Kahin pyar na ho jaye! last part pg 35

Posted: 15 years ago
Hey guys,
 
This FF is about obviously RAN-KAN, Hope u like it, and plz comment/criticize so that i can improve it everytime; here goes,
 
Kahin pyar na hojaye!!

 

Ranbir Nanda:

(25 years) He is completing his fifth year in college, he lives in the college hostel, he?s hot, rich and sometimes sweet too, he can be mean and arrogant at times, he believes in love but it never struck him as yet, even so hes the hottest hunk in town and hes always playing around, ragging the first years and flirting with the girls he loves hes college and always gets the best marks.

 

Kanya Godbole:

 
(19 years) she?s starting her first year in college with her best friend Kripa. Shes sweet, adorable and very simple, she doesn?t believe in love! She loves drama and music.

 

Angad:

(22 years) he is in hes 3rd year he is hot and rich but not arrogant, always supports the right thing and shares the room with ranbir.

 

Kripa;

 
(20 years) Kanyas best friend, always their for her, she is mad, talkative and very filmi.

Heres the updates of the whole FF till now:

Part # 1:pg1

Part #2: pg1

Part #3: pg2

Part #4: pg2

Part #5: pg3 (Day 2)

Part #6: pg4 (Day 3)

Part #7: pg6 (Day 4)

Part #8: pg8 (Day 5)

Part #9: pg9 (Day 6)

Part #10: pg11 (Day 7)

Part #11: pg13

Part #12: pg14

Part #13: pg15

Part #14: pg17

Part #15: pg19

Part #16: pg22

Part #17: pg25

Part #18: pg26

Part #19: pg28

Part #20: pg30

Part #21: pg31

Part #22: pg33

Part #23: pg34

The story starts from a college in Delhi?

The scene shifts to our hot hunk; Ranbir Nanda, the hottest and richest guy in the college, All the girls are crazy about him.

They show ranbir troubling his teachers, flirting with girls and ragging first years with his mates.

Monday, 7 January 2008

Kanyas first day at college.

Its already 10am and its break time, Ranbir and hes gang rag some first years, then the bell rings everyone runs to their own classes.

Aryan: [ranbirs friend] chal Ranbir ab class mein chalte hain, warna Mr tiwari ka lecture sunna padega!

Ranbir: tum sab chalo main abhi aya

 

Aryan: lekin Ranbir?

 

R: don?t worry Aryan, I am Ranbir Nanda.. [grins]

 

Kanya was late the taxi she was coming in broke down half way and she had to walk it,

 

K: at least college to pohonchgayi,

 

Ranbir is walking but as usual looking everywhere except on the path?. And their comes Kanya looking down, holding her books and really worried, they bump and all kanyas books fall down

K: [still worried, not even looking up at who she bumped] oh god, main already itni late hogayi hoon aur ab yeah, aap dekh ke nahin chal sakhte? [looing at ranbir angrily] Oh god ab main kya karoon?

R: [wondering] who the hell is she? Hey hello tum niche dekh kar chal rahi thi, maafi tumhe mangni chahi hai!

K: To aap kaha dekh rahe the? Huh? Waise bhi main already late hoon, mujhe aap se argue nahin karna hain!

[walking away]

R: eh chipkali? rukh, Idiot chali gayi! Patanahi kaha kahan se ajate hain.

 

Next day

Kanya loves drama and music so she takes drama as an extra curriculum

 

At the drama class

 

Ranbir also takes drama, he is sitting their with hes friends making fun of everyone as usual. And he sees Kanya coming in the class,

R: Eh dekho dekho, chipkali agayi?

[Everyone is laughing]

Kanya just looks at him angrily, and sits down next to Kripa.

R: to aaj kal, chipkalian bhi drama leti hain?

K: haan aur main nahin janti thi ke gande bhi drama karte hain!

R: [fuming] hey ganda kise bola?

K: tumhe isse kya? Apne kaam se kaam rakho!

R: eh, tum apne aap ko samaj ti kya ho?

K: Kanya Godbole! Naam yaad rakhna,

R: eh jo bhi tum ho, apni aukat main raho, samjhi!

K: [smiles] aur tum bhi!

