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FF:Midnight Dreams of a Stranger or Lover (Page 2)

desaigirl101 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by matwamango

Niasha i want it longer. But the title will come to U when U least expect it. U will see.
 
Thanks,I will try to make it longer.It was just the begininng so I felt like putting it short.LOL
I hope the title comes to me like you said.
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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princez-preciou

brill start nisha!
love the way u r writing it!
continue soon!
 
Thanks alot dudet!!!!!!!!!!
I wil continue soon.Maybe tonight or sometime today or tomorrow I will conitnue.
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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 6:21pm | IP Logged
Okay guys do you like my title.
Please leave comments.
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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 6:28pm | IP Logged
oo greta title nisha! very interesting!!!
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Posted: 10 August 2008 at 8:07am | IP Logged
interesting!!!
but pls make it lon ger
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Posted: 10 August 2008 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Title sounds very shakesparian. I love it
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Posted: 10 August 2008 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
Thanks to:
 
 
princez-preciou
 
nidhieya
 
matwamango
 
Its nice to know you guys like the title.I also like it.I will try to make it longer.So ummmm.....guys wait for a udate thats coming soon.
 
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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 11:51am | IP Logged

Part 2

Meanwhile at the Nanda Mansion we see a muscular and quite good-looking grumpy
man wake up.He slipped into his slippers and went to freshin up in the bathroom.He came out in a completely black suit and italian shoes.The good looking man walked down the stairs where his mom and dad awaited.
 
Malika(mom):Finally beta you woke up.You don't take this long to wake up so what happened?
 
Man:Nothing mom...I just couldn't sleep well last night.
 
Malika:Oh,okay.Anyways beta you aren't going to work today.
 
Man:WHAT!WHY?
 
Malika:Because,you are going shopping today with me becuz we are having a party.
 
Man:But why would we have a party?
 
Malika:Its for accompishing 50years of hardwork and sucess for our business.So,I am inviting all our business allies and employes.
 
Man:But mom those middle class people who work aren't suited for these types of parties.
 
Malika:What do you mean by suited and middel class.Now shup up and have atleast some respect for what you call these middle class people that have worked very hard and we have never thrown a party for their hardwork and anyways you don't have to talk to them we also have our higher business allies we can chat with.But listen you will not go to work today and we attend this party.If you don't then I won't eat until you agree.
 
Man:Come on mom damki apey.Fine I will come to this stupid party.
 
Malika:Thank you beta.Dad will go to work today instead of you.Bye Krish.
 
Krish(malika's husband)Bye malika
 
Krish left while leaving a grumpy and pissed Guy with a chirpy Malika.
Malika and him went to the mall.First Malika went to pick her sarees and clothes.
While her son was looking for a table to sit at in the food court.He couldn't find any empty seats except for a seat by this young-beautiful women.He walked over to the table.
 
Guy:Excuse me...
 
She didn't even look up to see his face.
 
Girl:Yes...
 
Guy:Can I sit here.
 
Girl:Ya sure.
 
He sat down while her eyes were glued to the newspaper.
 
Guy:Uhh...none of my business but what r u doing?
 
Girl:Looking for a job.
 
Guy:Oh...So my name is Ranbir Nanda.Whats yours
 
Girl:Kanya Godbole.
 
She finally looked up and saw his face.She felt like she met him before.Its was a feeling of uneasiness that crossed her but why.His eyes,his smile,his face apperence.There was something about him that just made her feel curious.They stared at eachother for a couple minutes.
 
Ranbir:So anyways your looking for job?
 
Kanya:Yeah.I am educated and can probably do anything but still I want a job that I might enjoy doing if I can't then I might as well take any job.
 
Ranbir:So do you want to work for me.
 
Kanya:Meaning....
 
Ranbir:My dad owns the Nanda Business Industry he passed it down to me so what I mean is it would be a pleasure if you worked with me.Though,I would personally need to know a little more about you.
 
Kanya:Personally know a little more about me??
 
Ranbir:Oh,I mean your work experience,or if your eduacated,etc.Other than that I would hire you.
 
Kanya:Seriously!!!
 
Ranbir:Ya.
 
They both stood up.Kanya hugged Ranbir tightly and then backed off.
 
Kanya:Thank you!!!!!!
 
Ranbir just stared at her happiness.While Malika was looking from the distance and smiled.
 
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Okay guys I need to know what you guys think.
I personally didn't like this update.
Please comment.

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