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desaigirl101

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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 10:08am | IP Logged

Hey everyone,this is my second ff.Hope you guys enjoy it.I just got this idea when I woke up this morning so I don't know the whole storyline but I do know parts of it.So please enjoy.I don't have title yet but I will surely have one by today.

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Characters: I don't want to get detailed on the characters.I want you guys to figure out what type of people they are as the story goes on.
 
Kanya Godbole: 25year old.Excellent writer who needs a job.
 
Ranbir Nanda:30year old.
 
The family is all the same.Except Shanaya cries a little less but is smart and Malika is played bye Sudha and Kanya's wardrobe is different at Times.
 
Part 1
 
 
I sat there in complete silence observing two men sitting at the table 2 tables across from me.One looked like he was in the mid 30s and the other had a black suit on with long black hair and a business type look.He had a stern face on.Now you may ask what I was doing there.I just came to chat with a friend who was apparently one hour late so my eyes wandered around the dim-lighted resturant and my eyes were glued to the two men.Who knew why they caught my eye but I felt someting unusual or could it be uneasiness.I couldn't stand waiting one other minute for my friend to accompany me so I quickly got out of there.Though,as I walked through the resturant to get out the long haired-business man got up and I suddenly bumped into him.We quickly said our apologized and parted ways.Though not before our eyes met and a smiled crossed his stern face.
 
Suddenly the alarm went off.
 
"Come one beta.Wake up.You need to go find a job.Wake up."
 
"Come on mom.I had a brilliant dream that I could add to my writing and this
 stupid alarm went off and why are you yelling for"
 
"Sorry but thats the only way I can get you to wake up.Now go get ready."
 
Ughh thats how mom's were.Though she was right I had to find a job.Writing was my hobby butI knew I couldn't make a book with this standard.Though I do have interest and need to find a job which may have included some writing task or somthing.I quickly got ready,took the newspaper and rushed out of the house.
 
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Okay guys please comment.
I really want to know what you guys think.


Edited by desaigirl101 - 15 September 2008 at 5:29pm

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Sallu-

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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 10:13am | IP Logged
brill start nisha!
love the way u r writing it!
continue soon!

-SalShah4eva-

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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 10:14am | IP Logged
heyy so far
its good
cont plz
want to know wha hapened next

desaigirl101

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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 10:36am | IP Logged
thanks guys its hard to pick the title

suganain

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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Good Job Nisha, You seem like an excellent writer too!

desaigirl101

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[QUOTE=suganain]Good Job Nisha, You seem like an excellent writer too!
[/QUOTE
 
thanks yaar.......i am not a exellent writer i just get these ideas out of nowhere even if its like
at midnight.LOL

matwamango

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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 10:52am | IP Logged
Niasha i want it longer. But the title will come to U when U least expect it. U will see.

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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 11:03am | IP Logged
hey nisha
interesting start
continue soon!

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