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Posted: 05 October 2005 at 3:51pm | IP Logged

                                     In the Rain of Love
Part Four
Kripa looks at him and is stunned with his incredible looks.
Angad pulls out his hand, but then changes his mind and just says: HI
Kripa is amused: HI
They are all called downstairs.

It is time for the guests to leave, they bid byes.
Dilip Khanna: okay, Suryabhaan now we shall take your leave.
Suryabhaan: jee
They bid byes.

After they leave
Gayatri drags Kripa inside.
Gayatri: what was this thamasha Kripa?
Kripa fumbling: Maa…I was
Gayatri cuts her off: what you were…huh? I told you that today people are coming to see harshini, and still you went out and if that was not enough you created another trouble.
That's it, from now onwards you're no going anywhere, except college and home, understand.
Kripa: But maa…

Kripa looks at her brother Josh, angrily and runs upstairs on her elfin little legs. Kripa runs into her room and closes the door lightly. After a few seconds Kripa hears footsteps. Slowly she peeps through her door, and sees her dad coming up the stairs.
She quickly jumps on to her bed and hugs her fluffy pink pillow.
Her dad comes into the room and smiles seeing his daughter pouting like a little child.

Suryabhaan: Kripa, beta are you angry with your Big D also?
Kripa slumps her face deeper into her pillow and
muffles out a reply: I am angry with you the most, why didn't you tell maa, that it was all Josh bhaiya's fault.

Suryabhaan: beta, I did, I scolded your mother and told her it was not yours by Josh's fault.
Kripa smirks cutely: ya right…aap and scolding maa???
Suryabhaan: Are you still angry with me?
Kripa nods her head.
Suryabhaan cocks his eyes at her and teasingly says: ok, then I'll take this big, fluffy, thing that I had bought for you, since you're angry with me.

Kripa opens one eye then the other, and slants her head to see what it is.
Kripa hugs her papa: I love you Big D
She cradles her latest pink teddy bear and sets it beside her twenty other bears.
Kripa: twenty-one
Suryabhaan: Same age as you!

Preview: Oh ya, Kripa is up to her mischief and drags Alia along with her, and Harshini is a bluff master.
Love
Soni



Edited by soni595 - 05 October 2005 at 3:53pm
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Posted: 05 October 2005 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
oh wow soni,
its really fun to read Kripa's mischief's.
Continue soon
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Posted: 05 October 2005 at 4:01pm | IP Logged
loved it LOL
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                   In the Rain of Love
Part Five

Khanna Bunglow


Dilip Khanna paces across his living room, waiting for Angad's arrival.
Prithvi comes into the living room and looks at Dilip uncle's anxious expressions, then heaves onto a linen chair.
Dilip glances at him
Dilip: Prithvi, what do you think Angad'ss answer will be? Is harshini good enough for Angad?
Prithvi puts up a straight face: uncle…Harshini is a nice girl and…good respect for elders
Prithvi looks at his uncle, to see if his answer matched his uncle's opinions.
Dilip: that's exactly what I think, Harshini is perfect for Angad
Prithvi wonders if Harshini is way TOO PERFECT!

Just then, Angad walks in looking as handsome as ever.
Angad: Yes, dad you called me?
Dilip: yes, I wanted to know whether you want to marry Harshini or not
Angad thinks back to his meeting with Harshini and thinks Harshini no…not bad..is pretty..but..no…traditional…close…how about a …no
Dilip impatiently: Yes, I am waiting..
Angad: okay
Angad then catches Prithvi's eye and winks at him
Angad: but dad, It's better if..we both get to know each other first…before…
Dilip: oh yes…of course beta
Dilip excitedly: I will talk to Surya today itself….I don't want to waste time
Angad looks at Prithvi and Prithvi waves his arms as if to say "I rest my case"
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Sharma House

Suryabhaan looks expectantly at Harshini, whilst gripping the phone in his left hand.
Harshini shyly nods her head
Suryabhaan: haan Dilip, Harshini has said yes too.
On the other line…Dilip: really, that's great news…actually I also wanted to talk to you about both of them meeting each other once more, alone, so they can understand each other better.
Suryabhaan: I think you're right Dilip
Dilip: then okay, tell Harshini beta, that today at five o' clock our driver will come and pick her up and take her to Rhinestone Hotel, where Angad will come and meet her.
Suryabhaan: okay, bye
Dilip: ya
Then they hang up.
Suryabhaan: listen, Harshi beta, today at five you have to meet Angad at Rhinestone Hotel.
Harshini: okay!
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Kripa hears their entire conversation. She tip toes back to her room and plops down on to the fluffy pink covers. Mischief glints in her eyes. Ideas begin to dance in her mind.
Kripa bites her lip when she remembers her mother's words.
Kripa: shi, now I am going to miss all the fun! Maa will never let me go with Harshi, My life has become so borrrring…but…what if I don't tell..
Then an idea strikes her. she picks up her cordless phone and shuts her bedroom door. Sits down cross-legged. She dials a familiar number.
Kripa: hi Damini aunty!
Damini: hi beta
Kripa: How are you aunty?
Damini: fine…wanna talk to Alia na?
Kripa smiles: thanks aunty!
A few seconds later, Alia is gasping into the phone: hello
Kripa: what happened, were you in a race or something…that you're huffing and puffing?
Alia: quit the jokes…what's up?
Kripa: Alia listen to me carefully, you have to pick me up at exactly 4:30 Pm…no actually I'll come and meet you at 4:30
Alia sensing some mischief of Kripa's: Kripa, where are we going, exactly?

Preview: Rhinestone Hotel, and two spies!
Love
Soni



Edited by soni595 - 05 October 2005 at 4:35pm
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that was awesome part. EmbarrassedLOL
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Posted: 05 October 2005 at 4:50pm | IP Logged
btwn Happe, is that you in your avtaar, has a very cute smile.

Love
Soni
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Posted: 05 October 2005 at 4:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by soni595

btwn Happe, is that you in your avtaar, has a very cute smile.

Love
Soni


thanx soni, thats me.

I love Kripa's character in this fan-fic cuz I kinda relate to it mostly cuz I do small things just to annoy my mom and my dad takes my side. EmbarrassedBig smile
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Posted: 05 October 2005 at 5:42pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by happe

Originally posted by soni595

btwn Happe, is that you in your avtaar, has a very cute smile.

Love
Soni


thanx soni, thats me.

I love Kripa's character in this fan-fic cuz I kinda relate to it mostly cuz I do small things just to annoy my mom and my dad takes my side. EmbarrassedBig smile

ab batha chala, ki Happe ithni bhi bholi bhali nahi hai!LOL

 

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