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khushi19

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Posted: 05 October 2005 at 5:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by soni595

Originally posted by happe

Originally posted by soni595

btwn Happe, is that you in your avtaar, has a very cute smile.

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Soni


thanx soni, thats me.

I love Kripa's character in this fan-fic cuz I kinda relate to it mostly cuz I do small things just to annoy my mom and my dad takes my side. EmbarrassedBig smile

ab batha chala, ki Happe ithni bhi bholi bhali nahi hai!LOL

 

now i have to be carefulLOL

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                     In the Rain of Love
Part Six


Alia suspicious: where are we going?
Kripa: okay I'll explain, Harshini is getting married and…
Alia cuts her off: WHAT?? Harshini is getting married…you didn't even tell me
Kripa: offho, listen, it was fixed only today, the juicy part is that Harshini is going to meet her future husband…and I am curious…
Alia senses some trouble: Oh no, Kripa, remember you were grounded? And what is it to you what harshini does? It's her life.
Kripa plays with a strand of her hair: Alia, I will be disguised as someone else, and I will tell maa, that I have a project to complete and need to go to the library, and about the CURIOUSITY - aren't you interested.
Alia: NO…why will I…oh okay fine…Bye
Kripa: tata!
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It's 4:25, Kripa goes around the back of her house, and walks down the back lane, to Alia's house. She notices Alia already seated in her car, so she jogs up to her.

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Alia is waiting for Kripa, then suddenly she sees a weird looking guy, staring at her. The man begins to bang on the door.
Alia screams: hey you…goo
Kripa: shhh…
Kripa takes off her beard: it's me!
Alia sighs in relief…and unlocks the door.
Kripa slides into the passenger seat.
Alia: you really scared me, Kripa
Kripa: Offho…I told you that I will come in a disguise then why didn't you know it was me.
Alia: because you didn't look like you!
Kripa: whatever!

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Rhinestone Hotel

Harshini adjusts her blue sari and walks into the
plush and elegant Rhinestone Hotel. She looks around at her
Surroundings,and is amazed, since her family (Sharma's) have never
been to such five Star restaurants.
Harshini spots Angad sitting on a secluded spot, he dressed in a white collered shirt and black pants.
Harshini walks towards the table at which he is sitting.

Angad notices Harshini, so he gets up and like a perfect
gentlemen, pulls the chair out for Harshini. Harshini clasps her hands in nervousness and sits on the chair.

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All the while, Kripa and Alia have been watching this.

Angad: You look very nice, today
Harshini blushes: thank you
Angad: What will you have to drink?
Harshini: huh, um, just plain water
Angad: I hope you, you like Italian food, actually
I wasn't sure what kind of food you liked. If you don't
like it, we can go somewhere else
Harshini: no, I love Italian food
Angad looks at her and feels awkward since Anjali
doesn't seem to carry on the conversation, and just answers his
questions.
Angad: Would you prefer to eat the ravioli or the
lasagna
Harshini: looks at him and is confused, as she has never
heard of these dishes in her entire life, umm the revola
Angad: looks at her, you mean the ravioli
Harshini looks at him embarrassed: yes
Angad: How would you describe yourself in simple
terms?
Harshini doesn't know what to say, um, I am like to read
books but not read too much, I like cooking but not that
much, I am friendly but also shy, I don't like parties
with loud blaring music, not that I don't enjoy those
parties. I am very religious not that I pray too much.
Angad wonders if "simple" means "undecided".
Harshini: how about you?
Angad: I am extremely spiritual and have lots of
faith in God, I am friendly, believe in one love and that love is life, money is not happiness for me but a way to earn a living, I am a "typical" family person and have never dated a single woman in my entire life, you are the first..
Harshini is very impressed.
They both get to say good bye to each other

Kripa and Alia look on and can't stop giggling.
Kripa: Harshini has never tasted Italian food, and
suddenly it's her favorite
Alia: And also when does she not like cooking that
much, that's all she ever seems to do
Alia: Oh God she's looking this way, do something
Kripa hugs Alia. A cold grip hand grips Alia's
shoulder, Alia looks up and finds herself staring
into her dad's angry eyes. He drags Alia home.
Kripa looks at them shocked.

Preview: surprise! Zeb is introduced and well…that's a surprise! Do tell me if It's getting boring...there is always room to improvise!Tongue
Love
Soni



Edited by soni595 - 05 October 2005 at 7:24pm

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Posted: 05 October 2005 at 6:14pm | IP Logged
rest, to be continued tomorrow! Tongue

Love
Soni

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Posted: 05 October 2005 at 6:43pm | IP Logged
that was great plz continue.

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Posted: 05 October 2005 at 7:12pm | IP Logged
Preview for the next three parts

Zeb is introduced.
Harshini is excited to meet her to-be mother-in-law
And Kripa upto her usual mischief

Hint: What you can see, is not always true!

love
Soni

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Posted: 05 October 2005 at 7:14pm | IP Logged
it was rly good, but i am confused who is fiza and anjali?? Confused

soni595

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Posted: 05 October 2005 at 7:26pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by simplyconfused

it was rly good, but i am confused who is fiza and anjali?? Confused

sorry, I forgot to change those names, Fiza is Alia and Anjali is Harshini.

love

Soni

 

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Posted: 05 October 2005 at 7:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by soni595

Originally posted by simplyconfused

it was rly good, but i am confused who is fiza and anjali?? Confused

sorry, I forgot to change those names, Fiza is Alia and Anjali is Harshini.

love

Soni

 

oh ok!! i understand now!!LOL

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