In the rain of love - fan fiction

I was bored, so I decided to write yet another fan fiction and update my old fan fictions.

Hope you all like it!

Part One

She is sleeping exactly like a doll.  Peep peep peep… THE, HORRIBLE, YELLLLLING ALARM went off, the girl groans sleepily and reaches out her hand and turns the alarm off and she carries on sleeping cozily.

 In the rain of love...

In the Rain of Love

Part Three
Sharma House, No.555
The guy and his family are welcomed into the house by the Sharma's.
The guy looks around at the house, and it's like he is suffocating from these traditions. He is dressed in a long sleeved white shirt and black denims with a thick silver chain hanging from his neck. His coal-brown eyes search around the house and he finally sits down on the sofa with the rest. After, they are seated, Harshini is brought in. Harshini is wearing a yellow sari, with yellow bangles and nice jewelry.
The guy looks from top to bottom at girl and tries to act sincere. He does not seem impressed with all this formal talking and this arrange marriage thing. Harshini is seated next to the guy.
Mr. Dilip Khanna: Angad, whatever you want to say, say it, and then don't say I didn't give you a chance.
Gayatri Sharma: I think they're feeling shy talking in front of us, Harshini take the youngsters in the study upstairs., I will send for the tea for all of you. Harshni gets up shyly and Angad gets up hesitantly, Angad's friend get's up as well Angad's sister.
Josh follows behind them.
Gayatri looks at all of them and wonders: agar sab hi upar jayenge, to une dono baath kaise karpayenge? Aur waise bhi humari Harshini to kitni sharmeeli hai!

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Once upstairs, they all sit and there is a strange calmness in the air. No one utters a word.
Angad looks at his friend Prithvi, and can see his irritated as well.
While, Angad is blessed and is drop dead gorgeous, with his bad boy looks, Prithvi has an innocent, handsome face.
Angad breaks the silence, So Harshini what are your hobbies?
Harshini looks at Angad and feels as if no one could have been made so perfectly, his eyes, his body, his voice.
Harshini: um, I like to cook food and I also love pottery. A sudden noise in the backyard grabs all of their attention.
Kripa and Alia – it starts raining outside
Kripa and Alia are soaking wet by the time they reach Savni Street.
Alia: we should have taken the car
Kripa: relax, and she dances in the rain
I love rain. Let's stay out for a while.
Alia: don't you have to go home?
Kripa: ya, but, it's amazing na? Kripa dances away, letting the raindrops tickle her skin.
Alia: how are you going to face your parents? You may not be worried but, I am, I need to reach home before dad reaches home.
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Kripa: ya, you go, I will go home too.
Alia goes.
Kripa thinks to herself if I go from the front Ma will be angry at me as, I was not there when the guests came to see Harshini. Let me climb through the upstairs window and act like I was sleeping.
Kripa places the ladder against the window and climbs up, all the while dripping wet from head to toe. She climbs through the window.
Angad is about to ask something else to Harshini when he sees someone climb in from the window. Everyone turns to look at the wide open window.
Kripa screams lightly
Kripa: yeah!!
Then she looks up and to her utter shock she sees Harshini, Josh, and three other people gaping at her like she was mad or something. The two guys and sister look at her dripping wet from the rain and are surprised because they did not expect this.
Kripa: Oh no, Oh no.
Kripa stumbles in awkwardly not expecting anyone to be there. She walks to the side and sees Josh trying to go downstairs and she runs and pulls him back. Bhaiya please, this was your fault anyways.
The others just look on at her.
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Kripa goes to Harshini and says Harshini you know I was coming, but then Josh bhiaya came and delayed us and then it began to rain and bhaiya went away with the car, leaving us stranded.
Josh: how is it my fault? I am here on time, aren't I?
Kripa: yeah, after leaving your poor sister and friend soaking in the rain, she says dramatically.
Harshini looks at her and quietly says, why did you have to go anyways? You could have stayed home even.
Kripa starts off with her poetry.
Kripa: Harshini, I have only one precious life, I don't want to lose anything in life, I want to live every memory, I want every moment to be special, I want to count every beat of my heart, I want to see every sparkling star, I want to smile every second.. I don't want to miss a day of this beautiful life. Learn to love life like me, and then you will get my point.
Harshini: rolls her eyes.
Angad is impressed with her speech and thinks to himself, I thought this whole family is full of rules, traditions and restrictions, at least someone in the family is lively and knows how to live life.
Prithvi looks at Kripa and is a little surprised with Kripa's outburst. He thought she would be scared out of her wits of being caught.
Angad's sister Anitah thinks that Kripa is just an attention getter.
Angad says Hi! To,Kripa.
Kripa: looks at him and is amazed by his looks!!

End of Chapter 1
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Preview: Zeb is introduced, and Harshini has her first lunch date with Mrs. Naina Khanna

Love
Soni

No soni, you have to continue.

Please continue now

I loved it.

and i think you need to change shreya to kripa