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Golden Moments pt7(b) pg22 updt Aug 1st, 2010

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Posted: 30 August 2008 at 4:01pm | IP Logged
hey guys, i jus randomly got an idea of an FF. it will b held when heer left prems house for the station. after prems father found out that she was his best friends daughter. jus imagine if Heer actually left, what wud b different. so m gonna cont. plzzz R&R.

Prologue-pg 1
Part 1 - pg 2
Part 2 - page 3
part 3- page 6
part 4 - page 10
Part 5- page 14
Part 6- page 17
Part 7(a)- page 19
Part 7(b) - page 22

Golden Moments  

Prologue:
       As all the thoughts ran through her mind of her and prem, her clerk entered her cabin and said, "madam, its time for u to leave, everyone is gone already and your uncle wants u to meet your fiance. he is waiting for u downstairs". she smiled weakly at the old clerk. Then she got up and made her way downstairs. there she saw meher with Ash and Preet and they were shocked to see her. An old man of the 60 came forward and introduced her, "she is shruti sharma, my neice and the owner of this beautiful hotel". They all were shocked to see Heer in front of her, but what shocked them the most was how can 2 ppl look so muck alike if she is Shruti.  
 
ok, ppl plzz R&R, then i will cont. if u guys want alright.
 



Edited by act12 - 01 August 2010 at 6:08pm

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Posted: 30 August 2008 at 4:24pm | IP Logged
wat a superb prologue...... Clap
 cont it soon........this sounds nice.......
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Posted: 30 August 2008 at 4:26pm | IP Logged
that souns awesome!!
continue soon
 
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Posted: 30 August 2008 at 4:28pm | IP Logged
nice intersting
do cont soon
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Posted: 30 August 2008 at 4:45pm | IP Logged
very nice prologue
do continueWink
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Posted: 30 August 2008 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
ohhhh v.interesting!!!!!
cont ssoooonnn!!!!
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liked it .....continue wanna seee more
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great please cont soon

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