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Lyf In college: masti tym.[SK/AK/AC]prt 7 UD pg 10 (Page 10)

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Posted: 08 October 2009 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sumaiya wahid

Glad u continued. we tooo TongueBut Nikhil ka mouth organ tut to nahi gaya na?? Actually I'm tensed abt that....hehe.ConfusedConfused heheh hmmmm wo nxt part mein mallom padega..TongueBut ye Manu ko hua kya hai? hume bhi ni pta abhi tak..hehehe.. I hope Sanya can get sumthing out of him. Waise it was gud that u gave the character sketch coz I just remembered RK's name Nikhil....hehe. <br><br>Its a wonderful fic Neha. Pls try to continue wid it soon. N thnx a lot for the PM.Big smile<br>


heyy thanchoooo for a long comment .. its very first long comment we got heheh n yaa will surely cont. wid it now..!!
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Posted: 08 October 2009 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by golu_1677

nice part great u contd<br>


thanx...
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Hieeeeeeee!! finally we are back..!!here cumes the part 7: par ruko pehle dekhlein peeche kya ho gya tha..!!


RECAP: Sanya who was coming downstairs sees stuti crying n running from dere..!! n asks nehvi : hua

kya..??

nehvi: pta ni .. iss manu se hi puch jiska dimaag pta ni kahan ghumne gya hua hai.. kya kya boli ja rha hai shayd

isi ko ni pta...!!
n she goes behind stuti..!!

n here sanya goes n asks manu wats the matter..!!


                                                 Part:7


sanya goes n asks manu[chaitnya] wats the matter..!![in anger]
sanya[amna]: oyeeee tujhe kya hua...??

Manu : kuch ni hua..[in agressive mood]

At dis sanya realises dat sumthing serious must have happened so she once again asks him but dis time very politely way..!!

manu : ...................................................................[tells evrything to sanya while crying abt his problem y he's upset n abt his n nikhil's fyt]

(arey yaar hume toh nxt part mein pta lagega na... abhi awaaz mute ho gai unki..TongueBig smile)

sanya: chal koina aisa toh hota rehta hai..!! nikhil ko mallom hai..??

manu: nahi .. usko abhi kuch ni maloom.. tumhe pta hai na uska nature .. isiliye usko kuch ni btaya but ek cheez ko rokte rokte usko bahut kuch bol diya..!! or saath galti se uska mouth organ bhi maine phenk[throw] diya tha ..I hope wo tutta na ho..

On oder side we see yash is searching for nikhil in hostel.. but he was not dere..he calls nikhil again n again

but nikhil disconnects his call..!! n finally switche off his cell..!!

Yash[iqbal]: again try dialing niks no. but he gets to listen " the No. yu r trying to reach is currently swicthed off plzz try later..

Yash: damn .. nikhil where r yu.. n hua kya hai..??[thinking where he must have gone]

Then suddenly he starts his bike n zooooooooooooooooooooooooooommmm..!!

We see a bike is stopped infront of a small house .. the scenary is jus mesmerising.. sun behind the mountains spreading yellowish orange light in the sky n very soft music was played by sumone n dat music was cuming from dat house ..!!

Person gets down from the bike n aftr hearing music.. small smile appears on his face
He goes inside the house n sees sumone laying on the sofa cum bed n playing a music wid his mouth organ wid eyes closed n was looking like as if that person is in sum oder world ..!!

1st person : [while bringing the oder one back to dis world]: nikhil kya yaar.. yahan aane se pehle btana chaiye tha na.. n phone bhi tune switch off kar diya .. akhir baat kya hai..??

[yes the 1st person is yash.. actually its dere hang out place.. any celebration .. any party.. sumone sad its the place where dese 6 can b located oder dan dere usual places]

nikhilp[rk] (in low tone): kuch ni mood off hai thoda..

yash: kya aaj mood off hone ki kisi ne dawaai spray ki hai.. wahan manu ka bhayanak avtaar.. tera mood off. stuti ka home sickness.. hua kya hai sabko?? Thanck god main nsanya back gaye warna pta ni kya hota..

nikhil : just passes smile which disappears oder sec

yash: chal chup chapp jaldi jaldi bol kya hua hai.. uffo main bhi kitna pagal hoon tu chup chapp kaise bol sakta hai.. Bta na yaar tu janta hai na hum mein se kisi ka bhi mood off ho toh bakio ka automatic shutter down ho jata hai..

nikhil tells everything each n evry detail of wat happened b/w him n manu yest. nyt n abt throwing his things n ol...

