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ANJAAN..[FF]...Part IX...Page 1s

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Posted: 02 September 2008 at 7:44am | IP Logged
Well, after days of thinking I finally decided writing a fanfic...!!! Hope you guys appreciate it...!!!

                           






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INDEX...
Part I: Same post...Page No 1...
Part II: Page No 2...
Part III: Page No 3...
Precap: Page No 4
Part IV: Page No 5
Precap: Page No 8...
Part V: Page No 9..
Precap: Page No 10...
Part VI: Page 11
Part VII: Page 11..
Precap: Page 12...
Part VIII: Page 13...
Precap: Page 14...
Part IX: Page 15...

CHARACTERS...
Hmm, they are almost same...!!! Sadhna and Ragini are sisters...!!! What is the real name of Mamaji in SERIAL? For this part I am calling him Bauji...

PART-I

It was cold winter night... There was silence on the streets,,, A girl entered the house and head towards her room leaving Kaushalya shocked...
Ka: She didn't greet anyone...
She clearly figure out that something is fishy... She knocked the room and found her lying on the bed... She sits beside her...
"What is the reason dear? You didn't greet us."
She remained silent, which make Kaushalya more worried..
"Sweetheart! Is there something very serious?"
Finally, she burst into tears... She cried hysterically... Kaushalya didn't console her so that she can be a little bit relaxed... Kaushalya brought a glass of water for her...
Ka: Now tell me... What is menacing you?
The girl lift her head... Her eyes were shimmering yet looking extremely beautiful, her long black hairs were adding more beauty... She was tall and has great features... She would have been "dream girl" if she doesn't have to bear dark complexion... Yes, you all guess it right.. She is Ragini...
"Should I tell mom about the incident?"
Ra: No mom, everything is fine.. Actually, last night, I couldn't sleep well that is why I was tired today and can't do well at the dance class so our teacher scolds me... I feel really bad...
Ka: (with a smile) This is such a small thing... Now go and take a bath I had prepared tea for you...
Meanwhile, the bell was rang... It wasn't just "rang" but the person doesn't take off her finger from the switch...
Ra: Oh...It must be Sadhna...
The door was opened by a man nearly 70... It was Sadhna at the door... She was so boyish and this was something which Kaushalya hates...Ragini pampered her a lot and always escape her from the wrath of Kaushalya... Sadhna entered the house wearing pink shalwar kameez... She was fair and inherits the beauty from her sister... She loves Ragini and take great care of her....
Sadhna greeted her father...
Sa: Pa, where is mom?
Bauji: She is making tea for both of you...
Sa: What? Jiji has returned... Oh pa, I promised her that I'll come to her dance class by the off timings...
Bauji: Sadhna! Try to fulfill your promises.
Sa: Pa I totally forgot.... Ok lemme ask forgiveness from her...
Bauji: Yup go...
Before going to her room she entered the kitchen..
Sa: Hey mom what's up?
Ka: Badmaash! Always tease me.. You know very well I don't like this his and hellos ... Grow up now...
Sa: Mom, whenever you scold me, there is a strange look in your eyes... And I love it.... I will remain the same so that you are always there to correct me... The way you explain me things mom, I like it....
Kaushalya has tears in her eyes...
Ka: This is till when you are here... Whenever, your dream man will come and take you with him then who will correct you...
Sa: Mom, these tears look very bad in your eyes... Now smile...
Ka: Uff, in your talks I forgot giving tea to Ragini...
Sa: Mom, gimme the tray, I'll give it to jiji....
Sadhna entered the room... She said in a loud voice....
"I know very well my jiji is angry with me."
Ragini looked at her... She smiled back...
"No my sweet sister,,, I am not angry with you,,"
Sa: Ok, then take tea and tell me how was your day today..
Sadhna sit in front of Ragini with her cup and look her impatiently...
"How was MY day? I regret going to dance class today." Ragini was lost in her own thoughts...
Sadhna look at her and repeat her question again...
"Why Jiji is quiet? Something MUST have happened to her... Someone might have RIDICULE her.. I won't spare that person..."
Ragini get an idea that her silence will perplex her sister... She then break the ice...
Ra: Sadhna if I am not beautiful, am I responsible for this?
Sadhna was right someone ridicule her sister...
Sa: Jiji, just tell me who said so... I swear I will TEACH that person a lesson that he'll never FORGOT....
Ra: Cool down Sadhna, I have COMPROMISED now...
Ragini started crying... Part I end on the face of determined Sadhna's face.....







Edited by born-leader - 17 December 2008 at 8:32am

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Posted: 02 September 2008 at 7:23pm | IP Logged
Great! I love the fact that u hav made sadhna tomboyish and so cool.
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I luv it.  Thanks.
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Posted: 02 September 2008 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
oyyee maaahhh!!
that was too good yaar!!
cant belive we have such creative writers who are mebers here on the Bidaii forum!!
keep it upp!!
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Posted: 02 September 2008 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
really nice and interesting.


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wow i like it...!!
keep up the gud work !!
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Thanks for all of you who take out the time and read this fanfic.. EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed




Edited by born-leader - 03 September 2008 at 7:47am
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hey aimen grt FF yaar ... u write better than me .. :D

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