The Teacher is watching them argue, its a female teacher and as we know wat impact rannu has on women: silence please! Miss Kanya Godbole please go out of the class,

 

K: but ma'am, Ranb?

T: I said now! Main tumhe class ke baad miloonga!

K: But Ma'am!

T: Out now!

[Kanya goes out of the class and Ranbir smiles]

The class is over everyone gets out of class, Ranbir sees Kanya standing,

 

R: oh hi miss gobad gole!

K: [just stares at him in anger]

R: oh main to darr gaya, plz mujhe aise mat dekho😆 kya kaha tha maine I am Ranbir nanda, so don?t argue with me, ok! Aur tumne kya kaha tha im Kanya Godbole, kya hua, teacher ne bat nahin sooni?😭

K: Mr. Ranbir nanda aaj jitgaye to yeh mat samjiye ke roz jiteinge! [smiles]

R: oh really aur tum kya karogi?? Hmmm🤔

K: main jo karti hoon woh kehti nahin aur jo kehti hoon woh karti nahin!

[smiles and walks away]

R: patanahi apne aap ko kya samajti hai! [getting hyper]

 

Ranbir is standing with his friends rahul, Rajeev, rohit and Aryan, and kanya, is passing from their.

 

R: Hi miss Godbole, tum to kuch karne wali thi na? kya hua?

K: [smiles] Mr. Ranbir nanda, tumhe apne aap pe bohot gamand hai na? well main tumhe challenge karti hoon, tumne to sirf mujhe ek period keliye bahar khada rakha tha, lekin maine agar tumhe kal pura din principle ke office ke bahar khada nahin rakha to mera naam kanya godbole nahin!

R: oh main to darr gaya?well miss godbole apna naam badalne keliye tayar ho jao[grins] hows chipkali gobadgole? Hmmm? [raises his eyebrows] Aur haan ek baat janlo ke ranbir nanda aaj tak koi challenge nahin hara hai aur tumhare saath to bilkul bhi nahin haroonga! Samjhi!

K: itna confidence mat rakho ranbir? toot jaye ga! Aur haan kal apne ego ke tootne ka intezaar karna

R: well main to jan ta hoon main hi jitoon ga isiliye main tumhe challenge karta hoon ke agar main; ranbir nanda principle ke office ke bahar 5 minute bhi khara hua to main wohi karoonga jo tum karogi lekin, lekin agar tum hari to tumhe wohi karna hoga jo main kahoon.

K: Manzoor hai! [they shake hands]

 

Will update soon😳 plz do comment/criticize!

Edited by nadz_J - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
wow nadj

this is gr8. ur story has made ranbir younger, but that's ok.
ur writing is beautiful cannot wait for the next update.

jaldi jaldi ok.
Posted: 15 years ago

Next day:

 

Ranbir is sitting in his class; the peon comes and calls him to the principles office.

 

Ranbir goes to the principles office,

 

Principle: Ranbir mujhe tumse yeh umeed nahin thi [dissapointed]

R: [confused] maine kya kiya?

Principle: Ranbir hame pata chala hai ke tum bathroom main smoke karahe the, im really disappointed ranbir, mujhe tumse yeh umeed nahin thi, tumhari mum is college si sabse badi founder hai par iska yeh matlab nahin ke tum jo chaho karo!

R: [thinking] to yeh kiya hai us chipkali ne, huh par main ranbir nanda hoon, itni asani se mujhe phasa nahin sakti,

R: sir maine aisa kuch nahin kiya!

P: Ranbir, Kya yeh tumhara hai? [shows him a lighter with Ranbir Nanda engraved on it]

R: yeh, yeh apke paas kaise aya? [confused]

P: to yeh tumhara hi hai,

R: haan lekin sir, maine aisa kuch nahin kiya main to cigarette bhi nahin pi ta,

P: ranbir yeh lighter tum bathroom main bhool gaye the, dustbin mein cigarette ke ashes the aur tumhara yeh lighter bhi wahin tha.

R: sir aap

P: please ranbir main kuch nahin suna chahta maine malikaji se baat karli hai aur unh one kaha hai ke tumhe punish kiya ja na chahiye, aaj pura din tum mere office ke bahar khade raho ge aur tumhe 3 din tak suspend kiya jata hai!

