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My own version of JJKN (Part 2)

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Posted: 05 October 2005 at 12:03pm | IP Logged

I thank all of you who replied to the first part! Only because of you all I am posting this one!

 

Days are passing by as the preparations for the next fashion show are taking hype.  Everyone is excited and doing hard work. Jassi, Angel, Mallika, and Mrs. Suri are in the board room.


Mrs. Suri: toh Jassi kesi tayyari ho rahi hai?

 

Angel: Well Mom, ab Tamanna hai naa toh achi hi hongi. Us mein taste aur class hai ab joh chotte logon mein nahin hoti.

 

Jassi looks angry and sad. Tamanna enters the board room.

 

Tamanna: Well Ms. Anjali sorry for interrupting. Par ek successful show ke liye class aur taste ki nahin balkeh mehnat aur lagan ki zaroorat hoti hai. Anyway, main show ke bare mein decide karne aayi thi. First of all, the designs are almost ready. What about the materials and supplies Jassi?

 

Jassi: Tamanna meri financer se baat ho gayi hai aaj papers sign hone ke baad within two days material will be ready.

 

Tamanna: ok then we'll get stuff ready par uss se pehele main ek baar materials dekhna chahongi.

 

Jassi: sure Tamanna!

 

Tamanna: ok now what about the publicity?

 

Mallika: well, hum we'll get boards all around the city. Wese bhi aap ko le kar market mein bohut hype hai.

 

Armaan enters the board room.

 

Tamanna: par hamian kuch aur chahiye logon ki puri tarhan se attention grab karne ke liye.

 

Armaan: well, for that I have an idea. kyun naa hum TV par promos dein? Visual publicity aur media yeh toh janti hi hai keh is successful fashion show ke baad Jassi aur main shaadi kar rahe hain.

 

Tamanna: oh really? Congrats! Yes this will be a good idea. So let's start working on that.

 

Everybody leaves the board room while Mallika is still there angry, furious talking to herself.

 

Mallikaa: shaadi toh tab hogi naa Armaan jab yeh show successful hoga aur who main hone nahin doongi.

 

It's the end of the day. Everybody is leaving when Tamanna calls Veeru.

 

Tamanna: Veeru, Jassi kahan hai?

 

Veeru (very sad): ghar ja chuki hai.

Tamanna: ghar chali gayi? Itni jaldi? Aur tum itne naraaz kyun ho?

 

Veeru: Arre kuch nahin Tamanna Jassi ka phone aaya tha. Usse yeh file chahiye. Aage late ho geya hai Preetu meri jaan nikaal degi.

 

Tamanna: Preetu?

 

Veeru: haan meri behen. Aaj Raksha Bandhan hai. Chodo tum kya samjho gi?

 

Tamanna: kyun? Kya main insaan nahin hoon? Haan yeh aur baat hai keh mera koi bhai nahin hai.

 

Veeru: arre aesa kyun kehti ho? Yeh lo yeh tum mere bandh do. Main nein yeh aese hi le li thi. Preetu nein koi aur raakhi li hai par abhi lagta hai keh yeh tumhare liye hi thi.

 

Tamanna has tears in her eyes.

 

Tamanna: chalo toh ab tumhari yeh behen tumhara problem solve karrti hai. Lao file mujhe dedo. Main Jassi ko de doongi.

 

Veeru gives her the file and leaves. Tamanna also leaves for Jassi's house. Jassi opens the door.

 

Jassi: Tamanna tum?

 

Tamanna: haan main tumhari file dene ayi thi. Who Veeru jaldi mein tha toh main nein socha keh main hi..

 

Jassi thanks Tamanna!

 

Tamanna: no problem! Wese tum akeli rehti ho?

 

Jassi: nahin actually is waqt sab shaadi pe gaye hain.

 

Tamanna: tum nahin gayi? Aaj tum office se bhi jaldi aa gayi?

 

Jassi: nahin kuch nahin!

 

Tamanna: Jassi tum nein mujhe dost kaha hai naa? Tumhari problem ko kuch kuch main pehchaanti hoon. Mrs. Suri aur Anjali.. Acha tum mujhe shuru se batao apni zindagi ke bare mein. Kese tum nein Gulmohar join kiya aur aaj tak kese?

 

Jassi: chodo Tamanna!

 

Tamanna: Jassi ab dost se itna toh kehena hi padega. Aur phir dukh bantne se kam hota hai.

 

Jassi smile and starts her story since the first day of Gulmohar. She tells her and Tamanna listens carefully. Then…..

 

Jassi: aur phir Alibuaghmein main Purab se mili. Purab Mehra.

 

Tamanna looks shocked at Jassi's words. She is now totally lost in thoughts, talking to herself.

 

Tamanna: Purab Mehra? Nahin…Purab Mehra naam keh aur kitne log honge. Duniya bohut badi hai. Bohut..

 

Jassi: Tamanna kin khayyalon mein kho gayi ho tum?

 

Tamanna: k..kuch nahin Jassi tum sunao.

 

Jassi continues and tells her everything.

 

Jassi: hamar pyar itne utar chadhav se guzra hai ab jab manzil kareeb hai toh na jane ab bhi mujhe dar lag raha hai. Main..

