: 25 September 2008 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
i loved the epi
pls continue soon
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Posted: 28 September 2008 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
omg dat was amzing
plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 28 September 2008 at 4:11pm | IP Logged
luv ur FF...............please continue soon...............can't wait!!!

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