Originally posted by: smile_plus
Your story telling was innovative. Over all, very well done. Do write more FF's. Yes, I agree with you G3.π
~I am not sure whether "Chitragupta" made an entry/created a record in my personal "SIN" account for the FIRST TIME on account of this FF ..I am not ready to take a second chance at all..
Veda, I need an explanation for your statement.π How can you say that entertaining is a SINπ‘π‘
Veda, I dont know whether you have heard about this story Five point Someone... It is about 3 IITians.
Before reading that I felt I will not be able to enjoy that book,cos its a story about some 0.01% of Indian population.
I thought anything which I cannot identify myself,i will not enjoy. But that story changed my opinion. The second story which changed my opinion is your Alaipauthey. You know me very well that i give only honest opinions.
If you dont feel like writing because of the time factor,it is understandable... but dont say some stupid things ok..π‘
I enjoyed your FF thoroughly well (though I was not able to identify with her). If you had explained post marriage period in detail,you would have made us feel that Sowmi character someone close to us. That was the only thing I would say is not alright in ur writing...You did not explain that character properly..
You know Sowmi character very well but I have not come across that character in my life,so it was difficult for me to understand..
Till chapter 12, I was really obessessed with your FF. You did a great jobπππ
Waiting for some more FF's with lot of innovative ideasπ
I liked the way you explain things indirectly.. My fav part was that pendant thing..βοΈβοΈπ
I liked your idea of explaining FN without crossing the limit. It was like a beautiful poem..ππ
Then your explanation for 7 steps.. That was awesome gal..πππ
I still wonder what made you say that statement. I need an explanation..π‘π‘
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