Meanwhile on the oder side sanya n manu went to stuti n nehvi as ,manu realised his mistake n he apologises it from stuti..

manu: oyee kiddo yu crying

nehvi : nahin wo rone ki practice kar rahi hai.. ussne olympics mein " rone ki race" mein participate kiya hai

manu: hehehe very funny..!!

nehvi: yaa its funny.. pehle khood he chila kar rulate ho n den puchte ho r u crying??[make a face]

sanya: guys I think hum pehle ek ladai solve karle den dusri start karlena tum dono n she dials nikhil's no. which was cuming switch off n den she tries yash's no.

yash: haan sanya nikhil mere saath hai n we are at our hangout place n ya he's fine cuts the phone

manu : again turns towards stuti .. oo lele kiddo mujhse naraaz hai ..ushko ghar ki yaad aying.. hmm chocolate khayegi..?? achaa chalo i promise kal me u ko teddy bear dilwa dunga..arey ab toh smile dedoo..

nehvi: isse kaam ni cahlega kaan pakdo.. n doo uthak baithak

n manu does dat very araam se ..making puppy face n at dis stuti starts smiling n hugs manu

manu: nikhil kahan hai..

stuti n nehvi: pta ni

sanya: he's wid yash ,, humare hang out place par..!!

dey all went dere..

lets see wats happening b/w nik n ysh

yash: nikhil ye bta den tujhe bura kis baat ka lga ki usse tera mouth organ gira diya kya..?? don't tell me.. ki

itni si baat ka tujhe bura lag gya n tu isiliye dukhi hai..

just dan manu n ol enters

manu: yash wo itni si baat ni hai.. maine uski most precious cheez girai .. usko bura ni lagega toh kya lagega..agar kisi ne teri bike [yash's passion] girai hoti den

yash : main toh usko chodta nahi.. Angry Angry Angry

manu : thankgod meri tere se ladai ni hui warna me toh bachta nai

yash: wo chod wo tab dekhegein jab kuch hoga but yaar the way yu reacted dat was wrong.. tujhe itna sab kuch ni bolna chaiye tha..!!

nikhil: maine kahan na wo kisi baat se pareshan hai ya tha jiski wajah se uski frustration meri pe nikal gai..

yash: banging his hand on his fore head: mere bhaiyoo n girls k not bhaiyoo pleej mujhe yeh baat clear kardo tum dono mein ladai hui hai ya nai..

manu n nikhil: looking towards each oder n smiling : yes n no!!

yash : mummmyyy bachaaaooo mujheee

manu: hey niks am sorry.. i was rude too yu.!!

nikhil: nopes yaar .. it didn't hurt me .. i was feeling sad coz u were not able to tell me the truth behind ur anger dat time..!!

at dis sanya abt to tell bus manu stops her not to tell thru eyes n she stops

yash:agar tum dono ki yes and no wali ladai khtm ho gai ho toh group hug ho jaye..!!

suddenly sanya speaks: ohhhh damn..!! guys do u have any realisation dat we are having our exam tom. at 9 am.. n now its 8 pm..n we don't have much time..moreoever we are also not having any books or notes here..

stuti starts laughing..

yash: lagta hai iss khabar ka beechari pe bahut buraa asaar pada hai..

manu n nikhil n sanya : kiddo tujhe kya huyaaa??

stuti[ controlling her laughter]: app sab kaise bhool gaye ki nehvi is still wid uss n points towards nehvi.. who was assembling the books n notes..

nehvi : wat y u guys are staring at me..?? i knew ki tumhari iss ladai mein kal ka paper kisi ko yaad ni hoga.. so planning kark aii thi..

all 5: yess dats y we luv our library n starts laughing

They ol assemble around a table sitting on the floor .. studying seriosuly..!! After a huge yes or no fight everything was cleared but nikhil ws still feeling as if manu is hiding sumthing from him..!!

Manu n stuti calls dere frnds in hostle to mark dere attendence..!!

n camera gets dim.. n wid dis our part also ends..!!


Hope yu guys like it..!!

Pleej doo comment guys..!! it really encourages us..!!


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Edited by rajeev-bigfan - 12 October 2009 at 2:00pm

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Posted: 12 October 2009 at 2:29pm | IP Logged
its good they solved the fight n r together..............its so nice to see such good friends who help their friends during fights..................cont soon............
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Posted: 13 October 2009 at 3:53am | IP Logged
grt part
pls cont soon
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Posted: 13 October 2009 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Ohh...lovely part yaar!!! Nikhil and Manu fought yet they didnt fight...hehe. Such a sweet frndship. And Nikhil also understood he was hiding sumthing.....kitna intelligent hai na!!!Blushing

Manu told Sanya abt sumthing to which Nikhil may react.....umm....I'm not going to scratch my head to guess that....coz u said na we'll knw abt that in the next part.

Waise sach me achha hua Yash k saath Manu ki ladayi nahi hui aur usne uska bike nahi giraya....hehe. And Nehvi.....awesum library hai bilkul!!!

Pls continue soon.


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Posted: 13 October 2009 at 11:06am | IP Logged
great part dear thx for pm
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Posted: 13 October 2009 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
Nice part !!
College days are the best days of life !!

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