 

Tamanna: Jassi…. Don't worry. Everything will be alright. Tumhein bas sab ka dil jeetna hai. Bas!

 

Papaji enters the room.

 

Papaji: Jassi beta… aap?

 

Jassi: papaji yeh Tamanna hai. Gulmohar ki designer aur meri bohut achi friend.

 

Tamanna: namaste!

 

Papaji: namaste betaji!

 

Tamanna: acha Jassi ab main chlati hoon.

 

Papaji: par beta bohut raat ho gayi hai. Tum yehin reh jao aaj.

 

Tamanna arre nahin Uncleji. Aap to itni takleef nahin..

 

Jassi: kya takleef? Tum run sakti ho.

 

Tamanna: Nahin Jassi main..

 

Papaji: to phir aap akele nahin jayengi beta.

 

Tamanna: par Uncleji..

 

Papaji: naahin beta aap hamare ghar mein hain aur hamari zimmedari hain toh hamara farz banta hai. Ya toh aap yehin ruk jao ya phir main aap ko chodne jaon ga.

 

Tamanna: theek hai Uncleji. Main yehin reh jati hoon. It's the new fresh morning! Jassi and Tamanna wake up. Tamanna is shown very restless. She is having very strange feelings. She talks to herself.

 

Tamanna: aaj itni becheni kyun ho rahi hai? Jese who mere aas paas kahin hai? Kyun?

 

Jassi and Tamanna go downstairs. Somebody's feet is shown and a plane landing. A few people say welcome to him but his face is not shown yet.

 

There, at Jassi's house…

 

Bebe: aao beta Billu bata raha tha.

 

Tamanna: aap Bebe ho naa aur aap Auntyji, Jassi ki Mama. Namaste!

 

Mama: Namaste beta! Aao nashta kar lo.

 

They take breakfast.

 

Tamanna: thankyou Auntyji! Bade dinon ke baad itna acha khana khane ko mila. Thankyou so much! main ab chalti hoon.

 

Tamanna touches Bebe's feet.

 

Bebe: yeh kya kar rahi ho beta?

 

Tamanna: Bebe bohut dinon ke baad kisi bade ke paon chune ka moka mil raha hai main is ka pura fayda uthana chahti hoon.

 

Bebe smiles: Jeeti raho beta!

 

She touches Mama's and Papaji's feet too. As she's leaving the house she becomes more restless talking to herself.

 

Tamanna: kyun aesa lag raha hai keh us ke kadam mere kareeb aa rahe hain? Kyun main usse yehin kahin aas pass mahsoos kar rahi hoon? Kyun?

 

Nandu enters the house.

 

Nandu: Jassi, Purab aay hai.

 

Jassi: Purab?!

 

Tamanna looks at them shocked!

 

To be continued…

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Posted: 05 October 2005 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
wah!~~~!!!! Clap Clap please continue! i love it!!! u have such a great talent!! Clap Clap
ugababe Senior Member
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Posted: 05 October 2005 at 5:09pm | IP Logged

WOW NAINA!!!!!!! Smile

YOUR DOING SUCH A GREAT JOB!!!!!!! PLEASE DO CONTINUE!!!! I'M LOVIN IT!!!! CAN U PLEASE JUST POST ALL YOUR EPISODES ON THE SAME POST SO ITS EASIER TO KEEP UP WITH IT?????? I'M REALLY ENJOYING THIS AND DON'T WANT TO MISS ANY OFF IT!! YOUR A GREAT WRITER!!!!

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE PURAB, TAMANNA CONFRONTATION!!!!!!!!
R U GOING TO HAVE ROHAN'S CHARACTER IN THE STORY TOO? THAT WOULD LOOK SO CUTE!!!!!!!

                                          

Clap*KHUSHI* Clap



Edited by ugababe - 05 October 2005 at 5:10pm
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Posted: 05 October 2005 at 6:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ugababe

WOW NAINA!!!!!!! Smile

YOUR DOING SUCH A GREAT JOB!!!!!!! PLEASE DO CONTINUE!!!! I'M LOVIN IT!!!! CAN U PLEASE JUST POST ALL YOUR EPISODES ON THE SAME POST SO ITS EASIER TO KEEP UP WITH IT?????? I'M REALLY ENJOYING THIS AND DON'T WANT TO MISS ANY OFF IT!! YOUR A GREAT WRITER!!!!

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE PURAB, TAMANNA CONFRONTATION!!!!!!!!
R U GOING TO HAVE ROHAN'S CHARACTER IN THE STORY TOO? THAT WOULD LOOK SO CUTE!!!!!!!

                                          

Clap*KHUSHI* Clap

 

i agree with you khushi......my name is khushi toLOL

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Posted: 05 October 2005 at 7:20pm | IP Logged
wow tht was such a great continuation!! PLZ CONTINUE SOON!!

bye

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Posted: 06 October 2005 at 8:37pm | IP Logged
That was brilliant Naina...plz continue yaar! Wink
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Posted: 06 October 2005 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
that was amazing....plz continue soon Big smile
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