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FF: Kabhie Kabhie Pyaar Main Epi11 Pg13 3 (Page 13)

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               Episode 11

*[Note: The use of emoticons are for the everyone to feel the emotions. They are to help you understand the scene and imaginate the scene giving it a better effect and making it more enjoyable.]*
Sorry guys but this will be a really small update. Just a conversation between Ranbir-Kanya and a 2 small, cute moments!ClapClapForgive me......I have to write and episode of a Disney channel show. I am writing obviously Suite Life. Its for the Disney Forum games! I wish I win!! Oooooh.
Ranbir is quite happy that Drake is away for a few days. Now Kanya would be behaving her normal self and wouldn't be avoiding him. He didnt like that. It felt very weird and awkward. He loved talking to Kanya because it was always easy picking up a conversation with her.
Kanya- Kya soch rahe ho?
Ranbir- .....
Kanya- Ranbir? Ranbir kya soch rahe ho?
Kanya- RANBIR!!Angry
Ranbir-Tongue Oops! Sorry Kanya.
Kanya- Question
Ranbir- Kuch nahin Kanya Embarrassed kuch nahin Embarrassed.
Kanya- Kya ho gaya hain tumheQuestionKahaan kho gaye ho?
Ranbir- Kaha na kuch nahin!Confused
Kanya- Ranbir you naa.
Ranbir- Kanya when I said nothing I meant nothing!Angry
Kanya- Okay baba. Itna gussa hone ki kya baat hain?ConfusedConfusedConfused
Ranbir- SorryD'oh
Kanya- Its okay. Anyways tell me. How are things going with Ani?
Ranbir- Aaa.
Kanya- Confused??
Ranbir- I mean nothing.
Kanya- Ranbir......she is such a sweet person. Why can't you fall in love with her?
Ranbir- Kanya love can't be formed just like that. It takes time. And besides I dont like Anita like that. You know she is forcing me to kiss her. EwwDeadDeadDead
Kanya- RAngryaAngrynAngrybAngryiAngryrAngry!! Please! Remember she is my best friend and she loves you a lot. You will never find someone like her.
Ranbir- (face suddenly turns serious)- What if I love someone else?
Kanya- Confused?????
Ranbir- (stops the car and gets out of the car. Kanya looking confused follows the suit.)
Kanya- Ranbir why did you stop the car?
Ranbir- Kanya I want to tell you something.
Kanya- Sure go ahead!
Ranbir- Are you sure?
Kanya- Aha. stillConfusedConfusedConfused
Ranbir- Kanya I really like you a lot.
Kanya- ConfusedConfusedme too. We have become really good friends. (Took this line from The Suite Life on Deck- International Date Line Cody-Bailey convoLOL)
Ranbir- Its not that. Ever since I saw you mere dil mein kuch kuch huwa hain.
Kanya- Confused
Ranbir- Kanya I love you.
He holds her tight and swirls her around. She goes completely blank with shock. She can't believe what Ranbir had just told her.Shocked
Kanya- R.A.N.B.I.R!! Let-go-of-me!
Ranbir- Kanya.....please.....
Kanya- I said let go of me you cheapstake!
Ranbir- Kanya please understandBroken Heart
Kanya- I love Drake and that's not going to change Mister.
Ranbir- Kanya!
Kanya- That will never change Ranbir! I mean what I just said.
Ranbir- Listen to me young lady!Angry
Kanya- I wont! How dare you think I would love you?
Ranbir- Let me talk silly ladyAngry
Kanya becomes silent.
Ranbir- Kanya I was just kidding. I wanted to see if I am a good actor!
Kanya- WhatttUnhappy
Ranbir- Yes I want to apply for the drama production this fall. They said I was supposed to fool someone and tape it. If it is good enough they will choose me and I will be able to play lead!
Kanya-ShockedRanbir. Tumne toh mujhe dara hi diya.
Ranbir- I am good ain't I??Clap
Kanya- Surething. You are a risingStar
Ranbir- Rising?
Kanya- Okay okay. You're a starStarStarStar! Happy?ClapClapClap
Ranbir- Yeah!!!!! Thanks for being my unsuspecting, sweet victim!
Kanya- My pleasure. Anyways what script is it??Wink
Ranbir- Its a hindi one. A lovestory!
Kanya- Its about?
Ranbir-Two people who meet, are very good friends. They are very alike you know almost soulmates. Then one of them falls in love with a childhood friend and the other feels all jealous and sets out to win his beloved. And he does. Also there's a kissing scene.
Kanya- Angry(only expression k?)
Kanya- It strangely reminds me of something....I mean some story.
Ranbir- Me too. Bad thing is I can't figure out what it reminds me of. UnfortunatelyCry
Kanya- Offo. Anyways you have got it all on tape naa? Surely you will get through Ranbir. I have full faith in you!
Ranbir- BlushingAwwwww. Thank's a lot Kanya. It means a lot.
Kanya- Ranbir!AngryAngryAngry You are a very good and close friend. I am proud of your acting skills. When you become a famous actor dont forget me okay?
Ranbir- What if I do?
Kanya- Then I will be very (making a face)Angryand also very very very (making a face again)Cry.
Ranbir kisses Kanya on the forehead. Kanya looks at him and hugs him.
Ranbir- I will never do anything to hurt you Kanya. Never. If I do so I will never be able to forgive myself. I love you.
Kanya- I love you too Ranbir.
Ranbir- As friends only naaWink?
Kanya- Obviously! Buddhu!
They both get into the car and drove away. The scene fades. Thats all for now. As I mentioned earlier the use of emoticons were to display the expressions of the cast really well. I want all my readers to picture this scene taking place. That would make it more realistic.

Edited by nidhieya - 03 December 2008 at 7:58pm

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Posted: 04 December 2008 at 7:25am | IP Logged
great update
continue soon
patel12345 Groupbie

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Posted: 04 December 2008 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
gr8 update
plz continue Wink
safeplacetoland IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 04 December 2008 at 5:04pm | IP Logged


no one likes ittttrtt
spate22 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 December 2008 at 11:24pm | IP Logged

Awesome update, Nidz!!!!!! ClapAnd yes I did imagine their expressions while reading this!!!!Day Dreaming It really was a nice moment!!!! EmbarrassedI wish Ranbir would've come forward with his feelings!!!!!Unhappy Anyways, maybe next time!!!! WinkAnd did Kanya get a little jealous when Ranbir explained his scene?!!!!!LOL Anyway, great update!!!! I can't wait to read what happens next!!!!! Thanks,  Nidz!!!Wink

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Posted: 05 December 2008 at 6:26am | IP Logged
it was niceStar
update soon
safeplacetoland IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 05 December 2008 at 5:50pm | IP Logged

yep she did get didnt understand it though!


they r in luv but dunt realise it now!

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