R: but sir?

P: out ranbir

Ranbir: sir...

P: I said out!

 

Ranbir gos out and stands their? [going mad]

R: [thinkin] us chipkali ne kar ke dikhaya jo who kehrahi thi, shit man main har gaya woh bhi us chipkali se, upar se mum ki bhi daant suni pare gi, par use who lighter kaise mila? Aur wahaan usne pohchaya kaise? [confused]

 

K: toh Mr. Nanda, akhir maine tumhe hara hi diya [smiles] umm who tumne kya shart rakhi thi ke jo main kahoon gi tum karo ge ryt? Well aaj chordeti hoon lekin kal tumhe bataoon gi ke tumhein kya karma hain? thikhe!

R: main kal nahin aoonga!

K: kyun dargaye?

R: nahin mujhe 3 din keliye suspend kiya gaya hai? [still fuming]

K: oh, thk thk thk, shame, to akhir tumhara ego toot hi gaya na?

R: don?t worry kanya il be back! Waise tumne mera lighter chori kaise kiya?

K: angad ne meri madad ki, jab kal tum gode bach ke so rahe the, usne who lighter tumhare pocket mese nikaliya, aur aaj subha use bathroom main rakhdiya,

R: us angad ko to main! [getting hotter]

K: Bye ranbir, atleast ab 3 dino tak tumhara chehra nahin dekhna pare ga,

 

R: Uggghhh is ladki ko to main chodoon ga nahin! [with anger]

Edited by nadz_J - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by yogitz


wow nadj

this is gr8. ur story has made ranbir younger, but that's ok.
ur writing is beautiful cannot wait for the next update.

jaldi jaldi ok.
 
Thanx for the comment will update soon😉
Posted: 15 years ago

OMG that was awesome i just read the two update and i can't get enough of it.

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c o n t i n u e
 that was awesome......Fantastic.......brilliant.......
 
 
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update
Posted: 15 years ago
wow i just read the updates now.. yaar next time long one please.. Awsome start yaar. but cant get enough so please update soon
Posted: 15 years ago
i loved it...
it brill..
pls continue soon
Posted: 15 years ago
my god it was too good soo funny and cute fight
Posted: 15 years ago
Update #3
 
After three days ranbir comes to college;

 

Everyone starts questioning him, and asking how can ranbir nanda get suspende that tooo coz of Kanya?

 

Ranbir: [getting more frustrated]

K: Hi Ranbir? Kaise ho? [being sarcastic]

R: Main to thikh hoon lekin kisi kher nahin? [fuming with anger]

K: ooh, main to darr gayi, [laughs] lekin use pehle tumhe shart to yaad hai na? tumhe wohi karma pade ga jo main kahoon!

R: yaad hai aur haan ranbir nanda apni baat se kabhi mukar ta nahin!

K: she tells him wat to do,

R: [thinking] oh no, meri to izaad ka faluda ho jayega mrs. Briganza ke samne,

 

Ranbir goes to Mrs. Briganza   [the teacher who insulted kanya]

R: Ma?am main apse kuch kehna chahta hoon,

Mrs. B: tum itne dino se kaha the ranbir? Kya baat hai?

R: Ma?am us din aapne kanya ki insult ki, jabke galti merit hi, to main [hesitating] cchh..ahta hoon ke aap kanya se maafi mange!

Mrs. B: WHAT! Tum pagal to nahin hogaye? Maine tumhari madad ki aur tum chahte ho ke main us ladki se maafi mangoon?

 

Kanya is standing outside and the principle is also their and he hears the whole conversation.

Principle: Mrs. Briganza, mujhe apse yeh umeed nahin thi!

Mrs. B: sir, woh ?

Principle: Keep quiet Mrs. Briganza aur aaj ap sabke samne kanya se maafi mangengi, samjhi aap!

Principle: lo puri class agayi, ab aap kanya se maafi mangiye, aur ranbir tum bhi,

Kanya gives ranbir and naughty smile, and ranbir is boiling with anger.

 

Mrs. B: Kanya im really sorry ke kal maine tumhe bahar khada rakha woh bhi ranbir ki galti ki wajah se, Im really sorry!

