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Inu-13
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...itz awesome n relli interesting..no thanchoo pihu
can't wait to read more...its fab..








& hope u dont keep me w8ing long 4 the next updates arey ni yaar..we knw the w8ing tym
so will try to update till kal.. otherwise me wil do dhishum dhisum wid u
okie dokie i will b ready wid my dhishum dhisum dress if i get late in posting..




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hello frndz..!!! thanx for the lovely comments.. here we r wid our first part....hope u will njoy it...



scene 1:we see a very biggg haalll where councelling is going on..n is very crowded wid students sititng n discussing...sum r happy n sum wid sad faces...n we see one guy is running very fast towards the councelling hall..n suddenly he looses the self speed n colloids wid one girl....Dhushhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..........
scene 2:two guys r sitting in d 5th row from bottom in the hall n sum fyt typ convo is going on b/w dem...n we see no one else is sitting in dat row coz of dere continuous chapad chapad...lets see wat r dey talking abt...?
guy1: no yaaar electronics lengein usmein jada masti hoti hai..yaar usmein carpentry typ workshop bhi hoti hai toh soch kitni masti hoti woww jus imagine...
guy1: tu toh na he bol masti ke baare mein... scull days bhool gya toh yaad dilaun..??? shyad wo tu he tha jab ma'am queston puchti thi tere se toh sumtyms u replied ki "ma'am very gud question hmmm jisne bhi bnaya hai uske pass brains hai.." n agar ma'am na maane den baak tu ur own nataunki behoshi ka hahha...bus me ne kaha na electronics toh electronic...
Guy2: arey yaar wo scull days thee...ab we r in col. so ab toh b serious...so computers...
Guy1: waise if m not wrong abhi bhi v r bacha's only..oldies ni huye...[tabhi dere is aanouncement dat all seats in computers r full] yupieee ja ab lele apni computers saari seats full ab kisse lega.. ab toh electronics mei he ana padega "champ" [yup u gussed it ryt.. he is none oder dan "champ" aka manu [akshat of kth]
manu[akshat]: kya yaar niks[yup oder guy 1: is nikhil[rajeev])...god bhi humesha tera saath deta hai...
niks[RK]: haan wo me ne god ko kal phone kiya tha n he starts gigling]..
now camera moves to scene 2:
dhusssssssssshhhhhhhhhhh
girl:ouucchh n fyl jumps from her hand but.,,,
guy: he catches the fyl n let the girl fall on d ground..
Girl: wats dis can't u see n aftr facing towards guy, she starts gigling n laughing...
guy: notices the giggle sound n thinks[ i have heard dis giggle sound] n suddenly a name strucks his mind "kiddo"[yup the girl is none oder dan kiddo aka stuti aka neha bamb]
yash[iqbal khan]: arey kiddo!! tu jaanti hai na fyl girti toh chapd chapd karte ..chalna ni ata ,dekh kar ni chalte itne imp documents hai sab gira diye na..blah blah.. to un sab se bachne ke liye[winks]..n yaar acha hua yaad dila diya mera naam announce hone wala hai isiliye bhaag rha tha as agar late ho gya na toh yaha toh seat jayegi ghar se bhi "ghar nikala" awrd mil jayega.. toh husna band kar n chal....
now both stuti n yash[neha bamb n iqbal khan] enters the hall n yash marks are aanounced at the same tym n he went to stage for adm. formalities..n after yash stuti's name is also announced n afetr completing all formalities dey both went out of hall..where dey recognises two guys thru dere adaa... as both the guys were fyting again but now on diff. issue..
yash:hey yaar hey fyting voices kuch jaani pehchani ni lag rahi.....
stuti[neha bamb]:duffer fashion kum n gogs utar kar saamne dekh..!!! pta ni yeh dono ko god akal kyun ni dete..inki baat toh widout fyt naa start hoti hai n naa end..n jis din yeh nahiin ladegein uss din apple neeche girne ki jagah uper jayega..
yash [iqbal khan]: hahahaha!! agar god inko brains dene lag gya toh shortage ni ho ajyegi toh wo baakiyo ko kya dengein..teachers ko kya dengein humse bachne ke liye..n hoti hai na widout fyt baat jab dono laptop par chat karte hai ek dusre se..by the way yeh yaha kar kya rahe hai..
stuti: hmm lagta hai yeh log yaha na sabjiyaa kharridne aaye hain..huh!! duffer jis kaam ke liye hum aye hai usi ke liye yeh aye hai.. for adm. ab chal unki fyt so called convo end karein warna yeh univ. end ho jayegi...
dey both head towards the nikhil n manu n pat dere backs...
nikhil n manu[rajeev n chaitanya] turns back to see n say: kon hai deekhta ni we r discussing sumthing.....??
stuti n yash[neha bamb n iqbal khan]: hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!! how r u fytrs...n yeh tumhari discussion ho rahi thi..?
nikhil n manu[rajeev n chaitanya]: hey!!!! soo gud to see after soo many months...n tum dono yaha kaise..???
yash: mujhe bhi abhi abhi pta lga ki tumhari tarah hum sabjiyaa lene aye hai yaha..[n stuti starts laughing]
manu[chaitanya]: very funny..!!
yash: abe tujhe kya ho gya...basketball match haar gya kya..?? jo mooh latka hua hai
nikhil: haha !! ni yaar wo isko computers chaiye thi .. n main phir se bet jeet gya n ise computers ki jagah electronics mili. n one more gud news humara hostel room bhi same hai...hahaha !!
stuti n yash: ohhh not again[in shouting way..
stuti: [smiling n laughing]beechare tumhare neigbours..plz unko ear buds gift kardena ni toh apne laptops le jana.. apne apne bed par baith kar chat karna...
yash:waise me too have a gud news jisse champ[manu] pakka khush hoga @ desicion of taking electronics..me n stuti too got electronics
nikhil[rajeev]:hey dats gud..!! abey champ ab toh khush hoja.. 4 members of our gang r re united hahah..!!!
manu[chaitanya]: yup yaar now happy ki got electronics..n dis calls for a party which niks[rajeev] will give :) waise any news abt our chalti phirti library...????
n dey all 4 starts heading towards the student centre.....[the common very big food court for everyone..]
nikhil n stuti[rajeev n neha]: starts talking abt wat dey did in d past months..
n here manu[chaitanya] takes the gogs of yash n starts running n yash[iqbal] starts to chase..but wen manu was seeing back n running n teasing yash he colloides wid sumone...n juice drops form the oder persons hand...
cuming up: meeting of oder two members of gang n first day in college...
hey frndz thanx for bearing the abv torture n soorry for any mistakes......ur comments r mosst welcumm

regards:
neha n vinny
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...i hope next 2 memb bakki hai ush maine harsh bhi hoo
...hehehehe.....w8ing 4 next part
Surya.Ravi
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dear jaldi se continue karna... i'am waiting for the next part eagerly...
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