Kanya: Its ok ma?am,

Principle: ab ranbir tum bhi,

R: Kanya im really sorry!

K: Its ok Ranbir [innocently and wit a grin]

R: Thank you!

 

Principle: Ab mrs. Briganza agar aapne kisi bhi student ki ore favourism dikhaya to?

Please continue your class!

 

Kanya looked at Ranbir and gave him that naughty grin and Ranbir was hot as a stove at the moment, because he had to apologize to kanya in front of the whole class and now his Fav. Teacher wont even favour him anymore,

 

Everyday Ranbir and kanya had arguments on every issue, whether its an answer for a question, or anything.

 

One day they had English class and they had to debate on marriage or LOVE:

 

Kanya, aayan, tina and Aryan were debating on: Marriage

Ranbir, kripa, angad and shanaya were debating on: Love

 

Aayan: Love is full of nonsense I mean when u are in love the girl expects you to always be by her side, and do wat she wants, we are not puupets!

Shanaya: Love doesn?t tell u to be a puppet its just that wen u are deeply in love you always want to do wat ur lover likes because ur happiness then lies in their happiness.

Aayan didn?t know wat to say,

 

Tina: well I think love expects tooo much from women the men always get so possessive and stop letting their lover have enuff space.

Angad: well Tina that means you don?t know wat love is about, because love makes u possessive about ur partner but if u truly love the person u will never doubt on her because u trust her so u wont take her space away. Get it!

[kripa was just staring at angad because he is sooo loving😳]

Tina agreed to wat angad said

 

Aryan: I think love is just lust, nothing else.

Kripa: hello love must be lust for u, because that is not true love, In true love you don?t need to touch the person to tell him/her how much you love him/her just the eyes tell it all.  Because true love searches its soul mate not the body or face?  because love is wat u feel not wat u see, and love is wat you need not wat you want!

 

Teacher: very good! Kanya you have to save your team now?

Rannus team was winning three on nil.

 

K: love only gives pain, nothing else.

R: Love gives pain but true love gives more happiness than pain

K: love is only obsession!

R: It is an obsession for those people who think madness is love. But actually love is more than that. Love completes a person.

K: love doesn?t complete a person it breaks him/her into pieces

R: love breaks you into pieces only when you make a wrong choice, I believe love has side effects but love has so much more that its all worth it.

K: Love has more pain then happiness.

R: yes love has more pain then happiness but only when ur loved one is away from u. when he/she is with you, u even forget all ur stress and everything in this world. All u remember is him and u together.

 

Love is: Giving up personal comforts for the ur true love. it Transforms from being bad to a better person, its sheer magic, its an ocean of emotions, its the song of the soul and its eternal, true love Is for everyone, if they're willing to accept it and recognize it.

K: so are u saying that a person should love but not marry?

R: no im not saying that im saying love and marry or marry and then try and love the person u marry don?t marry and just fulfill duties love ur partner then all the worlds happiness will be yours! Don?t live ur arranged marriage as a compromise, change it into love! I hope u understand Miss kanya.

Teacher: marvelous Ranbir, I never thought that a hunk like you would actually believe in true love!

 

[clapping hands👏👏👏]

 
Ranbir looks at kanya and grins [raises his eyebrows and winks😉]

K: [Fuming with anger😡]

 

Outside the English class

 

Kanya starts arguing on the same topic again.

 

R: Tum janti ho tumhara problem kya hai? Ke tumhe aisa lagta hai ke jo tum kehti ho woh sahi hai, aur jo tum karti ho woh sahi hai, par tum galat ho kyonki aisa nahin hai ke tum pyar main yakin nahin karti ho, its just that you don?t have the power to love, because u cannot sacrifice ur ego for anyone, that?s ur problem.

But just remember that love is irresistible, so u wont be able to resist it for long!

 

[ran walks away]

 
Plz do comment/criticize so i can ammend my mistakes😳
Edited by nadz_J - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago

hmm mistakes... lemme think!!!!!!!! not even 1!!!! nadz_j its pure brilliance... ur writing skill is too gud, just updat asap plzzzzzzzzzzz lovine this ff so much

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